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Dropping d next update before 4pm

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Kingzpen, what are you doing here? Aren't you supposed to be typing the next update on ur thread, but you're here viewing this thread.
Do you know what can make us fight? You leave without commenting.

Am afraid of dropping the next update. Abi, let me change the plot. No am not gonna change it, to spice up d story.

Waiting don tire me o. Let me tour around lit section and see maybe i'll see another story. By the time am thru i knw u wud av updated.

Still i follow

--continuation--
Venue: The house of senate.
"After much deliberation and arguments on the security lapses on the part of our security agencies, the house has come to a resolve that in fourtyeight hours time, the affairs of all security agents would be overseen by the Federal millitary council. And ten millitary men would be deployed to each security agency. The departmental heads at L.A.T.U can therefore resign from their posts, because the summary with me here shows that the lapses on their path had caused so many failures in their endeavours to stop terrorism." The senate president said and stamped it.
Bill Cuevas, who was the representative from L.A.T.U knew at once that it is over for him and the others in the crew. He got into his car and drove off ignoring pressmen who wanted to interview him.
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Venue: L.A.T.U
Miss Nina Philips entered the computer hall dressed in a white shirt and a black skirt, her haired packed to one side, she was indeed a beauty.
She walked to her station, and met so many greeting cards from other personnels wishing her a speedy recovery. She felt loved that moment and she smiled and sat down to resume her work where she stopped.
There was a live transmission of Pm news that time, the presidents impeachment was announced and the senate resolve on the security agencies was also announced.
She knew at once that work as a detective/field operative is over for Richard. She picked the landphone on the table and dailled Richards line.
---
Richard shot the glass door but it didn't crack talkless of break. He could hear footsteps approaching the hall where he was. He quickly went back into hiding behind the shelves.
"Where is he?" Anderson who led the men asked no one in particular.
"Sir, its like this man is still breathing." One of his men said pointing to the man that passed out as a result of Anderson's kick.
The fainted man was revived with the use of a choky container, like and inhaler.
"Where is he?" Anderson asked slapping the man.
"He? He? Who is he?" the man asked.
It was obvious that the man had had his brain evaporated.
Anderson angrily hit the man on the chest before he hit him with the butt of his gun. At once the man came round and his thinking faculty was immediately restored.
"He escaped through the fire exit." the man replied.
Anderson angrily shot the man.
"All men move towards the fire exit, the B team wait on him at the extraction point, C team, go through this door." Anderson gave instructions to his men.
As they were all about to leave the hall, Richard's phone rang.

--to be continued--

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I know too.

Ghozye: Yea,I jst feel it ended too soon lik thr wz stil sm tinz dt cld cum out of ur plot,anyways tis ur story n d endin z stil ok. U did well

*muvin 2 d Undercover Agent...'I loooove crime fiction'*

Looking forward to seeing ur comments on the Undercover Agent.

Am so loving this. I hate pple who look down on less privilledged(low classed) fellows.
Tell me Ruth is the cook. Just like Mrs Smith's theory, birds of a feather flocks together.
Team Janet#
Dancing Skelewu cos i opened page2 with my comment.

Thanks for d compliment.

fun lover: Welldone bros...meanwhile I dey suspect u and dis babe (stefikal) o...wetin dey btw the two of una?

As for Stefikal, stef na my sister o, so there z no cause for alarm.

It had to end like that bro. Me self was even suprised.

Fredfrank: Wow... @D9ty, is dat d end like seriously?.... to me d strory cn go longer than dat... i really enjoyed it bro... thumbs up

I'll try and drop two more updates.

fun lover: So much suspense ! ...oga will u still update today?

Walks into the thread with my mat. Spreads it on the floor "this is where i'll be till u drop ur question."
HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY TO YOU BOSS.

--continuation--
Venue: L.A.T.U
Mr Dron Spencer walked into the female ward where Nina was being treated.
"Miss Nina. How you doing now?" He asked.
"Am getting better sir." Nina replied.
"okay that good to hear. But i think it is high time you return to your duty, you know, agent Oriol is the mole and he is in detention. We need extra hands to work in nabbing these terrorists." He paused and look at her to confirm if she got what he said. Then he continued. "So Miss Nina, what do you think?" He asked.
"There is nothing much to think about. I'll have to return, since my services are still very much needed." She replied.
"So, would you just change and join us or what?" he asked.
"I'll have to speak to the doctor first. He is the only one who can tell me if am fit enough." Nina replied.
"I've spoken with Adam, he said you're fit to go." Spencer cut in.
"Okay, i'll join you down there in ten minutes time." she said smilling.
"That's good of you." Spencer said and turned back. He headed for the exit.
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Eric fell down and blood was oozing out of his mouth and nose, his breathing was unstable, as he was gasping for air.
Richard stood up and walked to the door, he checked, the hallway confirming if any guard was manning the place, there was none. He walked back inside and picked Eric up, slanted him carefully on his shoulder. He walked as fast as posible. He continued walking with his detective instinct activated, but he was suprised not to meet anyone on his way till he got to the groundfloor.
Just then the men about fourty of them began returning from wherever they went to. He sensed danger, as he quickly hid behind a big shelve.
They all entered the hall and ascended the steps, leaving five men behind to guard the exit door. Richard knew he could easily take out the men but he must be fast about it, because if the men should get to the room and didn't see a trace of Eric, an alarm would be raised.
He put Eric on the ground carefully, this time he had passed out. He removed a 23-automatic pistol from his back, inserted the silencer, he aimed at one of the men.
One....two....three, he released three quick shots which hit three of the five men on the head.
"He is behind the shelf." One of the two surviving men shouted at the other who shot in direction of the shelf.
Richard was quick to take out the man that shoot as he quickly carried Eric on his shoulders and advanced towards the man who knew where he was. Unfortunately, the man had no weapon on him.
He kicked him on the groin and the man passed out. He walked to the door, alas it was locked.
Meanwhile, the sound from the men's gunshots had alerted other occupants as the all ran as fast as they could towards the ground floor where Richard was.

