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Episode 5
I feel comfortable now since my wounds are healed, I felt so relieved and I slept off, before I fell into deep sleep I felt my body moving but I couldn’t fight it because have slept for a long time ago, I need this sleep, after what seems like a minute to me but it is several hours in the outside world I wake up, I try to open my eyes but it is just too heavy, anyway I opened my eyes only to find myself in what look like a wilderness, and no one around there at all, “where the hell is this?” I asked myself, I begin to wonder around the wilderness, I hear some sounds and I sense trouble, it is the sound of footstep of a very big animal maybe the size of dinosaur I think, I start running to where I don’t know, but safety first, as a run farther I fall into something like a trap and I couldn’t move my body again, I start calling for help, but the animal is moving nearer, then I check the trap out, it is a big cobweb, the web is as thick as a rope and it is metallic like an electric wire.
The animal is now very near, about 40 meter I guess, now it is in a visible range…. When I saw the animal at first I couldn’t believe my eyes, I closed my eyes and I wish it was a dream, I open it only to find out it is real, as it move nearer to me the trap become tighter and I believe it has seen me, I guess this is the day I am waiting for, the day of my death, it got to me and I can see what it really is, it is a…

….And he punched me in the face, the feeling I have translated that a big stone hit my face, but it was his hand, his hand is very hard, as I was trying to balance he hit me in the stomach, this time I get angrier and I hit him back with all my strength and he block it and attacked me again, as we continue to fight(should I call it fighting or beating) a lot of people have gathered around us, some were trying to separate us, some were hailing the guy, after like 5 minute of rough beating for me, a senior lecturer walked by and ask why people are not on the queue and why they gathered round there, he was informed about the fight then he came to my rescue, he was my messiah, he then took us to his jeep, and said “ Do you know you will both be expelled for what you just did?” By this time my leg is visibly shaking and I don’t think it will hold my body for long…

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Episode 4
My ship “Atom 57” is a space carrier ship, it not like any other ship, the only advantage it have is extra defense and extra space for passenger/load since it mainly for galaxy to galaxy transportation, Although if not for the type of missiles(W.M.M.S) we were hit with, it defenses hold the attack off.
Whatever Toyin is doing to my body seems to be working, I can feel our my wound healing and am getting better but not fully, although I so much want to die, this people won’t allow me, just because of what seems like a prophesy that am “The Chosen one “ or something like that… I can feel my strength back now, but I never want to be in any war, I just want to live a normal life.
If am not sure of anything about this war, am very sure our enemies are much more ready and equipped than we are…. I was assigned a carrier ship just because I was believed to have some special power (ok maybe I do),the council of U.P.D Admirals believe I can handle any attack without any use of weapon so why waste a ship equipped with weapon on me. I was left to wonder if they were wrong or my power was exaggerated, maybe am afraid to use it fully, the only reasonable explanation is that I don’t like war…..
Toyin is an endowed girl moderately; her beauty is astonishing and magnificent( maybe to me because beauty is in the eye of the beholder). She is the slim type of girl that will make a guy go crazy, although contrary to my taste she is dark(not too dark), her skin is well maintained, all I think about her is that she is this kind of high class babe, although am a type of guy that like light and plus size girls (Big girls), but meeting Toyin might have change my taste, all I want now is her, not only because of her beauty but also because she is intelligent. Being an Engineering student I read very wide and know so much, although am not the type of person that show off, but with Toyin I was challenged, I end up bringing up a lot of topics I know and she seem well informed about most of them.
We have being on the queue for over an hour, her own queue move faster than mine, so she is farther from me so we stopped talking, and I was lost in thought looking at her, I was carefully examining every part of her body, Suddenly I hear a loud bang and it seems like the world is about to end, I felt an intense heat and saw a flash of lighting, I also saw some things that look like stars too, I have no idea what was going on, the next thing I heard is a thick and hard voice at my back that says “Ogbeni are you mad, don’t you know the queue have moved since and u didn’t take any step forward”
I tried to look back but it like my neck stiffed, then it occurred to me that I was slapped by the guy, it is the type of destiny/memory resetting slap, because I cant even remember why I was queuing, my name, where I am for what seems like 72 hours but not more than some milliseconds. When I became balanced with anger I moved to fill the line and I challenged the guy. The guy is tall and muscular, he is very dark and looked mean am sure he will have been seeking admission for at least 5 years, if not that we were all freshers I will have conclude he is a cultist.
The anger took over me and I slapped him back, he looked really impressed with my action, then his face changed and I can see the anger in his face, this time I moved back and he move close to me and…..

Ashiat39:
Atom, ur story z gr8 nd I knw u cn stl gv us more of it bt dnt let us salivate b4 we cn be served. Thnk u.

am very sorry for late update... i was busy with my blog.. am going to update tommorow

Thanks for the comment, it is people comment I was waiting for before I continue.... update is coming soon

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Holarz:
u re doing perfectly okay bro,bt u shuld wake frm that slumber,u might be able to save ur ship

Outofsync:
How far @Atom57, Update never ready?

Upadte is ready o

Am sorry for updating late, i was busy with my blog

Episode 3
I and my crew were sent to survey and spy the enemies to know their strength and weakness, so I and the ships under my command went for the survey with the thought that whatever happen I can handle it but here we are, inside the net of the enemies, they have us just where they wanted us. But I kept wondering why they send so much ship to attack our few ship or do they think this is the main invasion but that cant be because they know the number of ship we pocess then it occur to me that they are after getting me, maybe they know the great power but how will they know, how do they know we are coming,they seems so prepare,how do they know all this? Or maybe they don’t know…. But how are…..
…..”Captain Atom!, Atom!! Atom!!! Wake up”….. Now am beginning to recognize the familiar voice, it sound like Toyin….. “ I think he is heavily wounded can you heal him?” another voice that sound like Rebecca Replied her….. “Let me try….” Toyin replied. I felt someone touch my head…. In my mind I was thinking…… “You people should just leave me alone… Let me die in peace maybe I will rest, am tired of all this… I haven’t sleep in a week because we are preparing for war…. Although I know I cant die but I just want to be like this for a while…. Maybe a day, a week, a month, a year…. I really need it…”
Meanwhile……
As I checked my phone I saw a number that wasn’t saved on my contact, I was wondering who it may be I hesitated first but I later picked it…. As I picked it I hear a melodious feminine voice…
Unknown Caller: Hello
Me: Hello, please who is this? (In American Accent)
Unknown caller: So you didn’t save my number Atom….
It look like this girl know me o, but where did a girl sounding great like this know me…
Me: Am sorry I changed my sim to another phone but I saved most of my contact on my phone(I lied)
Unknown caller: So are you through with your hostel clearance
Me: Yes, but it remain some photocopy but who is this please
Unknown caller: So you don’t recognize my voice, It is Toyin joor,but why are you speaking like you just came back form America.
Me: Ah,Toyin so na you dey speak like a girl from Canada
Toyin: Lol, That my voice
Me: Anyway you sound great,so are you through
Toyin: Almost, just to find who will buy my hostel, you remember I told you I wont stay in the hostel.
Me: OK I will call you when am through, Bye
Toyin: Bye.
Toyin is the girl I met at conference center when we started clearance, the clearance was very stressful and there was a long queue, she was on the opposite to mine, because there were Four long queues, Am a very jovial guy, as I was joking, she picked interest and we started talking she told me about her self, she was admitted for computer science, she is into modeling and her screen name is QueenDiva…
Then as I was about to tell her about myself something happened….

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