demsid:


Evajael
Pearl05

Pearl & Eva you see what I'm seeing?

Pearl05:


See blame. Oba that pounced on her, is innocent. Stop blaming the woman joor. The two are responsible for what came their way.

Crystal thought it's by power, hence didn't heed to advices from their parents.

Rahealfst, thank you for opening the eyes of many to the dangers of pre-martial intimacy. May God bless you.

Lolzz... I'm sure by the end of this story, we get to learn some few techniques as to how to overcome that 'force' called pre marital sex.

Is the dream over rachealfst.......

unpredictedone:


Kai cbella! Which planets are you from? You haven't dated all men on planet earth, pls don't sound extremly convinced, they don't exist.

LOL!, No be only jumped on your throat.

Lolzz.. I'm from planet earth � and besides just a fraction of those men exist, like 2%

So I said this and Unpredictedone jumped on my throat ooo... In this modern world... Chaiii..... Maybe they are dreaming ooo..

Thanks for the dedication.

unpredictedone:
people who patronize native doctors wouldn't like this update.

Toyin Toma, well come oooh

how your P.A (Cbella)? lol

Lol! Funny

Welcome back, plus we got your back.

OBA

One of the things I love about Crystal is that she's down to earth. I always pray for that mother of hers, she did a good job on her daughter.

____________________Toyin Taiwo
She’s so respectful and she’s not faking it that’s who she really is. Crystal is the homely type and my family loved her and accepted her. I already told them a lot about her before now. And she didn't disappoint me one bit.
After spending some time with them, we set to leave. Crystal boarded the car.
I was about to enter into the car when my mum called me back. She said she wants to have a word with me. I told Crystal to wait in the car while I attend to her.
"Mummy, se ko si ma (Mummy, hope there's no problem) Don't you like her?" I asked.
"Rara o, mo like e (I like her) who wouldn't like a lady who came from a good home" she replied.
"So what is it ma that you want to tell me and can’t say in front of her” I asked patiently.
"I had a dream my son. It was a very bad dream. I went to my pastor for more clarification on the dream" she paused.
"Mummy, go on I'm listening" I said and she continued.
"The pastor said He said a very big opportunity is coming your way which will open doors to prosperity. He also said you are destined to be great but the enemy want to steal that glory. The Pastor said the only reason why your God given destiny is intact is because you haven’t soil your hands with sin. He said you should ensure you abstain from pre-marital sex or else something evil is still ahead” She gave the warnings.
"Thank you Mummy, I'll heed to your advice"
"Please tell Crystal too, so you can both watch out"
"Don't worry about Crystal she doesn't believe in pre-marital sex too"
"One more thing, the pastor said there's a girl who want to trap you but he said the reason why she hasn't succeeded is because you are pure"
"I understand perfectly well"
"But who is this girl, that is obsessed with you?" She asked.
"Don't worry mum, I know who is it and I'll fix it" I assured her.
"Please try and avoid her and be very careful, so the devil won't strip you off your glory. Please I beg of you” She pleaded.
"I will ma. Thanks" I said and hugged her. And she bidded me good bye.


____________________Toyin Taiwo
I got back to the car and apologized to Crystal for keeping her waiting.
"Oba, why did she called you aside. She doesn't like me right?"
"Far from it"
"Don't lie to me Oba!" She said giving me a ‘I don’t believe you look'
"Come off it Crystal, who wouldn't like you. She just warned me about something.
"Ok! I believe you" She said calmly.
"I'm relocating" I said before starting the car.
"This is about Ayo right?"
"Something like that" I said and drove into the street.
____________________Toyin Taiwo



BEATRICE
Three months after the death of my sons. My late mother's friend came to visit me. She just got the news recently and stopped by to give her condolences.
“Nnoo dalu” (welcome) I said and offered her a seat.
“Kedu ka odi? She greeted.
“O di mu mma” I replied
"My daughter, I was so shocked when I heard the news o. I traveled to Benin for omugwuo, I just came back" she informed.
"Welcome mama, how's is the baby and the parents?"
"They are all fine. Nwa m nwaanyi na-eme na i mejoo! (My daughter, who do you offend) Three children ukwa! All in one day! Ifemelu n'etiti?” (What happened?)
"Lee m o mama” (See me o, mama) That is what I saw o. Sometimes I still wish it was all a dream"
"Hmm...how I wish my friend, your mother was still alive. She would have protected you and your children"

