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Regularly, we hustle trying to make more money every passing |
Bars, flows, swag and rhymes You are trash talking for the umpteenth time Or it trash rapping, wack rhyming; yo sh!t talent really knows no bounds It's a good thing I'm actually on another level I'm way ahead of you no matter how much you put the pedal to the metal A ghost? A writer? Nah, that sounds like something you could do You say you don't believe in ghosts, but after I end you Just know you gonna become one too. You say the world's yours, you say you from hood But niggas from the hood ain't so fake; they stay real - something you never could I was feeling so irritated today but your lines just made me laugh You're thinkin' you can be a real rapper with just money on your mind You better go home, sit back, practice and relearn this craft. I don't mean to despise but your stuff is way behind You're talking bout rats and cats but I only see one and he a pussy You better adapt to the fact that like a cat I never land on my back, do you feel me? It's funny how you call me kiddo but you're the one who's kidding Get yourself another hobby before your lil brain start bleeding |
Human nature can sometimes be confusing. One moment they want peace, the other, they want vawulence. |
You really love dem gunshots; how about you try shoot a real one. Watching you is like watching a sitcom; I wonder where the twist comes. The other day, a sailor but now you tryna use guns. You better ask about me, nigga; I'll chew you like a hoe chews gum. I wonder where you get dem lines from; It's most likely a museum. It's just the same old shit, same old wack you drop and now you wanna get some. I'm sorry I don't have none; my bars are real exclusive, son. You better watch how your mouth run. I might just bring in the horror like the nun Or maybe it's the lines I'm conjuring; but the devil didn't make me do it. I could have said happy new month, but right now my man Micheal says you need to beat it. |
Your rap's like fake drugs with expensive aesthetics; No matter the quantity, it still can't get you high. I'm on a pedestal, a pinnacle, the peak of exquisite bars and lines. Looking down on you, I wonder how you call yourself a rapper with dem nursery rhymes. Row, row, row your boat, you're barely even staying afloat. You're the goat actually, the one I swallow with beer down my throat. You better row that boat faraway before my eyes blink 'Cause if I see you goofin' around again, Imma make that boat sink. |
Nigga said he left me to drop lonely at the top. But the only thing I drop are heavy barz, I ain't talking dead weight. Your sh!t's too frail to make me fall off, that sh!t's too light weight. They say sometimes to win a man's gotta sin. But I say the worst lines gats be thrown in the bin. I really wish I could unsee this; Some wack stuff are better off unseen. You better strengthen your flows, try the gym Cause sometimes your rhymes aren't as cool as they, to you, might seem. |
Beautiful mistakes.... I make inside my head. She naked in my bed. And now we lie awake making beautiful mistakes. |
Took me a week to realise that your bars could be this weak Forget about the headshot, killshot, Imma give you a headbutt When you hear dem gunshots, flee nigga; It could really be your last bus stop I don't like to talk much, but what's up You spittin' lines like a parrot; re-up Your shit sucks Even if I were to steal bars, I'd just leave yours to rust My bars are finely made, you can see them shinnin; lustrous |
Sir is a very common honorific but that is common knowledge so no need for me to do oversabi. Afribabe has requested of me a discussion on the meaning of the word 'continuum'. *clears throat* This word, as I know it (or as I remember it) , means something that keeps on going in succession over time. Though this definition I've given may be more or less the actual meaning as it is the first time I'm using it in a sentence. I will have you know that when I was making that sentence in my head it just struck me as a word I could use (though, continuum was one of those words I knew but didn't know the meaning but only a context it could be used). I had checked the meaning that day but I can't seem to remember it all. I wrote this because I wanted to be real with you instead of acting like I am some human dictionary that knows it all. I'll go check the meaning of the word again, though. So I can be more accurate with my explanation next time (If there's one). 😱 I don type today's issue of 'Nairaland Grammarly' y'all should come and buy a copy. See as I just dey show scholar doings on top question🤣. Sorry for the long post. |
