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phew! I finally caught up with you. keep the good work going Oyinprince. oh! I love your blog design

souloho19

keep it coming sis. nice update

wow! I am following.

Thanks For The Update Bruv

I really don't understand you cuz we are not talking about anyone completing someone else's story for them.

If you don't know the meaning of constructive criticism just ask and I will take the liberty of explaining to you in details

Sensitivity1254:
Pls stop. How can say that it can't happen? It happens every where. Didnt Trump nominate someone who know nothing about being a judge a Judge? Come out from the bubble that you are living and face reality.
Those boys surrounding Buhari as SAs and PAs what do they know about Media and SDG apart from Tolu and Adesina? What of the journalist that has a degree in Islamic Studies that he appointed Minister of Education? The former Deputy to Fashola that is now SSAP-SDG (Senior Special Adviser to the President in SDG), what experience does she have on Sustainable Development apart from that she is a professional hairdresser?

Asemark did not tell you in the story that the man did not have any management experience. He was silent on the kind of work the man was doing and his qualifications. You just concluded on your own that he isn't qualified for the job. That's how you guys cease stories from the author and finish it for them. Allow him to tell his story. If you feel so much about it, start yours.

Asemark, you are doing well.

You still don't get my point, it was barely 24hrs after the two of them became friends. barely 24hrs after he forgave his parents. come on!

I am not talking Nigerian concept, I'm talking about how things should be.

Anyways, if you intend to keep it that way I can't change your mind but this story will never make it to FP if this is how you want to continue.

kingphilip:
you should know in Nigeria political appointees into positions of PA, SA, SSA is not based on merit or what the individuals can offer but as compensation to their loyalists. Heck haven't you heard of governors having over 200 personnel in such positions?

Even though its not the right thing to do but in the Nigerian context, its realistic

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Sensitivity1254:
When the son of ordinary SA or PA to ordinary commissioner can talk to his father or mother to help you get a job, how much more the son of the THIRD highest ranked officer at the Federal Govt? You people are really living in a bubble.

Thank You Bro,

How can the son of a senate president pressure his father to give a man who barely knows anything about management an appointment and get a reply in form of a letter

Although the story is pure fiction reality should be embraced

I love the way your story started but if your characters are mismatched it will show a leak.

Rather than insult me check your story and make necessary corrections

jbtobsyn:
You shouldn't respond the way you did. You have to listen to critics to improve better.

I am sorry if I annoyed you, I will mention you when I am done writing mine.

Asemark:
seems yu are better than me would love to read yur story.... Mtchewww

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No longer a ghost reader.

I have read a lot of stories on Nairaland but this is the most realistic, entertaining, detailed, suspense back-to-back filled story and I love it.

Almost no typographical error, I am amazed at your literary skill.
More ink to your pen souloho19
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Show him some love by voting for him to win the best June writer..
Click on the link to cast your vote.. Pls don't vote twice..
https://www.nairaland.com/4541071/june-nomination-thread-5k-award/5#68484055

Forgive me if this sounds out of point Azemark but your work isn't well detailed and a little bit unrealistic.