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the update is taking a longer time because of some tinz i have to fix...... am always busy most of the time and am making a promise of dropping the next update soon and making it longer than the previous ones.... please, bear with me

jameskudooski,you av neva let me down before for once....... keep it rolling biko

Oroolorun:
Omo Jesu, this update is very small.
What made Souloho19 and Centino stands out is there ability to drop long update at the right time when people are yearning for it.
Work on this.
Your story is beautiful with interesting characters.
Ride on boss.

i will work on that boss.....
nd will drop another one today to make up for yesterday.... Jah bless baba

JamesKudooski:
Wow! Thank Jehovah for all inspiration. Abeg stand up oooo. You are doing a good job. Nice story you've got, you know.

Keep it rolling.

sure,i will... if nothing is there to inspire me, realizing my role model in literature is here is an inspiration inspirator on its own.... u will go places

multikolour:
Good update, you will be thinking your lies and excuses before your babe even ask you

i Dey tell yhu

JamesKudooski:
Wooow! Mcjesuspikin, this is wonderful. I kept smiling all through. Lovely plot. Just that you didnt mention me. I only got fortunate to stumble across the story.

More update, bro.

Am very sorry boss mi..... my mind wasn't there boss.you no, you were the one that gave me this inspiration. without you, I wouldn't have opened this nairaland. Am xowie sir.should I stand up ni, cos am on my knees already

Oya..... me self don jump enta.... tanks for d mention boss.Your story 'Jewel from the ghetto' inspired me to open a nairaland account and also start writing a story also...... Always a leader, forever a leader.Jah bless you boss... make I go order for popcorn and soft drink... Biko, I dey come

Multikolour emeraldlife queenite Oroolorun Danchoco
Episode 5
Chizzy
I woke up the next day feeling tired I knew I have something important to attend to today,but sincerely,i just cant remember what exactly.I moved to the toilet to ease myself.i switched on the shower without even allowing the water to touch me.Like a confused person, I switched it off again and walk inside my room.I took a mirror and look at my face,my injuries are yet to be healed completely.I cursed Femi inwardly and drop the mirror.Immediately,Like a flash, it rushed into my head.How did I manage to forget?My girlfriend will be spending the weekend with me.I quickly picked my phone and dailed her number
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Sandra
I was woken up by my Dad's call.I turned from side to side lazily before picking the call at the second ring.

"Good morning Dad"I said,rubbing my sleepy face
"Morning Jewel.Join me in the Gym now.Its important"He said
"Dad, its just 8:30am,am still sleeping.I will join you when am awake"I answered with close eyes
"Common Jewel,I need you urgently"
"Okay dad"I said before dropping the call.I grumbled a little before getting out of bed.I wore a pink slippers and walk out of my room without even brushing my teeth or changing my night gown.I got to the gym house and saw my Dad and Stepmother working out in the gym.Four bodyguards are also in the room.I Walked up to them and kissed them on their cheek
"Jewel,No Greeting today? "My dad asked in his teasing voice
"Dad, am sure you were the same person I greeted on phone not up to five minutes ago "I answered,sitting down on a huge stool and collected a cup of coffee from one of the guard.

