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| Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by HARDDON: 6:54pm On May 05, 2013 |
Take ma wine take ma women Take ma wealth take ma wisdom Take ma food take ma freedom But please save ma song Take my prime take my dime Take my vine take my whyne But please save my rhymes Take my best take my s3x Take my crest take my nest But please save my zest Take my rain take my reign Take my name take my fame but please save ma flame Take мч rod take мч cord Take my ford take my works But please if you would save my words Let's dab , shall we? 2 Likes |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 8:32pm On May 05, 2013 |
A poem fr Rad minds..Nyc one Big Deddy....Nw dats a poem I cn connect with..Who nids "thou" "afeared" nd d rest wen I cn get it straight lyk dis? 1 Like |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Shugamania(f): 8:52pm On May 05, 2013 |
Take ma air, Take ma breath.. As long as i've got my words, i've got all i need. Ab-so-lu-te-ly wow! Go harddon. 1 Like |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by HARDDON: 9:50pm On May 05, 2013 |
Vickii Ro: A poem fr Rad minds..Nyc one Big Deddy....Nw dats a poem I cn connect with..Who nids "thou" "afeared" nd d rest wen I cn get it straight lyk dis? Hehehe ..... V.v We still learning Still honing Pray Do me a lil line wud chu? |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by HARDDON: 9:59pm On May 05, 2013 |
Shugamania: Take ma air, Take ma breath.. Take må heart take ma luv But please don't take мч suga! Мч sole inspiration Béauty like reflecting light rays on the stream And eyes like diamond in the field of falling snow A flowing fountain of words ethereal Mortal clothed in the linens of angels All but to bless d course of humanity 1 Like |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Shugamania(f): 10:04pm On May 05, 2013 |
HARDDON:  |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by HARDDON: 10:23pm On May 05, 2013 |
Let me dance dab and dazzle Upon this plain of plenty puzzle Let me move mime and mutter Yet a few flowers A lil lighter |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 9:10am On May 06, 2013 |
In ma heart,nd in my soul I got a lil fire I aint willing 2 blow but deep down inside I'm afraid 2 let it flow fr men 2 see its glow lest I lose control of hw fast it will grow ......Whaddiya think Big deddy..I aint big on writing..I jst read 1 Like |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by HARDDON: 8:20pm On May 06, 2013 |
Vickii Ro: In ma heart in my soul So oh so Sö wow so A glass to dis seed sown And my night smile so Flown from this thrown Through time through thunder As i pause to ponder Upon V.ro my drummer A lil wine a lil wonder why snuff off why puff off If you may please Un seal your soul Let it glide Let it glow Let it free Let it flow Let us dance Let us dab Take on wings Let us swing 2 Likes |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 8:31pm On May 06, 2013 |
Thanx Bid deddy Lemme c wat I cn com up with next 1 Like |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 8:49pm On May 06, 2013 |
For a long time I've been asking Jst myself have I been questioning why are you afeared, Why on dis cowardly path tread, But then on Nairaland, I saw a thread from one who I almost revere and to myself I said Why not give it a trial Why go on living in denial nd den I put in my two cent nd den prayd to all dem saints fr encouragement nd jst a comment and I'm happy I did listen No longer will I be silent Cause now I know somone Listens ...... 3 Likes |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by HARDDON: 10:40pm On May 06, 2013 |
Trail no more in time Travail upon your Vale And bless the less Let the fury of your fantasy furnace Blaze upon d story of your holy glory Come Sprinkle some giggle And wit hands akimbo Mingle with riddles Therein we colour our valor Upon dis vast squalor |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 11:37am On May 07, 2013 |
Wow!! Vickii, Big deddy and Shuga. . You guys are great... Wish i had such talent *sobs* Well, im a good reader  |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 12:05pm On May 07, 2013 |
Take my laptop, take my phone Take my network, take my NL But please don't take my HARDDON. I love this poem Thanks for taking away the shakespeare english 1 Like |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 6:53pm On May 07, 2013 |
