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Ormorlehwah: D suspence na diiiie. Next update? Weldone dear, but the food is too small. Feed Us more.Coming soon. Tanx dear |
preciousberry: Really interesting story.am enjoying every bit of it.thumbs up audreyI'm glad u're enjoyin it. Tanx dear |
Queenxstar: That's right, and Oleng gets pregnant after one night.More lyk ten minutes |
PrinceAdepoju: ...And Oleng gets pregnant for Eric.Dts if she isn't actually barren |
anasbeaut: O wow.... I love this. yeyyyy team Eric. Even if it's adultery, this is one sin that I'm glad happenedLol! |
Okinjay:Abeg o! Hpe say person don revive u |
maryhaam: Eric fit trouble shoot Oleng wif belle oooo,atleast we wil know if dave is impotent or not.Lol! Abi? |
adalusha101: Me likey! D way dis story is going. I've read this last post like 5x. And I want more!!! Ur really good, Audrey Timms! Keep it up!Rily? Y do u kip reading it? Tanx dear |
Essyydiamond: Auuuuuuddreeeeeeyyyyy!!?Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! |
seunviju: Only God knows who is behind separating the two lovers but I gez that is the little secret btw Oleng mother and the aunt.Am sure Dave has a little secret he is keepin.well am keeping my finger crossed to know who the devil is.Thanks for the update dearHmm...uw dear |
Fatalveli: I guess oleng is gonna get pregnant nowDts if she's in her fertile period |
thepatroit: S*h*i*t just got real! *Applauding Eric for not wasting time like that lily livered Dave!Lol! Tanx self appointed thread prefect |
Pororo: W-O-W..........wow!!!!!!!!Tanx dear |
typompy234: wowza....and oleng will get pregnant and then gobe . more updates Audrey Timms. God bless your handworkEnough gobe if dt one happen. Amen o! Tanx dear |
ADUKKY: Audrey, i came out of ghost mode for the first time to say "YOU ARE THE BOMB". Not boko haram bomb o. Honestly, i check every hour for updates.Tanx 4 leaving ghost mode. Make I no detonate sha. Tanx dear |
jaybiz007: O BOY...plot gerrin thicker.Hehehe! Yep! |
christabeli: Chimu o! Eric n OlengLol! |
Timothy3113: what the hell just happened |
Timothy3113: what the hell just happenedAhhh.....I dint quite put it lyk dt |
seunlarry: Gosh!.....Audrey timms.......na you dey reign now o.your story is awesome,clear and simple use of words/semantics. You're indeed a great writer.so proud of you.can't remember ever following a story this close.you just 'waooooowed' me every passing second.keep up the good work.......Tanx prof 4 ur beautiful comments. And thanks 2u, I dnt hv 2 worry abt my bb subscription 4 next mnth. I'm grateful |
She was stunned. She turned back to stare at him in astonishment. “What did you do to my baby?” he pressed, gazing deeply into her eyes. She walked back to him in disbelief. “You dare to ask me such a question? You?” She stabbed a finger in the air at him. “Who else?” he shot furiously at her. “How could you have kept such a thing from me? If Eddy hadn’t made a slip yesterday, I would never have known. Or is it that I wasn't responsible for the pregnancy? Was that why you broke up with me? Was that why you sent me those damn messages? You didn’t trust me enough to know that I would have stood by you through thick and thin? The way I loved you then, I would have damned all consequences and married you whether the baby was mine or not but you decided to hide it from me." Eric was clealy frustrated. "We promised each other we would always be together and not hide anything from each other or even lose contact no matter what! Those were definitely unfulfilled promises made by you! You aborted the baby, didn’t you?” he queried angrily, seemingly impervious to her expression of frank astonishment. Oleng was so numb she just stared at him as if he had grown horns. “Wait a minute.” she finally said raising up her hands to stop him from continuing, “I broke up with you?” she asked with disdain. “Oh! You want to deny it? I still have those damn messages you sent to me! You thought I wouldn’t find out about the baby? When Eddy made the slip yesterday, I pressurized him to tell me everything but he refused. He said Zinny had sworn him into secrecy all these years. Even Zinny was tight lipped about the matter. They both told me to go and ask you. I planned doing that later on in the evening because of my appointment but as luck would have it, you came here. When I heard you were married, I thought you married the guy you told me you had fallen in love with; I still have that horrifying message in my mailbox. I refused to delete it because it was a constant reminder to me of all the unfulfilled promises you made to me. Only for me to find out that day in your house that you had married Dave. Dave of all people! One of my closest friends. How could you?” He glared at her in scorn. It was all too much for Oleng to handle. She didn’t know when she raised her hand and slapped him hard across the face. “You liar! You filthy liar. How dare you stand before me and lie to my face like this?” she raged. Eric held his sore cheek which was beginning to turn red. He felt like killing her. No woman had ever slapped him before. He wanted to hurt her but all he could see was her beauty. Despite her anger, she still looked heavenly beautiful and sexy. Desire licked through his veins and since he had been celibate for over two years now, he gripped by the arm, pulled her to him and fastened his lips on hers. Oleng struggled to get free but Eric held her tightly and continued kissing her. Passion and desire they had shared yesteryears came rushing back to her veins. She didn’t know when she moaned and put her hands around his neck. It had been so