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Essyydiamond: Dave is the devil's very assistant sent to make Oleng's life a mess. Away with you Dave!

Abeg pardon d guy until u hear e reason

ully: Dis ur tori sweet oooo......... Tanks 4 updating regularly. Sorry i dont comment often. U know na, phcn and dere wahala.

Tanx dear. No prblm, I undastnd

crislyn: I still don't wanna comment yet bt I didn't see ds coming.*goingbacktoghostmode*

Lol! Come back abeg

shaks97: ehl oh ehl soo there's.nuthin inside dave's Willy willy thats why he will be actin like one pussaay nigga

Lol!

hebenz: i knew it...... him dey fire blank
why he no tell oleng?

f**k dave
so selfish

Lol!

shaks97: yaaaay see gbege oh Eric is a sharp shooter oh just five minutes ni

Serious gbege!

vonn: E kwuru m ya ekwu. (I said it)
Dave is wicked and selfish! Period.
Why halt someone's life like this.....making her suffer with you.
I knew it!

Team OlengEric right from day 1.

Audrey brava!!!
Post another soon.

Na wa o! Tanx dear

Vickthoriah: UNBELIVABLE. ....,yc update as usual Audrey...keep it up

Tanx dear

ameenahz: AudreyTimms, there is a difference between impotence and sterility. Dave is sterile, not impotent.

Tanx dear. I'v corrected it

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vonn: Its noon already nah

Its coming! U don buckle ur seat belt, abi?

vivikul: It will b so good having d hard copy of dis work. So pls by al means go ahead n publish. But b4 den were is my breakfast mummy. Am hungry oooooo

Tanx dear. Abt 2 serve it hot and spicy

halfcaste1: Deedee, pls publish it o! I 4 one wud luv a copy 2 read ova and ova again wen d days r blue. Wat if tsunami happens here again? Even if its only one copy 4 me, pls publish it. My kids will get 2 read it cos only God knows wat literature in dier own tym will b lyk wit d way d world is going dese days. Do we hv any marketer in d house? To help her market it far and wide? BTW, go 2d competition thread. Go and c wat Sammyhoe wrote abt u.

U sabi find trouble o! I go carry money go print one copy jst 4u. Com my house make I print am 4u. Com wit ur own A4 paper and money 4d ink. Hehehe! No friend 4 business. I dey fear. Na gud tin? Alright! I'l go and check it out, gud or bad. Tanx dear

Essyydiamond: Nollywood!? No way! U will hate urself 4 doing it,they will not only water it down they will kill d suspense. Yes ur story is great hv it properly reviewed n put in hard copy,take it anywhere except 2 Nollywood.

Hehehe! After d final posting here, I intend taking it 2 my editor 4d final review. Hmm...u guys r rily encouraging me 2 publish it. Tanx a million dear

bibie01: Exactly, Audrey this person has said it all. Many people know you now through this work n we won't think twice before buying any of your published work. So don't regret putting it here cos it has brought you to limelight.

As gaczee said, you could sell it to a producer for it to be acted on the condition that they'd put your name as the script writer.

Hope to see you going places, love ya mucho mucho.

Tanx so much dear. Love ya mucho mucho 2

indomitable234: Please go ahead with the publishing because right now the story is restricted to nairaland alone u need to take it beyond here please branch out with this

I'll definitely do dat. Tanx dear

JeffreyJamez: I'll Take it this is not the only story you have....take it that this one is for creating awareness for Audrey Timms.... The next story you publish will definitely sell..... I know I will buy.