He smiled without looking at my face.My father is a tall Man with a good body that could be passed for a model.He is dark and handsome.Even at 53years,He still look 30.He seldom smile.But when he does,his teeth compliment his physic which make him irresistible to even young ladies.In my early years,I have seen him with younger ladies and i understand they will always hang around him.
My step mother is an opposite of my earlier description of my father.She is of average height with an overbleached skin.Her make up are always odd and just like my dad, she hardly smile.She hasn't given birth which gave me the conclusion she is barren but Dad love her alot.Being the father's pet,i have learn to love whatsoever my father love.Since I came back from Manchester,My step mother and I hardly talk.With the information I gathered, their union is just 5years now.
"I heard you left this house without a bodyguard yesterday and a day before.Give me a good reason why you shouldn't be scolded now"He asked frowning
"Am a mature Lady.A good reason why you wont touch me"I answered with a smile.One thing my father love most about me is my smile and I use it in capturing him in most cases
"Sandra,Please,dont ever leave this house again without a bodyguard.This is Nigeria"He said with a frown which makes him look ugly
and irritating.
"Dad, am not a kid and can never be a slave in my father's house.Its my choice.i will decide to go out with guards or not to"I answered with my voice raised.My father hardly call me by my real name and whenever he call my real name, I knew for sure he is angry.
"Sandra, this topic is closed.Dont leave this house without a guard"He said with an air of authority.I love my dad and his words a lot but I hate guards.I was lost of words.My stepmother was just staring,i guess also confused.My phone rang and I excused myself to pick it
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Chizzy
"Hello Dear"I said with excitement
"My one and only husby"She answered in her ever jovial voice.Adebisi is the daughter a Soldier and they are very rich.She most time send money to me.she is a spoilt brat but very fun being with.
"where are you dear"I asked
"I am on my way to your place.I just got to Iyana Isolo"She said in her ever lively voice
"OK, am home.My friends and I are expecting you"I said and she laughed
"Will join you soon lover boy"
"Love you baby"I said and ended the call.I quickly rush to the parlour and saw Femi and Centino playing Ps2

"Guys,Bisi go soon land o.She don almost reach here.Make una help me arrange house small biko"I said with pleading eyes.One thing I love most about my friends is the cooperation.They stopped the game and joined me in arranging the parlour and kitchen.Some minutes later, the whole place look more clean than Aso Rock.We all sat down in the parlour expecting our Special Guest,or better still,My love.Minutes later, We heard a knock on the door.I rushed to the door to open it and saw Adebisi and Augustina there.Augustina was one of the girls I f**ked at will around my place.I have been avoiding her lately and seeing her beside my girlfriend now should be included in 1000 ways to die .I almost fainted seeing both of them smiling at me.Just wished the trumpet can sound now.I mean right now

Oroolorun:
But don't forget that na the beauty dey burns jeep, tears certificate, stabs stomach, claims prosperties... while our not so bad aunty them are so gentle & faithful

fact.... and my hands are up...... the most important is attitude not beauty......
the best is aving both of them.....

Oroolorun:
Mcjesuspikin, you don join the list of writers that need to be watching their back while walking on a lonely street. Haba, how come everytime na beautiful beautiful, when are we having story for our not too bad aunty?
Oya continue.
But there is God o

Na fine gals get this world biko.....
next update tomorrow...
ND tanks for d comment

multikolour:
Lol, I remembered my girlfriend back in two hundred level, she is leaving my school to LAUTECH due to bokoram insurgency around UNIMAID, so she visited me to say good bye.
I refused to wash my pilow case for one month because it smells her hair cream.

hahahahaha....Hope you Neva wash the pillow sha....
Tanks for ur comment bro... more of it

