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The story is going to be in form of narration from both the point of view of the writer and the point of view of chuks |
EPISODE ONE Chuks shot out of bed with the speed of lightening and ran into the bathroom which doubled as the restroom. The time is 8:30am and today is supposed to be his first day at his new office. 15minutes later he was already rushing out of the house after getting ready. Chuks is a strikingly handsome first class graduate of electrical and electronics engineering from the University of ibadan. For five years after leaving school he was unable to secure a good job. He survived by doing menial jobs while sending cover letters upon cover letters to several firms. It seems fortune smiled on him when he received a mail from Lincoln incorporation, a shipping company with more than 200 branches all over Nigeria and outside Nigeria. stating that he finally secured the position of the technical head at the Ibadan branch at ringroad. Chuks had stayed up late till about 1:00am celebrating his new job With his friends, hence his waking up so late this morning. Chuks was already sweating profusely inside the fully Air conditioned safeboda cab he had chartered so as to arrive at work in good time. It seems nature has other plans for chuks, the massive gridlock he met at sango has refused to move for over 20minutes, he adjusted his tie an checked his Rolex wristwatch "fvck sh*t, 9:30am" he cussed loudly and stared at the long stretch of vehicles in front . On getting to mokola roundabout, another driver veered off it's lane bashing the side mirror of chuks cab in the process. The driver who had no intention of letting such offence off easily ignored chuks impatient sighs and parked his car in a vertical position to prevent any movement in that lane and came down with anger hot enough to melt down Mount Kilimanjaro and charged at the offending driver. Chuks quietly came down, took a bike and went to his destination.. To be continued shortly |
INTRODUCTION Follow me as I take you through the intriguing, suspense filled and hilarious tale of chuks. Your comments, criticisms and corrections will be really appreciated, please keep them coming..
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the atmosphere was bright and beautiful, the yuletide feeling was everywhere and you could smell festival in the air, Christmas songs rings out from every corner of the semi urban settlement and everyone' seemed to be caught in the rat race of shopping for the yuletide.. Under the udara tree, Nkiru a petite, very light skinned damsel stood with her childhood friend adaugo. Nkiru was a belle, light skinned, will beautiful almond eyes that would melt the heart of the world strongest man, pointed nose as straight as an arrow, full red lips like the insides of udara fruit, she is also blessed with very ample blossoms which is well complemented with a well rounded hips which narrowed down to beautiful well shaped legs... "Adaugo, if you see him eh , he's so fine", Nkiru giggled excitedly to her childhood friend. "He said he's coming from obodo oyibo this December to see my parents" Nkiru closed her eyes and smiled as she thought about her mystery lover she's yet to see. "Ehen this is beautiful oo, this Facebook is really a blessing oo, even kachi said he's coming home as well from Ghana" Adaugo said happily. ONE WEEK AFTER! Nkiru was pacing the length and breadth of her father's parlour, with worried lines marring the beautiful features of her pretty face. Kene's number has refused to connect since the last time he called 3hrs ago that he was coming. She dialled his number a again for the 68th time, she was greeted by the same familiar "the MTN number you are trying to call is not reachable at the moment pls try again later". tone. She retouches her lipstick for the 15th time and adjust the creases on her gown, the gown she had worn specially for her mystery Facebook lover. "Hello", Nkiru said placing the phone on her left ear, "NK baby, please come outside and meet my kachi, we are at the gate" adaugo screamed! Excitedly... KENEEE¡!!!!!!!! " Nkiru screamed in despair at the Young tall , handsome and bearded man standing with adaugo..... "So you are kachi ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
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She walked down lonely road that led to the ghetto that housed the shack she called home, this is the norm everyday. After the close of work by 6pm, she stays an extra four hours to take stock and balance the ledgers. As she trudged home, she thought of what her life had become after the death of her parents in a fatal autocrash, living behind an unrecognizable charred remains of their bodies, she had to drop out of school, and saddled with the responsibility of looking after the twins, chidi and chima. A crack sound startles her out of her reverie, she pauses and look around fearfully, sensing no movement after about 20seconds, she continues her journey, while stealing furtive glances left right. She hasn't taken upto ten steps when she felt a hand clasped tightly on her mouth and another on her neck, she was been strangled! The soft firm breasts pressing on her back, implying that her assailant was a female. She swiftly uses the ball of her feet on the sheen of her attacker while following up with an elbow to the stomach. The attacker's grip loosens, giving her the opportunity of turning and headbutting her assailant, " who are you?" She asks, " stay away from Ekene" the lady replies while writhing on the tarred road. She opens her mouth to speak, when she feels the warm liquid from her back to her stomach followed by the sharp pain! She has been STABBED IN THE BACK! she closes her eyes in pain and open them again to see her best friend Kainene with a bloody knife helping the strange lady up and leaving her bleeding her life out! She thought about her loving Ekene, and how they would not walk down the aisle after the promises to each other, she thought about the twins and their welfare. With her last breath, she muttered Eke . ..en..e ..,.. and finally closed her eyes in death |
