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i knw it is short but more update tonite or tomoro

princejenks:
Although filled with errors,am loving it as raw as it is,so pls continue

thanks bro i ll change

jeremie97:
following !!!!just work on ur grammar n update regularly

i am trying sir

continuation

.....the following day at school went smoothly on the assembly.. though i thought change of school which i cant discuss with my mother...as at that time my mother is the only that i usually tell what is going on in my mind....my father us a strict man though i thank God he is not a military man because he would have killed me since because of my misbehaviour...



........the day being Friday is the only thing that made me to be happy because its a work free day..my classmate usually bring football because their is much time for us to play till we are tired....

...i didn't play football that day due to the pain that I'm feeling in my buttock and my joints..i just sat down under a tree near the field in front of our class watching my mates that are playing football..i know they missed me because on Friday we usually play with primary two class..


...not long after the match had started...i saw tawa she is about to leave class..she was coming to where i am,i thought of running away but one part of me said i should wait while the other said i should run..i followed the first.so i stood where i am...


......she came to where i am and asked me if i have seen tosin today....i told her i have not...she looked worried..i asked her what make her to be worried?...she said i cant understand..she then said she is sorry about the letter issue..that its not her
gave it to,its her seatmate tobi that gave aunty...



....tobi is a my friend and neighbour my own house is behind hers...we go home together..even we usually eat together..i even told her that i want to marry tawa..what i heard from tawa got me angry..i left the playing ground to search for tobi...unfortunately for her i found her in the class..i checked our aunty seat she is not around so i move toward tobi and landed three super,hot,thunderous slap on her cheek..everybody in the turn to look at what just happened...that is when i too saw our aunty(class teacher)watching the movie ....


.......she called me.....i sensed danger..

death don come finally



..

to be continue

princessadeola:
nice story

thanks

im bak...evening update

I nid ur comment my great reader

continuation......
"what are you saying,firstly i know nothing abt it and also you have to trust me"jafar said.."trust u,i cant...you this useless bitch"........david storm out of his room leaving his door ajar...............

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......jafar coudnt stop thinking about what happened in the previous hour...he checked his wrist watch"its alredy 8pm"he said to himself....he doesnt felt sleepy so he dressed up and headed to a nearby club......he got there at about 9pm...

..he entered the crowdy,lousy nd dim room....he sat down on a chair alone....the bar man came to him and take his order....his eyes caught a beauty so he move to where she was sitting...
."wassup beauty"he said... "I'm fine"the lady replied him..."my name is jafar ibrahim,may i know yours too"he asked....."im lara"$he replied him...

jafar:waoh what a nice name i love it...you face even looked like an igbo girl or your full name is larachuckwu(looking at her face)
larasmilling)im nt an igbo girl...infact my full name is lara johnson aduke....besides you are too funny
jafar:you said im too funny ...woa that why people called me funnychukwu..
larasmiling)you look like those alhaji from north because your look nd name is jez like one
jafar:yeah...im from kano but i avent been to kano since i was born..im born and raised in lagos that y i called my self a legosian

....."everybody lie down"a voice was heard from the entrance of the club...all the people just obey .........
"where is capo"the voice ask no one in particular"i said where is capo,or una deaf"the huge guy pick a guy and shoot him...the guy called capo stand up and surrender himself to gang....not long the police siren was being heard all around the club...thier was exchange of gunshot between the police and the cult...
everybody is running for safety...jafar and lara hide at the behind of water tank at the back of the building.....

.....foostep start to approach where they hide...one huge man with a pistol appear behind them.."u two don kpai"the huge man said...."daddy.pls dont kill us let us live we ll give you everything.. i mean anytin"jafar said....."anything!you mean it.really"the huge guy said....."yes"they both reply........"i want this queen beside you"the huge guy said.....both of them looked each other in the face....they didnt give any reply...

....."lara said yes he should come nd have her....the huge guy move closer to where she is laying....jafar hold grip of the guy....both guy struggled..a gunshot was heard ....



.to b continue

continuation

.........jafar had been walking for abt 20 minutes.he wanna purchased recharge card bt he couldnt find any recharge card kiosk in his area cos its sunday...he went back home after his fruitless search..

.........he reached home,he met only his fuming best frnd(david) whereas he left david galfrnd nd his neighbour watching a tv series titled chigaco fire.he too didnt wanna miss it bt he dont have any option thaj to go and purchase d recharge card because of d explanation his frnd galfrnd report to him....