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Multikolour Ann2012 Oroolorun WHOcarex mitchelljnr izaray food have done oooooo
EPISODE 4
Femi
The next day, I was clad in a black blazer on a blue jean.I wore a white top under the blazer.I look around my room wondering when Sandra will be in the room with me.I smiled as my evil thoughts wandered deeper into lust.I was jolted back to life when I heard an intense knock on my door "who is that"I asked hissing
"Baba, open door joor"Centino answered
I walked to the door and opened it.He was dressed in a wine top and faded blue jean.He helped me comb my hair and also adjusted my clothe."what do you want to borrow"I asked.The only thing centino haven't borrowed is my body part.He once borrowed my mum during his Graduation party.I will explain better another time
"so,you mean I no no pass borrow borrow abi"He said amid laughter
"You can see am going on a date.tell me what you want to borrow biko"
"Well,am just here to make your date a perfect and memorable one"He gave me a red handkerchief and almost killed me with perfume.He advised me to wear a Red and white canvas which I did.I gave him a pat and took my shade and my expensive wristwatch.He offered to give a ride which am happy with.
We got into the parlour and saw Chizzy ironing his clothes.He smiled when he saw me
"Prince,Best of luck today "He said moving closer
"Thanks"I answered,giving him our normal handshake
"my babe go enta lag tomorrow oooooooo"He announced with smiles.
"which of them"Centino asked with frowns
Chizzy is a boss when it comes to ladies.We fondly call him Chief player.He once dated Three roommates and played his card well.he had sex with the three of them before dumping them.Am sure Chizzy can never make heaven.Even if he should repent and make heaven,He can never see God.He almost dated my Sister but gave him a stern warning when I observed his movement
"my real babe naw Adebisi.she go just stay for the weekend "He said.
Bisi once live in Lagos.Born to a military father,we don't joke around her.my experience with soldier has orient me to never talk to them at all.I gave my life to Christ after a soldier slapped me on that ojudu berger bridge before I collected my life back the next day "No shit.Am late"I announced,looking at my wristwatch and making my way out.
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The journey to Hi-point hotel took longer than normal due to the traffic and I guess the unusual silence.I was nervous and I sense centino could see that because he folded my hands in his and gave me an encouraging smile.centino pull up two buildings before the hotel and gave me a knowing smile
"prince"He called with a serious but calm tone
"Yes boss"I answered like a loyal guard
"I can see you are in love.I have never seen you this nervous before.I want you to be careful and take your time.not all that glitters are gold.Just make sure you are not walking into traps.And send the secret signal Incase you need help"He said with the same look and voice.I shake his hand and get down.i muttered a word of prayer and wave him off.
I entered into high point hotel and move to the bar.The whole place was lively with dignities of different class.A guy was dancing with a girl at a corner with his back turned on me.i chuckled remembering how I do spend my days months ago.looking closely, I realize it was segun.Fear gripped me.i move quickly to where he was standing
"segun, follow me now"I said authoritatively and marched out.he followed without questions but obviously confused on whatsoever might be happening
"Guy, what happened now"He asked when we got to a corner.
"Baba, no spoil my show oooooo.I will be meeting with Sandra here today and you know, she might recognize you after yesterday game"
"Na true ooooooooo.dat bae Na one of those side chicks wey I dey enter once in a while oooooo.make I carry her go your room niyen naw "He asked
"Baba, if its my village, I will accept.Just leave now.wait,let me go and bring her outside "
"no shit. Anything for my boss"He answered and bow slightly with smiles.
I walked in and Saw Sandra pressing her phone.I practically stop breathing for some seconds. She was way too beautiful to be real.She was clad in a yellow gown with a very long hair.Her make up was Not too much but suit her best.She was putting on a Golden wristwatch, earrings and shoes.her bracelets were breathtaking.Of a truth, I can't remember what exactly am inside for. She saw me and smiled. She signalled to me to come over and I returned the signal indicating "just a minute"I walk up to segun chicks table.The girl was still dancing but now with a bottle of Smirnoff.without any word, I dragged her outside and it was obvious she was also confused.I hand her over to Segun and marched in
"Who is she"she asked the minute I stepped in
She stood up and gave me a hug.I sat down opposite her and she did likewise "thats my landlord's daughter.She has been away from home since yesterday and our landlord have been looking for her and here she is drinking and dancing without even thinking of home.cant you see she is something else? "I asked as guilt rushed through me.I never plan to start my date with series of lies but it seem thats the only way to be holy for now. she smiled and asked.
"Prince, prince. Or your girlfriend? "She asked amid laughter
"Lailai, I don't have a girlfriend.Am single and searching "That's another lie.i have 5 girlfriends but I stop seeing them as my girlfriend the day I met Sandra.
"Who will believe that? "She asked still laughing."Barman"I called ignoring her. "that's just the real truth "I told her
"what do you have? "I asked
"Everything sir" He said
"Get me apotic red wine.and you dear? "I asked
"Get me African wine"she said
"Where do you live? "she asked
"I live at Ejigbo"I answered.
"Wow!!!so, u come to Ajao estate from Ejigbo everyday?? "She asked really surprised. "Yeah.Atleast,where we are now is closer to my place than yours"I answered
"what about your parent"She asked
"My dad was murdered when I was small but my mum is fine.She live at abeokuta"I answered.I was surprised I wasn't feeling the normal hatred and anger I do feel after answering that question.
"Am sorry about that.I was just trying to........ "Her voice trailed off when her phone rang
"Hello.......where are you........ I will join you within the next 30mins........... Of course yes.Dont allow him leave yet.......... I will be with you now"She ended the call and stood up
"I will have to go now.Tanks for your time.Am sorry it was short but I have something to attend to"
I called the barman and asked him our expense and was surprised we already spent #9000 on two bottles.I wanted to pull out my wallet but she stopped me insisting she was the one that invited me over. She gave me a bundle of a thousand naira note and told me to settle him,she gave me a peck and left hurriedly.I gave the barman 10k and he was very grateful.I move to the toilet and counted the remaining cash.Ninety thousand naira.I smiled even though am not after the money.I love Sandra and will do anything to marry her.One thing is certain, even if I take my bath, I wont touch that part she kissed for days.... (Winks)
Please, comment to encourage m the work please

