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I wanted to shout for help but some kind of force was suppresing me."leave my thing na". I begged. "you will die today". she said. "wetin i do you?". She squeezed harder.i tried to pry her hand but they where to strong. "you have offended my master". "how,who is your master i asked innocently."the womam you ran away from 2weeks ago". So she had finally come back.this mami-wata just mean me.

emsheddy: nice one OP. To all those English students, am sure OP isnt publishing it and so we can deal with the errors. Make una free am.

u dy feel me.

She later came back after the doctors had left.she was ready to collect and i was ready to give.i kissed her neck down to her bosoms.i started sucking her left mangoe.i licked the right like ice cream.i removed my bursars.she grabbed my erect anaconda and started sucking.i was in heaven.as i tried to insert my anaconda she held it mid-air.what? "what is this". She had a devilish smile in her face.the wind started blowing.her changed to white.complete white.o No.she squeezed my blockos hard i winced.she wanted to kill me.

DVM_tuppence: dis story is too childish + it doesn't make sense, go Nd read 4rm oda writers on NL and learn

if u no lyk am go write ur own.there r more matured ways to criticize ma wrk.

as she lean downed to check my temperature her bosoms pressed my chest.my anaconda quickly stood at attention.i gently grabbed her waist out of involuntary impulse.she tried to pull away but her drew her nearer.i kissed her,she kissed back.i attacked one of the giant mangoes.she forcefully pulled away.'what?.i asked.'later.let the doctor leave'. 'ok fine by me'

abeg mk una no vex.abi dy road,traveling tinz.i'm back to cont

continuation cuming up shortly.....30mins

kabiru and the policeman i had agreement with later came to the hospital to claim their payment.'oboy how you dey na?' kabiru asked.'i don dey better small small'.'thats good'..'shey you know why we come here?' the other policeman said with hesistation.i nodded and reached under the bed for the bag that i hid there.i unlock the big padlock on the bag and removed 25k which i handed to him.he counted it and turned to me,'wetin be this?'. 'na the money na'. 'the money don increase to 100k'. What? I couldn't believe this.'why?'. Kabiru placed his hand on my shoulder,'oboy we got to settle oga too.moreover we don open case file for your matter and to close the file go cost you.'' they were not serious.100k?. 'but this was not our agreement.this is unacceptable''. The other policeman flung the money at me angrily,'who you dey blow all this grammer for.you think say we they play with you.if you no get the cash,wear cloth follow us go station for questioning.your cell dey wait you''. Kabiru gave my shoulder a gentle squeeze and added,'we go lock you up for the same cell with demon extinquisher and him church members.'' me and demon extinquisher in the same cell.no way in hell.if that guy handle me one more time i was done for.if craze prophet handle you,na there you go know say police is your friend.e better settle them now before the money go up.i quietly gave them the cash make them comot hand for my neck.they left with smiles on their faces.an hour later nurse mercy came in.her bosoms and front yard where dancing up and down as she walked.

i was admitted in opolo central hospital.my body still ached from the torture given to me by demon extinquisher all in the name of driving mami-wata spirit from my body.people started visiting me in the hospital.friends,co-workers,girlfriends,family and some busy bodies.some brought gifts,it was as if i had died and come back.i didn't want to leave the hospital,the kind of care i was shown was fascinating.the thing i liked most in this hospital was the nurse assigned to me.her name was mercy,fine name with fine face.she was fair in complexion,open teeth and her gadgets na fire.she was very nice to me,i too reciprocated,in cash that is.anytime i sent her to buy something for me i would tell her to keep the change.i never still learn my lesson.

kabiru gave him 15 lashes.if Demon extinquisher see me for him next life he go pick race.'who tell una say i dey here?' i asked one of the police men.he laughed a long hard laugh.'no be because of you we come here o.' he replied.i was getting confused.'then why una come?'.he pointed his finger towards demon extinquisher.'that yeye prophet give one 15 years old girl belly.we also receive info say he impregnate two other married women for him church'.who knew demon extinquisher would like women this way even give them belly.wonders shall never end.prophets of now adays.another question came to my mind.'which reason una go give una oga for office say una beat demon extinquisher?'.'that one na small thing na.he was resisting arrest,so we had to use force'.you go fear naija police with their ways.

Akere_P: @OP, this is worst story i av ever read on nl.it's not cordinated,not explicit&so unreal........**this's the little of my own kind of peace of mind.**

if u think its easy,write ur own piece.simple!

