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Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:01pm On Mar 05, 2015
"Good Evening class" , as I entered the class in my Hausa attire, hoping to find none in the class.

Having notice that most assignments given by the teachers to the students were not done. I've been thinking what couldve been discouraging students, are we ir not afraid to write or we dont know what to write, is that why weve not been attending class? so, I decide to talk about that. Today's topic:

Getting Into The Groove

'I have to start to write to have ideas'
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Poems For ReviewRe: Getting Started: Poetry Whatsapp Speech By Cisse by cisse7575(op): 5:57pm On Mar 03, 2015
oloyolo:
I don't know what this is all about
But it look front pagic
So ama just stick around
it has been modified
Poems For ReviewGetting Started: Poetry Whatsapp Speech By Cisse by cisse7575(op):
Getting Started:

Good writing depends on practice, like sports; the more limbered up you are the better you perform
But how do you pass through that first, often terrifying, encounter with the blank page and find a voice
A voice that will carry your thoughts and feelings with eloquence and flair
You have lots of ideas, but little confidence in your ability to express them
What if it comes out wrong?
What if it makes you look childish or naive?
What if you can't do it?
The blank page seems to taunt you with your own underconfindence; it points to all the great works that have gone before and says, you can't for that, or what's the point?
It's all been said already
The ream of sentences, the characters, the ideas that drove you to the page in the first place wither into nothing
Suddenly the whole project becomes impossible and your desire to write remains just that
The only way to overcome this problem is to write
Get some materials down on paper
However rough and ready
Start off with notes, fragments, half sentences, until stuttering stops and you find yourself writing whole sentenced, paragraphs, pages.
Often the first hurdle is the writer's own self-consciousness about the act of writing itself
And that hurdles might well take a few pages to clear, like an old car with dirty petrol tank; the first few miles will be a juddering, stop-start journey.
Be prepared for this.
You are engaging with something unfamiliar to you, don't expect to produce a master piece in your first attempt
Start off with what you had for tea, the last phone call you made, the colour of your lovers eyes,
Your favorite CD.
Give yourself a subject and write about it
Write about it without stopping or correcting yourself, for five minutes
Just generate some pages, a body of work
Then read it back to yourself
This will be hard: a first time encounter with your own work is not dissimilar to watching yourself on TV or hearing your recorded voice for the first time-do I really sound like that? Oh no, I never knew I looked like that
You might well be embarrass and dissapointef
So this is a rite of pasage
Good radio presenters listen to thier voice over and over so they can control and improve their pitch and delivery
In same way, good writer will read through their own writing, looking for sentences that can be improved, pushed further, expanded, cut
It is only when you have developed a sense of your fictional VOICE that you will really have the confidence to jump in and write a story, a poem or a play
However, paradoxically, it is only through writing that you will develop a sense of what your voice is
Your fictional voice is not a million miles away from how you speak
A good storytelling voice is a more honed and structured version of speech and it is as individual to you as your fingerprints
Look at the poem or novel you read
What kinds of voice are clamouring for your attention on your bookshelf
huh
You are likely to find to find lots of disparate voices talking, all with different accents, references, cadences, obsessions.
Voice in fiction or poetry can be interpreted as perspective or personality
It is different from style, which is something that you can develop later to created effects.
A poem I wrote when I wrote my waec still sounds like me in my 20
Perhaps it is a sad reflection on my continuing juvenility or more seriously, it is the thread of me-ness
that runs through my work,
the personality that inhabits all the words i write
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European Football (EPL, UEFA, La Liga)Re: Fc Barcelona Fan Thread: "més Que Un Club" by cisse7575(m): 9:46pm On Feb 08, 2015
Krasid:
Bilbao can still get a draw.
for wherehuh
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 10:27pm On Feb 05, 2015
After reading the poems out load and answering the questions write a poem using your musings. If you know someone you can do this activity with, it may be helpful.
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 10:23pm On Feb 05, 2015
1. What jumps out at you in the poem? What do you see?
2. What do you hear? Are there rhymes? Are there repeating sounds?
3. What connections and associations does the poet make?
4. What connections and associations do you make to the poem?
5. How is this poem similar to "Haunted Houses"?
6. How is it different?
7. What do you think the poem is about?
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 10:21pm On Feb 05, 2015
Now read this poem out load:

Unbidden
Rae Armantrout, 1947
The ghosts swarm.
They speak as one
person. Each
loves you. Each
has left something
undone.



Did the palo verde
blush yellow
all at once?

Today's edges
are so sharp

they might cut
anything that moved.



The way a lost
word

will come back
unbidden.

You're not interested
in it now,

only
in knowing
where it's been.
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:42pm On Feb 05, 2015
1. Read the poem out loud and answer these questions.
2. What do you hear? Are there rhymes? Are there repeating sounds?
3. What connections and associations does the poet make?
4. What connections and associations do you make to the poem?
5. What do you think the poem is about?
6. What questions do you have about the poem?
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:27pm On Feb 05, 2015
[b]Poem:

Haunted Houses
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, 1807 - 1882
All houses wherein men have lived and died
Are haunted houses. Through the open doors
The harmless phantoms on their errands glide,
With feet that make no sound upon the floors.