--to be continued--

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I'll try dropping one more update before 12pm. But i av a feeling that pple are no longer following this story. Pls am begging you ni o, lets do this together.

Kingzpen, u don't knw wat is good for u. You're jogging? Laffing out loud.

First to comment after that wonderful update. Dancing Skelewu.
Don't tell me what am thinking is about to happen.
Make Katherine no come and spoil show o.

--continuation--
"I am Tom Franklin, reporting live from the house of senate. As you can see, they are having a recess after which the sitting reopens. After much deliberations from the members of the house, it has been agreed that President Andres Lujan has been relieved of his executive duties. The impeachment process was raised by Senator Kennedy representing the north swahill constituency, after a vote of no confidence has been passed on the president.
Former president Lujan, will vacate his office while, vice president Mike Conolly assumes office as the new president till the end of Lujan's regime.
Former president Lujan expressed his sadness over his untimely impeachment but hoped that president Conolly would continue the good work from where he(Lujan) stopped.
Stay tuned for more news from the senate. For more information, log on to our website.
Once again, i am Tom Franklin reporting live from the house."
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"Richard, are you still on the highlander's trail? Because, i can't view you car. Where are you?" Buycks asked.
"Am on my way to get Anderson." Richard replied.
"What!? Anderson? You are expected to follow protocols, play by the rules and follow orders." Buyck yelled.
"Calm down, no one is playing the boss here. I am the second in command to Cuevas." Richard replied.
"That was then. But now Spencer and i are in charge." Buycks replied.
"I'll get back to you later." Richard said and ended the call.
Richard drove into Halluva street where Anderson's hideout was located. He succeeded in infiltrating the building from the west exit where there are less guards. He got into the main house in disguise as on of the cooks.
He couldn't find Anderson on the second floor, he proceeded to the third floor. The he could hear someone screeming like he is being totured. He move closer to the door which was slightly opened. He peeped in and saw what broke his heart.
Sitting on the chair was Eric, he was being cut with razor while, hot ointments were being poured on him. As he made to storm into the room he heard.
"Lock down all the exits, Richard Sylvester from L.A.T.U is in the building."
He quickly placed his cap on his head and headed for the kitchen. All the men that were with Eric all came out and began searching for Richard.
He came out from the kitchen and slipped into the room.
"....aa...a...d...." Eric called and the blood began gushing out of his nose, he fell down.

--to be continued--

Ghozye: Wow! Guess I wz away 4 too long n d teenage frolicking had 2 cum 2 an end in my absence.

D9ty7,I mst commend u 4 a job weldone;altho I don't rlly lik d way it ended,I wz actually prayin 4 a miracle 4 Segun #team Nike n I wz expectin Jummy 2 lay an egg after smtym,bt d endin z stil owk.

@Boogiejay dt wz rlly harsh!

The story had to end like that you know. When a story becomes lengthy, it becomes boring.
But anyway, i've learnt one or two things from ur observation.
@Boogiejay, he'z just hating. Nufin much.
You can read my second story via the link on my signature.

Updating b4 9:45pm. It might be short, just take it lyk dat tonight.