I know what she meant. She is my mother's partner in crime when it comes to diabolical things.
"Did you suspect anyone that might be responsible for the death of your children?" She enquired.
"Who else if not Afam and Amara!" I replied.
"Afam I know but who is Amara?"
"Mama did you remember the lady Afam impregnated then.......
"Huh! Huh! Huh! I re....mem...ber.... But I thought the woman is out of the picture!" she said sounding confused.
I looked around to check if there's no one around before I replied her.
"Mama it's a long story. Things as gone out of hand o. Afam eyes is now clear. He now has his memory back. He remembered everything"
"Eziokwu!" She held her head with her two hands.

____________________Toyin Taiwo
"He is now in Lagos. He went back to them when he got back his memory. Infact he will soon move the company to Lagos"
"Ana m’anu! (What a story!) See what your mother's death caused. You have no one to fight for you"
"I lost everything at the end mama. Nothing came out of the marriage after all I did to have him for myself"
"Don't think that way, nwa (child)
"It's the truth, nothing to show for over twenty years of marriage with Afam" I she’d few tears, counting my losses.
"What's your plan now, what do you intend to do?" She asked.
"Nothing o. Like you said, I have no one to fight for me"
"Don't say that. I'm here now, I will help"
"Really" I said and my heart leapt for joy.
"There's one dibia in Amukara village. I'll direct you to him"
"Mama! I can't kill them. I already signed an undertaking. I will be the number one suspect if anything happens to them"
"You don't need to kill them physically before destroying them, you are not born yesterday. If you know what I mean”
"Mama, I've heard of that village before. The place is far, it's like traveling to another place biko"
"That means you are not ready to avenge your sons death"
"I want to but.....
"No but, you have to destroy that woman and her child. I know you don't have your mother's power backing you again but I won't open my eyes and watch her only daughter suffer"
"Ok, I'll do whatever you bid me do"
"Good"
She gave me the address and description on how to locate the dibia in Amukara village. I promised her I'll visit the dibia. I don't have any time in mind because I plan to think it through though I know I have nothing else to loose.

____________________Toyin Taiwo




AFAM
I went to Amara's house with a ring. I intend to propose to her, I can't stand living without her. I want her back in my life again.
She was the only one in the house when I got in.
“Kedu” I said and she replied.
"What can I offer you?" She asked as she gestured for me to sit.
"What I came for is much more important than food Amara"
"And what could that be?" I stood up and stood in front of her.
"Afam don't scare me, what is it?"
I dipped my hands into my blazer pocket and brought out the box of ring and placed it on a stool beside Amara.
"I hope this is not what I think it is!" She said pointing at the little box.
"It is Amara. I want us to get back together and I want it legal this time. I lost you once and I don't plan on loosing you again"
"Afam, I can't give you children. Even if I want to but I can't. I've reached menopause.
"I'm not marrying you for children, we have Crystal and she's better than ten sons put together. I want this because I want to spend the rest of my life with you" I poured out my heart.
"Are we not too old for this?"
"Is there a age restriction for marriage?Well, except for minors. Amara let's spend the time we have left with the only person we ever loved in our whole lives"
"Afam, it's our daughter's marriage we should be preparing for and not....
"The more reason why we should make ours snappy" I cut in. "Or you want us to sit next to each other on that day as illegitimate couples!"
"Afam....
"I know it from the very first day I set my eyes on you again that you still love me. Let's put the past behind us and move on"
"Okay" she shrugged.
"It's that a yes?"

____________________Toyin Taiwo

She smiled and nodded. I picked the box from the stool, opened it and brought out the diamond that cost me a fortune but the woman standing before me worth much more. I took her left hand as I slide the ring into her fourth finger. She smiled and a stray tear escaped her eyes, I understood everything without her saying a word. I hugged her and I whispered sweet things into her ears.
"What's going on here?"

