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@ muffe
tnks 4 d adv.

@villageman Sup

@alkalinity
I sure av nothin against criticism, tnks 4 advice tho

@ignatio, easy, u'r teetering

Prof, waitn 4 u

@Tadon
apprec8 ur opinion

@sholay wounded tiger, expectin mo words frm yu Mr novelist abi na author. wat does 'hread' means, u remind me of my Sule xcter(lols)

@villageman Lolz, lik d fact u mak me grin, im sure gon include u in one f my works, u'l mak a gud villain turnd hero xcter

hw km sholay kips likn villageman's coment, yet villageman isnt follown suit? sholay stand up, LIVE UR OWN QUOTES

sorry guys, messing wit ur brains

lols, im stil awake.
crap u say, ur own n sholay's opinion, cool by me. It's aiit
U shud try writing some anime stuffs, k, thn u guys'll see d light I see
As a NL pal, I recommend dis movie 4 ur imagination, Upside down, hp u dnt tink its crap sha
One love
apprc8 ur bluntness much villageboi, y u hidn behind villageboi, sholay? dnt b hypocritical now

pls note dis, u tink I tink NL peeps r stewpid? thn I must b stewpid to av postd 4 stewpid folks to comment on, dats yr point of view, nt mine, seems ur dier boss hia ehn, kudos to ya balls, ehn.
I regard evry1 as myself, equals n intellectuals, we might nt all b equals in all tins, so pls dnt jok wit dt prt, aiit.

1YR FRM NOW, UR OPINION OF LIFE WUD B DIFF N YA GON LUK BACK N R'MBER I SAID SO COS OPINIONS CHANGE.
CRAP SHEY, K.

Lawrence 14: After Earth is a movie i wish i didn't use my time 2 watch.if d father and son wanted 2 bond dey should do dat by taking tym off

cnt stop laffn

Ago-nies of d past are best 4gotten by earnin a reputation as a punster not IndecentStar o!

Village boi, dis is whr I cud clarify sm tinz 4 u, ur Imagination is d strongest weapon as writer! Please it's no joke, Apart frm d fact dat I write, im n actor(imagination helps me intreprete scripts b4 d filming) , n artist n I draw frm imagination, n stuffs, av u seen d Mylo xyloto punchline, COLOR IS CRIME, only imagination can cook dat up.

Wit imagination u'll go plcs bro, dats d only edge western writer av ova us, bt its fading slowly, av u seen d filmdespicable me2? wu can tinl f stealn d moon if nt Imagination?

Village boi, seems to me u get annoyed easily, judgin frm all ur comments.
thrz no reason to press p, definitely no reason to say sm1 is daft, we're all matured hia. Feel free to voice ur mind, bt hey, it's a small world

@ prof, derez nothin wrong in me defendn some statements u guys make against d script
picture it lik dis, I release a film, d audience lyks it, d critics dnt n voiced out,k. I get interviewd n i'm askd to express my Opinions on their(critics) opinions, capiche
I'm not attacking any1, hell no, frm sm of d comments I've gotten a thing or two n its neat dat I learn frm u n u frm me, no strong feelings bro
Feel free to comment, n no1's fakin anytin, aint perfect n aint formin in any way

@ all, y wud I make d NY stuff up? to please y'all? hogwash

I see u guys av knowledge

Stop

4 me Imagination is d grtst tool n dats hw I gt to understand scripts, novels, puzzles by imaginin n visualizn d xcters.
apprec8 ur opinions,

But OPINIONS CHANGE

@ Tade, wow, tnk God u said u were confused, frm a judge's point, i'd say, ur comment must av bn influenced

N now d odaz r influenced 2, phew...

I wonda if anyone figured Sule was an awkward weirdo 2 av spoilt d good time he n lucy jst had, a rily garrulous nature thr. Wu giggles afta sex? mayb a gal, bt definitely nt a guy
if any1 had seen d film 'I giv it year' , sule is kinda lyk d bestman at d weddn of d male lead role or If u'v seen 'Big bang theory' , u'd c wat I mean. Mayb imagine a very silly, awkward fellow...aiit

can we pls b blunt n hit d mark?

