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if you notice the main Antagonist is not well known, Almost non-existent. That's why I am rewriting chapter 6,7 and 8 in my book to fit in my fantasy and aspects. Because some chapter I have already updated seems to be missing a lot of scene and events.

The reasons why I am taking too long to update is that I am out of ideas for now. So I had write and rewrite on my book to see how good chapter 6,7 and 8 will be. That's why I haven't updated yet up till now

Clement1111:
Nice story
keep it coming

Alright

And also since I wasn't able to actually post five update like I had promised because of the limited time I have, I however made sure the two updates I just made were long enough

Chapter five is a third person pov so don't be confused

__________(Chapter five)_________;
(Third person pov)
The guards ran away in search of water as their body acted on its on, they couldn't just resist the Rogue Gramma command and it made those two guards angry and embarrassed as they were command by a useless Rogue. The two guards go by the name matt and Jason, And they were appointed in guarding the gates of the two Rogue who had entered the pack Territory.
matt and Jason along with many pack members are still confused why this Rogues is still in prison and not dead. But The truth is that no one can go against the alpha and his decision.
Now at that very moment this two guards had gotten a cup and a bottle of water, they start making their way back to the location of the prison but was stopped by Oliver, The Gramma of the midnight pack.
" What are you doing?".. Oliver asked this two guards who body's was still moving towards the prison not stopping at the presence of their own Gramma..
" Are you just going to ignored me and not acknowledge your Gramma again?" Oliver said seemly surprised and pissed off.
however the guards just continued to move without even looking back at their Gramma. This made Oliver so angry and shocked at how bold matt and Jason was to go against their Gramma.
" ANSWER ME".. Oliver used his Gramma Authority command tone but just like before, it didn't affect the guards and they kept on walking towards the prison.
"I don't know what have gotten into your favorite guards mind Alpha, that they don't have respect for their own Gramma and even weren't affected by my Command".. A pissed off Oliver said, through the mindlink. Yes werewolves can mind communicate each other but it only works if you belong to a pack.
"And who may that be Oliver?".. Alpha Allison responded in the mindlink.. Oliver however was still fuming and he decided to follow the guards..
"it's matt and Jason And you know what?, I will make sure I personally punish them myself".. Oliver says before ending the mindlink.

The alpha was in his office talking to some important guest when Oliver suddenly mindlink him. At first the Alpha Allison was angry at the rudely interruption as he wasn't listening to what his guest was saying As his was in a mindlink state.
But when the alpha heard what happened, he suddenly forget the punishment he was planning for Oliver but instead had sudden interest in what Oliver had just told him and this didn't go unnoticed by his guest.
"Alpha Allison what's the issue, you haven't been listening to what my partner here was saying just a few minutes ago".. one of his guest pointed out, and said but Alpha Allison just nodded in response.
" I am just curious as to how a pack member low in rank can ignore a higher rank Authority command".. Alpha Allison said, out of a curious mind which made his guest to have a confused face..
"it almost impossible for that to happen, unheard of".. one of his guest exclaimed and others nodded.
" you said Almost, which means not completely impossible Right?".. Alpha ask as he raise his eyebrows in question. There was silent for about a few minutes before someone else answered.
" well There is also a chance the victim was commanded by Another higher rank with the same Authority but the Command in this case is so much powerful that another higher rank with the same Authority can't do much to affect it. The people capable of doing must b pure blooded in his/her higher rank title"..

Alpha Allison just nodded in response and whispered "interesting"..
"may I ask Alpha?, did someone resist your command?". Another person asked but the alpha just answered with a simple "No" and the meeting continued. But Alpha Allison couldn't help himself from thinking about what Oliver told him on how matt and jason wasn't affected by his command and by putting two and two together, Alpha Allison realized that this guards was commanded by another Gramma who was pure blooded (pure lineage Gramma blood) and the only Gramma in the pack apart from Oliver was that rogue in prison and immediately Alpha Allison realized what was going on, his eyes widen in shock....