Watch your step boy, my line's not the one to cross I'll hit you, beat you, show you who's the boss I'll leave you all wheezy (wizzy) even Machala won't holla at you I can see the cold's getting to you like a frostbite but your rhymes still ain't cool You might wanna keep some of your rhymes refrigerated Your sh!t just couldn't stand the heat, it sublimated My bars are reinforced, barricaded Stronger than titanium even when adulterated Your rhymes just off point you need them recalibrated Don't make mad, I might just pull the big guns out Blood on the pavement |
I really apologize for ghosting. But I'm back now, so let's do this |
I just dropped in from a break, but still these lines don't bend I barbacue, fry, bake, I eat rhymes like a baby with sand It's early morning out here, cold and freezing but I still can bring in the heat All rhymes on deck, you can't defeat me even if you cheat You better come in loaded, caused when I pull a trigger all I hear is a corresponding click Shots fired, you lose balance cause this flow hits like a brick Prepare your stuff, make a piece, I need something chic |
Careente7 I'm alive and breathing. Officially back from my hiatus. |
Dudes just spittin' bars like 'balablue', just no coherence If you're in need of a couple clues, you could go ask yo parents |
Centuries, Millennia, years and years added to each other as time flows with an ever vibrant current. Past, present and future; mere cogs in the wheel of time's continuum. |
Careente7:Is this all you've got? Well as expected, we both know you can't cross that line You're trying to be a rapper still? You're rejected, stop with all these wack rhymes To be half as good as me you've got a long way to, so don't get boastful Tryna piece rhymes together, diss me? Stop, that will be just a handful I've got a lot on my plate today, don't give rhymes that are wack too So calm down and write, you're barely halfway, don't be the fool |
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Shoo motherf**ker shoo You ain't no rapper, you're just a one man motley crew You ain't paid no respect, you ain't paid your dues You tryna hold ground, le resistance? Time I finished up with you Fly motherf**ker fly Yo mama callin' go help her with the chicken fries Be calm, though you lost, don't fret or cry Practice a little more but for now it's bye |
I just read the previous updates and I must say they've been enlightening. It reminds me of the time when I told my friends that if prostitution was to be made legal there should be an age limit on it to avoid child prostitution. Well, they just laughed it off and one of them told me something that just summarises that the whole stuff's just bad and not advisable. This was after I watched one movie like that. But after that I usually think that prostitutes may have been my contingency plan to sexual starvation in the absence of a girlfriend. Well, who knows if I might eventually do so. I'm just living life through with that in mind but the previous updates bring a new perspective on that. Keep on dropping updates like this from time to time. They really help a person reflect on matters we often avoid. #€DD¥$ILV£R |
Rough times helps a man to discover and work on his weaknesses in order to live above them and evolve. |
Beast in my booth huh? Listen up I'm about to murder you like we do the turkeys for Christmas Stop playing Anthony Joshua I can only see stars with sexy senoritas Kicking your ass around I'm about to do more than a hat trick Forget making bars you're only good with LEGO bricks To think you can hold me with a cheap ass boot, dude you need to reboot You're soft crayfish, I'll dry and eat you up. Yum! sweet seafood Rap's the girl we're after, you're just playing Hercules While I on the other hand, I'm giving her cool ease Man you ain't getting in the picture just so you'll say cheese Next time you'd try to rap, I'll teach you, just say please |
Xavier5 what's up. So I know it has been a while but I'm back (For now😁). The story's going pretty well. Well as to your questions, I think Xavier and Precious could end up as lovers and get married. They might also end up as lovers and before their growing relationship is even enjoyed, Sylvie will end Precious like the grand 6feet below (This seems plausible because of the drama you said the story entailed). Although it doesn't necessarily need to be Sylvie that kills her. Precious could die of cancer or some hereditary killer disease. Another thought I have is that Xavier and Precious' story could end with them breaking up or with Xavier marrying Sylvie for some reason yet to be known. That's for the first question. As per the second, I am rooting for no one at the moment. Sylvie seems likes a narcissistic woman who isn't satisfied with no for an answer, though you could say the same about Precious. But Precious seems likely to change due to her future encounters with Xavier. But this doesn't mean I'm rooting for her either. Finally, I don't see anything wrong with the story. I'd say you should do well to introduce more characters that are interrelated if this story is going to connect many other stories together. I just hope you don't let us wait too long for the eroctics 😈😈😈😈😈. Before I forget, in reply to your question as to my course of study, saying "what course?" would be an elevation to my educational status as of the moment. I'm sure you get what I mean🙂. |
