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leoloi: Audrey Chinua Achebe u have murdered me with suspense please do something. n by the way nice story ,nice plot and wonderful theme.

Chinua wetin? Lol! Tanx dear

vivikul: Where is Eric? Pls I want to hear his own syd of d story

Its coming

ojingbe: Audrey timms will you marry me

Lol! No oga ojingbe. I no fit practice bigamy abeg

hebenz: why nt tell us eric part of the story
am dieing of suspense o

Eric will tell u himsef. I'll increase d number of my updates per day so we can quickly get 2 dt part b4 d suspense go kill u!

Emanuel1997: Finnally Here At Last

Weldone dear

Funniez: Abeg we need update oooooooo, and do it sharp sharp cus I've been folowing since last month nd I wana get to d end of dis story. Wat abt Eric's side? Wat abt Mrs Akpan? Wat abt Aunt Viens secret? We need update o

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All in gud tym dear. Am abt 2 update

bibie01: Audrey, you always keep me fascinated n spellbound. Your updates are always 'wowing'.. More wisdom to you.

Please tell network to allow you give us another update. Thanks a lot dear.

Tanx dear. Lol!

Balley: Hmmmm at last i don reach d last page. Hmmmm poor oleng. @ Audrey, it seems its not only oleng dat knws hw to use charm. Urs has definitely wrked on me. I no get mb, i stil use my money browse because i wan read ur story unfortunately mtn wipe my 100box within secs. Daris God oo. Nice work Audrey, more ink to ur pen n thnks

Weldone. Hehehe! Eiya, sory. Tanx dear

morsadh: Chei man! Many things don happen since I travel o! OLeng married?! and facing marriage issues! Lord!!! On the Bright side though, you now have more people reading your work. Congrats, AudreyTimms

Welcome bck. Hpe say u buy bread com. Tanx dear

Divepen: Ah my oga @ d top...
I saw Audrey timm...Audrey timm...
I was like this person is a genii oo....
I must know dz person

Genii? Hmm.....

PrinceAdepoju: What a relief! I expected some beatings from you.
Also glad you got some useful things*I'm sure you don't expect me to know every good writer on nairaland, that's why I added others. Well, you can help mention those you know though.
I'll be looking forward to that *

Nooo! Dnt luk 4wad 2 anytin abeg! I dnt want 2 take ur place in d beatings wen I fail 2 mention some names!

Divepen: Hmmm...
I found you.

Oga Divepen, found me? Was I lost?

almacherish: Hmmmmm abeg i dae wait mk Eric cum bk jwoor..... I support Zinny... She's goin tru all dis tins cz she married d wrong man
gud work audrey




#TeamEricOleng

Ok o! Jst continue waiting patiently sha. Tanx dear

wunmzylala: Audrey!!!!!!! Do you know how may times i have had to refresh for update... i had to pause work.. pleaseeeeeee upload loads of chapters...at the same time...pleaseeeeeee.... By the way.. i doff my hat for you again and again... may you continue to increase in skills and wisdom

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Netwrk is misbhavin. I hv 2 wait 4 it 2b steady. Tanx dear

zoe123: Audrey abeg no use suspense kill person, upload the rest jor.see as i don forget office work dey read Oleng tori

Hehehe! Na netwrk cos am. No let dem drive u 4 wrk sha

“Do you think we’re doing the right thing?” Mrs. Sokari questioned her daughters.

“Yes o!” Michelle quickly asserted.

“I can’t help feeling sorry for her.” Their mother said sadly.

“Mum, don’t feel sorry for her. She’s a great pretender. It’s because of your presence that she became humble. If Dave had been here, her mouth would have been running like a leaking faucet. Don’t mind her. She has destroyed her womb with countless abortions and now wants to pretend nothing is wrong with her. Idiot.” Michelle extended with emphasis.

“Serves her right.” Felicia asserted with derisive cool.

“Feli, please let’s go to the kitchen to look for what to prepare for mummy.” Michelle suggested and they both got up to go into the immaculate kitchen, leaving their mum staring into space and trying to suppress her guilty conscience.

Meanwhile, Oleng was still at the door weeping profusely. She couldn’t believe what had happened to her. What a shameful way to leave your husband’s house, she thought. She wished for the umpteenth time that Dave was there. She could bet her life that he wouldn’t have allowed his family throw her out in such a disgraceful manner.

