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Hameenat94: I jst resumed,d drinks in d store re dwn.u nid 2 order 4 more.btw nyc story.@op make they no molest nina oh.i hate it wen a woman z molested.pls

They should kill Eric abi?

Don famous: have you written this particular story in a a book or you are just writin it as the inspiration comes?

I won't say i av written it down cos after every update i make ammendment in the manuscript. I make changes every time. But every action i take depends solely on inspiration.

Following

I guess, am the first to comment.
You have a nice story, but try and pay attention to details. We ar all learning anyways.

Nice start, and i love the way u described the characters. It seems like you are doing double post. Please try and check that.
I love this story. FOLLOWING

adegwurulez: ma oga, i dey come pitch tent for ya thread o

You are always welcome, and you knw you ar the reason behind my story's success oga.

Sexy Sapphire: I didn't fall off ma chair all thru (sorry to disappoint u D9ty7)

U didn't fall abi? Okay dnt wori, Ade will start a new story very and i promise you that you'll fall and i u don't i will personally push u.
Am looking foward to you writing a story very soon. Lol.

--continuation--
"Agent Buycks on the line. We just lost the doctor." Buycks said.
"Yes, i can see." Spencer replied.
"What do we do now?" Buycks asked.
"Pack his remains and dispose everything disposable." Spencer added.
"Okay." Buycks said and cut the call.
*HOUSE OF SENATE*
The members of the house all stood up immediately the senate president/chief walked in. The house clerk followed carrying a triangular square based object which represents authority.
The order of the day was read by the chief clerk after distributing the order paper.
"Today, we'll be proceeding to the third and final reading on the bill to establish a private weapon, amunition and hard drug making company in the county. We have Hon. Kate Andrews, representing the presidency, and Sen. Sam Chucks, chairman house committe on weapon and drug making bill. May we proceed?" The chief clerk said and sat down.
"The president of the house, the deputy, the speaker and other distinguished members. Based on the deliberation for the past few weeks. An investigation team has been sent to make enquiry from the company, it was discovered that the organisation planning on setting up the company is a terrorist group. All other thing are well explained in this papers." The chairman house committe on the establishment of weapon and drug making company, Senetor Sam Chucks explained as he gave a bunch of paper to the clerk.
The clerk in turn distributes the papers to every member in the house.
"May we have the representative from the presidency." The speaker of the house requested.
Kate Andrew, the minister for works and establishment of industries, stood up to present the presidents speech.
"The president of the house, the deputy, the speaker and other distinguished members of the house. I am Kate Andrews representing the presidency. It has come to our notice that for the safety of the citizens of this country, we need to dance to the tunes of these terrorists. These people promised to hand over a nuclear weapon to us if we grant and pass this bill. And we've resolved to present to the house, this footage." Kate produced a paper bag and handed it over to the chief clerk who in turn inserted it into a video player and was projected through a large screen.
It was the threat video of Farouk Lan.
"Any objection or ammendment." The speaker asked.
Senator Baird Oliver, the deputy senate president signified. Every member of the house knew, his contribution determines the final judgement from the senate president.
He stood up and oppose Kate Andrew, saying that the video is nothing but an ordinary threat.
"Objection?" The speaker asked.
Kate Andrew stood up, and produced another paper bag, she emptied the content and gave it to the clerk of the house who distributes it to the members, Kate reads.
"By the power conferred on me, as the president of this nation. After numerous delibrations from the house members, but they couldn't figure out the best decision for the best of this country. I hereby pass this bill by veto, and with immediate effect, establishment processes should begin and the highest bidder establish the weapon and drug company." Kate read out on behalf of the president.
"Since the bill has been passed by veto, i have no choice than to agree." The senate president said and knocked the wooden hammer on it base.

--to be continued--

walewunmi: Ogami I saw ur email now but its nt showing ur msg yet bt av connected my gmail wit urs so u can resend it...LOGO wats d crowd population status...so we can plan ahead!

Oga, we go talk 2mao.

Look at you

dammygoody: Noooooo!!!!!it must not be Eric oooooh............Richard will just die

If it is his time to die, there is nothing anybody can do

stefikal: Eric please don't die

joyce01: Nice story, d9ty7.

I tot u won't drop ur comment ni. B'cos, i've been seeing u around for a few hours today.
Anyway thanks ma'am.