Any grammatical error please ignore them. I will try to edit if I notice a mistake

_______(Chapter continues)______;
(Blake pov)
Today is the 13th day after me and John was put in this pack prison and unfortunately John still hasn't woken up yet. The idiot is just there, sleeping peacefully like we weren't in some dip shit.. uhhh, if it wasn't because I know he is just slow in healing that's why he is still unconscious or probably half dead, I would have punch is ugly disgusting face.
I shudder at the thought, but I will actually punch him hard if he doesn't wake up within the next few days, because I don't know how long we have left before The alpha and the beta changes their minds and just kill us instead.
you may ask how I am in prison and still know when the sun's set or rise? well apparently I just assumed that I have spent 13 days in this prison as I know a particular maid comes onces in a day to drop left over disgusting food for me to eat like I was a dog, And There isn't any window in this prison, thereby making it always dark, so what I normally do is count the times the maid comes in and go.
The prison is actually hell, it's so small I struggle to squeeze myself in a sleeping position, sometimes I wonder if John is actually comfortable. Two guards are always at the gate of the prison, looking cold and tough. I snorted at the thought of them actually acting tough. I bet I can probably snap their necks in half in just a few seconds.
"......aa..a".. I suddenly hear a voice groan in pain and my eyes immediately landed on a moving John that was frowning his face so hard to show how much pain he felt.
"Finally John, you have woken up".. I said, showing how relief I was..
"my throat.... feels.. dry" he struggle to say as he kept on groaning in pain, and I nodded my head before turning to look at the guards who haven't spoken or even look at us since the day we were locked up in prison.
"didn't you hear him? he needs water!".. I said in annoyance but what I got in return was silent.
"didn't you hear me the first time huh?".. I said as I stood up to get close to the iron gate but my hand was burnt the moment I touched it. yes now you know why I couldn't escape this prison since, it is because the damn iron is Enchanted with a magic spell and the moment I touched it or even get close to it I immediately get burnt, but unfortunately it doesn't affect them as it seems they have a protection spell which makes me realize they have a witch in their pack. And it against the werewolf community law to have a witch in any pack. I guess this pack doesn't care but instead break the law.
But had always they choose to ignore me and I just took a long breath to keep myself from doing anything stupid.
" Bla..ke" I heard John says my name but it came out difficult and painful which made me angry and use a power I buried inside me a very long time ago..
"I SAID BRING ME A CUP OF WATER NOW!!!!!".. I said As I let the power of my Gramma Authority to flow in my voice and since this guards are below my status and rank, the command had affected them.
Their eyes widen as they couldn't believe what I just did and since they aren't strong enough to resist the Authority command, they immediately scramble away like rats looking for water as I had said.
I smiled in satisfaction and then turn to look at John who does no longer have a painful look on his face again but instead a look of shock and surprise.
" what?" I said to him and look away. why was he acting surprised?, All higher rank (The beta,alpha,luna etc) have The Authority commanding tone, but it only works on someone who is below your rank. John should already know this, that just because I am a Rogue doesn't mean I am not still a Gramma...

Sorry for not updating the day I said I will, I have busy and I do not have any spare time to post anything on nairaland. But I will still update soon

I am updating 5 times tomorrow guys and I hope you be there to support.

_______(Chapter Continues)______;
(John pov)
it sucks, yeah it really sucks.
I am fully awake but it seems my body doesn't get the message as I am seemly finding it difficult to do anything, I mean anything. for example I can't open my eyes, I can't move my body the only thing I could really do is stare at darkness. As for Blake, I am guessing he had woken up as I normally hear his voice pleading to me to wake up.
It may seems that since my body has shut down that I couldn't listen to my surroundings but unfortunately I can, And right now I am currently listening to Blake yelling at someone, maybe a Guard
"When I get out of the chains, I swear that I will claw out your face and design it so well, your alpha will definitely thank me".. I hear voice says but as it has always been, the person he was talking to didn't answer,..
"What's all the commotion about?".. I suddenly hear a loud voice said, And a "Beta". whispers followed after..
"I said let us out of this prison, we didn't come here to harm anyone you hear me!!".. Blake reply back and a dark laugh was followed after, I am thinking either the guard or the beta that laughed.
"You see the moment you step your feet on the pack territory, you have sealed your fate, You and your friend should be lucky you weren't killed at first sight. Trust me, we hardly have prisoners has the punishment of offenders is death, be it a Rogue or a pack member".. The voice which I think belong to the beta said making me Annoyed that I still couldn't open my eyes, we need to get out of here before this sick bastards kill us..
"And of course it's surprising to see we actually have a prisoners that lasted for more than a week"..
At hearing this I inwardly cause at my wolf at being so slow in healing me, it seems there is still a lot of wolfbine in my blood, I wonder how Blake healed so fast.. ooh yes, I remember, he heals fast because he is a Gramma. I signed inwardly, imagining myself shaking my head at my stupidity.

more updates coming up tomorrow, my phone is low today because of issues with light

please if you notice any mistake or misspelling then please ignore, I am trying my best to Edit if I notice any error