Jare is a Yoruba word meaning Fight righteously/bravely...i think

(YB IS ME<I'M YB)

Aww...Mr Sholay, pls read it again then, a bit slower than b4
Tnks 4 co-op
I'm at work, jx km here to mix, u knw, so cnt afford skippin tym so shrthnd'z gotta b it, sowie

Fear not, I mean well broda

@sholay chk ur link, I commented thr
Respect to all

@ sholay, ur advice

@villageman
u knw d reason y many ppl r whr dey r 4kn r 2day, its cos dey'r livin n doin tins normally n properly
u luv quentin tarantino's writings?
suscrib 2 his sites, gt yr hnds on his materials. Some tink he's gud, som fil he's obsessed wit blood n stuffs n his xcters r not down2earth
D u kno writers r crazy ppl?
I knw, cos i'm; i'm evri f of my xcters, I speak lik dem, some xcters were inspired by oda ppl,
wu talks lyk WICKE in jack d giant slayer?
I knw ppl, wu do. take a tym out, av u eva tried writing n animatiom script, u gotta b crazy enuf to tink crazy to do dat
Av u seen safety not guaranteed? d villain of batman? av u seen "I giv it a year?" av u hrd of smeagol? av u seen forgettin sarah marshalls? d u write comedy? GUESS NOT
I tink u shud dwnld chimamanda's interview on Ted Talks, n see life in dynamics
u tink writin properly wins u n Oscar? guess wat, ur pals too r writin properly n gettn screend d 4kd out
if u wanna understand a script, km down to d xcters level, becomin dem, b n actor, mind u, actn is reactn
I write behind closed doors so ppl wnt tink im mad, u tink I dnt read it out loud?
if u wnt a synopsis to understnd my script no p, directors dnt want stories, dnt teach dem dier work
av got a friend,studied at New York Film Academy now director, mailed it to him, WU TINKS ITS GR8 n never a nigerian script cud impress him(PROF, UR ANSWER ITS 4 OSCARS N EVRIBODY, BOTH WHYT N BLACK), wnt mention his name, but villageboi, ur criticism is SOMEHOW
u talk about virgins n stuff, d script above has been moderated, I didnt put stuffs lyk, naughty lady, poo n likes, ask d moderator.
im not a virgin, but if I km bak to earth again, i'l stay 1 til marriage cos relationships r wacky n hrtbrks
I tink u guys shud strt readn both foreign n home scripts, esp foreign if u wnt n oscar
get d pdf's, av a fav writer u use style to look up2 bt nt fotocopy dem 4 evri genre u write
Nevertheless m glad about d critcisms, lets learn frm ich oda
Apprc8 u guys much

I tink u shud play around more with adjectives, makes lines punchy. Yea, I saw d picture painted n synchd wit it.
Nice sharp turn conflict 'blood seepin out...'
Lots of description, u'll b a better novel writer.
Hailn a broda

Ni-ckelback makes my day whn im feeln edgy

(Amen, confirmation 2 prayer)

Cool

strike?! whn harlos parry dey deer, pele o. Wo, harlos, if d last letter of ur name was T, we'd av lovd 2... try again next tym bro, dnt give up

(Always take d bull by the horns)

@ villageboi, virgin as in? if I get u, some lines were refined, not crude abi, all tnks to d moderator, buh tnks 4 criticism, rily appr8 d feedback, will wrk on it

@Sholay, Yes Boss, hpn 4 ur reply

@ tonyayo...? u wnt me to state d lady's age thr or WAT?
Predictable? d 1st page, u read of chuks n tomiwa,k. tell me, immediately, u flipd 2 sule n lucy's u knew sule was gonn b wit tommy? Na lie, I no bliv u pin pin
Didnt u rid d word 'couple', u shld perceive daz d ppl at d table, broz, so d lady grtd sm1 1st which was d babe sitted wit her guy!
means dey must b frnds
Aprt frm diz, I accept d rem of. ur criticisms (i bliv u didnt see d picture I paintd frm d strt, cos dis is a shrt film f 15 pgs, av u seen rango, d conflict started frm d start bro)
Em, d Amaka answern herself prt shud'v bn Tomiwa answerin, my bad
Tnks boss, I apprec8 ur opinion n yea, will work on d leakssss, Sir

Safety not guaranteed
The Great Gatsby
Lord of Rings Trilogy
beautiful creatures
squatterz
yawz n myn
midnight in paris
watchmen

reality is what we r facing now,

(@kezmartino, 16 is a complicated day 2 show up, dnt blame me)

All right, seems evri1 has taken dis personal, csam jx km in,n cudnt even spell d word advice. Tnkss to doz wu drop advices.
Lookerz, show's ova