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The officer wore a red t-shirt with black jeans. He had an ID card around his neck and he wore a scowl on his ugly face. He opened the door and Imonite got in the back seat. The hefty man dived in immediately and sat beside Imonitie. As Pearl headed towards the driver’s seat, Imonitie began to talk again ‘’officer, I really need my wallet. If it’s okay, I could come on my own. I have my car parked in front''

''It's not possible'' Chichi replied.

''But it’s my turn to pick the kid up

kingphilip:
u go look for ha picture whether she fyn ba

oga how far? longest time! glad to know u re out from that 'prison' so how is ur ppa? welcome, sanu da zowa

mcjanny where are u? a jiffy don pass since almost two months now. pls dnt abandon this story. *thinking aloud* 'hope all is well with u, mcjanny'?

thanks touchi mendi babe but i want u to check the first update where chichi went to see imonite. as they entered the car, u wrote 'pearl' it should be chichi and also it should be chichi who started the inition of the police car

oga Larrysun oya fast fast and update, so i can join blackie and basket to chop thier money o! thanks for the update. how everything for ur side?

toykathy:
whatz d name of my princess, candy? I get a cutie here wey wan lobby

pls ma can u wait a little becos me think that this online chasing will only make our little candy confused. besides there are also others who are interested o!

mummy candy, how u dey now? and how is family esp our little candy junior? pls do take care of urselves o! though we are seriously missing u! but we will wait so take ur time.

touchmeder:



Hello you, where have you beennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn?

so sorri deari been busy with work but ve been a ghost reader and i must say u re doing great. how is everything in general?

wow that kiss was something else. ezinne dont know what she wants in a relationship. mofe carry ur head up high and let no general intimidate u.
repogirl this is real bfast thanks a million for the update and the kissing part was 'killin' me. ekene na 'wonderful creep', really funny

at this 'yountion' i must come out from hiding to say touchmendie babeeeeeeeee u too much. thanks for the regular update and lookz like mama bukky has began to untie jesuorobo's dad from her initial juju. haha evej jazz get expiry date

jorlons:
I can almost picture every scene in my head, it goes to show how well crafted this piece is.

The dialogues couldn't be more real. Wow!

Nor be today this guy don dey write. More ink to your pen bruv.

the writer is a 'she' and not a 'he' lol

Princecalm:
they said he is good for nothing yet he is about to reveal the hidden truth that has been a burden to everybody in the neigbhourhood.

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*screaming* she is back!!! she is back!!! *goes and give touchmender a big bear hug* i miss u so much. ehmmmmm detective Unique and Chichi again, the culprit cannot hide for so long. thanks touchmender for the update.

Skimpledawg:

Ohhh repo mama, d way u analyse dz love btw Mofe n Zinnie is just so real nd i cnt help buh smile yle reading. I so much enjoy it......cwiosly glad ua back.
*grabs d pot of update n runs away*

Wished u more writing brain cells n grace to kip ya family dear.

where do u think u can run to mr?

thank u so much repogirl. pls accept my condolences over de loss of ur dad. its well with u

o shelwa am so glad u re back afta the 'lonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng break'.:i hope whatever kept u away was successful? welcome back and how i missed u.

kingphilip:
no I'm not o God never begin sleep nw

BTW I'm in ogun state n the camp have been great

bros how far? hope u are having fun? otondo corper, gud to know u re in Ogun. how is life in that area? do take care of ur self.

candy:
Join me in praising God...just had a bouncing baby girl! God is faithful. E-rice and wine coming soon in form of updates *smiles*

Thanks for your love and support, you all have been good. I pray our lives will be full of joy in Jesus name.

u mean u be dey with belly still updates de flow? a big congratulations o! and we thank God for safe delivery. missed u so much. ur boys will be so happy to have a sister. pls rest well well o, and extend my greetings to ur soldiers and husy and 'candy junior'

candy dear, thanks for the update. the places not deleted needs correction
1. ... met with... not ... met when...
2. write the 'i.diot' as either ediot or i.diot so that it will reflex in the line u used it
hope u will understand cos de phone i dey use na one in town dat why i couldnt highlight the mistake.


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Chapter 47


...and started a relationship with a nurse he met when....at Dr Benjamin's hospital when he was admitted...

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"Punish the idiot well well" Mama Johnson interrupted[b]

how can i forget to wish the king himself birthday wishes? happy birthday oga kingphilips, one time award winner for always commenting and encouraging writers to do more. sorry it is coming late but i guess better late than never. its been long oga kingphilips, u dey so?

thanks candy for the update but isn't it obvious that thou has forgotten me? well how are ur little soldiers and husbi?

@larrysun, nice writeup and why will the landlady give the key to daddy's friend? wish the boys could report to daddy.


kingphilip where are thou? come and read o!

McJANNY:
I'll be back with updates in a jiffy..@lenmafon, the woman is a 'no-GREEing' woman

bia janny nwam, a jiffy neva pass?

nice. i served in kaltungo, gombe south. so na only meat u chop for there? my dear it is kind of dry but life is not too expensive compared to my place owerri. but am planning of leaving sha if i see a beta teaching job, i don try my best for the school.

candy:

Food don land now.

I enjoyed Yamaltu Deba, but I never considered working in Gombe. I hail you, if you are not a Northerner...that place far and kinda dry. But we had cow meat in abundance then. A wonderful experience...

thanks 4 update mcjanny. rich's mum should let hin be abey.

u want to kill person with laugh abi? mcjenny pls which one be to fall in 'like' again? thanks for the update dear.

kingphilip:
that's great dear

Hope we'll b seeing ur story soon

when will u write ur own?patiently waiting to see ur own so that we will make comments. dont ask me for mine o !

kingphilip:
no worry make nysc just throwaway me reach that side first

Candy please time for breakfast is already moving o

@ kingphilip, u sure u go wan come serve for far northeast? God will take u to a place that will favor u just like he did mine in Jesus name, Amen but try not to infleluence ur posting.

@ candy, mommy breakfast and lunch time don pass o, now na dinner time, food neva don finish? btw, hope all findeth thee today?

Onemansquad:

i sabi invest wella u can gv me d moni

omo from ur moniker only, i dey fear make my 'ego' no come enter one chance o!

I actually read Ole lemba and laugh no wan finish frm my mouth. the story was hilarious and thanks for the mention in that story. God will give u reasons to remain joyful in Jesus name, Amen. i am female

thronekid:

Thank U sire!
Throne.kid and ThR0.Nekid're the same. I'm the scribbler of 'Ole lemba....' and 'Strings... Webs!', thanks sire!
God bless!

kingphilip:
so na u de chop gombe money finish

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abey come follow me chop o cos "plenty money, my problem is how to invest it"

happy birthday thronekid. May God make u sit on ur desired throne in life. abeg ThROneKid dey different from thronekid? no vex i just wan know.

thanks 4 de update and pls can u make it regular? that way we wont be lost completely when reading a new update