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i don\'t know, i can\'t really say how this story
compares to ruudie\'s vengeance,

i think suzanne should read this piece; it\'s nice
but i don\'t think it\'s so gripping- it\'s somewhat
simply narrated.

apart from all that suzanne has pointed out
your tale is quite gripping, it\'s an impressive effort.

let\'s have more of it please.

thanks dear,
i really appreciate your words.

may i ask: do you also
cook[ing[ condiments of chaotic concoction?

yes, nice pieces!

well done smc, i admire your sound judgment.

on the other hand, see how a fool is ruined by his/her words!

please, let\'s keep this thread flowing with sound judgment.

your reasoning is very instructive, smc.

i admire your thinking process!

thanks dear!

what do you say to this?

DOMINIQUE!

i\'ll be patient,
even if it will take eternity.

with your mind\'s hand hold the pen
and with the pen caress the face of your paper,
or,
use your mind\'s fingers to rap on the keyboard
of your pc, invoke it and spread your thought
across the page it reveals,

let your thoughts break unhindered, let it flow
like the teardrops that course across the land
of your face,

let it flow still, over the mounds of your bosom
feel the hot teardrops as they warm your heaving
heart; they belong to you,

think of the thousand tears of teardrops in the
storehouse of your eyes, that beauty emblazoned
in the recesses of your soul;

senorita, won\'t you pour me a drink from your
bosom?

thanks very much, cooljoe [please understand, i don\'t believe in christmas!];
but i\'ll drop another line none the less.

and thanks dear dominique,

bring it on!

the poet persona here is expressing
certain feelings that he nurses inside;
negative thoughts that literally eat away
his well-being,

as it appears, from the refrain [the one-line
stanza], his fears are unfounded-
the poet persona strikes one as a depressed mind.

but interestingly, he realizes this,
he sees himself as being isolated from others
mentally and physically,
he ascribes this to his being knocked out of existence
as it were.

hope i tried!?