She got up and packed her clothes, shoes and jewelleries properly into her travel bags. They had only thrown out a few of her things. She didn’t mind because there would be ample time for her to get the rest. She was glad the neighbors weren’t around or she would have died of embarrassment.

She managed to get a hold of herself and carried the bags to the gate. She thanked God the gateman wasn’t around to ask her questions because she was fond of him and she wouldn't have been able to lie. She hailed an approaching taxi, put her luggage in it and gave the driver Aunt Vien’s address in MCC road. She had nowhere else to go.

When Aunt Vien opened the door, Oleng just burst into tears. Her Aunt quickly led her in and helped her to bring in her luggage.

“What is it my dear? What happened?” She was anxious but Oleng cried on.

“Please my dear. Pull yourself together and tell me what happened. Is Dave back? Did you quarrel with him? Please tell me what happened.”

“Dave’s mum and his sisters threw me out of his house because the three months they gave to me to get pregnant is up and I still haven’t conceived.” she finally confided.

“What?” Her Aunt stood up in anger. “Are you God? Who are they to play God with your life? Where were they when you were running from pillar to post in attempts to get pregnant? Don’t they know of all you've been doing to get pregnant? The different doctors, their numerous tests and from one church program to the other. Where were they? What have they done as in-laws to help you get pregnant? God will definitely punish them for treating you like this. They won’t go scot free. I assure them.” Aunt Vien retorted sharply.

“Aunty, it’s not their fault. Look at me, I’ve been married for four years yet I haven’t been able to conceive not even once so that it would be said I had a miscarriage. Not once! I don’t blame them at all. I don’t.” She shook her head continously.

Aunt Vien sat by her and held her. “But it’s not your fault either. We’re fertile in my family and you can’t be different. Remember you even got pregnant for Eric.”

“That’s the more reason why I’m worried, Aunty. What if his child did something to me?”

“But the doctors said you're alright and the child didn’t harm you in any way. Stop blaming yourself. What about Dave? Have you considered the fact that the fault could be from him?”

“There’s nothing wrong with Dave, Aunty. The doctor said he's okay too and he told me two of his ex-girlfriends got pregnant for him but they had to abort them because of their studies. I don’t know what’s wrong. Why is this happening to me? Why? Why is my life so full of misery?” she lamented pitifully.

Her Aunt held her and couldn’t help the tears that rolled down her eyes also. On her part, she had tried to help Oleng by taking her to traditional doctors who were specialists in such matters. They had given Oleng herbs that she had taken religiously but had still not conceived much to their surprise. One had suggested that the fault might be from Dave and had mixed a concoction for him too which he had taken religiously also yet Oleng hadn’t conceived. They had admitted the case was beyond them then. Aunt Vien had turned to God yet her niece’s stomach was still as flat as ever. She felt so sorry for her. Why was life so cruel? So unfair? This girl had gone through a lot in life.

Oleng took a sick leave from her place of work. She knew Dave would be back the next day but she switched off her phone. She was willing for him to find out she had been thrown out by his family on his own. He called Aunt Vien the day he was due back when he couldn’t reach her but Aunt Vien lied that the network was poor.

Oleng was in the living room with tears gathered in her eyes from watching a pampers advert on television when she had a round of knocks on the door. She knew intuitively that it was Dave because he was due back that evening. She ran to her old room. It was Aunt Vien who opened the door at the persistent knocks.

“Yes? Why do you want to break down my door?” she demanded curtly.

“I’m sorry, Aunt Vien. Where’s Oleng?” he asked desperately but she stared at him in anger.

“I’m sorry for my lack of manners. Good evening Aunt Vien. Please is Oleng here?” He tried to control himself.

“And what if she is? You want to take her back there so your family can humiliate her again, ehn?”

“No, Aunt Vien. Please it’s not like that. I’ve sent them parking. I threw them out of my house. Please let me see Oleng. Please.”

Shock registered in Aunt Vien's eyes at what he just said. “You mean you threw your mum out of your house?”

“No. She chose to leave when I threw my sisters out of the house. When I came back to the house with so much joy at the thought of seeing my angel, I was both sad and disappointed to see my family there. They ignited my anger when they told me they had thrown out my wife in my absence and without my consent. Michelle even dared to hold me back when I wanted to rush down here immediately they told me. She’ll have to see a doctor for the sound slap I gave to her.

