Welcome, Guest: Register On Nairaland / LOGIN! / Trending / Recent / NewStats: 3,151,544 members, 7,812,714 topics. Date: Monday, 29 April 2024 at 05:54 PM |
Nairaland Forum / Entertainment / Literature / Poems For Review / What Will Tomorrow Bring? (1265 Views)
Nigeria , Let Me Bring You Home / If Tomorrow Never Comes / The World Ends Tomorrow (the 21st Day Theory) (2) (3) (4)
What Will Tomorrow Bring? by kunsky411(m): 2:26pm On Aug 07, 2007 |
Tomorrow A day of events and possibilities That is yet untapped But has the capacity to be a GOLD mine For only the adventurer who never quits Even when the pot of GOLD seems out of reach. Tomorrow Uncertain in its mysteries But unraveled in its understanding That it only gives what we ask of it There’s no magic formula to it It’s simply a case of planning well for tomorrow Or be prepared to live in pain and sorrow. Tomorrow Brings hope as well as despair Brings happiness as well as regret The choice is ours to take But not without a price to pay To win the race, we don’t need pace All we need is will & determination to be an ace. Tomorrow Where our future lies Day of reckoning to weigh our yesterday’s decision Let’s make hay while the sun is still shining So we won’t ask “what will tomorrow bring?” When we are old and dying. Tomorrow Is bright as the northern star in the sky And with a burning desire to stay on course We’ll never find ourselves in uncharted ocean All we need to do is work together For tomorrow is around the corner. |
Re: What Will Tomorrow Bring? by rossy4life(f): 6:48pm On Aug 08, 2007 |
Nice poem, very meaningful, keep it up |
Re: What Will Tomorrow Bring? by kunsky411(m): 10:40am On Aug 09, 2007 |
thanx rose, i appreciate ur honest comment.thanx |
Re: What Will Tomorrow Bring? by RuuDie(m): 1:25pm On Aug 09, 2007 |
Good work man. . . . very sensible, positive, inspiring stuff! makes for excellent reading take out the "tomorrows" at the beginning of every verse and i think it'd look a whole lot better. I'd have thought the verse b'4 the last would'a rounded off the piece appropriately. . . but it's all good! |
Re: What Will Tomorrow Bring? by kunsky411(m): 3:53pm On Aug 10, 2007 |
thanx mate, i feel ur honest opinion, infact i had d same problem with the last verse but i just felt i shud use it like dat, all d same. thanx |
(1) (Reply)
Killa Clique / Quiet People / A Poem 4 Garri
(Go Up)
Sections: politics (1) business autos (1) jobs (1) career education (1) romance computers phones travel sports fashion health religion celebs tv-movies music-radio literature webmasters programming techmarket Links: (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10) Nairaland - Copyright © 2005 - 2024 Oluwaseun Osewa. All rights reserved. See How To Advertise. 8 |