Yeah, I hv abt 4 more bt dis is one of my strongest. Tanx dear. I no I will still post more on dis site bt mite nt b d ones I'll publish sha

gaczee99: i dont think its a mistake that you made it public because this has brought u out. I didnt AuderyTimms before now but from now anywhere i'm passing by and comes accross any article, write up, novel or whatever by Audery Timms, i surely wont hesitate to buy it cos i know it will be woww. Besides u still can present this to a big producer to buy, it will surely sell. I'm sure i wont mind watching d acted version of this piece over and over again. Dats if they dont water it down during the acting

Tanx dear. Dt rily got 2me. My agent's beef is cos dis is one of my strongest. My fear of taking it 2 nollywood is lyk u said, hvin it watered down bt I've heard he who owns d money 4d production gets 2 cal d shot and my hubby said he's ready 2 sponsor it. I'l tink abt it sha. Tanx again

indomitable234: Audrey,reading this piece is like reading a book by danielle steel,dear have you thought about publishing this piece,you need to take it beyond nairaland even Hollywood can't give u a better storyline

Awww....dts do swit of u. Tanx dear. I luv Danielle Steel. My dear, I've tot abt publishing it bt nw dt I've made it public, am kinda rethinking it. I min y wud anyone want 2 buy it wen u can com and read it 4 free here? Naija wey lyk free tins. Dts y my agent isn't hapi wit me, 4 makin dis particula story public. Or wat do u tink?

Thanks so much for your inspiring comments. I'm truly touched. Tanx 2 dose inviting pple and tanx 2 dose accepting invitations. Tanx so much 4 believing in me everyone. I'm grateful. As 4d oliver twisters in d house, wud hv posted last 9te bt d flu came bck. I'l definitely post b4 noon 2day. Tanx 4 ur patience.

toykathy: Audrey darlyn, u really a rare gem. I didnt see dat coming, u gat brain gurl and i'm so proud of u. Keep d updates coming love, God bless u.
BTW, hw is ur flu?

Tanx dear. God bless u 2. Am better now, tanx

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“Sunshine. Sunshine. Are you awake?” Eric pressed tiny kisses around her face and she giggled.

He smiled and kissed her lips and she became fully awake. “Sunshine, I want us to talk.”

Oleng looked at him albeit sleepily then everything came crashing down. The real world struck her with a heavy blow. She sprang up on the bed.

“Jesus! What have I done? My God! What have I done?” she lamented and quickly
got up from the bed to pick up her clothes.

She quickly ran to the bathroom to dress up hurriedly. She tried to brush her weave-on which was in a disheveled state with her hands but it was no use. She kept asking herself what she had done.

“Sunshine.” Eric called when she came out of the bathroom. He had had the decency to put on his jean.

“Don’t call me that, you bastard! I’m not your sunshine. You are my nightmare. Please stay away from me from now on. I regret what we just did. What was I thinking?” Anguish was all over her lovely face.

“I think you were in your right senses for the first time since I went abroad.” he quietly informed her.

“You’re sick. You hear me? You’re sick. Maybe all the dope you’ve been taking over there has finally caught up with you.” she threw at him.

He had to laugh scornfully at that in spite of himself. “Okay. I’m on dope. What about you? It is either you’re a nymphomaniac or Dave is lousy in bed, considering your performance just now.”

She glared at him in horror but he continued, “Before you run out of here playing your role of the aggrieved adulteress,” he ignored her gasp at his harsh words. “Just tell me one thing. What happened to my baby?”

“You really are a bastard. You want to pretend you didn’t send me a message informing me to abort the baby if it was yours because you had a bright future ahead of you and didn’t want to be saddled with an unwanted baby and for me to forget about you when I sent you a text and e-mail telling you about the pregnancy?”

“Me?” He was stunned.

She didn’t bother replying. She ran out of the room and ran out of the house leaving the gate man to wonder if she was being chased by the devil. She was glad she had brought her car. She sped the car all the way home.

Immediately she got home, she ran to her room, took off her clothes and ran into the bathroom. She scrubbed and scrubbed her body as if she could scrub away the memory of making passionate love with her ex- boyfriend. She wept as she scrubbed.