long she had been kissed like this; thoroughly, passionately. Dave hadn’t made love to her in a long time. The last time they had made love was after they had reconciled when they had quarreled and that was about four months ago. Dave always came home looking tired and she never had the heart to initiate it because of his illness. When Eric kissed her passionately, she drowned in it. When Eric started hastily opening the buttons on her blouse, she knew he had to stop but she didn’t have the strength to tell him. She kept telling herself ‘One more kiss, just one more kiss’. She continued reciting it in her mind even while he carried her to his bed. The tingling sensations moving all over her body made her want to go mad. She had never felt such with Dave before even after five years of marriage. The sensations made her feel wild, so wild that she tore his singlet off his body. Eric made passionate love to her and she enjoyed every minute of it as she said unintelligible things to him. They both shouted each other’s name when they came. Eric held her in his arms murmuring sweet nothings to her. Basking in the euphoria of been properly made love to, she slept in his arms with her last thought being that Dave wasn’t really good in bed. |
Tanx everyone. I feel better. |
fruityjojo: Hehehehe as in are peeps really acting all scared ova this fable!?Babes, y u dey pour sand sand 4d guy garri na. Lyk u said dis is literature section so anytin is allowed. Evn if its jst fiction, e gud as we dey flow with d guy na. Me, am enjoyin it sha. |
############################## Marvy’s wedding was a huge success. There were lots to eat and drink and a lot of entertainment. She had Oleng and Zinny to thank for them because they selflessly made sure everything was running smoothly. Dave couldn’t attend the traditional wedding but he made it to the white wedding. Oleng was grateful that she had so much to do she didn’t have time to dwell on Eric’s presence at both parties. She knew his gaze was always hovering around her but refused to meet it. She was so tensed she had to rely on Dave’s presence for stamina which was not much comfort because Dave was also tense. It was quite painful for her to note that both Eddy and Eric ostracized him. They didn’t speak to him much. They only greeted him and went their separate ways. She knew she was the cause of the feud and was even more hurt when she saw how distressed Dave was at their alienation. “Why don’t we just go home?” she prompted him when she saw the way he looked at his childhood friends chatting and obviously enjoying themselves without him. “No. Marvy won’t be happy with us.” He smiled a little. “I already told her about your illness. She’ll understand if we decide to leave now.” “I’m fine. I know I gave you quite a scare when I fainted last week but what did the doctor tell you?” She reluctantly said, “There’s nothing to worry about. You are just stressed out and need a lot of rest.” “You see? I’m okay. Don’t worry about me, angel.” he urged smiling and touched her pointed nose playfully. Oleng looked up just then and saw Eric watching them tight lipped on the dancing floor of the hall. She was surprised at the anger she saw in his eyes. He said something to Eddy and walked away. She didn’t have time to wonder about it because her attention was needed somewhere. She excused herself and left. When she was through and was coming back to join her husband, she saw Eric talking to him. At first she was glad but when she saw how pale Dave became all of a sudden, she was alarmed. She hastened her steps to get to them but by the time she got there, Eric had already moved away. “What did he tell you?” she questioned immediately she got to her husband. “Nothing. We were just discussing old times.” Dave shrugged nonchalantly. “Really? Then why were you so pale all of a sudden?” She asked in disbelief. He looked at her, surprised. “Do I look pale?” “Yes. Why are you lying to me? What are you hiding from me?” She sounded hurt. “All right Angel. He came to offer his condolences about my dad’s death. He brought back painful memories. Maybe that’s why I turned pale,” he admitted but she didn’t say anything. “I think you're right. It’s getting late so we should get going.” He got up. “Okay. Let me inform Marvy and Zinny.” she said and walked away knowing Dave had lied to her. She felt murderous anger towards Eric for hurting Dave. She informed Zinny and Marvy that she was leaving due to Dave’s ill health but she would be back to help clean up and put things in order. She and Dave went home but she later returned to help Zinny out. Marvy and Kelly had gone to say thanks to their sponsors before retiring for the night. “Where’s Emeka?” Oleng asked as they arranged the wedding gifts in a corner of the room Marvy had told them to put them. Her siblings and relatives were downstairs gisting and cleaning up. “With his dad. Let him give him some trouble also.” Zinny replied and they laughed. “I’m so happy for Marvy. I forgot to tell her ‘Welcome to the club.’” Oleng beamed happily. “Me too. We'll still get a chance to do so. I hope we won’t forget again.” “Let me save it in my phone as a reminder.” Oleng said as she paused in her arranging to pick up her phone. “Zinny,” she called a while later. “Yes,” Zinny was alerted at her serious tone of her voice. “Where’s Eric staying?” “What?” Zinny was surprised. “Is he staying in his family house?” “Yes. Why do you ask?” “I need to pay him a visit.” “What for? For old times sake.” Zinny teased laughing but ended it when she saw Oleng’s solemn face. “I need to warn him to stay away from my husband and I.” Oleng