Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 4:13pm On Oct 04, 2015 |
Coogar  where at thou? Man U dey chop am from my boys. . |
Rap Battles › Re: Darkrebel Vs Liricyst by gottoboy(m): 8:47am On Oct 04, 2015 |
liricyst: Gottoboy....i fall your hand? Instead make you help me pick my fallen body up. Such a goo friend you are. Lmao Lol!  |
Rap Battles › Re: Independence Day Aftermath Bloodbath: Sinizia Vs. Llaykorn by gottoboy(m): 9:57pm On Oct 03, 2015 |
Am not a typing long enthusiast, but to be candide I'll give both battlers this advice below, no editing or modifying. GIYAZZ: Personals - 1 point Null (Didn't feel both. If you wanna do personals, you dig up your opponent's dirt and bring something fresh that can sting. Personals are punchlines that touch the heart )
Opener - 1 point llaykorn (Though nice ideas from both sides. But llaykorn triumphed because he was consistent with the rhymes. While Sinizia at the other hand destroyed his opener with his weak rhymes. A bar shouldn't come with two different rhyme schemes. If you wanna do "coming" you should flow with rhymes like "popping" "jugging" "shocking" etc . . . You don't just switch and bring something like "biscuit" to the table, It'd ffuck up your rhymes. Unless you're doing double rhyming like popping/ more cash/ ffucking/ your ass/ . . . . Get it?
Rhymes - 2 points llaykorn (I give this to llaykorn not because he was perfect. But he was more consistent and polished compared to his opponent. They both had fall outs, but Sinizia's was more noticeable. Y'all got some work to do here o)
Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points Sinizia (He brang more to the table. But llaykorn brang some nice similes though. That 'shake me' line was nice.)
Punchlines - 3 points TIE (Punchlines aplenty. All they lacked were rhymes, build-ups and the right words to finish work. Sinizia and llaykorn. Y'all know about ebonics? Sometimes you gasto scrap the big grammars, correct english and sound like a street ninja. Rap battling requires street-knowledge, wittiness and book knowledge. Put all this in a script and your punchlines will sound sleek.)
Flow - 1 point llaykorn (Sinizia, stop stop stop! Just stop with the stretching!! You are not learning right at all!! If you keep stretching like that, you will lose battles through out your stay here! That sshit ain't cool at all.)
Wordplays - 2 points Null (Like Max said: "Wonky wordplays"
Closer - 1 point Null (Didn't feel both. Two wonky wordplays.)
That's llaykorn 4 Sinizia 2
MVGT: llaykorn
PS: llaykorn: work on your choice of words, filter your ideas, work on your build-ups and do a little fine-tuning on your rhymes and you are on your way.
Sinizia: COMPRESS YOUR LINES, work on your choice of words, work on your rhymes, filter your ideas, work on your build-ups and you are on your way.
#Peace |
Music/Radio › Re: A Song a Nairalander Was Featured In by gottoboy(op): 9:42pm On Oct 03, 2015*. Modified: 12:09pm On Nov 04, 2015 |
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Rap Battles › Re: Independence Day Aftermath Bloodbath: Sinizia Vs. Llaykorn by gottoboy(m): 1:40pm On Oct 03, 2015 |
Mvgt- Tie. . |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 9:32pm On Sep 30, 2015 |
Reygenuis wining  |
Music/Radio › Re: A Song a Nairalander Was Featured In by gottoboy(op): 8:22am On Sep 30, 2015 |
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Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 8:17am On Sep 30, 2015 |
sinizia: ThePrekky won Tutu, his opener alone was scorching!! Same here. |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 7:03am On Sep 30, 2015 |
Mikuz thankz.