________(Chapter continue)______;
(Alpha Allison)
I signed deeply, As I rubbed my forehead out of stress, I looked at the anonymous letters that threatened to destroy my pack and me. I throw the nearest thing I could find on the ground and watch as the equipment scattered into pieces on the ground, before I noticed the door open and someone rushing in.
"Jesus, Allison what has gotten over you".. my beta James yelled as he checked if I had any injury but I shush him off.. James is the only person that understands me, we grew up together and has never left my side even when I killed my own father.. I smiled wickedly at the memory causing James to look at me like I was crazy..
"why are you acting weird Allison?, you are creepy bro".. James said like it's a matter of fact.
" how many times have I told you to knock before entering James?".. I said looking at him but he just smirk in return..
"how many times have I told you to stop destroying this poor things in the house Allison?". he said back shaking his head acting disappointed, I just snorted in return.
"you do know I should have your head for calling me by my name and not my title James". I said crossing my hands watching him in amazement as he mindlink the maids to get the mess on the ground cleaned..
"I will like to see you try".. he answered back before walking towards me in a more serious matter As I knew what was about to happen..
"why didn't you kill the Rogues but instead weakened them using the wolfbine Allison".. he said looking rather shock at my action. I just shook my head in return, is it that a news that I didn't kill a Rogues at first sight.
"we all know how deadly you are you Allison and how you kill before thinking and it's quite interesting as in this case you didn't kill before you think".. James said slowly, trying not to laugh. I don't know if I should feel offended by that but I let it slide just this once.
"I have my reasons James so don't worry".. I said to my beta, before remembering something else..
"so are those good for nothing Rogues awake yet?".. I asked James but he just shook his head in return..
"No, apparently the amount of wolfbine that Oliver injected in them was pretty large and the Rogues will not wake for some few more weeks".. my beta said before a maid walked in through the door and bowed Down to me and my beta.. my beta just nodded and decided to head out of the office but before he could reach the door he turned to me and said. "when those Rogues wake up I will let you know immediately" ..
I just nodded back and watch the maids do their job.

______(CHAPTER 4)______;
(Blake pov)
Death, That five letter words was what would become of me anytime soon, I stare into eyes of the man who made that powerful growl, I see pure Anger, that kind of Anger that doesn't cool down until it has accomplished it's task...
"how dare you enter my territory, have the Guts to step into my home and attack my Gramma".. he said loudly causing everywhere to be quiet, Even the warriors fighting john has stopped fighting..
I looked at john to see he had multiple serious injury and he is healing really slow as I saw a large amount of blood around him, of course it could be the blood of those who he killed but still, john looks pretty bad.
"ANSWER ME ROGUES".. The alpha said using his superior tone, causing everyone to bow down and submit including me unfortunately..
I couldn't just resist the command, it was like my body acted on its own and before I knew it, me and John spilled our secret at the same time..
"we heard of the Rumors of the Rebel attempt to stop the importation of wolfbine that this pack does, And we decided to investigate matter ourselves"..
I couldn't read the emotions that flashed across his eyes, but I knew that we were screwed, that one was for sure..
"SHIFT BACK TO HUMANS".. he command again and just like before, our body acted on their own and we shifted back to humans. I turned to look at john and noticed he was beyond pissed, I shook my head at him. being angry won't lead us to anywhere, it will infact give them more reasons to kill us. I Breathe in and out slowly, it's better to be alive than dead.
"we should kill This good for nothing brats alpha, especially this short one," The Gramma shouted out has he trys to stand up but groan in pain.. "Bleep". he caused As he kept on falling down back to the ground..
ohhh, look who decided to join us, I laughed in my mind, if it weren't that the alpha was here, his pitiful self would had been six foot inside the fucking ground.
"one more word from you Oliver And you are dead".. The alpha said harshly to him causing him to frown, "I can't believe This Rogues beat you up Oliver, I Can't believe this two piece of shit beat all of you"... The alpha shouted pointing accusing finger at his men and his Gramma before turning to face us before his eyes darkened as he walk towards us with each step making me shiver..
" You Rogues had the audacity to step into my territory undetected, And walk majestically to The pack house and cause commotion here, YOU WILL PAY".. he said slowly as he continue to walk towards us causing me to sallow hard, my throat feels dry, and before I knew it I heard a loud Crashing sound by my left and Saw The alpha holding john in his neck , my eyes widen in fear, How did he get there so fast since he was right in front of me. My eyes widen Even more has I see john face was turning blue and that was when I transformed back to my wolf and attack but before I go get to him, I was knocked out by the alpha within 2 secs flat, And I was restricted by other wolves as I watch the Gramma brought out syringe And injected some strange liquid inside john making he feel lifeless like he was dead.
And I saw the Gramma smiling as he made his way towards me with the same syringe making my eyes widen and I struggle to get away while the other wolves surrounding me held me tight... "Good bye Rogue".. The Gramma whispers into my ear before injecting the needle in my neck causing me to Gritted my teeth hard before I fell into darkness.