"what happened here"he asked..."u wanna knw what happen shey,i trusted u but u betrayed my trust by setting my galfrnd with your f**king neighbour"david answered him
... "what are u saying,
to b continue

Im sorry for my absent...Im bak nw,

Im sorry for my absent...im back update cuming 2mao

Maggielovely:
Nice 1 bt its too short

THANKS

Bros im a silent reader since...i think i av to comment,9ce one bro

hey mr writer@diamond shit or what nt insulting u.....pls let harzadous complete his story..............
..

i don miss many update sha... gonna check am

ftc.......

princessadeola:
good story

thanks

im sorry ma great reader.....im busy dis days.pls bear with me.update coming next week

Bros abeg,...create space i wan sit in the front

I need ur comments my great readers

continuation


Lara alighted from the bike, she paid the bike man and he zoomed off..?......she knocked the gate slightly, in a seconds the gateman open the gate for her to enter......
gateman: welcome back ma!
Lara: thank you,hmmmm(thinking about his name)
gateman:salawu..ma
Lara:OK,thanks salawu,,,,is mummy at home?
gateman: she is inside,your frnd is with her too
Lara: my friend(she replied him with askance look)
gateman: I don't really remember her name o
Lara: okay
gateman: madam,,,,wetin do your face cos it dull
Lara she replied angrily)what is your own problem with my face,is that what you are assigned for?
salawu:I'm sorry ma,its just that..?.....(she cut him shut)
Lara: my friend shut the trash............... ( she left him furiously)
,

she entered the sitting room, her mum was about to leave the house...
Lara: Mummy, where are you going?dressing like this(she fake a smile)
mummy:I just want to see my friend down the street
Lara: OK don't stay long
mummy: I won't, my sweet daughter... ( she went out while Lara closed the door behind)
she turned to her friend clara
Lara: ermmm...........(she want to say something but clara cut her)
Clara:what happen to you,.....I mean your face look somehow ( with concern look)
Lara: (sniffing softly)
Clara:where are you coming from, what happen to your face
Lara: (now crying, she hug her tightly)
Clarashe hugged her too)sorry dear.........what really happened?
Lara: ( now she had stop crying)...... its Benson ( Benson was her immediate boyfriend)
Clara:what happen to him?
Lara: I met him kissing and smooching another girl
Clara:sorry.......sorry.... don't think about him jor,,,,,,you have cheer up girl(she stand up, moved to the fridge and serve both of them with cold don Simon)
Clarathey drank in silence) will you follow me to club these afternoon?
Lara: hmmmmmmmmmmm......
Clara:don't say no,it's an order
Lara:OK ma,as your lordship pleases
both friend burst into laughter..............
to be continued

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roniex2:
nice story plot but work on ur tenses, b consistent.

THANKS SISTA..i ll do that exactly

May b....i ll stage it..one day

prologue
this story is a fiction, its a story about two friends{david and Jamal} who fall in love with the same girl unknowingly,,,,,,,,,
you can copy it if you like.
furthermore ur comment, correction are allow

it was a bright, sunny afternoon, David ( a guy of 23yrs of age,light in complexion, 4ft 5inch tall,a graduate from the university of Lagos) he is about 50m to his friend Jamal house, when something caught his side eye,he looked back to check what it was,unfortunately he sight a beautiful young lady,blessed with both brea5t and bum bum she is an inches taller than him... he moved close to her..

David: hello,my pretty diva(extending forward his hand for handshake)
lady:hi(she replied with a straight face, ignoring his handshake)
David: my name is David chuba,can I know your sweet name damsel
ladystraight face) I'm Lara Collins..... ( walking faster)
David: what a Sweet name for a river goddess,(walking behind her)...... it look like I have met you before
Lara:where?
David: hmmmmmnnnn,,,heaven
Lara:heaven!
David: yeah,I've forgot what really happen that day but I remember I'm one of your friend,,,,,,can I still be your friend here on earth?
Larachuckling)may be
David: thanks,,,,,,,,can I have your pin or contact
Lara: sure(giving him her phone)
David: ( surprise,he quickly collect it and type his phone no)
Lara: is that all?(she didn't wait for his reply,,,,,, she flag a bike and told the bike man her destination.
David remain at the same position wondering about what is going on in her mind,he figure out nothing.
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David have been standing in front of his friend door up to 20minutes without hearing any response except moaning.he moved to the window side to view what is happenning..
what he saw make him broke the window glass,



to b continue ,,,,,,need ur comments

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