multikolour:
Nice one but always say something even no update, it keeps alive

noted boss.... I will surely work on that... Jah bless you

multikolour:
Nice one but always say something even no update, it keeps alive

Noted boss... I will work on that... I promised

Oroolorun:
Wear agbada or george na. With this so call Sandra of a girl, Femi is playing with fire, real fire.

Na fire for fire naw..... Love can make you overlook some tough senerios..... Femi all the way

oruchechuks:
I bumped into your story on the front page. Let me say congratulations. It shows you are doing a great job.
I have seen many praises to your work from your readers and let me add a few critics to the story because good or bad, critics are a way of boosting writers moral and confidence on story telling. Here are my few critics:

1. TYPOS: Typos no matter how small are turn off for readers. They are like pot holes on a fast ride. You won't want your readers to pause for while while they make some spelling corrections. I will advice you read all over at least twice before you post or you can make use of office reader to automatically detect typos as you prepare your work.

2. BE SPECIFIC ON CHARACTERS: When more than two characters are having a conversation, try to be specific on the character that is speaking. For example when Amanda's father and Ross where in Amanda's office together with her mum, you were repeatedly using 'he said' for the conversation of both men. This makes it difficult to know who is speaking. Why not try to mention their name at the end of their word. Try and work on that aspect as well.

3. DESCRIBE, NARRATE, EXPLAIN: Yes describe! Narrate! Explain! descriptions are like spices to your work. It paints the mental pictures to your readers and also makes your work full. No reader will be complaining of short updates if you kill them with loads of beautiful descriptions about the governors house, Amanda's house, office, and other environments. Believe me you will love it yourself when you use description very well.

4 MAKE IT REAL: Yeah, although it's a friction but make your story line as real as possible. This is Nigeria and your story is about a Nigerian character, so it will be real enough if Amanda's age is around 27 or 28. At least that will be real enough to tally with her achievements. The 21 year old you pegged it is not that realistic.

These are my few critics for now. I will love to see you work on them as you have a very superb storyline. Please don't be discouraged or disappointed, it is not easy to write and I commend you for this. I will be following your story and will like to see your improvements.

Well done!

interesting.... I will need ur help please

nice update bro

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Episode 3
FEMI
I was shocked beyond words.How on earth did she get to know it was all a game
I new I played my part perfectly, my friends were just too perfect in the play.... I new something was amiss somewhere.I went on my kneel immediately
"Sandra,am very sorry.I new I was wrong, please forgive me"i said in a sober tone.I was afraid everything I want will fade this very minute
She hold my hands,hissed and replied "Kneeling wont solve anything here.So,you dont know I saw you in the front of my house both yesterday and a day before abi"The happiness that erupted in me that moment is more than the one felt by the blind bartimaeus in the Bible.I almost jump up.
"Am very sorry dear. It wont repeat itself.I was only missing you and I need to see you everyday"i said while holding her hands and trying to stand up
She look into my eyes, smiled and said"thanks for saving my life"
"You are welcome.Thank God I was lucky to appear in time"She gave a Hug that sent a shiver down inside me.Immediately,i new am very lucky.I got the best slap of my life and the best hug the same day.(God,i will worship you forever)
"where are you going"i asked still holding her hands"
"was planning to see a friend,but I already changed my mind.Am going home"
I smiled and we walk together while chatting about the experience.we got to her car and her driver was seriously sleeping.She woke him up and collected my number.that moment, I would reject #30billion just to give her my contact(omo,i don port).She gave me a hug got inside the car and the car kick to life. I was just waving my hand even when the car wasn't in sight again.... For the first time since I was born,I thank my village people for their support....
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I got home some minutes later and met my friends eating noodles and Egg.I need to play it cool even though am seriously hungry.
"Guys, am home."I announced as if they haven't seen me before
"We know"centino answered me
Looking around, I observed Chizzy has a cut around his neck and face.centino got a small cut around his lips but segun was fine.I got the chance to check myself also and realized I only felt a slight pain on my right wrist.
"so, what's the good news now "Chizzy asked
I took a spoon and joined them.My guys hardly serve foods.We prefer eating in the pot.
"We are now friends.I don hammer"I said with noddles in my mouth.....They all hailed me and shook hands with me and I promised to treat their injuries
"Interesting.Oya,find me something make I waka"segun said and I gave him 2k... He hit me playfully and make his way out after drinking water.My phone rang and am convinced its Sandra
"Hello dear"I said when I saw its an unknown number
"Oko mi, Bawo ni"my mum answered
I hissed"am fine ma"
"Bolu said you are coming home soon"
"yes mum... I will...I will call you later mum.want to fix something"
"wait, who is the person you were calling dear befor..."I ended the calling.Am not ready for any marriage sermon again