I didn’t mean for my mum to leave because I wanted to talk to her without the poisonous influence of my sisters but she made me choose between her and my wife and naturally, I chose my wife, so she left my house in anger when I threw my sisters out.
Oleng means more to me than three of them put together. Oleng is my reason for living today. She is the reason why I am alive today but they don’t understand that. I had to choose Oleng instead of them. Besides, my mother already has two grandchildren and two more are even on the way.” he narrated squarely.

His wife’s aunt just stared at him dumbfounded.

“Aunt Vien, please can I see Oleng? Please I really need to see her. To assure her that the fact that they threw her out means nothing and I’ll stand by her no matter what. Please let me see her.”

“I can’t. She won’t see you so don’t bother.”

“Please let me see her and talk to her. Aunt Vien, please you have to help me. I love her very much. She's my life. Please.” He pleaded desperately.

“Don’t waste your time here anymore because she’s no longer interested in continuing the marriage with you.” she angrily informed him.

hephzibahbeulah: Audrey,tank u very much for dis story,u are a great writer. Pls kip d gud work up,above d sky is ur starting point.. Well done!

Tanx dear

vivikul: @Audrey pls come n gv us breakfast cos we r hungry. Or r we on fasting

Dnt mind me o! Went 2 read d stories of my fellow writers. Hehehe! Na on fridays I dey fast o!

Fatalveli: I'm accepting the fact dat there'll never be notin stopping u from being a guru... Keep it up bro, but u gotta update 2 receive more praises

Tanx dear. Hehehe! Abt 2 update

Hey dear. I guess d publisher want 2 buy d rights to ur book. My agent called it Private Label Rights (PLR)" Agreement. It mins once u sell it to him, u no longer have a say in d buk. 4 instance if u sell it 4 let's say 100k 2 him, he publishes it and makes a profit of 1m frm selling it, u won't get a dime frm it. My agent said u shud try 2 squeeze him 4 as much as u can get. He cdnt giv me a specific price cos he doesn't no ur work nor d publisher. U guys must have a contact agreement sha. I hpe dis helps.

Adesylvia: I tink dave has a low sperm count and has also heard eric part of d story poor oleng.a lovely story

Low sperm count? Hmm..... Tanx dear

mmig: u are just too gud at wat u are doing. finding d rite word to appreciate ur effort rite now to me is a mirage. some of us are just rantin about olenge bin deceive by luv she had for dav for agreeing to mary him. but wat dey fail to understand is dt she truely luv him as tins suggest rite now. mind u dav is not impotent as are suggestin bcus 2 ladies had abortion for him in d past. pls feed us more. i cant just wait for d nxt post.

Dts so swit of u. Tanx dear. I lyk ur observation also

Queenxstar: Captivating and a well told story.

Tanx so much 4 honoring my story with ur presence. I rily appreciate it

fadario: i just dey imagine say i be dave;come back from work come hear dis kyn thing....hmhm...i go kill person...

Hehehe! Abeg o!

vonn: My only Audrey, should we expect another update before today ends?

Netwrk messed up again last 9te. I'll post b4 noon

bibie01: Really? What wud she have done? You didn't expect her to fight them, did you?
What she did was the only thing one could do in such situation n if her mother inlaw didn't hate her already she wud have felt pity for her.

So sorry Oleng, such is life.

I agree wit u. Tanx dear

philmama: :oAudrey u're rily gud at wat u do,chek out d suspnse as if one just had an HIV test nd xpectin d result,mehn kip it up, thumpz u ma'am!

Hehehe! Tanx dear

vivikul: I dnt no y some ladies take fondness for love. Dats wat oleng did n she is in a really bad shape nw. Tins av learnt so far is to always hear frm bothsides b4 making a decisn. Oleng was one sided she didn't listen to any1 she was so consumed with anger forgetting d love she ever had in her hearth nw its telling on her. N ladies pls dnt go into a marriage were ur inlaws expecially d mother of ur husband-to-be dnt lyk u. Its lyk digging ur grave with ur own hands. I just pity dis oleng cos she has bin stupid all along. Nyc1 dear keep it coming

I luv dis. Tanx dear

pricelesslove: i pity her ooo

Me too

ifynwa15: Oleng made the worst mistake of her life agreeing to marry Dave See wayt d'guy is making her go through, poor Oleng I only but pity her, 9c story Audrey, thumbs up More strenght to update more

Hmmm.....tanx dear

Sarahjoe1000: Poor oleng.....*crying*

Eiya. Sorry. Pls dnt cry