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Please Rate This Poem by july21st(m): 10:27pm On Apr 14, 2012
feel this skit
i wandered a bit
enough to loose my meat
making me feel the heat
who the hell took that shit?
mind you i wouldn't beat
even though i may take your seat
and on the ground make you sit.
sending you to the bottomless pit
no wonder you felt the jilt
which your girl handed you like a script.
your covered with filth,
wait a minute,don't spit.
the banner of peace you just split
now i must unleash my fleet
for the path of war you just lit
mind you there is no retreat
there is no limit.
yes! All these for a piece of meat.
Re: Please Rate This Poem by baggy4luv(m): 10:44pm On Apr 14, 2012
ok its kinda gangster.poetry arouse imagination and it is always deep.
Re: Please Rate This Poem by In4MATIC1: 11:50am On Apr 15, 2012
Oooh da meaty poo... Very rhymey
Re: Please Rate This Poem by kay9(m): 11:32pm On Apr 15, 2012
@OP, reads more like a rap verse... I mean, ''skit''?
Re: Please Rate This Poem by uncletbuddy(m): 7:26am On Apr 17, 2012
Nice one! I love the rhymes. I'll say itz more like a poem of someone powerful having the ability to war and with the believe of conquering at every fight if the light of peace is quenched and the candle of war is on fire...
Nice One!
...My opinion oh!

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