We meet them at the door-way, on the stair,
Along the passages they come and go,
Impalpable impressions on the air,
A sense of something moving to and fro.

There are more guests at table than the hosts
Invited; the illuminated hall
Is thronged with quiet, inoffensive ghosts,
As silent as the pictures on the wall.

The stranger at my fireside cannot see
The forms I see, nor hear the sounds I hear;
He but perceives what is; while unto me
All that has been is visible and clear.

We have no title-deeds to house or lands;
Owners and occupants of earlier dates
From graves forgotten stretch their dusty hands,
And hold in mortmain still their old estates.

The spirit-world around this world of sense
Floats like an atmosphere, and everywhere
Wafts through these earthly mists and vapours dense
A vital breath of more ethereal air.

Our little lives are kept in equipoise
By opposite attractions and desires;
The struggle of the instinct that enjoys,
And the more noble instinct that aspires.

These perturbations, this perpetual jar
Of earthly wants and aspirations high,
Come from the influence of an unseen star
An undiscovered planet in our sky.

And as the moon from some dark gate of cloud
Throws o'er the sea a floating bridge of light,
Across whose trembling planks our fancies crowd
Into the realm of mystery and night,—

So from the world of spirits there descends
A bridge of light, connecting it with this,
O'er whose unsteady floor, that sways and bends, Wander our thoughts above the dark abyss.
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Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:24pm On Feb 05, 2015
What words do you think of when you read “haunted” and “ghosts.”? Make a list.
Draw lines that look like the path a ghost might take, or move their hands in that kind of path.
What sounds do ghosts make?
Write words you would use to describe their lines, gestures, or sounds and add them to your list.
Write what you see in the lines and gestures?
Write what you hear in the sounds?
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:22pm On Feb 05, 2015
"Haunted Houses" and "Unbidden" are poems about ghosts, and like all good poetry they go beyond the clichéd images to a deeper place that connects to being human.
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:18pm On Feb 05, 2015
Objectives:
To understand the word choices used in a poem and how they contribute to its meaning
To determine the meaning of a poem through a synthesis of multiple perspective.
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:15pm On Feb 05, 2015
Today we will be studying "Haunted Houses" by William Wadsworth Longfellow and "Unbidden" by Rae Armantrout, 1947.
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:13pm On Feb 05, 2015
Good evening class
European Football (EPL, UEFA, La Liga)Re: Fc Barcelona Fan Thread: "més Que Un Club" by cisse7575(m): 8:00am On Feb 02, 2015
coded01:
Its not easy bro, he became a father of 2 boys just on Thursday as Shakira gave birth to their 2nd child... cheesy


Baba dey dream land thinking about his new baby boy... cheesy


So I can understand his Special feelings... cheesy
so shaaki don give pique one pikin before, she come give am another on Thursday? Pique dey try gan oo
European Football (EPL, UEFA, La Liga)Re: Fc Barcelona Fan Thread: "més Que Un Club" by cisse7575(m): 3:18pm On Feb 01, 2015
What time is the match?
IslamRe: World Hijab Day Nigeria -( Lagos) - 1st February 2015 by cisse7575(m): 3:16pm On Feb 01, 2015
Wondering why my posts go hiding even though it is not offensive, the offensive one are still available here... Is Almighty Allah not the best judge...
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:43pm On Jan 29, 2015
outta of the class even though none attended, I've done my part.
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:38pm On Jan 29, 2015
Why don't you try writing a cinquain poem and post it here? Any of the teachers that comes here first will mark your poem from this we will know who understand today's class or not
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Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:34pm On Jan 29, 2015
An example of a cinquain poem

My mum 2
Is so caring 4
She is always helpful 6
She is so beautiful and kind 8
Love you. 2
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:32pm On Jan 29, 2015
What is the structure of a cinquain?
It consists of 5 unrhymed lines.
Each line has a set number of syllables see below:
Line 1 – 2 syllables
Line 2 – 4 Syllables
Line 3 – 6 Syllables
Line 4 – 8 syllables
Line 5 – 2 Syllables
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Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:30pm On Jan 29, 2015
Or we can say a short poem consisting of five,
usually unrhymed lines containing,
respectively, two, four, six, eight, and
two syllables, any stanza of five lines.
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:28pm On Jan 29, 2015
A cinquain poem is a verse of five lines that do not rhyme. The cinquain poem was created by Adelaide Crapsey.
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:22pm On Jan 29, 2015
Walk into the class in my Kampala styled senegalse.
I'm sorry class, Im 20 minutes late. In today's class we will discuss "what is a Cinquain?"
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:52pm On Jan 25, 2015
Thanks Tex and Everest, you guys did a great job... Please teach up
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Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:28pm On Jan 18, 2015
Students, Tex has been banned, she us working to get back on. She will be on shortly, please bear with us.
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:58pm On Jan 15, 2015
seems the class is empty
Poems For ReviewRe: Poetry Classes For Beginners - NPC (Signup Thread) by cisse7575(m): 9:54pm On Jan 15, 2015
Walk into the class smiling with my senegalese attire, i said "good evening class. Happy new year."

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