solomonbrown64:


.....Eve is unstable as a bipolar person and so to an untrained mind like Solomon who has no clue in psychology, he blames her crazy decisions on her disorder but that's entirely not true as the next update will reveal. Eve is perfectly sane with the help of her drugs and knows quite well what she is doing and Maddy is aware of this too but she is playing the victim game in order to paint Eve as evil...

...Maddy did something really bad which you will see in the next update and then everything will become clear.

...Eve is no sociopath or otherwise but has denied herself love just to hurt her sister. Solomon doesn't know this and just assumes Eve to be crazy or probably a psychopath hell bent on destroying him..

Tnx 4 clearing dat up bro.

Oga Solomon, I hail ur dexterity as well as ur imaginative construction......9ce story!
Hv a ?n though, n it's on Eve n Maddy. Can u pls explain more on dia mindset, coz u said Eve is bipolar bt u keep portraying her as a sociopath/psychopath. I'm no psychologist/behaviorist, bt d human mind as always been a fascination of mine. Tnk U
Good job 1ce again #thumbsup

domido:

FBI operate in Nigeria. That was what I thought until I saw someone working there in my church.

Like I stated: unless dia'z an investigation on an American citizen as a victim or perpetrator of any crime, den n only den do dey hv jurisdiction on foreign soil. N d FBI can operate wit or witout permission frm local authorities wia dey're @ dat point in time.

Stumbled on diz piece by chance n I gotta say it's gud 2 read a crime thriller in naija setting.......even though it wasn't completed.

Oga OP, in as much as diz story is a work of fiction, geographical settings shld be as physically accurate as possible (myt be useful in oda stories). P.S: I stand corrected if I'm mistaken
1- CIA headquarters is in Langley, Virginia n not Washington DC as u stated in d early parts of diz story. CIA stations in oda parts of USA r jst field offices n safe houses
2- it's Israeli MOSSAD n nt Isreali MOUSSAD
3- I've neva heard of a Lagos-Ore express way (unless it's jst been built)
4- the name Danny Lovato sounds more spanish, italian or any central/south american country rather dan russian. (Or ao many Chukwudi of Ibadan u don eva meet). Think of names lyk Ivan, Igor, Boris, Vladmir, Stalinski etc
5- Unless American citizens are being investigated as victim/perpetrator of crime in diz story, d FBI has no operational jurisdiction in Nigeria.
6- D correct term is "field operative" n nt "field operator"
7- Mark Ashimolowo's character as a top CIA agent will mean dat he works outside d US much more dan he's been portrayed 2 hv attained his feats by working within d shores of USA. CIA has no operational jurisdiction within d shores of USA.