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_______(Chapter Continues)_____;
(Blake pov)
"What do we have here". The man that told his men to attack john said grinning widely, apparently he is a Gramma.
I ignore him and follow his movement, I am not a weakling, I was a Gramma of course I know how to fight, i trained every single day and night without food nor water, my father made sure of that, he wanted me to become an heartless beast, he wanted me to be so strong that I will challenge my alpha for the position but unfortunately that's not what's happening now.
"quite interesting to see a fellow Gramma a rouge".. he said walking around in circles, looking infact surprised.
"of course it isn't surprising that a Gramma is a Rogue, it happens all the time, what am I even saying, Even an alpha normally become rogues".. he said laughing quietly, I just Gritted my teeth hard and growl in return.
At seeing this he smiled even more has fangs started to come out of his mouth and claws getting longer, i guess he is half shifting.
"I think we all know who is responsible for the alarming rate of wolf members becoming rogues Right?.." he said slowly with each words spoken filled with Anger. I then also half transformed as I knew the show is about to start.
"indeed we all know" I said before launching myself with my claws ready to feel the well know flow of Blood..
We fight intensely as I managed to withstand some few punches and kick right there while some actually made contact with me, And he on the other hand had no single injury at all, he wolf was healing him crazy fast.
"what's the matter, don't know how to throw a punch" he said mocking me has he withstand all the punches and any offensive attack I sent his way, my anger rises and got the best of me and my wolf took control and before I knew it, I was seeing red..
my claws grew longer, my fangs shaper and My speed and strength amplified. He noticed has he eyes widen has I landed a single kick in his stomach and he cough off blood, I used my speed to blow him in his chest making him flew midair, I still use that same speed to kick his back in that same midair, It seems like time had frozen and everything was in slow motion. i then use my claw to draw out blood in his chest causing a deep wound to appear and before he can land on the ground I use all my strength to still flip him backward midair with so much force that when I grab his shoulder I felt it cracked and then he landed with a huge boom sounding because of the hard impact it had on the ground. I then also landed gracefully and smirk when I saw him on the ground unable to move has he breath in Sharp pain. his continues groaning in pain was like music in my ear, And I transformed fully to my wolf to go for the final kill before a loud growl interrupted me, the power surrounding that loud voice made me shiver, And then I realized the alpha is here...

______(Chapter Continues)_____;
(John pov)
The pack house is what we call a freaking mansion, from how expensive everything in it is to how everything is been decorative And just awesome makes me realize how poor my ex pack was.. "What in the world.." I said looking around, I turned to look at Blake to see his reaction but he looks unimpressed.. "I have seen way better than this john, it's not really that awesome".. Blake said looking rather annoyed than amazed.. "of course you will say that. your Ex pack was fucking rich, it's Not everyone life is been fair to..".. I was saying this to Blake before some strange presence surrounded us making me stop mid sentence.
Blake felt it too has he had a disturbing look on his face, And before we knew it, we were surrounded by many wolf all looking at us with so much hate..
"What the hell, but we just got here!" Blake said quickly, dragging his hair with his hands probably because he was frustrated.
" I guess they figured out that we were intruders and imposter pretty quickly, seeming that we just entered the pack house and we didn't even take three steps before they found out".. I said ready to fight even if I know I will end up dead, atleast I know I died trying.
One of the wolves came forward further and shifted back to his human form, "Rogues" he said the word spitting it out with disgust. he looked me in the eye, and I saw anger in them, it was only then I realized the power that surrounds him and I came into a conclusion that he is the Gramma.
"Attack This one here, leave the other shorter guy to me, he seems to have a Gramma aura, probably a former Gramma, you all combined won't stand a chance" He ordered with a powerful voice that Shaked the ground.
Suddenly I felt offended by his words, what the Bleep dude, I aren't worthy enough for you to fight me, I snorted thinking that in my mind. who those he think he is anyways, muscle doesn't make you stronger you dumb Gramma..
I shifted into my wolf has I am in killer mode right now, And then Suddenly, All the wolves attacked me at once. What a life *sigh*

Am sorry for abandoning this story, crazy things happen to me and it bleeped up everything in my life but anyway by God grace I am okay. I will continue the story from now onward. And for those who were with me from the start but now doesn't feel or have any interest whatsoever in this story again then alright, it's totally understandable. I messed up, just find a place in your heart to forgive and forget. I am back now and I just wanted to let you know that this story is far from over. it's just the Beginning