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[center]BEAUTIFUL ONE

Beautiful one, where at thou
Lovely one, here i bow
Body and soul we avow
Distance apart, we afar

In my mind, you abide
In my soul, there resides
Beautiful thoughts of our time worth while
Stolen glances at you all worth while

Mona Lisa, you i call
Da Vincis' greatest amongst them all
Complexion,nor compared to like a god
Reflection falling on me like the sun god

The Holy Grail, non never understood
Templars fought and died for its good
Revealing such a history to you
Describes how much the chalice lies in you

A bosom compared to Aphrodite's alone
Please grant my soul, and be its home
Zeus almighty would forgive us, even for this sin
My immortal, you my heart is longing to see,

06/19/2007
(Damon Hill) [/center]

denex:
There is absolutely no shred of poetry in General Muhammadu Buhari!

you see in everything in this life, we would always have does who would critize what we do, and those who would gladly conform to what we do. in poetry we have critques. so maybe u dont like Muhammadu Buhari,well,  but i bet someone else would come out and tell you he is a great man with great wordssssss 

Hello peps,

I just finished watching this Jackie Chan film (Accidential Spy) an di got some Chinese words that affected my soul kinda of

Check this out "The poem is like unto a sun, words spoken by some, time falling on us, revealing what lies in us, "

Dont know if u understand, but check the last verse, "REVEALING WHAT LIES IN US". This thing called poetry is in everybody, but it takes time to come out, and it needs words from someone to inspire uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.

Food for thought,

Well i started writing poems when i was in secondary school, well there were poems based on my crazy little love life, but i later developed in writing cools when i gained adminssion into school(Auchi Poly).

I have developed a 4 stanza 4 verse style, something of the Shakespare thing and i actually got so involved when i read a novel (Forgotten the name), the writer was cool. but most of the time my surroundings and the movies i watch(Amercian) affect my writings.

I like feudal films writing in the bronze/iron age period, where love was all about poetry. Cool thou, .

I got some good ones, thou i still want to develop some skilllllllllllllllllllls. I WANT TO BE LIKE SHAKLESPARE pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

Holla back boi, think u are the best here (Ruudie)

that was kool, please check this out pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


[center]BEAUTIFUL ONE

Beautiful one, where at thou
Lovely one, here i bow
Body and soul we avow
Distance apart, we afar

In my mind, you abide
In my soul, there resides
Beautiful thoughts of our time worth while
Stolen glances at you all worth while

Mona Lisa, you i call
Da Vincis' greatest amongst them all
Complexion,nor compared to like a god
Reflection falling on me like the sun god

The Holy Grail, non never understood
Templars fought and died for its good
Revealing such a history to you
Describes how much the chalice lies in you

A bosom compared to Aphrodite's alone
Please grant my soul, and be its home
Zeus almighty would forgive us, even for this sin
My immortal, you my heart is longing to see,

06/19/2007
(Damon Hill)[/center]

Men, those poems are cool, please guys check mine and rate me please, Beautiful One

Men that was cool

eh check what i posted,

[center]BEAUTIFUL ONE

Beautiful one, where at thou
Lovely one, here i bow
Body and soul we avow
Distance apart, we afar

In my mind, you abide
In my soul, there resides
Beautiful thoughts of our time worth while
Stolen glances at you all worth while

Mona Lisa, you i call
Da Vincis' greatest amongst them all
Complexion,nor compared to like a god
Reflection falling on me like the sun god

The Holy Grail, non never understood
Templars fought and died for its good
Revealing such a history to you
Describes how much the chalice lies in you

A bosom compared to Aphrodite's alone
Please grant my soul, and be its home
Zeus almighty would forgive us, even for this sin
My immortal, you my heart is longing to see,

06/19/2007
(Damon Hill) [/center]

Hey Nana that was nice, i got something cool also,

i'm kinda new here,

here is it.

[center]BEAUTIFUL ONE

Beautiful one, where at thou
Lovely one, here i bow
Body and soul we avow
Distance apart, we afar

In my mind, you abide
In my soul, there resides
Beautiful thoughts of our time worth while
Stolen glances at you all worth while

Mona Lisa, you i call
Da Vincis' greatest amongst them all
Complexion,nor compared to like a god
Reflection falling on me like the sun god

The Holy Grail, non never understood
Templars fought and died for its good
Revealing such a history to you
Describes how much the chalice lies in you

A bosom compared to Aphrodite's alone
Please grant my soul, and be its home
Zeus almighty would forgive us, even for this sin
My immortal, you my heart is longing to see,

06/19/2007
(Damon Hill)[/center]

Hey i like you analysis on poetry,

i would want u to throw more light on the haiku style, would love to learn it.

i've mastered the lyrical style, with a 4 stanza, 4 verse style,

hello peps, is there any Nigerian Poetry Contest available.

at least we should praise ourselves, then selling or stuff to dem white sticks,

holla back if there is any, would love to participate.

thanks

hello people, i'm kinda new here and would love to join in the contest, but would want to be true and straight. please lets do our stuff and not dump someone else stuff here and receive the praise for something u did not do .

i pray i'm not too blunt, just being real