To be continued shortly.....mk i go slip

Kabiru was the inspector name that was handling Demon extinquisher now.i later learnedd that he used to be an herdsman that trained cows in jos befor boko haram wahala drove him to join the police force.the guy really dealt with Demon extinquisher that day.he begged in yoruba,hausa and english at the same time.i had finally had my revenge,but i later learned that my revenge was very expensive.

They pulled up his gown over his head and removed his bursar.one held his hands while another his legs,with his bum facing upwards.the police man i had contracted with kept his rifle untop a chair and raised the cane up for the first strike.the first strike didn't have much effect on him.the 2nd and 3rd seemed not to shake him atall.this Demon destroyer was strong o.the inspector that led the arrest pushed the other officer aside and took over.he held it firm,targeted a very delicate spot and stroke.it was as if the earth paused for a second followed by an earthquake.Demon extinquishers cry split the air in half."jesu!!!.

"who are you?" he asked.i couldn't bring myself to answer him.i looked around and saw that the Demon extinquisher was pinned to the ground by two police men.i pointed to his direction."oh.that man.he is a criminal"."yes.big criminal".i managed to say.my eyes picked something laying idle on the floor.it was the Holy cane.a thought quickly entered my mind.i beckoned to the police man to come closer."you go h-help me do something" i told him."wetin?". "help me flog that he goat with that cane for ground". "you dey craze?"..i thought for something i could use to motivate this man."how much you go need?" i asked him.there was a wide smile in his face now."20k.no pricing"..we had reached an understanding."i go give you 25k to give am better flogging".he nodded and went to confer with the rest.a man had brought wrapper which i used to cover myself.i found a suitable place to watch the show.

CHAPTER SIX- THE DEMON EXTINQUISHER sudenly stopped at number 22.there was commotion around me.there was a gun shot.have i been shot? Or was i hearing things.it was followed by shouts.i could hear people running helter-skelter.what was happening?.had the mami-wata finally revealed herself?."no let that one escape" a thick voice shouted.there was sounds of struggle.another gun shot filled the air."check who them tie there" ordered that same voice.immediately someone was standing over me.my vision was still blur.i felt water being splashed on my face.i was untied by someone else from behind.a cup of water was forced down my throat.it felt good.was i in heaven?.the image i saw in front of me definitely could not be in Gods heavenly paradise.squatting near me was someone wearing complete black with a rifle in one hand.it was a POLICE MAN

The next day somebody contacted my family.first my mother cried her eyes out,cursing all evil doers in the village.i tried to tell them i was sane."na so them they talk" a relative once said.nobody cared to listen to the ravings of a mad man who was seeing mami-wata.i was taken to one of this new generation church that performed miracles but the pastor said my family should wait for Gods time for it is the best.they took me to two babalawo's who said the mami-wata had taken my spirit to her kingdom.that there was no hope for me.my family refusing to give up took me to a white garment church.the one in which i was currently at.

"how many raps this wan go take so.this wan wey he no wear cloth so?" someone asked.the rope arrived and they used it to tie me.i burst into tears."mami-wata dey come" i kept telling them.some of the women among the crowd where crying."see wetin don do person pikin".they where saying.they bundled me up and took me a house i had never been to before.i was locked in a room,someone was assigned to watch me.i kept thinking what if this mami-wata spirit decided to come.

I fell down hard.picked myself up and continued on my way.running as fast as my leg could take me.all those guys for olympics na learners them be.if i run for naija at my current state na Gold medal things.people that heard my shouting ran out to see what was happening.some three boys that where toasting two girls that night saw me ran their way and they held me."hold am there" a man shouted from behind."leave me alone.mami-wata dey come" i shouted.but i couldn't free myself.soon more hands joined in pinning me to the ground."bring rope come" i heard someone say."make una no let am enter market" another said..

I fell down hard.picked myself up and continued on my way.running as fast as my leg could take me.all those guys for olympics na learners them be.if i run for naija at my current state na Gold medal things.people that heard my shouting ran out to see what was happening.some three boys that where toasting two girls that night saw me ran their way and they held me."hold am there" a man shouted from behind."leave me alone.mami-wata dey come" i shouted.but i couldn't free myself.soon more hands joined in pinning me to the ground."bring rope come" i heard someone say."make una no let am enter market" another said.

What i did next even jumong,jet li and jackie chan put together go fear.from the position i was standing i flunk the lamp towards the mami-wata,almost instantly i jumped on my matrass and through the window i went.come see film trick.i landed with force on the ground outside.something make craaa!!!.i didn't wait to find out what it was.i sprinted round the corner of the house into the open street screaming "HELP HELP.MAMI-WATA"

"don't be afraid of me" she said.afraid was an understatement at this junction.my bros that had stood up because of the early sweet play had gone down."i will give you riches" she continued."just like that?" i asked."yes.just like that".i pray o.does this mami-wata think i'm paul and co.oyinbo say no pain no gain.nothing like free lunch.in 9ja everybody is looking for easy,quick cash.but i know better.i preferably live my life managing my current salary of 75k with a wife and children than to enter into a contract with the devil.

