obehiD:


The truth is that I have gotten a request like this before, and I've passed on it, because I'm just not a good drawer. To be honest, I haven't really spent that much time thinking about what the uspecs look like. For some reason my brain doesn't work like that. So, when I read/write a story I never try to picture a character's face. But, I can try to describe what I think of when I talk about it. So, the uspec's face is like a regular human face but remove our two eyes and replace it with one center eye (right above the nose). And then depending on how old the uspec is, there would be eye sockets formed on the perimeter of their face. This could be evenly distributed around the outer perimeter (one on forehead, one on chin below the mouth, and then two on either side, maybe cheek and on the same level as the center eye). Or it could be clustered, like three eyes on one cheek and three on the other (I just thought about this and it just seems so funny in my head). Or it could be something else. Definitely, the position of the outer eyes form in different places for uspecs (its unique to the uspec), and only the center eye is in the same location for all of them. Anyway, I hope this helps. If there are any artists among us, maybe they can help us with a sketch of what I've described







Well....we shall see

Scary and Uglyful hahaha. Damn!

maynation:
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Obehidryte

Funny

okay Nebud let's see how you go from now on. Thanks Obehid

decoderdgenius:


LOL... Softy... I believe I understand why Nebud behaved the way it did. It has been through so much pain and suffering that all it can give is the same. Now that an Uspec has shown it that love, of course I am sure there is bound to be some changes in our dear Nebud.
One things I like here in this thriller is the absence of women. It seems pure to me. No girl in the picture to make an Uspec act stupidly. Lol... My opinion though.

Easy the ladies are coming for you bro

Nebud sure got me displeased in the course of this story and that left me in a 'no comment' state all this while.
Obehid I apologize if it displeasing to have taken that action, I know writers adores commentaries vet much as it helps in story building and organizing. I have quite a sensitive personality and I see literature as part of my being. So many characters especially the protagonists I see with difference, when any misbehaves I kind off take it personal and Nebud did that for quite a long period. Although things have been set right all thanks to Arexon, I never disliked that uspec much ever since the adventure into the Aurelion, I suspected there are more to it than meets the eyes immediately they stepped into the canoe. I like smartness and smart characters be they antagonists or otherwise just the sheer cleverness is attractive.

The story so far have been deep revealing many underlying secrets opening more understanding to the extreme politics of the Uspec world. It is quite similar to what happens in the umani world. The greed and lust over power is overwhelming. Abuse of power and many more. This I can say is the most interesting part of this story.

Now Nebud knows Arexon and its the intentions better than it did earlier. I am glad at the same time I am still worried. This story is filled with many mind games such that it is quite difficult to predict what happens next.

So Nebud been assigned to seek out the last brio leaves me to wonder, why Nebud? Arexon knows that the lit Okun does no harm to Nebud and that leaves a reason why it chose to send it. Are Arexon's intentions right? I can't say but I really hope it doesn't lead to another under toned plot to exploit Nebud. It is a mind game as I have stated earlier, so anything and many things can happen and may happen.

Just keeping tabs on Arexon, although I trust it a little. Nebud needs to become more smarter and trust its instinct than trust more words of another uspec. It being flexible this time is good at least it can move its plans with more pretense than it did before.

I am always with you Obehid. Thanks for your efforts to satisfy our deep cravings for a good story. 'More grease to your elbow' ( still wondering if this phrase is correct, but I am using it anyways ) Thanks

Larry my man! Thanks for being amazing bro

Nebud is becoming too unsmart for my liking. What does it aim to achieve by being so nonchalant? I understand its reason but right now it is annoying. It needs to be better than n it is right now. Anyways Obehid, just keep it coming

Nebud be kiaful, I yam warming you now!

obehiD:


Thank you! Yes, I do have some of my works published on OkadaBooks.

Obehid I propose you post your stories on ficool app. Its easier to access and also pays with extra credits earned from readers who wish to gift you coins and other gifts. Try it out ok?

Interesting, is Nebud about to be promoted to a don? Hmm, let's watch n see

obehiD:


I haven't finished the story yet. When it's done I can send it to you if you still want to read it.

What is an 'if'? Is that English? Haba! I definitely wanna read it babe kimon!

I believe Musa will build an empire of wealth with what has been handed to it, Nebud will not recognize what it owns by that time.