firmly said, shocking her friend. “Why?” “Everyone has ostracized Dave for no just cause. Just because he married me. I’m equally disappointed in you for following their footsteps. I know you all wish Eric and I were married but it didn’t work out so why can’t you all just accept it?” Oleng was furious making Zinny angry also. “Before you throw accusations around, why don’t you ask that your so-called angel of a husband why everyone has been ignoring him?” “Dave is very sick and I don’t intend to worsen his situation by asking him foolish questions about the past.” “If you refuse to question him how will you know why we’ve decided according to you to ostracize him?” “I don’t care why you've done that. All I want you to know is that, it’s not fair. We have all been friends since childhood, so no matter what he did, he doesn’t deserve such attitude from you all.” “Okay then. If you want us to forgive his past, why don’t you forgive Eric also even though he’s innocent?” Oleng was scandalized. “I can’t believe you just said that. What has blinded you I wonder?” “Oleng, listen to me. Things are more than what meets the eye.” “Definitely not in this case. You know what; I’m sick and tired of arguing with you concerning this matter. You all can forget about us, I don’t care! Dave and I can live without you all.” with that, she threw the gift she was holding and rushed out of the room. “Oleng! Oleng!” Zinny called and called but she had already left the house. ############################### Oleng got to Eric’s family house and wondered for the umpteenth time if she was doing the right thing. When she remembered Dave’s pale face when he left for the office in the morning, she knew she was doing the right thing. After putting her work up to date, she took permission from her boss to leave the office. She wanted to catch Eric before he left for the states since it was already two days after the wedding. With a firm resolve, she knocked on the gate. The gateman opened it and she asked of Eric. She was led inside the impressive living room and stood there waiting for him even though she was offered a seat. Her breath came up sharply when she saw him walking slowly down the stairs on a white singlet and blue jean as if he didn’t have a care in the world. She was disappointed in herself for reacting to his gorgeous figure. She had told herself repeatedly before she left the office that she would be immune to his charms. He smiled when he approached her and she had to look away. He was just too handsome for his own good. “To what do I owe the honor of this visit? Did you hear I was all alone at home and decided to come and keep me company?” he teased, flashing white teeth. “On the contrary, I came to warn you to stay away from my husband.” She declared harshly. Eric wasn’t smiling anymore. “I’m very much disappointed in Dave. So he couldn’t come here himself to warn me, he had to send a woman….his wife.” he said the word ‘wife’ like an insult. Oleng saw red. “My husband is sick. That’s why I personally came here to warn you to leave him alone.” “I don’t have time for this. I’ve got an appointment in a few minutes.” with that he left her standing mouth agape and jogged up the stairs. Oleng was amazed at his audacity. When he didn’t return in the ten minutes she stood there waiting impatiently for him, she threw caution to the wind and went up the stairs to look for him. She heard him whistling and followed the sound. She banged the door open and was surprised to see him laying out some clothes on the bed and whistling in the process. She was hit by another shocker when she saw that her enlarged painting still graced his wall. She turned around to look at Eric who was surprised to see her in his room. “My, my, the dutiful wife is serious. For her to come up to my room that she refused to when we were still friends is really…what do I call it now?…em…endearing.” he teased disdainfully. Oleng blew her top then. “Don’t you dare dredge up the past because that’s where it is…the past. Listen to me and listen very carefully. I’ll not have you come back from the states to give my husband and I trouble. I married Dave, one of your closest friend, so what? I’ve put you in the past where you belong, so tell your goons, Zinny and Eddy to live Dave alone. Comprehend?” When he didn’t reply but looked at her with pain in those beautiful eyes of his, she walked away. She was at the door when he quietly said, “What happened to my baby?” |
indomitable234: Viewing this post,i sight u Audrey,whatz up wv our breakfast,serve it hot pleaseAbt 2 update dear. U guys shud overlook any error cos catrrah don take hold of me. I can't concernttrate |
shomart: Hmmmmmm, I know Eric's side of the story will be like "babe, I never got your messages and the reply you got from me asking you to terminate the pregnancy was actually sent by your mother".Hmmm....let's wait and see |
goldwaters: Audrey, I can see u viewing. Good morning.Gudmornin dear. Abt 2 update |
christabeli: Nice one OP. But please update oTanx dear. Am editing it though catrrah no lemme c road |
aprilwise: Wonderful masterpiece.Tanx dear |
seunviju: Wow wow wow.I started reading this story this afternoon and can't believe am here.What a lovely story u've got,please keep up the good workDt was fast! Tanx dear |
Vickthoriah: I've been a guest on NL for a while,but I actually joined to comment...I love love this story,its captivating nd believable...kudos to AudreytimmsRily? Dts nice of u. I'm glad u luv it. Tanx dear |
shaks97: looooolz ish just got realYes o! |
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Oh I 4got this is literary section 