Am honoured ma'am

onose1: A rarity. a thriller that really thrills

--continuation--
Venue: L.A.T.U
Richard entered the ward properly and went to Nina.
"What's the matter?" Richard asked.
"She wants to commit sucide." Nina replied.
"But why?" Richard asked.
"Don't know." she replied.
Doctor Adam straightened and made to leave the ward.
"Adam, what's going on?" Richard asked.
Adam sighed.
"Please, can we meet in my office?" Doctor Adam requested.
"No problems. Baby, i'll be back to check on you." Richard said as he followed the doctor out of the ward.
**Doctor's office.
Dr Adam, a man in his late fifties, who had been in practice for over thirty years, well experienced in the job.
"Richard, we need to see the girl's parent." Doctor Adam said.
Richard kept quiet for some seconds, head bent.
He raised his head and cleared his throat and faced the doctor.
"Her parents are no more." Richard replied.
"If that is the case, then we need to get one of her relatives for questioning on her health history." Adam explained.
"You are yet to answer my question." Richard snapped.
"She tried to commit sucide."
"Why would she try such?" Richard asked.
"You know she was defiled and as a result, she has been traumatised, she's been affected psychologically and mentally." Adam explained.
"Are you sure, she is gonna pull this through?" Richard asked.
"She will, but this type of occurence will take place in the near future unless we do the necessities." Adam explained convincingly.
Richard stood up and bade Doctor Adam goodbye. Off he went for his primary assignment.
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Agent Buycks divided his team into two and gave instructions to the backup team that was on the other end of the road which means Farouk's van is in between the two teams.
The tactical team advanced towards the van through the bush that flanked the road on both sides. They were surreptitiously crawling towards them to avoid suspicion.
"Team B, what position are you?" Buycks asked through his walkie talkie in low tones.
"We are in a vantage position. Perpendicular to the spot you are." Meyler, the head of the second tactical team replied.
"Attack!" he ordered.
---
A black toyota highlander drove out from the bush to, the other street which Richard was driving on.
Inside the car was Farouk, Gaby and Stevie. The car had tinted glasses, so Richard couldn't see through.
The street on which Richard was driving on and the one where gun battle was taking place was demacated by a bush from which the highlander came out from.
Just then his phone rang. It was Buycks.
"Agent Richard." he said on picking the call.
"A toyota highlander is driving before you. The occupants are members of F.Lan corporations. Follow them immediately, a backup team would be waiting at the extraction point." Buycks explained and ended the call.
Richard drove on but went against orders when he diverted his car to the direction where Anderson was hiding.

--to be continued--

stefikal: how can a 12 year old be your Boss

Kingzpen don't mind Stefikal o. She don old baje, she told me she don born ur type seven. Its a secret o.

Bring it on, am waiting.

Flygeriansteve: Written in church during a fiery sermon

SALVATION CATHEDRAL
Pulpit of glass sits on cement
Words of brass hit the pavement
Our hearts the smelting forge
Where guilt seeped through every gorge.

If ever muffled groaning be amplified
Of conscience convicted and minds vilified
This sober cathedral would erupt like a volcano
He the first falling domino

Father I have sinned
Prodigal son cringed
Penitent pleading amid teary eyes
That the lowliest redemption would suffice

Great was the emancipation
Talk of mercy precipitation
So uncumbered from things past
He breathed free at last

Am speechless. Are you Wole Soyinka or Sola Owonibi?

My subscription will finish today.

stefikal: tnks but why don't u update once more 2day and save d rest 4 tomorrow...

Or you gonna be very busy 2mrw

@KingzPen I dey greet ooo...wen u go update ur syd now?

--continuation--
-¤CHAPTER 6=>DEDICATED TO KINGZPEN¤-
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Venue: The House of Senate.
"Mr President, with due respect sir, i want you to before the house, tell us how the attack on the motorcade came out abortive." Senator Ken said and sat down.
"I recognise the presence of the president of the senate, the deputy, the speaker, the deputy speaker and other distinguished senators. There was a phone call from a man called Farouk Lan on 18th of this month." he paused and signalled to Mr Albert, the minister for information.
Albert stood up and handed a flash drive to the chief clerk of the house who in turn inserted it to a device which began playing a conversation between the president and Farouk.
--
Richard collected the phone from Oriol.
"Richard, its a pity, you're fighting a lost battle." Anderson spited and laughed mockingly.
"Anderson, am gonna get you very soon, i don't care loosing my life. Have you forgotten you killed my only son." Richard poured out angrily.
"You dare not." Anderson said and ended the call.
"Launch a search bolt network and get me his location now." Richard said as he removed a laptop computer from one of the shelves resting on the wall. Oriol took charge and began breaking firewalls and providing codes for encrypted pathways.
"I got it!" Oriol shouted happily.
Richard moved closer to have a better view of things, he memorised the address and cuffed Oriol back to the iron chair.
"Richie, please let me contact my lawyer so that i can sign an immune document with the government so that i can be a free man. At least i have been helping you." Oriol said pleadingly.
Richard stopped in his tracks like he was thinking about what Oriol requested for. He hissed and hit him violently on the neck. He passed out.
Richard walked out of the detention and headed for the female ward where Nancy and Nina were. He got there to see Nina wailing.
Doctor Adam was attending to Nancy while Nina was being held. He moved closer to confirm his fears of the girl dying.
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"The van is no longer moving." Meyer informed them all.
They all became alert.
"Move it. Move it." Buycks ordered as the driver accelerated his speed.
In a blink of an eye they were fifteen metres away from the blue van.
"Stop it here." Buycks ordered.
They all disembarked. Chris removed a binocular from his bag. He looked towards, the van.
"The occupants are still in the van." Chris informed.
"How many are they?" Meyer asked.
"Nine, Ten, Twelve. Just twelve." Chris replied.
"Is their any movement from them?" Buycks asked.
"None sir." Chris replied.
"Then i guess, they are waiting on us." Buycks said convincingly.
The other agents all nodded in approval.

--to be continued--