--continuation--
"Let me see how you're gonna do what Mr Richard asked you to do." Andy said as she moved her chair close to Oriol.
Oriol fumbled with the keyboard for some seconds, typing some codes, providing codes for locked systems.
"But you were asked to check for some call logs. Based on the little knowledge i had gained from Miss Nina, the log should be in the recently hacked systems and not the web service provider." Andy said feeling fly, thinking she had proven a theory or proven her boss wrong.
"Andy, are you gonna teach me my job? Let me do my thing and lets see who is right." Oriol said.
He tried all his possible best to make Andy leave his side, but she was adamant saying she wants to learn.
Oriol finally, opened the folder in which the log was being saved, he decided to just delete the folder entirely but opened his mouth when, the datas saved in the folder came into display instead of the folder icon.
Richard came down to meet Oriol.
"Are you the one preventing him from doing his job?" Richard asked Andy.
"No sir. I am learning new things from him." She replied.
"You don't learn in this kind of situation. Okay?" Richard asked.
"Yes sir." she replied and walked back to her seat.
"Okay, let me see what you've got." Richard said as he took over from Oriol and began scrolling through the list, he was copying strange and unknown numbers to his phone.
He got to Oriol's name and copied two strange numbers, one for Anderson, the other for Abib. With this he went back into Spencer's office where the head of the computer department John Mill is waiting to make the trace.
While in Spencer's office, his phone ranged and he discovered it was Anderson, he put on speaker and Mill tried launching a trace application while the call was on but he got bounced back everytime.
The first thing Anderson told Richard was to change the phone from loudspeaker to handsfree mode.
"Now you have ten minutes to stop the investigation, because, footage i have on the hospital shows that, the man behind the murder is about to be transported down to L.A.T.U, so at your own best interest, order his release now or you loose these women and your cute son." Anderson poured out and ended the call.
"Lets order his release, then we trail whoever comes to pick him up to their destination." Richard said as Spencer gave him a go ahead.
*L.A.T.U's agents on the released murdrer's trail.*
After explaining the situation to Buycks, the killer was released. The man walked towards the end of the street where a blue van was parked. L.A.T.U agent followed slowly behind to avoid suspicion.
Meanwhile Spencer, Bill, Anderson and Mill were all following it live via video feeds provided by the surveillance camera on the road. They kept communicating with the team behind the blue van.
Three minutes into the journey the blue van blew up. A bomb was set and it has just been detonated.
"Richard, you've just touched a lion's tail by playing mind games with me. The hostages will be killed after the ladies must have been molested. Goodday." Anderson said immediately Richard picked his call.
Then he heard a gunshot after which a voice which sounded like Eric's groaned in pain before the call ended.

--to be continued--

stefikal: Awwww
tnks 4 d dedication... I reserve my comment on d 'boss and "big" sister ish'...
Tnks though

Oriol, God don catch you

You deserve it ma'am.
Btw i visited ur blog a few minutes ago. Its gr8.

Jumizie13: abeg leave here jare.

u don update?

Advice to Tchyammy:
1. Your story is still at the infant stage. I was suprised when i checked this thread and saw only 96 views. I tried asking myself why. Then i came to realisation that your updates are not consistent.
I knw u want to include suspence to make pple ask for more, but right now, your update should be regular. The readers can decide to unfollow the story. They have nothing to loose, but assuming you've posted about a dozen updates, they dare not because, they'll want to knw where the story is heading to.
2. Try and read other people's story and drop comment. With this people will knw abt ur story, since the link to ur story iz on ur signature.
Am nt trying to spite ur work but i said a piece of my mind. Am also a writer but still a learner and hopefully, i'll learn from your story.
#teamchucks# lol.

What's the question sir?

Don famous: Interestin but have a question for you my oga

Prof T.DAN i heard on the news that we've made fp. Is it true?
Congrats my prof and teacher.
Who z d next to die.
1. Oyinkan
2. Grandma
3. .... Can't wait to the d person.

