Good work so far Op.


Keep it up.


I'm working on a book myself, so I know how hard it is to put down this ideas, and later re-worked them. Well done.

Just one tip for now. Let you dialogue start on a separate line. It will make it easier to read. e.g

"Any raven from Jojo?" Kosuku, a tall light skinned man in his late thirties who is sitting on the high seat at the council table asked. Behind him were two guards who stood firm and ready to bring any fly that tries to trouble the Ogba.
"None yet your Majesty" a chief replied sitting next to him are other chiefs who are representing all cities under the province, the priest and the croaker and some group leaders. the market woman leader lamented on the hike in food stuffs.
"That's expected to happen your Majesty, there are lots of bandits spread across the Layila road and the Selta abut is also not save . the people now travel by sea and that is more expensive . Chief Ilama explained. "I have sent Bosiwa to gather two thousand troops to support the abut guards from stopping bandits into the land , Sidi have not asked for my hands in dealing with Sheki so I will just look on and defend myself for now," the Ogba said
"How long more do we have to wait for the delegates?" he asks the priest , "I have sent Danunu to receive them your Majesty."

OdumegwuOjukwu:
Good work so far Op.


Keep it up.


I'm working on a book myself, so I know how hard it is to put down this ideas, and later re-worked them. Well done.

Just one tip for now. Let you dialogue start on a separate line. It will make it easier to read. e.g

I really appreciate the kind words and the advice as well, it's still a work in progress so expect me to still do some editing and correction I just want to know if people would like the concept and accept it . I really appreciate

I hope to see some of your works too when you are done with your book.

I will continue when I reach 1000 views

Just booked a place right bout now
I'm on this buddy
Love the storyline and the context