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your update is too short, try to improve on it

[color=#006600][/color] seated gently waiting for the main dish

it not good o see as u leave us here with out any update

holuwanoisy111:
Please where can I read literatures or stories on any other website apart from nairaland . guy pls I need your help

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BIA,bros drop something for us na it has been long

Nice write up, expecting more from you.

The other design of my story was great.TANKS@MREXPLORER.I would need another design of my other story,TITLED: The Story Of A Begger,by Eze Emmanuel

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EPISOLD ................... 4

ChUCK'S POV

Why would don send his boy's to kill me and my family and how did mike know about D.Don how was he even able to kill boss hmm mm he sighs as he different thought were going around his head,he arrived at Patrick house (D.Don)with half mind.
Chuck's: were is your god dam boss,he said with anger
Guard: let me ca......
D.DOn: there is no need of calling me and mr chuck's who were you referring to as god dam hun ,he said with a calm evil smile.
Chuck's was now feeling uncomfortable with fear of uncertainties, so why did you send your boys to come after me and my family he shouted with a forming anger.
D.Don: hey watch your mouth you are in my house and you will obey my command.
Chucks:and if I don't what will you do he shouted.
D.Don:I don't need to tell you what I will do he said still smiling,why don't you explain why you size my goods after i paid you the money you requested hmmm.
Chucks by now was sweating profusely cause he sized the goods cause of greed and he can't tell greed.
D.Don you can't talk now .He shouted angrily
Chucks:you see ehn... i ehn.. ehn...ehn ...u... know ehn
D.Don:do you know how much I have lost cause of that goods,#1millon, he spoke angrly.Don't worry am going to kill every member of your family to the extent they would wish and beg i kill them instantly.
Chuck's was now cold as ice and sweating more than before with a wet pant.Pls any thing you want me to do for you I would do it pls don't near my family.
D.Don:john give am red ticket.
Instantly there was a hole on chucks head,even D.Don was scared but has to form boss.
D.Don:go and get me his family NOW.
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TANKS,it amazeing

MRS EXPLORER, cool evening, still waiting for your reply

MrsExplorer:
you are next

Tanks still waiting patiently

A COOL DAY TO YOU ALL. Mine is BLOOD CLASH BY EZE EMMANUEL.A story about a cool family that was scattered a night by robbers but unraveled many secret later on when mike joined the force.The sister which mike thought was dead joined the robbers who killed their family(by force actually).At the end it going to be a BLOOD CLASH.THE FORCE(the brother) VERSUS THE ROBBER(the sister).

PLS,on the story so far any suggestions and review.

Chapter 3 -------------------)THE STRUGGLE TO SURVIVE
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I have been in these business for almost 4 year's now,I have gotten use to the life now,I do not usually stay in place for more than a week because ''THE FEAR OF POLICE IS THE BEGINING OF WISDOM"
One a very bright afternoon while the ministry was flowing(you know what I mean if not go back to chapter 1) from nowhere un uniformed police officer surrounded us,they started beating us parking us into there van then zoom of to the station and locked us up for no reason. Na there another life start 4 months gone still inside the cell but I was not pre abi na post disturbed because, it was then who provide the food(morning,afternoon,evening) and shelter and there is noting for me too lose,nobody to cry for me,nobody to look for me just noting I do not even worth 5 naira. 7 months gone a new D.P.O was replaced according to what i heard from the ''DEM SAY, I HERE SAY" on the 8 month I inhaled fresh air.
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Chuck's:so these is how you behave when an enemy is pointing a gun at you, hmmm?
Mike:dad?
Chuk's:yeah it me,hope you weren't shot and you guarded the safe room well?
Mike:yeah,i took 4 guys down with 5 bullet and 2 remaining.
Chuck's:that good mine was six,now listen properly, enter the safe room from there to the roof leading to the garage,then drive your mom and sarah straight to ketu,our control house fast but safe,while I drive now to somewhere to sort out some things. If you did not see me by 7am tomorrow be the man of the house all my document and all you need too know is at ketu. So good luck.
Mike:dad what do you mean by that and do you know who is been referred to as ''D.DON"?.Chucks was shocked to the bone on how his son knows that name but he was sure he has never mentioned that name in the house,mike who has already seen his face now confirmed his suspicion,chucks said ''NO" looking away from his son.
Mike:dad i think there is something you are hiding away from me,looking at his dad suspiciously.
Chuck:do what I said earlier on and stop asking questions,he then started to walk out ,noting is hidden under the sun mike said too himself as he walked into the safe room too see his mother shaking in fear but surprisingly sarah is playing a car racing video game.

Supersuave2:
my 2kobo: checkout story writers' profiles, they must have completed a story or more in the past

TANKS,but at least there should be a page where someone can check.

How will i be able to find some completed stories cos to me it only when i check page 1-5 i would see some stories and i can't load to the end page to see the rest.So pls any suggestion on how to find some completed stories.