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What Will Tomorrow Bring? by kunsky411(m): 2:26pm On Aug 07, 2007
Tomorrow
A day of events and possibilities
That is yet untapped
But has the capacity to be a GOLD mine
For only the adventurer who never quits
Even when the pot of GOLD seems out of reach.

Tomorrow
Uncertain in its mysteries
But unraveled in its understanding
That it only gives what we ask of it
There’s no magic formula to it
It’s simply a case of planning well for tomorrow
Or be prepared to live in pain and sorrow.

Tomorrow
Brings hope as well as despair
Brings happiness as well as regret
The choice is ours to take
But not without a price to pay
To win the race, we don’t need pace
All we need is will & determination to be an ace.

Tomorrow
Where our future lies
Day of reckoning to weigh our yesterday’s decision
Let’s make hay while the sun is still shining
So we won’t ask “what will tomorrow bring?”
When we are old and dying.

Tomorrow
Is bright as the northern star in the sky
And with a burning desire to stay on course
We’ll never find ourselves in uncharted ocean
All we need to do is work together
For tomorrow is around the corner.
Re: What Will Tomorrow Bring? by rossy4life(f): 6:48pm On Aug 08, 2007
Nice poem, very meaningful, keep it up
Re: What Will Tomorrow Bring? by kunsky411(m): 10:40am On Aug 09, 2007
thanx rose, i appreciate ur honest comment.thanx
Re: What Will Tomorrow Bring? by RuuDie(m): 1:25pm On Aug 09, 2007
Good work man. . . . very sensible, positive, inspiring stuff! makes for excellent reading

take out the "tomorrows" at the beginning of every verse and i think it'd look a whole lot better. I'd have thought the verse b'4 the last would'a rounded off the piece appropriately. . . but it's all good!
Re: What Will Tomorrow Bring? by kunsky411(m): 3:53pm On Aug 10, 2007
thanx mate, i feel ur honest opinion, infact i had d same problem with the last verse but i just felt i shud use it like dat, all d same. thanx

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