As for Yakubo, I don't have any comment yet, just I know Nebud will build an army that will be loyal to it.

Better story as always.

Pls Obehid, I have been unable to log into my okadabooks account, I need to read your earlier posted short story. I don't want to open a new account yet. How do we go about this?

Obehid o. What are you doing again? What a fine start. I am going there right away.

Nebud made me proud by not giving the imperial and Arexon the satisfaction of seeing him cry in pain. Great Nebud will live. I believe the uspec who brought it in admired it's strength and endurance. I admire them too.

Thank you obehid for this wonderful update

Amazing book larrysun, simply amazing! Hahaha, I am so in love with your writing prowess Larry. Damn!
If you haven't gotten this maria the sequence then you are missing big time.

Nice one larry

Twodaful wow!

Dathypebruv:
*** THE END ***

what an experience for jamal ;C

Cc Fazemood

It is terrible but I love the end. Jamal being the villain now is somehow cool

Jamal, the nemesis now! Hmm, the result of excess uncontrollable dark power.

Nice story bro, hope to see more from you brother

Nebud reaction is expected an uspecs had to demand respect to be respected. If the kaiser knew it was lying, why then try to use pansophy? It lacks merit it this aspect. Nebud should even go ahead and stab it's hand.

Manus is biting more than it can chew, I hope it chokes on its greed soonest.

All road leads to Nebuds victory. That's all I have to say.

Thanks Obehid.

decoderdgenius:

True. An uspec loyal to Nebud would be most welcome. He has so much enemies already.

Infact eh! I dey fear for the thing o

Hmmm, I find something off in this port
My mind is quite worried about what this port represents. Musa is my favorite so I definitely worry out his safety. I just hope they come out without much hurdle.

The uspec who interviewed Nebud is smart, I like it. Obehid add a loyal Uspec to Nebud's squad. Please

1daful update dear. Thanks

Dathypebruv:
Obehid why do i feel this update wasn't long enough to satiate my reading vigorous appetite...........

Well all these journeys and undertaking by nebud are extremely necessary i feel so
for him (Nebud) to become the 'Mighty Undead' he needs first off to have all his outer eye sockets filled so as to gain 'Understanding,Spectra (in variant form) and if possible Pansophy'

The 'Voice' which speaks to Nebud has a really strong link to the Narrative of this tale and whomever (he/she/it) is will definitely define Nebuds fate
@fazemood this brings jamal to mind


But still we dey siddon look make we see wetin go happen

Yeah! Going now to check if there is an update

obehiD:


I'm sorry, I don't think I answered your previous question well. So, yes, this is the fourth book in the series and Crimson Night is the first. But, what's actually happening is that I'm trying to get the two books that come between (White Sight: The Awakening, and White Sight: The In between) published. I previously had both of these stories here on Nairaland, but I had to take them down as part of the publication process. As of this point, I'm working with my publishers on editing White Sight: The Awakening, so the book won't be released until the editing is done, and the publishers publish it. All the books in the White Sight trilogy are under consideration for publishing, so I cannot make any of them available until it's officially published by the publishers. Since this spectral existence story is in the spectral existence and not really part of the human part, it's not part of White Sight, and that's why I can post it here, but I can't release any of the White Sight books until they are published, and the expected publication date for White Sight: The Awakening is late next year.

Good. These novel deserves better patronage than free readings here. Let us know when they are published. I will love to own a hard copy of each series.

Dathypebruv:


@fazemood i kinda draw a contrast with jamal and nebud with hollowed eyes lol who's gonna be having a new awakening tomorrow Behind might need to see this ...........
Thanks for drawing me to this thread,nice work op this finale gonna be GRAND

Yeah Obehid needs to see this story, she and this author are astonishing writers. Been following this story from the day it started just that o.p wasn't a constant updater, so I abandoned it. Now I am back n the thrill is still here

Wow wow wow! Amazing. Nice trick Jamal. Op thanks

A very heart touching scene, Nebud has gotten what it was demanded of, I hope in the future Marcinus will come to know the reason behind Nebud's supposed betrayal.

Didn't know when I finished today's update, be like I am the one acting Nebud.

Obehid, how powerful will Nebud become now it has taken the eye? I hope it is now strong enough to chlenge fajarhomo?

rentalghost:
Is this story published (officially)?
Sometimes I feel we are enjoying it too much for free.

Yes true. In fact very true