--continuation--¤¤ CHAPTER 4=> STEFIKAL(my big sister and boss, in story writing)¤¤.
Richard drove into L.A.T.U after the bomb blast issue had been settled. He went strai ght to Dron spencer's office to file a report about Nina's kidnapp.
"Sir it has come to my notice that Nina Philips has been abducted along preston estate a few hours ago." Richard explained to Spencer.
"But she signed out a few minutes ago, that she wants to drop some kids with a family member." Spencer added.
"Yeah, she wants to drop my son with a relative at preston." Richard replied.
"So, how did you know?" Spencer asked.
"I recieved a call from her abductors, telling me to call of the on going investigation concerning the murder at the hospital." Richard explained.
"We can't do that. Trace the number that called you." Spencer ordered.
"okay. But sir, it seems like there is mole." Richard said.
"Mole? Where?" Spencer asked.
"Someone around here is working for Anderson, we've had about three failed attempt on him, he seems to know about our next action even before we carry them out." Richard explained.
"And what gave you that assumption?" Spencer asked.
"No one knew about our meeting with the Douglas, except the people around here, yet Anderson went on and killed them. Am sure no one knew of Nina's movement except me and you, yet Anderson got information and Kidnapped her." Richard explained impatiently.
"This is serious." Spencer uttered.
Richard kept mute and was looking intently at Spencer waiting for an order to get Anderson.
"I knew why Nina was Kidnapped." Richard said.
"Why was that?" Spencer asked.
"She actually told me Anderson was communicating with an agent in here, so i asked her to hack into all personnel's call log, with the aim of getting the culprit." Richard poured out.
"But she has been kidnapped. Do we have any system personnel around?" Spencer asked.
"Yes, we have Oriol." Richard replied.
Okay, let him, check Miss Nina's computer and send the call log copy to my computer." Spencer ordered.
"okay." Richard replied.
He went outside and walked to the computer station hall, he walked to station 9, Oriol's seat.
Oriol was shocked as he saw Richard walking towards him.
"Oriol, check Agent Nina's computer, try and get a call log, she saved on it and send it over to Spencer." Richard said.
"Okay sir." Oriol said feeling relaxed.
He smiled mischievously immediately Richard turned to walk away.
"So far, am still here, you'll never get Anderson. Time to delete the log." Oriol said within himself and smiled.
"What is it with you that you are smiling." Andy, a twenty one year old university student who was doing her industrial training in L.A.T.U asked.
"And what is your concern?" Oriol asked.
"Am sorry." She said.
"You had better be." Richard replied.
She stood up from her seat and came over to Oriol's seat.
"Let me see how you're gonna do what Mr Richard asked you to do." Andy said.
¤Big time gobe for Oriol¤
--to be continued--

Will update in an hour's time.

stefikal: And it keeps getting tough

Really tough

fun lover: Chei ! ...see as Pple just dey die

dem dey die big time o

Oga Ade, this one na real action story. Kip em coming.

--continuation--
AT THE CINEMA
Richard and other agents of the L.A.T.U all ran into the floors of the cinema.
"A bomb has been planted in this building. At your own best interest, you are advised to evacuate." Richard said.
People numbering up to three hundred all struggled to exit the cinema as fast as possibe.
"You have just five minutes." Richard shouted.
There was pandemonium at every exit, about fifty people are struggling to come out at the same time and there are just three exits to the ground floor.
"A-B-S what do we have?" Richard asked.
ABS denotes the Anti-bomb squad.
"We have just fifteen seconds." they informed.
Richard ran and jumped from the second floor, every other person on the second floor followed suit.
10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1,0...the time stopped. Any moment from then detonation will take place.
To everybody's dismay, there was no blast for some time.
"Lets go back in and deactivate the bomb." Richard said as he led the way expecting the Anti-bomb squad to follow him.
"Agent Richard, i think we should wait a bit, the bomb was set with a time allowance." One of the Anti bomb squad agents said.
Just then there was a bomb blast and the whole building came crashing downwards.
There were various noise and shouts from amidst the evacuated people. Such as 'Oh! My God" "Jeez!" "Jesus christ!" to mention a few.
"Oh my God! Tracy" A small girl cried.
"Where is she?" A woman Richard guessed could be the girl's mother asked.
"She's on the top floor." The girl replied.
It was then it dawned on Richard that none of the agent got to the top floor. Richard tried consoling the woman.
Three minutes later, the fire service arrived and tried putting out the fire. They battle with it for the next fifteen minutes before the succeeded in putting it out.
They went into the ruins and were able to come out with about fifty people who have been burned beyond recognition.
Richard couldn't withstand the sight, so he left the compound and walked back to where their car was parked.
"As a result of my laxity i forgot to deploy some men to the last floor." He lamented as tears rolled out of his eyes.
His phone rang.
"Hello Mr Richard." A voice greeted from the other end.
"Hello, who is this?" Richard asked.
"A picture message will be sent to your mail now, check out the pictured and read the message beneathe. Goodday." the caller said then ended the call.
Richard quickly, checked the message, and saw Nina, Eric and Nancy, all tied to a pole each. They had bruises all over their faces.
He read the text below. It reads,
"Mr Richie, at your own best interest, we want you to call off the investigation on the killer at the hospital or you loose these people. Call these number when you are ready to stop the investigation."
¤-END OF CHAPTER 3-¤
--to be continued--

Please update nau.

kennybelle: my boss, thanks for d update n ur acknowledgements. but where is ma recharge card, or are u telling me im not smart enough


Before i forget, lemme tell u dt u re dedicated and consistent, and i like dt; doesnt make d story tiring bt increases enthusiasm. E seun

Thanks for the compliment.