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Missmossy:
Keep it coming,try to space your work and punctuate it also. Thumbs up.

tanks I would keep that in mind.

Chapter 2
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Life is not a bed of rose as they say for me because in my line business(what are you thinking begging of course) there are some times in which i won't eat for someday only too be drinking water as food,many at times i will be running from custom officer,the police,the thugs. Life wasn't easy even sometimes the heavy sun will be hitting on me,dust,rain,cold,sickness of adaptation just name it. In fact noting in these world is easy.
There was a day i was doing my normal business,sing,talk,pray for people to drop some change a BUS suddenly stopped in the middle of the road and a man steeped out to check out the bus the passengers started coming down from the bus an began to rain curse's on the driver,all these while i was just looking.
Passenger 1:so you wan make I go work late abi,make them give me query again abi, he no go work for you.
Passenger 2:guy give me my change make i commot here go enter another bus,I get interview by 9:00 and these na 8:00 road still far.
Passenger 3: you think say you fit use your problem hold me here abi,God punish you my money before I scatter your head.
Passenger 4:you know dey hear say give us our money ni or drive us commot for here.
Different ranting going on while the man kept telling them to '' CAlM DOWN MAKE I GO CHECK WETIN DEY DO THE B....."Before he could finish his statement he received a clap
Passenger 4:come down bawo. They started beating him like say na thief.
I felt if i didn't help the man now he might die there cause the beating was too extra much.
Me: excuse me everybody,first of all nobody answered me until i shouted on top of my voice before i gain their attention.
Passenger 3and4:yes wetin you dey fine here you know go commot here.
I did not mind the question but I asked them my own question ''what is the problem here"?
Passenger:it is either we collect our change our he drive us too our destination,abi I know talk well,every body answered yes o
Me:did you allow him to check what wrong with car before you started panel beating him. No one answered,i went to check the fault of the car saw it was the cap plug that removed so he fixed it,just because of this they want to kill him. I told the driver to start the car but the driver was already unconscious i offered to drop them at there location to which they agreed cause that was what they where interested in at that moment. I dropped all passengers at their location and drove straight to the hospital for the driver's treatment paid the bill,dropped the driver keys with the nurse who assured me he will be fine then i left.
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*Nobody knows tomorrow and giving is better than receiving.

EPISOLD 2:

Chuks:son don't die for me ok
Mike:and you too dad. They both hugged
Chuks:ok go too the left toward the sitting room,the kitchen,and the safe room,while I go upstairs ok
Mike:ok dad
Chuks:so on the count of 3. 1,2,3
On the way
Mike was on the stair's he saw one of the rubbers (which was the boss)at the sitting room sitting on the sofa.
hmmm,you know I don't waiting what took you so long, he said without looking at mike's face. Mike was too surprise that he did not know when boss was 2 step away from him. He regained himself and asked are you speaking too me?
Boss:oh it you mike,where is your dad
Mike:who sent you
Boss:well since you gonna die soon it D.Don,instantly his hand moved trying to stab mike but mike saw it on time made a swift move hitting the boss hand in the process so the dagger fell of his hand.
Boss regained himself after the fast unseen move said ''I see you got some skills, drop the gun let fight like real men,mike knew better than too drop his gun and fight but has a plan.
Mike:ok at the count of 3,1,2 before he could say 3 he rolled towards boss while boss has already given a blind shot (which luckily was also a silencer)stabbed him with the dagger he shook away from boss hand which boss couldn't see because it dark only with the help of a night glass mike was able to see all his moves.
Bossafter falling down with shock and surprise on his face)hmm I see your father taught you well
Mike:more than you could ever imagine. He grinned
Boss:well the at gol ood,he winced in pain till he breath his last. Mike let out a sigh,(who is d.don and what connection did he have with his dad)was his thought,while going towards the safe room he saw three men there at the front of the room trying too gain entrance,he moved behind the wall thinking of how he will take out three men, he threw his biro in a long distance toward the other direction.
Thief 1:guy use your phone go check that side,way the sound dey come from 2 of una,the two left to check it out leaving the other who was looking left and right incase if he could hear the sound of someone is coming. Mike saw this as an advantage so gave him a shot on his head,he fell instantly
Thief 2:guy you hear that sound like persin way fall
Thief 3: I hear am make we go check am. He whispered: john john john no answer. Mike as a sharp guy shun then shhuush,it seem to calm them but they were still coming closer to verify, he tried his luck by giving two fast shot surprised the two fell at once, he wiped of the sweat on his forehead.
He felt a cold steel at the back of his head, the voice said in a thick harsh tone ''DON'T MOVE"


To be continued................

