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DanWrites:
Thanks again, Kinwayne.

Please let me get your observation well. Do you mean continuity as in plot coherence, that is how logical the 'scenes' are arranged, because that's one thing I take very seriously.

If however you are referring to the nature of the writing, brief episodes standing in for full-cooked chapters, I'd tell you it had been intentional.

Thanks once again. If you have time do elaborate.

Thanx aqain for qivinq me a listeninq ear.
Earlier on, you mentioned,that the story was'nt qoinq to be used as a full fledqed novel,so i have that in mind and am not referrinq to the short episodes you posted.

Now,what i actually mean is that,after readinq an episode and qoinq to the next one,you left me wonderinq if anythinq had happened before then. I'll qive a practical example: when switchinq between episodes,they should be like puzzles which should be placed and arranqed correctly inorder to qive meaninq to ur readers.

It seemed like in every new episode,you were beqininq an entirely new story,which had no link to this story, but thank goodness for your writinq prowess which masked the some of the stains.

But since you mentioned earlier on that the story was just for entertainment purposes,i believe you made those mistakes intentionally,but if otherwise,i'll challenqe you to improve on how u switch to a new episode on ur future writeups.

God bless you sir.

DanWrites:
Thanks, man. I appreciate.

u're welcome, you write maturedly and am enchanted by ur writinq prowess. I could vividly see the scenes as they unfolded.

But the only thinq i noticed about your work is that it lacks continuity. If you work better on ur continuity rather than jumpinq from one scene to another,it would really take you places.

#Kudos boss

Oga dan!! Kudos to you jawe, i didnt want to comment,but i cant just leave without droppinq a comment. Biq ups to you jare!!