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Penshalom I have always known you to be a great writer I sincerely love this piece babe You are a great writer nne

The characters are just annoying me... Tarila is stupid, soty wouldn't be nice if not for de accident, vena can't say because are role is not clear yet, princess nah she is selfish, tare is obsessed... So my favorite is queen cause is is straight forward... Thanks for de updates nne

More ideas to ur brain nne

Didn't see my seat number... But I will continue uninvited... Everywhere good

Olivervivian:
I'm sorry, I just registered newly,please forgive me

Eyah... What an innocent reply... Feel like crying for her now

Very interesting story

lilkrix:
I'm telling you. The storyline matches The Originals too much. But anyways ride on!

I dislike ur type.. .its not a word of encouragement. ..if he copied it.. .it will take nothing from u not to comment. ..rather jump and pass make we see road Na.. .write please I de ur back

Guy please update me na.. .i dnt care if u copied it from Jupita...but for it to come from someone preparing for waec.. .u killed it Broh.. .God bless your brain

Bella this could make a series movie o.. .so much suspense.. .i love this dear.. .God bless u Nne.. I'm clad I followed to DE end.. And thank God Katie didn't die o.. .i would have jux locate u and fight u

Nne Monday av passed.. .�

Nne u got me reading this to DE end without giving myself break.. .nice work dear.. .but Clyde was too humble all those while he was apologizing.. .like he was being remote controlled. ...anything for love anyways

How long will I keep checking for update.. .and ur story is not lengthy again nii.. .lovr ur story nne

So so captivating. ..i love this ma'am.. .more ideas dear

Nne my blood de hot.. .i de ya back.. .nice work baby girl

This is work is too wonderful.. .buh with this necta and Matt it can only happen in America.. .naija guy no fit geh that kind patience this long o.. .Aswear down

Penshalom:
Episode 12
Ava's POV
"Whoa you are home earlyyyyy......" my Mum was saying and her voice trails off as she sees my face.
I rush into my room and fall on the bed as I cry m heart out.
"Baby, what's wrong?" My Mum says as she enters my room.
I just cry more.
She hugs me.
"Shh, it's okay, it's okay" my Mum says patting my back.
After what feels like hours I finally stop and I pull from the hug.
"You want to talk about it?"
I nod my head in response.
"Well..." my Mum says after few minutes of silence.
"He has a fiance" I say and a tear drops from my eye and I wipe it off.
"Who has a fiance?" My Mum says looking confused.
"Kevin.."
"He does? How?" My Mum says looking shocked.
"His parents wants him engaged to Ashley, and she is also his ex"
"And they are now engaged?"
"Does it matter? Anyway, I broke it off with him."
"So soon?"
"What do you expect me to do Mum? His parents already have a girl in mind for him.. I'm nothing compared to her"
"Don't say that Ava"
"Well it's the truth. I have nothing to offer him"
"Stop belittling yourself.. you have a lot of potential in you Ava. You are beautiful, in and out, never think you are not"
I sigh.
"Ava, running away from problems is not going to solve it. It's better you face them"
"But..." I wanted to argue.
"Listen dear.. No relationship is perfect, every relationship goes through it's own storm, married or not. And you have a better chance of winning it because you are a child of God. Ava, you both love each other, I know he does cos your phone's screen been flashing with his name since.
This your storm Ava, you have to take charge, both of you.. Show the devil who is the boss here."
"But if it doesn't work.."
"Is there anything too hard for God to do?"
I shake my head.
"There you have your answer.."
"Mum.." I hug her.
"You are the best" I say with tears in my eyes and a smile on my lips.
"I know"
We both laugh.
"Now call him before he goes crazy"
She hands me the phone.
She winks at me before she leaves the room.
I take a deep breath and dial his number.
He picks up on the first ring.
*************************************
Kevin's POV
It took me time to realize what happened as I watched Ava run off.
"Did she just break up with me?" I asked myself.
"No no no..." I brought my phone out and start calling her as I run out of school.
She later called back after an hour and I pick it up immediately.
"Kevin listen..."
I interrupt her.
"This is so unfair Ava, you can't just break up with me.. It's not like I didn't want to tell you about the engagement, I just never found the right time and I never agreed to it anyway, we can't break up not after everything we've been through, we are just starting Ava, we can't end it, I'm never going to end it.. you understand?"
She chuckles.
"I'm sorry Kevin.. I'm sorry for making an irrational decision.. I'm sorry... we will fight this together Kevin"
I am stunned.
"Hey where are you?" I ask her.
"I'm home"
"I'm coming over"
Penshalom

Phew, it was tough writing the last two episodes cos of my inexperience in love matters, lol
Yeah, leave your comments, good and bad but go easy on me please, there's so much my heart can take, lol.
Till next time dearies

can u make it look real.. .cos it sounds more like a drama to me... One can predict what happens next in ur write up