Glaciers bars on rg not inspiring at all, have you read it  |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 12:34am On Sep 30, 2015 |
Ojoawo. |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 10:46pm On Sep 29, 2015 |
llaykorn: Gottoboy 
You travel go West Germany? Since all these years! Been around. . . @Mikuz awfa abeg help me with that site for downloading rapbattles, wap something.mobi I don forget, please I need put myself back, I dey off radar now. . . |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 9:47pm On Sep 28, 2015 |
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Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 6:57pm On Sep 28, 2015 |
JigsawKillah: i should be asking you sef you get babe? So if me and you stand one on one, for your mind na you babe go pick? Back to your question, Yes I get, my whatsapp dp get proof.  |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 6:18pm On Sep 28, 2015 |
darkenedrebel: let's wait & see Hope you not underating me tho! Reyginus: No it is not. It is only stretching when you do a five line in a stanza when the idea is to make a quatrain. You can call it another thing but definitely not a quatrain. Okay, better! JigsawKillah: why you dey do like say na devil settle down curse you? please leave me alone. . . i didn't snatch your girl You fit snatch person girl  |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 3:56pm On Sep 28, 2015 |
Reyginus: It has nothing to do with your rhyming style. A quatrain is a quatrain it can never be beyond or under four lines. Sorry! am a fan of internal rhyming, i do more 5lines to 4lines. Is that stretching too? |
Rap Battles › Re: Darkrebel Vs Liricyst by gottoboy(m): 1:07pm On Sep 28, 2015 |
obainojazz: You've not won... elymax have not voted Hausa man will say Who Ban Suu  Lyricyst fall my hands |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 11:49am On Sep 28, 2015 |
Reyginus: You still don't get it. Every line stanza in poetry has a name. There is couplet, 2, tercet, 3, Quatrain, 4, Quantain(Limerick), 5, sestet, 6, and so on. So, the moment a stanza exceeds four lines it is no longer a Quatrian. Err battler has his or her own style, it depends on your rhyming style. . |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 11:24am On Sep 28, 2015 |
darkenedrebel: I have heywhizzy, idivine, obesemf, limerick, & liricyst in a bodybag for 2015
Jigsawkillah & you are next on my hitlist... after that, I will go a long hiatus then return to face ibime & coogar before i finally retire ...so that the young can grow  Let me follow up after Mikuz! Whah ya say? |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 8:38pm On Sep 27, 2015*. Modified: 9:03pm On Sep 27, 2015 |
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Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 6:53pm On Sep 27, 2015 |
darkenedrebel: episode 1 of season 2 got released on Thursday or so.. go check it out..
Penguin die ke? Penguin is now in charge of organised crimes in Gotham..
the only person we aren't sure is alive is Fish mooney Seriously? Season 2 e1 out? |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 9:34am On Sep 27, 2015 |
ELYMAXiimus: lol. So you been wan call me for phone tell me sey i be G.O.A.T? I'm flattered ...
But seriously i busy, na hin cause am. I couldn't have ducked. Plus, i thought i said i'll be back, that i needed to finish up some stuffs. Thank me for no giving him your KapaCode Ksslib: Just watched Conceited vs Dumbfounded...
Dammmmn! Thats like the best battle ive ever watched. Wicked bars laced with rib cracking humour... Choi!  I liked Dumbfounded jokes tho. . |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 2:32pm On Sep 26, 2015 |
Alexpissu: This what happens when you place responsibility on "so called vets" as judges....I believe even newbies are knowledgeable and sensitive to what good bars is all about. You need to stop crying wolf because the said MODs lack direction...Rules are been abused and no judgement is passed.
From what I have observed ....People here tag along ,that's sole reason the fun is fading. I remembered vividly,when Mikus opened a battle thread....You,Giyazz and Ely signed up .Later , you guys were going in circles about TIME ...Giyazz signed up backing out twice ....What goes around comes around ...Mikus viewed your battle against Giyazz as a rock fan.
Hmmm,on the issue of Ely battle against Coogar...I will maintain my silence for obvious matured reasons.
The battle thread needs cleansing ....the gods sun has departed long ago. Mikus, needs to do the honorable thing stepping down as MOD.The people have lost commitment ,values and smile to his style of leadership ....Anybody,can be a MOD and not one who is pushing for it . Well, power is given to those who humble and discipline themselves.
The holiday statement is crap to me ....People should speak for themselves .Time is expensive and you not in NO position telling them how to utilize theirs.
Alot of rap forums have topical battles, cypher challenge, rap poetry,pigeon english rap and story telling rap.
Things can only CHANGE only when people stop hissing like snakes. God Bless You. |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 2:27pm On Sep 26, 2015 |
JigsawKillah: big time. mail me him control make i blast am. Bbm still dey work? |
Rap Battles › Re: ** Regular Battle : Laykorn V Kinglahkhay ** by gottoboy(m): 8:35am On Sep 26, 2015 |
Nicey. . . |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 7:03pm On Sep 25, 2015 |
JigsawKillah: Gottoboy. . . Gimme elymaxiimus number. Or help me tell am say na goat Lol! The guy fall your hands abi? |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 9:04pm On Sep 23, 2015 |
NP- Karashika Blaqbones, Astra P, Kyle B, Chinko Ekun. . . Fvck you need update your playlist. . . She no like F0urplay, she no like Th33some/ Two reasons I don't Need One!! D o p e  |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 6:56pm On Sep 23, 2015 |
desmondDessi: It was suppose to be a joke,oya you nor laugh.
Rest No vex.  |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 6:55pm On Sep 23, 2015 |
Lilkudos. |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 6:41pm On Sep 23, 2015 |
JigsawKillah: i dey suspect you o When you turn Ekelebe? Shebi na Omo OOro you be? |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 2:24pm On Sep 23, 2015 |
desmondDessi: Nop What's up with the green light thingy? JigsawKillah: appreciate his voice? na girl? Wayray  Appreciate na first line; the voice part na second line, na NL formatting join the words together |
Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 11:20am On Sep 23, 2015 |
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Rap Battles › Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by gottoboy(m): 7:27am On Sep 23, 2015 |
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