I released Amara from the embrace, we both look back and standing by the door is Crystal and Oba.


____________________ Toyin Taiwo

I will post on Op's behalf shortly. Sorry I delayed lol...


Thank you.

unpredictedone:

But you believe they exist right?

Such men of honour are always reserved.

Don't you think you should consider change of location?

Lolzz....!! Do they all happen to be packed at one location

I beg give me Google map.

unpredictedone:
This update got me thinking.

I hope we don't just read for fun of it, but grasp the lessons from the story.

please, someone should help me ehh, tell CBELLA, that there are men who still honour laws of chastity!.

I no even get her number sef, I for tell her my self.

Lol! Then I haven't met any of them yet..... Smh

Pearl05:
Destiny sinker, stained, sucker .....premarital sex. Oh God I hope that's not where the Broken Hedge will come from.

Oba won't survive the test of P SEX... Who doesn't like sweet apple... Smh
But when things break, only God can put them back together.

Their love will survive it

Pearl05:
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Dear, Cbella's hands are full at the moment so she won't be able to run the story.

So Oba is still not awake yet from his slumber.... Let me go and come.


WOG please don't let Oba sleep too much

Nickibeauty:
dearie when should we expect something more interesting like no more room for love

Lol! How did you know I was the one. Chaiii who can help me change my name on NL lol.
Pearl05 I beg talk to her for me, biko.
Story is ready but for now let's concentrate on Crystal and Oba's ministry.

queenitee:
This Ayo girl is trying me o

She's another Beatrice in the making.... Just like her mom, history might repeat itself.

When I see over obsessive women like this then I begin to boil.

Oba too is so foolish to give out his key and can't put Ayo in her place from the beginning.

Crystal with a calm and good personality is about to enter something called relationship....... Chaiii

Love sick....smh! Now he's better lol

Welldone Maa...


Oba is love sick... Smh

Pinkfeet:
kudos to you InkPaperVodka.

I really enjoyed the story , more grease to ur elbow.

nice work .

cbella were are u ...…....

Lol! Been busy small

EvaJael:

I'm in love with Niel too o, I just didnt confess since but now that he's dead, aunty Mille cammot come and murder me for loving him. Thanks a lot

Lol.. Is this a sequel?

WHOcarex:
It the rule breaks, then it wasn't strong in the first place

Some rules no matter how strong they are can be broken when there is LOVE.

Pearl05:
I trust Beatrice won't just repent like that. She will try sha but darkness can't not prevail over light.

Mummy Ejiofor and daddy Afam should do fast

Me I don't want them together lol

purples25:


Where is this rage coming from ? Sorry o.

Aww, sorry babes � �.. Welcome

Pearl05:
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Nne, which one be Oba and Amara?

Lolzz

Tinanew:
Tanks for d story very interesting. More grace to ur elbow. Pls waiting for d nxt episode. I will b happy if u notify me when u post d nxt episode.

We are all praying for the writer... Hope you read her last post.

Keep her in prayers...i believe all hands on deck would open heavens

Glad you are back with long updates

Awww... Whatever happens, we are with you in prayers.

We humans only allow what we want to happen, we control it somehow. In as much as God is doing his best up there you both would need to do your best down here by not allowing whatever issue it is to come in between the beautiful family he has blessed you with.

He never promised it would be easy but he promised victory at the end of it all.

You both will survive this very soon... It is well.

Gloryejims:
Nice story... Keep it coming...
New story alert
Cbella

Please call others... I'm currently blank
Hope you enjoy the story

Lol.. SpyAlert....

rchilee:
lol.

Amara n Crystal will be forced to move in with Dady Afam if they survive this

Who knows maybe Afam or Oba planned this oooo.........

Lolzzz... When I now grabbed my coke and biscuit she decided to go on commercial break.


Thank you aunty

richiearmany14:

Yh I know, but u always keep me up to speed on her amazing work of literary ingenuity.

Lolzz... That rather, then I deserve one bottle of coke