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rachealfst:
Wow! I abandoned my work just to read up and it worth it. Great piece. I really love it. I'm happy everything falls back in place despite the fact that Kate& Necter started on a wrong foot.

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We are all still learning that includes myself but I know you can do better. I know so many readers have already advised and I can see you improved over time but you still have to fix one or two things. You mixed up the character's conversation. Aside that, the story is dope.

Well done! Let's see if I can edit one chapter for you so you can get what your readers actually wants from you.

Thanks for sharing this lessons filled piece. God bless you good. By God's grace this will be the least of your work.
As for Wrong Number let me know if you need the concluding part. Thanks.

Finally, I like this feedback, one that actually includes where I need to improve. Thank you, thank you.
Your time is really appreciated as I know how difficult /stressful it maybe abandoning your own work just to read and add up.

Will hit you up for wrong number soon....
May your ideas never run dry ma'm

Tehmietee:
1daful story...kudos 2 U #cbella

God bless you

Chigold121:
Wow!!! Didn't I say you are the best, I didn't see this coming. Pls when is your birthday cos I can't for another exceptional piece from u. Well done ma.

My birthday.................. Thank you, i will announce the date of release soon to avoid Pearl05 launching a thread on my behalf

rachealfst:
I'm still trying to catch up. But so far, so good, it's been a great read. Wonderful story line. I applaud the writer. Well done cbella, more inspiration, wisdom, grace and strength. God bless you.

Wow!! the ma'm herself!!!!! Thank you, do catch up soon


Reading wrong number tho!!

SkyyLord:
Thanks a lot dear for this wonderful piece, your indeed a good writer. May God give you more wisdom.

Amen and thanks

Osedagal:
Cbella u r a bomb, nice update

Thanks

1marking:
Nice Story Madam

Thanks, you disappeared along the line tho

arthur16:
Bella this could make a series movie o.. .so much suspense.. .i love this dear.. .God bless u Nne.. I'm clad I followed to DE end.. And thank God Katie didn't die o.. .i would have jux locate u and fight u

Lol..fight!! Thank you for following

holufunmie:
ave been ghost reading for a while but I felt it will be so so selfish and ungrateful of me not to comment,,I have to at least appreciate a wonderful story like dis..for one to imagine something and put it into writings is not easy,,it takes a lot of courage and believe in oneself to do dat.the beginning was fantastic, ending was amazing and in BTW was just so suspenseful and unpredictable. u re an awesome writer,thumbs up

Thank you maa.... I'm glad you enjoyed it, God bless you bunch

swankmee:
Cbella this is really beautiful.... I enjoyed every bit of it and trust me lessons were learnt.


More ink to ur pen ma

Thanks, Glad lessons were learnt

i'm following! pearl05


please come

Gloryejims:
Cbella..... I never hexperedit

Kudos to you infact tiri gbosa for you... Gbosa! Gbosa!! Gbosa!!!

Concerning the editor, maybe you should holla tiffanyj... She probably would know someone


I'm a greedy geh #olivertwist... Epp us with another story soon... Maybe drake and matts... Or the twins growing


Congratulations ohh

lolzxxxx..... eeeiii Aunty!! so soon? Drake and matts are married, the twins died

EvaJael:
I was ghost reading and I apologise. I have exams o but reading a good book helps me calm down when the brain is steaming.
As for hidden diamonds, thanks for following. Your own book awoke some sleeping inspiration in me to continue. Thanks for that. Love ya plenny

I'm glad..... all the best sweets

DemiKOL:
Thanks for the updates
more grace........
At last... Kate was like she's not gonna reconcile.....and Nectar......

Dont mind them, they were behaving like, they dont like each other........


thanks for following to the end

Lildiamond:
Lovely story

thanks for following

Nickibeauty:
cbella thumps up

Thanks Nicki

toyhin123:
Wow cbella,i never saw dat coming. U always have a way of surprising someone. I must say u re a darling. Can't wait for the next story

Thanks... will mention you, hope i don't forget! When i do blame pearl05

EvaJael:
Cbella, this is quite a wonderful piece. You held me spellbound from start to finish when I'm supposed to be preparing for exams..lol . Can't wait to read another one from you

Thanks to the ma'm herself, saw it somewhere you were supposed to be writing an exams but then i see you most at times reading and you disappear in a flash.

Following hidden diamond tho!

Will definitely let you know when i start another one.

Pearl05:
I could just eat you up sweetie. I didn't see it coming, you could still take it further till after Kate's discharge from hospital and the retaking of vows and a little proper happy married life.

Please when is your birthday?