Chapter 2 here................

Jollyana:
its been good so far. But can you please define each character and whenever someone is saying something please put it in quotation. And try spacing the paragraphs. But I kind of like it

TANKS, i would put that in mind.

PLS PLS PLS i need your view's,opinion,comment on this story.Tanks EEC

INTRO:
CHUCK's WILLAMS
DPO,Police officer
35 years

YEMI WILLAMS
Botique owner
30

MIKE WILLAMS
Student
18

SARAH WILLAMS
Student
16

PATRICK (D.Don)
Drug dealer
40

BOSS
THUG
29

RICHARD
Drug dealer and humantraficcing

MADAM SUCK
love-vendor and prosituite

2002
8:00pm
(Running up to greet his dad)daddy,daddy,daddy how was your day mike asked showing his teeth,o mike you never cease to amaze me anyway's my day was fine Mr chuks replied look allover where is your mom and sarah he asked?
MIKE:Both are cooking super
CHUKS:let me go up to take a shower am coming back
MIKE: ok dad let me also finish killing the monster in my contra 4
CHUKS:he laughed ok (he loves any thing action God know's what he is gonna become in future)he thought while going to his room.
IN THE KITCHEN
MR's WILLAM'S:sarah it's seems your dad is back let hurry up
SARAH:ok mom
In 30 min's all parties were in the dinning except mike still playing his contra 4
MR's WILLAM'S: mike drop that pad and come over here now
MIKE:give me a second I just wanna kill the boss
CHUK's:will you drop that pad and come over here
MIKE:am coming
Sarah walk's up to the tv socket and switch it off
MIKE:jjjjeeesssuuusss are u growing banana's, what was that for can't you see I was about to kill him
MR WILLAM'S:will you shut up and come over here now
CHUK's:that ok don't ever use foul language again ok
MIkE:but dad
MR WILLAM'S:oookkk
MIKE: yes dad
CHUK's:let pray ''IN JESUS NAME FAT........."
MIKE:did u hear that I think someone is trying to open the door look there is some at the window look with style
hmmmm he saw it so he said everybody get quickly mike to the connection room i would soon join you there,wil take sarah to the safe room.With min's the table was empty while the door was open
Boss:spread out I need him alive am sure he has seen us because the food here is still hot so expect any surprises, am waiting for you here ok they all chanted yes boss they spread out
Chucks and mike were at the control room looking at the monitor
CHUK's: they are 10 in number, those thing's you normally play in your game you will play it now but these is real,can you handle a gun
MIKE:yes from my game and practice
CHUK's: ok these is not a game but it real, are u afraid
MIKE : no dad and collected the silencer from him with a bluetooth and night glass to see in the dark
Chuck typed a password on the keyboard and all light were out with the exit door's securely locked
Boss: that nice come out am waiting for you here.He said with a gun and a dagger in his hand............
TO BE CONTINUED

1. The lone wolf 2. my life as a book 3. Agony of been a first born

PROLOGUE
This is the story of an orphan boy who father died in an accident on his way to work and mother died of a stray bullet.The in-law's sent him away from home thinking it was he and that killed both of his parent and brought ill-luck to them,what will I do,where will I go from here,how will my future be ?
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As I was wondering and lost in thought of where too go suddenly gunshot sound was coming from the other street,my hearth beat skipped i ran as my leg's could carry me I kept on running in the dept of the night till i was 5 street away from the sound of gun shoot then i saw a bridge i stoped under it to take a sit in other to catch my breath,i started crying thinking about what had happened but after sometime i promised myself no matter what i was going to survive. I looked around me i could see people of different category sleeping helplessy on the floor both young,old,teens with the aid of the motors passing by i saw a carton i placed it properly and laid my head down awaiting for the new day.
Suddenly,i started hearing voices,horns,murmmurs I then realised that i was in the mist of beggers begging for arms with my stomach greeting me so i stood up went nearer to the road and started begging not because i love it or i feel like doing it but because i was hungry badly.
Me-pls, help me with any thing i am hungry and thirsty,i continued saying it with some kind people responding by dropping some naira notes. So life started for me or should I say business started I eat,sleep,buy few bend down select when I have chance I go to the near by mechanic to learn little things and life goes on.
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****IN OTHER TO BUILD A SOLID HOUSE A IS NEEDED

PLS,people this is my first story i will highly welcome you comment,suggestion,views.Thanks

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