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niel63:
Esosa! I no go too praise you make your head no swell.
But you try. Your efforts go finally improve your skills las las.

But see wetin I get to talk.
1. Wetin green, blue, red, black and plenty plenty unmatched colors dey do for your portfolio.
See ehn, in designs, there's needs to have a clear contrasts between your color pallets. You need to blend the colors so it is suiting, well enough for the eyes to feel relaxed rather than get it all confused on what to focus on.
If you're to use green, use green and if na blue you wan use, use blue well well.
This make me think most of your codebase are copied and not copied well. Abeg try improve on your color schemes. Be creative in matching the colors and for a black/dark website, you need to make the colors a bit more subtle... instead of the heavy much you have there.

2. I dey really try to see the animation wey you dey talk about because wetin full your site na basic transition. An animation is supposed to captivate a readers/viewers attention with the kind of effect it puts out. Apart from your menu slides, wey still dey stiff in a way, there aren't much to see here in terms of animation.

3. Why in God's name is you menu clicks not closing the menus? I'm viewing on mobile so I don't know how it looks on a pc. However, have you heard of the term "mobile-first" design?. Tentatively speaking, people would often visit your page from a mobile device.

4. I notice say you add pidgin. However, you don't seem fluent in writing the pidgin. You just wan cause confusion for readers head.


Overall, I'd rate you 6.5/10

Read more on view transition, look into font systems, also, why does your loading screen look like the old Nigerian movies montage (you know that scene where dem dey try write movie title )

In all, good job. Like I said... your efforts will always improve your skills.
I see say you use Framer for the basic animation you could have done with simple css or probably tailwind.

Again, good job. Well done.

You mention my efforts will improve my skills and personally this quote is something that really spoke to me because if I don't try out new things I won't get such an amazing critique. I just saved your comment so I can use it to make it better. I really appreciate the time you put into this

Algorithmic:
Eseosa, you tried Ò jare. I don't do Web dev, i would have showed you areas you need to improve on but to get a broader view and constructive criticism about your page, you can also try sub reddits on reddit, you can even do DMs too which is a win win if you're job hunting already.

Thank you very much for the encouragement bro,I am currently still a computer science student so I'm just building websites for small businesses to get hands on experience

Algorithmic:

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chukwuebuka65:
You try. But your design skills needs improvement. Also, you need a better copy for this your portfolio.

Personally I am learning everyday so if you have any areas you would like to point out please let me know

Dsquare70:
I hope you know web development is beyond this Joke you developed?

Web development is a broad field and I am so grateful I went into it

ExcelDev:
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