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Burying God! by bibiking1(m): 6:03am On Sep 10, 2007 |
i wait in anxiety as my heart gets knowledge of the sight before me. with their Agbada's and Babariga's they toil diligently they are soaked in the sweat of perverse ways i smell the combined stench it is a strong smell of ill gotten wealth i fear being caught but they are too engrossed to bother the hole must be covered fast they lay in the already decomposed body and begin to replace the earth with care i slip back into the forest one of many eyes that saw it the grave diggers burying God! |
Re: Burying God! by denex: 1:39pm On Sep 17, 2007 |
I already commented on this somewhere else, but I just wanted to say I really enjoyed it and that you always write about important issues that everyone else ignores. I know you've been busy these past couple of months so lemme see what you've been up to. |
Re: Burying God! by RuuDie(m): 1:20pm On Oct 03, 2007 |
There's some intense cipher write there. . . . . i'm not g'onna fool anybody least of all me'self by tryna act like i understand a line of whats written out there but the visual representations running around in my head of what it could possibly be about is testament to what a quality poem it is - vague, undecipherable; seeming gibberish but loaded with a powerful, powerful message that only the author can vividly outline! That title just grabs u by the scruff of ur neck and u gots no choice but 2 read - I doff my hat guy, u 2 much! |
Re: Burying God! by bibiking1(m): 2:29pm On Oct 03, 2007 |
Thanks man, i am quite elated that some one does love my work |
Re: Burying God! by RuuDie(m): 12:09pm On Oct 05, 2007 |
bibiking1: N'ah man. . . . u shld be getting all the thanx 4 giving us a piece 2 relish |
Re: Burying God! by nex(m): 8:27pm On Aug 15, 2009 |
bibiking1, that my brother from another pair of parents. @Ruudie he was talking about corruption. And the total lack of conscience with which it is done by those up there, the impunity with which it is carried out. It becomes clear that they've not only dismissed God, they've "taken care" of Him. |
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