Where proper happy married life means the news in brief i keep giving out eeehh....Tot about that, but i'm exhausted already...i don't want another needle for staying up all night......so lets wait for the new one soon...


You might get full news broadcast, maybe

My birthday!! ...i'm asking my mom!! Hold on a lil

pweetygiftofGod:
Kudos to Cbella, you're the real deal

Thanks ma'm

***SEQUEL***

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'What was that Kiss for Nectar. I'm still in pains here and I can't even.......'

'Kate relax the kiss doesn't mean I want to sleep with you right away love. It's just a nice gesture to appreciate the fact that I got a second chance which I obviously dont deserve.' Nectar said smiling.

'I'm glad you know you don't deserve it. Talking about what you deserve or not how are my sons doing. Did you get to check up on any trace of what I suffered from. I don't want them going through what I went through.'

'Kate it's too early to tell, as your Dad did when you were born, he wouldn't have found anything then. Lets give the boys sometime, besides I'm here now to stay so nothing will happen to them.'

'Thank you nectar but I really need to get out of this hospital, I need to hold my kids.'

'Kate, we can't you know that, but let's try this. Wait here let me check if there's anyone on the floor.'

Nectar quickly went out and came back fixing Kate on her wheel.

'Nectar are you sure we won't get into trouble.'
We won't if you stop talking already.'

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'You know you have a successful donor now, the best you can do is not stress yourself Wilson until after the surgery.'

'Catherine I'm not even sure if I would even make it, let me make the best of this moment and you lied to Kate about how long I have left.'

'I had to, she had lots of stuffs on her hands now and the last time i checked you didn't have a donor, now that you have there's fifty percent chance you can make it. We can have more of whatever you want now after you get back healthy.' Catherine said worried.

'So I won't even get a Kiss,' Wilson asked frowning.

'Just one, don't ask for more Wilson.' She leaned over and kissed him passionately.'

'Wilson let go, Stacy might come in any moment from now. You don't want her seeing us this way.'

Catherine said trying to stop Wilson from twisting her lips though she doesn't want to stop.

'Catherine let's go upstairs please,' Wilson pleaded then a knock came on the door. They both jumped up like kids. Stacy who came bearing a wine bottle just smiled.

'Stacy you are here, sorry we didn't tell you dinner has been canceled.' Catherine said sheepishly.

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'Nectar thank you for sneaking me out. Those boys totally look like my Dad.' Kate said.

'And that's a bad thing Kate?'
'No, I just have my dad to deal with every single time they cry.'

'By the way, Matt's is pregnant I think. Nectar blurted out. I overheard her discussing that with Drake.'

'Oh really! Let me call her.' Kate excitedly picked up her phone.

'Matt's she yelled while trying to reach her on the phone earlier. You were not picking up, where are you. I heard you are pregnant.'

'Katie I'm busy with a case now, can we talk about that later,' she said and hanged up.

'Your sister just hanged up on me.'
'Call her again,' Nectar encouraged.

Matt's who couldn't have enough of Drake earlier stared at the call and picked up. 'Katie, I'm sure nectar would get you dinner. Now can I have my peace.' She said and Kate just knew Drake was there.

'Let me talk to that sluggish guy laying in your bed.'

'He is not in my bed Katie.'
'Matt's wherever you guys are, I don't care but I know he is there.'

'Okay you won !' Matt's said and handed the phone over to Drake.

'Hey Kate, I'm sorry I've not been around lately, I would visit soon. Just have a lot on my plate now.' He said.

'A lot like, pregnancy?' She asked.
'No false alarm Kate. Alot like convincing her to Marry me. I want to stop sneaking around your house just to see her.' He said and Matt's smiled.

'Wow! That's big, knowing Matt's she turned you down because she claims it's too early.' Kate answered.

'Yes how did you know that.' Drake asked surprised.

'I know Matt's, don't pressure her now she will come around. She has a habit of turning every man down for that lame reason.' Kate said and realized her call credit is almost exhausted.

'Lets talk later when you come to visit Drake.'

She hanged up and caught nectar staring.

'They are not having a baby.' She said and nectar nodded and there was total silence.

Kate who was still hang on to her wheel chair, stared him in the eyes while supporting her jaw with her hands and smiled.

'Another smile Kate! Do I have something in my face, ooh it's the shirt!' Nectar exclaimed.

'No nectar, I just feel like kissing you now.'

'And what's stopping you Kate. My lips are ready, this better be good.' He said sounding bossy.

'Ooh you'll get it.' She said and wheeled herself closer to him.

Amidst their lips searching each other passionately, there were a few moans of pain, tears of joy, tinglings and i love you's. You can't even tell who said what at that moment.

As what looked like they forgot themselves entirely lost in that wonderful moment nectar felt a shadow walking out.