Br3nd4: Wow!! Vickii, Big deddy and Shuga. . You guys are great... Wish i had such talent *sobs*Thanx dear......Well I neva tot of writing too(I'd rada read) bt u neva knw a trial cn jst change ur views |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Shugamania(f): 9:04pm On May 07, 2013 |
Vickii Ro: For a long time I've been asking It's in you girl.. Keep this up and u'll blaze the trail in no time. Welldone. 1 Like |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Shugamania(f): 9:09pm On May 07, 2013 |
Br3nd4: Wow!! Vickii, Big deddy and Shuga. . You guys are great... Wish i had such talent *sobs* Babe, just put ur pen to paper. Vickii jst said it all.. U never can tell. I never thought i could, but with the help of some well-meaning folks..am getting there. Jst try and put down watever comes to mind...let's see what we can get. ...and Thanks! |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 9:24pm On May 07, 2013 |
My name is Tina I come from Argentina I drink Maltina To make me thinner |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 9:44pm On May 07, 2013 |
CFCfan: My name is TinaIts in you bro..Lmao |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 9:50pm On May 07, 2013 |
Vickii Ro: That was a popular Primary school rhyme in Lagos. |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Shugamania(f): 10:03pm On May 07, 2013 |
CFCfan: My name is Tina Hehehehe... U no serious at all. Oya second verse... |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 10:04pm On May 07, 2013 |
These days peeps are always like "why are you always smiling" And I'll be like I'm nairalanding My older bro was like "Whats with the smile?" I replied "CFCfan jst dropd som crazy lines" My frnd was askin earlier?"Who's Br3nd4" I jst smiled nd said A girl with too much swagger my frnds go lyk "dese days u're hardly ever on twitter" Nd I'll answer Nt wen I av Nadia,Neena nd Shugamania Oh my nairaland D thngs u've done fr me d ever making sense land Even with ur somtyms weird mods notin cn keep me away Nt evn typhoid Oh my nairaland Home of d sadist nd realists garage of both d ugly,good nd bad Temple of both pessimists nd optimists Harbor of d free-thinkers,d tribalistic D geeks nd both fun-seekers Live on Oh Nairaland Live on 4 Likes |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 10:05pm On May 07, 2013 |
Hmm. . . So ive been tasked to put my pen to a paper But on my keypad I linger Looking for the words that would make a heart shudder Confused i feel yet confident Like what I write would be excellent In shyness, I atempt Hoping that it would be felt.  3 Likes |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 10:05pm On May 07, 2013 |
Shugamania: My name is chelsea I come from Chelsea I drink Chelsea (dry gin) To make me cheesy |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Shugamania(f): 10:13pm On May 07, 2013 |
Lollll.. Cfc, abeg comot for here. @vickii... luvvv that piece. U should create a new thread for it, with a lil modification if u can. See? The more u try.. |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 10:17pm On May 07, 2013 |
Shugamania: Lollll.. Cfc, abeg comot for here. "We are all beautiful and well endowed" |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Shugamania(f): 10:26pm On May 07, 2013 |
Br3nd4: Hmm. . .  Brend, thanks for trying. Give it time.... don't force it. The first 3 lines though...they sound like something from a certain Nigerian's rap album (name withheld). U can twist the words around and present them in a different way. We can do this, girl.  |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Shugamania(f): 10:27pm On May 07, 2013 |
CFCfan: Yes.. We're well endowed with ghetto rhymes. Shekpe fan  |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 10:29pm On May 07, 2013 |
CFCfan:Yah very true....I'm very much luvin ur short poems joor...Carry go Br3nd4,I totally luuuv ur poem...U've got talents girl...Do ya thing Shuga thanx aa lot....Thumbs up peeps Harddon ur seed is becoming a forest jete by jete..Thaanx Big Deddy 1 Like |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Nobody: 10:33pm On May 07, 2013 |
Shugamania: Ewooo! *runs back into shell* I no try again i'll just leave it to y'all jare. . . I'd rather do prose, this poem thing sef...una well done abeg  Chei! |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Shugamania(f): 10:36pm On May 07, 2013 |
Br3nd4: Come back here  You want shekpe fan to start laffing at us? Oya please nowww...one more try?? It's there, we can see it. |
| Re: Take Ma Wine Take Ma Women by Shugamania(f): 10:41pm On May 07, 2013 |
Mr Brendan... |
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