She was the pretties girl i have ever laid eyes on.this was too good to be true.But there was something amiss about her.it was as if she was two persons in one.i brought the lamp closer,she immediately screamed and tried to sheild her eyes from the light.her body started transforming into something hideos.scales appeared in her body.her teeth started to grow out like those vampires in true blood.wey my bible.jesus was my only way out of this.

elampiro: OP too dey waste time.

log out.

no vex abeg.i got take my time write to avoid mistakes.

As i got nearer i felt a cool breeze blow pass.something was definitely not right.who cares.as far as i scored Nkechi.No problem atall.the perfume that she wore was so intoxicating that i wanted to just grab her and fire away.i tried to strain my eyes to see in the darkness.she was unclad.this was getting interesting.no need for me to waste my time removing clothes.i grabbed her by the waist,her skin was smooth and slippery at the same time.maybe she rub oil.my lips met hers in a second.so soft and supple.her ran my hand down her back.her hair reached her hips.why was it this long.maybe its this new human hair all this small girls kill body for.i didn't mind as long as it wasn't me that paid for the hair.she quickly helped me with my clothes.it was time to see this beautiful face of hers once again.i reached for the rechargable lamp near my bed.as i was about to on it she stopped me.hapa what is wrong with this girl.I must see her face.another wrong decision.as the light went on,i pointed it to her face.What i saw ehn.was i drunk.but i only drank five bottles na.this was a dream.but i refuse to wake up.i shook my head i looked again.

CHAPTER FIVE- "WHO dey there?"i yelled trying to get hold of anything i could use in defence.no b me all this small cult boys wan take use shine."its me" replied a female voice.na babe o.my mind came down.but who,her voice resembled nkechi.Nkechi,i have been trying to score that babe for almost a year and now here she is.maybe she has heard about my exploits and have decided to check me out herself."Nkechi na you?" i asked.silence.i asked the same question again no answer.na wa o.why is nkechi being shy like this.maybe she doesn't want to talk to much.good for me,nobody likes a talky talky babe."come closer" she said.i felt something urging me to go forward,a mysterious feeling.i took one step at a time towards her.

Ms Zee: Nice write up op, though I have a little problem with where you introduced the flash back. How can someone be recollecting when he is being thoroughly wiped?
You should have introduced it with him passing out or after the flogging, or don't you think so? The fear and pain of the lashing will not allow him the flash. Flashes are recollections done mostly in the subconscious either partly, induced or wholly.
All the same, nice . . .
Brave up and finish the story. Don't include so many characters it will help since its a,short story

thank u vewi much.will take into cönsideration

I stayed in mbiama near the river.as i walked towards my house my area people greeted me,some that had beef for me ignored me.finally i was home.but something was amiss,only my compound in that area didn't have light.how come.i trif to change the fuss,no way.another thing my door was also open.i remember locking this door in the morning.abi,mama godspower has opened it again and forgot to lock it.i was too tired to confront her this night.as i entered my room it was like i was entering another world.it was so cold,harmattan cold was not has strong as this na.the whole place was pitch dark though there was full moon outside which would have reflected to my room.i felt a presence in my room.there was someone on my matrass...

"poor paul" sammy concluded."the guy tough o.419 till death"i said jokingly trying to lighten their moods.i took two more bottles.by 10pm i decided it was time to go home.my area by 12 na no go area.as i went to the back to take a leak,ebiere followed me.she grabbed me from behind.i gave her what she wanted,she asked for more but i declined.wrong decision.had i known.

"wetin mami-wata ask in return?" i finally asked."now you are talking.the agreement be say he go get riches in return say he no go ever born pikin.or else he go die"trust paul na,easy way to get money,he quickly accepted the offer.the more he screwed the mami-wata the richer he became."wetin come make the mami-wata kill am if them don already agree".moses laughed "you dey talk like you know no paulo.the guy come scam the chick o.he go marry one girl for their village.na the mami-wata find out" she later came to claim his soul but paul was ready for her.he shot her with the shortgun he hid under his bed.as the mami-wata shook the bullet off,he followed it the juju he had acquired from the babalawo in his mothers village.them talk say mami-wata power pass winch.she used him to wipe ceiling before demolishing his mansion with water.he died choking on the water.

Mb exhausted.i dey cum o.mk i go buy airtime