He quickly broke the Kiss which Kate thought she did something wrong again. 'What's that, did I do it wrong again?' Kate asked surprised.

'In fact that was perfect, our first kiss and it was different this time but your family is at the door.'

Nectar said and they both directed their gaze to where her Parents and Stacy stood for the past minute watching them accept their feelings.

'Mom, we call this privacy so don't look at me smiling ! And Stacy I'm still your boss you know, give me a heads up next time.'

She said smiling. Come on you guys, that was a joke. Come over here. Dad what happened to dinner by the way.'

'Your husband called asking to move dinner to your end. He said you don't want to miss it.'

'Nectar.' she called and got flashes of smiles from him.

'So where's the food, because I need some real food. Matt's has been feeding me with too much salt lately.' Kate said.

'Ungrateful being,' Catherine blurted out.

'Kate it got canceled when Andy just had to stab your Grams in jail. I had to go identify her body.'

'Dad I'm sorry are you okay?'

'Yeah I would be after Andy dances to his own death sentence in a week. But right now I'm happy you two are getting along.'

Wilson said while Stacy and Catherine sat on her bed with their hands in Kates hair.

'What are you two doing to my hair.' Kate asked.

Then nectar interrupted.

'Pops, I want to know when you would be free so I marry your daughter right this time.'

'And where right means nectar.' Wilson asked while Catherine gave him the don't stress him look.

'That's fine nectar, though I would need incentives for earlier damages caused.' He said smiling.

'Dad you plan on selling me now.' Kate asked smiling.

'I just wanted to see his reaction to what I said. Don't worry I got the answer I need.'

'Kate we would be back with some food in an hour, I can see we totally ruined something.' All three got up on their feet and left.

'Your Dad was right, they ruined something perfect, can we try one more time.'

'No I want to rest my head a little, can you help me on the bed.'

She said and nectar quickly rushed to her end only to get his lips sealed with another warm Kiss.

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End of sequel

No one was expecting a sequel, I could have twisted it but....... Pearl05, purples25, Gloryejims, Deeejah, etc

I still need an official EDITOR with no pay! Hit me up

Lildiamond:
Weldone Ma

Thanks ma'm

Pearl05:
Did I just got PA job? I got your back ma

Lol! No you got a babysitter job.....

Let me leave the bomb and run

Deeejah:
Wow!!!
If I wasn't in d office ryt now, I wld be dancing to this happy ending. I had hoped for this end and i got it! Thank you cbella.
Marriage isnt about finding the perfect partner, rather it's about two imperfect pple working on each other's flaws. Some of us are born to get it ryt, some will get it ryt only wt a push while some will only get it ryt after several mistakes. What matters is making it ryt after we get it wrong.
Cbella, ur story has emphasized forgiveness and patience; the two things we need in d world ryt now.
Thank you for the wonderful story especially the beautiful end.
Not all beautiful beginnings have happy endings and ugly ducklings do grow up into beautiful princesses. That's the irony of life.
Hope to read more amazing stories from you soon.
Thank u!!!

You took the inspiration in the story to another level! Would love to read yours first, then you get another story from me m'am

oly0511:
Cbella u really try not all writers in NL can finish their stories some will tell you to come and buy it along the line when they have gotten ought viewers i have seen so many cases since 2013 that I started following this forum and also mine thanks goes to Pearl 05 and purples for their support to cbella

Well, money is not everything! If it is then I would have bought a whole jet already from what I have locked up in my mind.

I write for fun, because I love to and can't sit anymore watching talent go waste but not to meet a certain need.
If I would have to sell this story or any other, then probably I have to finish it here first before I do.... so don't worry I wouldnt ask NL readers to buy my next episodes on Okada books or any other when I havent finished.
You get to read first to the end, and if you feel like keeping a copy then you do.

Did you mention you have a story! Please I want to read ooo... Now I'm free from next, so am gonna read stories as if my life depends on it

toyhin123:
Cbella u re really a great writer,u never for once disappoint ur readers on NL.
Av been following u from d last story,its my fone dat always make me a ghost reader,av been having problems with the key board
Dnt forget to mention me in ur next story,i wouldn't love to miss it

Awww!! Thank you very much, hope you get a new phone before my next story.

Pearl05, another one! I tend to forget even the characters in the story but you definitely will be mentioned

wizsolzy:
Lovely story bae

Thanks

Osedagal:
Nice story, thumbs up cbella

Thanks! God bless you for reading

Gloria007:
Thanks for the story, it was a nice read.Don't forget to mention me when you start another story.

Thank you for reading from the beginning to the end

Pearl05, pls don't let me forget to mention her!!