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Mirage by denex: 11:08pm On Jul 10, 2007
Pretty wide-eyed little thing
yet a canker deep within
sugar coated killer bee,
thy guile reveals too true to me.

I greet ye out consuming dream
my loving friend thou art indeed.
Ye done crafted me the perfect sting
I call thee out with a plotted script.

Lips glossed in choicest honey,
yet therein lay thy poison kiss.
And thy bosom calls to wanton sleep,
but wisdom beckons and I leave.

With smiles we meet, in tears of bliss
yet not one gesture either means
Thy hug is napalm to my skin
gift of ashes wrapped in silk.

Ye chose me wrong thy next victim
calamity clothe in heavenly mink
the look on you,
O so naive
yet my very soul do ye solicit.


NEX.
Re: Mirage by iice(f): 12:00pm On Jul 12, 2007
Cool
Re: Mirage by denex: 2:59pm On Jul 12, 2007
gee thanks. Most people find it offensive. My ex girl friend said I was referring to her, and I can't deny that I wasn't.
Re: Mirage by iice(f): 5:07pm On Jul 12, 2007
Yeah well my taste doesnt usually run to the cookie cut/candy wrapped types. . .i like it
Re: Mirage by RuuDie(m): 2:32pm On Jul 13, 2007
Beautifullly crafted . . . i just love the blend of ancient, pre-historic civility and pure neo-anglo vocab. gives your poem a generous tinge of "exoticism"!

Denex, I DOFF MY HAT . . . you be tha MAN  cool  cool
Re: Mirage by denex: 11:18am On Jul 16, 2007
Okay, thanks you guys. I really haven't written anything spectacular in the past 2 years. I'll drop some other stuff I've got.

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