She had betrayed Dave. She had been unfaithful to her ever faithful husband. How would she face him? How would she pretend as if nothing happened? She kept chastising herself for going up to Eric's room in the first place but she had wanted to make sure he got the message. She hadn’t bargained for what she got in return. She squelched the little voice in her head that kept reminding her that she had enjoyed Eric’s love making and she couldn’t compare it to Dave’s’.

“Stop it!” she screamed to herself and placed her hands over her ears as if she could stop the voice from talking by doing that.

“I love Dave. I don’t care if he's lousy in bed. I’ve managed for five years and I’m not about to stop now. I made a mistake with Eric but I don’t love him. I don’t love him.” she continued telling herself.

* * *
“Angel, what’s the problem?” Dave asked his wife. They were in the living room watching television.

“Hmm?” she replied.

“Something’s wrong with you. I’ve asked you countless times but you refuse to tell me the problem.”

“But nothing’s wrong with me.” she fielded.

“Angel, I’m your husband and I know something’s wrong with you. For the past two weeks, you haven’t been yourself. Have you looked at the mirror lately, you’re a shadow of your former self. You’ve lost weight, you’re always staring into space and you think I don’t know but at night I hear you cry when you think I’m sleeping. And you tell me nothing’s wrong? Come on, I’m not a fool.”

Oleng burst into tears for an answer. Her guilt was eating away inside her.

Dave cuddled her. “Angel, don’t cry. You can tell me what’s wrong.”

“I’ve failed you.” she sobbed. “I’m no longer worthy to be called your wife.”

“Just because we don’t have a child?” he deduced wrongly. “O Angel, I’ve told you so many times to stop worrying. You’ll give yourself a heart attack over this issue. Do you want to die and leave me all alone in this cruel world?”

Oleng simply stared at him as more tears dripped from her eyes. She couldn’t correct him. She couldn’t tell him she had committed adultery with Eric of all people.
Dave continued to soothe his wife not knowing that her trauma wasn’t what he thought it was.

Essyydiamond: ahhhhhhh! Sis Audrey we r talking abt a life here, Okinjay just fainted wont u do smthing abt it now now now8-). Na only update fit wake n i don dey pour am water since. D people wey dey sell d water sef com say na only u fit wake am. Oya update fast fast.:*

Laf wan kill me 4 hre o! Make I no bother 2 edit incase d tin wan enta coma

halfcaste1: WTF! I actually didn't see dis coming. U sabi twist story sha. Abeg twist Dave comot 4d story na. I hpe Oleng's in-laws won't find out abt dis o! Michelle go use am do suya. I just fell in love with Eric all over again. Weldone girl! #teameric/oleng *teamtruelove

Told ya! Ur beef 4 Dave no b here o! Lol! Tanx dear

debybeautyworld: ghen ...ghen...ghen...ghen...I see danger, Oleng get pregie again. Audrey u too much joor

Hmmm....we go c. Tanx dear

Candis009: Hahahahahahaha :DHahahahahahaha



I am so much loving ds. Dave was sexing her yl Eric made luv to her,Dats d difference

Nw dts hilarious

PrinceAdepoju: It's cool, right?

It won't b cool if u r right o!

aprilwise: E don happen

Yes o!

ifynwa15: Audrey darl pls show up and quench my thirst, cant wait to know what will happen next, u're the best Audrey

Update comin soon. Tanx dear

shaks97: the stupid girl go come get belle

Lol!

Gibjewel: What an interesing story, I caught up with u guys within 48hrs. Good job u av here Audrey........u ar loaded with God's gift. Pls keep it coming. But wait ooo, why u con pack too much wahala (trouble) 4 Oleng na, d poor girl never enjoy life a bit. Infact, I don tag her "crying maching".

Weldone! Tanx dear. Na so sum pple lyf b o! "Crying machine" I tink I lyk dt name. I hv a friend who cries @ d drop of a hat. *i hpe she's nt reading dis*. Dis girl sabi cry ehn! Evn wen u dey pray 4 am, she go dey cry. She worse pass Oleng sef