Leesah:
no mention or invite rachealfst it's not fair o and cbella is reading also.. it's okay... nice one o and please don't keep us in suspense like this Na see how my heart is beating fast

I'm in trouble... God save me

I'm sorry ooo

Leesah:

As for cbella, keep reading without me o...

Lol, I started this before I promise to mention you in every story na.... Biko

Ayisat, how many times did I call you. Go back home before temptation sets in.


AryEmber... Always on point.

AryEmber:
This is different but different in a good way,I'm guessing the author is not a Nigerian but he's wonderful and thank you so much for sharing The Forsaken. Lemme call my people; cbella. And to the readers, comment na!

i'm following now

Pearl05:
Ayisat is in trouble nau, as a married northern woman no man except her father or brother is allowed to enter the house in the absence of the husband.


When it's mandatory for such visit the man shouldn't go beyond the zaura(main entrance) which is usually far from the main house .

Lol.. they are in the technology era.... No more of those traditions

AryEmber:


He could not annul the marriage anymore since they had consummate it but he would set her free, it was probably what she wanted now. He prayed Allah forgave him for causing her so much pain but he would right his wrongs the best he could.
He would get a divorce but compensate her hugely, enough that she would never have to beg anyone for help anymore.

Why does this man think Ayisat wants his money.... It may look like she doesn't have a choice but she does have if Khalid starts treating her fairly

EvaJael:

Thanks my daughter. You have exams tomorrow o, don't let me catch you here again

Lol.. Yes mom

Pearl05:
This is beautiful. Felicia didn't get love from her dad which she sought for from a stranger who took advantage of her. She is pregg now and the stranger is gone.

You always try to talk about societal issues with your story. Keep it up.

Cbella

Come over here you should read wounded too

FELICIA, don't do it, you said NO.....

Pearl05:
Cbella,Gloryejims,oly0511,evajael,pinkfeek,purples25,aryember come and read this eye opener. Full of lessons.

Wounded....

I guess I made it... Congratulations once again



EvaJael, Pearl05 and Gloryejims before you swallow me, I mentioned you oo

Gloryejims:

Before you spread the mat, give us dinner Ohhh...
I'll sha share the mat with u...
Cbella

lol...i bought a new mat last week

AryEmber:
That 'foreseen' occurence has happened jare, I've exhausted my subscription. I'm on night plan now so I can only update at night people, bear with me please.

Okay, take your time.. we understand. Some of us are in Evening already tho but we will read tomorrow morning

Pearl05:
Happy new year Abelosas222 .

Please let the update come often and longer.



Cbella, Gloryejims, oly0511, pinkfeet, purples25, cyber5, evajael, ikombe please I need ur help to motivate Abel to post more often. Read and comment. I'm enjoying the story. Thanks.

I was here oo, glanced through the first 2 episodes..... I WILL HAVE FULL CONCENTRATION ON FRIDAY.

Abelosas222, the update should be long na, i love the cover page

Pearl05:


Lol...but I want to know nau. Am sure he couldn't sleep that night, might end up going to console her in her room .

lol... That's a dangerous play.... Anyway Good morning AryEmber, can you separate this fight

Pearl05:
Interesting...

So what happened afterwards?

Lol!!!!! , she died na

Wow... Nicely done.... How come I'm now reading this.

AryEmber:


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I know it's short, don't get angry please! I am cooking a better soup and I promise to make it longer, that will come in the evening. Love you all!

Girl you rock....Today we get two updates. Halleluyah! I'm sleeping on this thread

Pearl05:




Hmmm babe you are just everywhere. Please stay one place. When are we starting our story? Re you done with the exams? Don't worry am coming to write some for you

Lolzzz...... I'm releasing stress with Ayisat's drama.

I will crown Exams with your favorite on Friday. And ooh our thing, i will need your opinion tho... Glad you want to write the bedmactics

Ok bye before my mom finds me here... EvaJael i wasn't here.

marianneada:
I was robbed, they took all my properties away, I can't even type.

Aoooo, I hate bad news. Sorry, may you find favor for replacements soon and May thieves be far away from your family this year.

Nice one....

AryEmber:
I transfer what I type from the PC to an Android device before I copy and paste so it's a bit of work actually but I will see what I can do. HNY dear, new year treat loading!

Sorry! A bit of work and we appreciate your efforts.


Great, just highlight the flash backs when you put on here and click on italics....

Happy new year!! I will keep refreshing for another update

Pearl05:


Can't wait to reach the point where Khalid started loving his wife.

Khalid should take it slow... It's not everyday that men his age fall in love with a teenager. It's rare, I just hope he is not confusing infatuation with love but anyway I pictured them from my sleep and they look good together I would love to read an episode from you backstage so you give me some clues

AryEmber:
That sounds like a nice idea but something changes the italised words to normal once I update or is my phone the one with the problem? I use italics once in a while but I don't see any when I read

Please do you mean when you type on here directly or you type and transfer here.

If you are transferring from another device it definitely won't show here, you would have to use the Italics buttons at the top when posting.

Thesame applies to writing directly on here.

Like I just did, just highlight the part of the write up you want to apply the font to and click on italics whether write up is from another source of device or directly from here.

But if you already do that and still, then it's the phone. We understand sha. Hope we would have a new year treat and I hope it helped. Don't be offended ooo

Gloryejims:
Happy new year to you darlings

Cbella

And to all nairalanders... I hrt y'all... #kisses
May 2018 be one of your best years here on earth...

Wish you same blessings for the year

Pearl05:
Happy New Year � you darlings


Cbella


If I no call you no vex na because you re my special person and you know that I heart you too much

Thanks, Glorious new year

Gucciqueen38:
Evajael, Hantonia, Cbella, Joislim, Mustack Pu7pl3, demsid, Damibiz

Eheh what do we have here

Leesah:
cbella well done o you hear. so u started this story without me shebi..
the writer of this story, I doff hat for u. please write the story the way you want it o even if the foetus go comot just surprise us sha..

Aww I'm sorry... I always promise and fail.

It won't happen again, but that foetus better stay there oo

Deeejah come and read too

Pearl05:
Madam, this update is too short but suspense filled. I just love it but next time try to give ayisat and her husband some privacy. The door should be closed.

Tell the mother that the bedroom play is good for the baby.

Oyiwaa...... She loves this updates na

Who leaves the door open these days... Chaaii Ayisat poured sand in her own ice cream

Gucciqueen38:
Which kind mother in-law be this?

she cant stay in my house. If you visit use the verandah... What?

AryEmber:
Food don readi oh! ………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

The only thing she heard was hurried footsteps coming her way before embracing the darkness beckoning to her.

Congratulations..... Don't kill that innocent baby ooo.....

And ooh, you interrupted that beautiful romantic scene.. Pearl05's favorite.

Gloryejims handbag

EvaJael:
Aryember biko I am on my knees. Forgive me o. I have repented now. I will comment after each update.

lolzxx..... Apology not accepted