I'm sorry I'm late I should have finished you earlier But count it as your luck that I was facing some barriers Although I wouldn't mind beatin' yo ass in arrears Man don't compare me with curry cause he already in my stew When I'll pull up to your block there may be many but in the end just a few You feeling the heat Careente7? That's my firepower You can't shoot down no b!tch, you just throwing firecrackers You just think you're the bomb but no one's feeling the shockwave You remind me of Alvin and the chipmunks so tell me who's your Dave |
What's up!!! Careente7 I'm back and the turn's yours. BTW you didn't have to waste that guy so much some flies are best ignored. But I could say you needed something to pass the time. Anyways it's your turn and I'm ready. |
Xavier5:Okayyyyyyyyyy.......I had no idea😳 Well, now I know. Guess I have more questions to ask my dad. In other news, my exams were mathematical-my brain wan blow🤯. But your story sha cool it down. Looking forward to more updates. |
You're doing great with the story. I just finish reading the updates and the story actually is an exam stress reliever. Although I'd like to point out some errors. quote author=Xavier5 post=124766063]CHAPTER FIVE Dr. Xavier Clinton Uweh, the first child in a family of two children. His parents are Mr. Clinton Uweh, a Nigerian from Akwa Ibom State, Mbo L.G.A to be precise, and you got it, (Oro) by tribe,[/quote]You see what's in the bracket is Oron and not Oro although there is the possibility that this was just typo but I just had to be sure you knew incase it wasn't. Mbo na my L.G.A. Ubotuong Enwang to be precise. Fire away Xavier 💯💯💯 |
Careente7 I jus wan let you know say I fit nor show face for NL for a while but I nor go forget our rap battle. Just write your rhymes and anticipate the return of the young teacher ![]() #€DDI$ILV£R Out |
Xavier5:Truth be told I have not even started due to NEPA and their play play and besides I'm writing exams and as my brain dey overheat I nor go even think story wey I go take relax. But I'll be done with exams this Friday. Nor fear I go show for high table. |
It ain't bout yo age, it just a number, it's bout yo class Look at when I bring in the heat, it's lit cause it's a blast Face it gramps you're outclassed, I bet you need a diaper change I'm making neck breaking rhymes , it just makes you scream in pain Well no pain no gain, it's a lesson, but you're learning the hard way It's okay, really the result's still gonna be the same But in the end you'll simply quit the game |
Somebody praizzzzzzzzzzzz the lord Xavier5 how long were we gonna wait for this story. From time to time I go dey check your profile, dey check when last you come online like say I be FBI agent wey dey monitor criminal. Nor worry bring anything, updates wey I dey see don appease me already. Well, it sha is good to have the xav-carrier on the move again. I go soon join una. Make una wait make I find my ladder that xav-carrier nor go dey let tire touch ground as say fuel don cost |
Man you think you give me shivers But damn! I'm the f***ing fever I keep giving fake Gs headaches, but they don't know in the rap game there ain't no medics You're giving me layers of fake rap like cosmetics,thing is rap gave you insomnia now you need anaesthetics I'm at the top of the food chain check the statistics I'm busy making guys like you chicken out like drumsticks (chicken legs) Oh! I almost forgot about that lesson Don't get me wrong, I'm a promise fulfilling person Welcome to the rap class with Eddysilver You're here to get your rap knowledge wider Today's lesson is on rap principles So man read closely, go get your spectacles Let's start with a simple theory, let's see If a real gee is called a fake gee by an actual fake gee It doesn't mean the fake is real or the real, fake But it's left for the real gee to prove his gee status Not just rappin' and dissin' eating rap like cake But showing the fake gee how much he's barred off Fake Gs like you can't hold a candle to me Cause my worst is the best you can never reach Keep that in mind and get off my shoulder Get the fvck out my class, lesson's over |
Careente7:Sharp! Man must chop Nor go dey overthink. Do your own make God e own. |

that xav-carrier nor go dey let tire touch ground as say fuel don cost