Minutes later Sandra sent me a text and we agreed on seeing the next day at Hi-point hotel.
Guys, please what should I wear
I want to dress in the best way
TBC tomorrow

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Episode 2
Femi
I pick up my small mirror to be sure am ready for today.Looking unconvinced, I pull off the suit I was wearing and opted for a blue top.Today,i believe will make or mar me but I silently prayed it should be the former.
I have been on Sandra trail for days but she is always with guards.without being told, we knew we can never execute our plans with those rough looking bodyguards.Just a punch can send me to my early grave and presently, I never ready.�
Segun,one of my most trusted friends told me she will be going out with only her driver to the beach today.though,its difficult to believe but am still ready to take any risk just to see her.
Segun,Centino and Chigozie were on her trail and confirmed it to be true.i quickly rush out of our apartment after putting on a timberland boot.i flagged down a taxi and we headed to elegushi beach.I received a text from Chizzy telling me everything is going on as planned.
I got there and realized my friends were not yet in sight.I decided to sit at a corner till they are around.
"everybody is looking for that something"my phone rang solemnly.it was my sister
"Tife, how are you"
"big brother.nawa for you ooooo.you didn't even bother to call me at all"she said faking an angry voice
I chuckled "am sorry second mum. I was just busy with work "I told her
"wow!!! you now work"she asked.this girl can really be annoying.Since I graduated from Moshood Abiola Polythecnic,they knew am not working but Atleast, I still take care of them.I regretted mentioning work this very moment
"yes.i now work in a company "I lied
"praise the Lord.Am happy for you bb.i will come around next week be dat ooooo "she added with happiness.bb is the name she call me instead of big brother.
"dont bother coming dear, I will come around soon.I have something to show you self"another lie.... I was about to say something when I saw Sandra's car.my heart started beating fast.I told her I will call her later in the night and immediately ended the call... my heartbeat was now beating fast.I.I prayed silently and put on my shades.Time for action

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Sandra
I purposely told my guards to stay back.i hate being treated like a kid.since I came back from Manchester,Am not allowed to go anywhere without my bodyguards.for Christ sake, am not a prisoner.
"Frank, wait for me.I will soon be back"I told my driver"
"yes ma"he answered "And, be careful"he added
I gave him my best smile and move away from the car.Realizing he can't see me again,i sigh a sigh of relief.my initial plan was to see a friend some little distance from here.I took a small road that leads to her place.i felt someone was following me,i immediately look back but didn't see anyone.
A phone rang somewhere behind me and my fear increased.I quicken my steps to be on the safe side

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Centino
we kept following her with the motive of executing our plan.we were careful not to make her see us.my phone rang and looking at the caller, it was Esther.i quickly picked it
'hello Esther,am in the middle of something.i will call you back"i said in a low tone
"wait centi, I need airtime #500 for...... "
I quickly ended the call and switched off my phone.Stupid girl,for the first time, I deny her something.I smiled and my friends nodded to me.Thats the sign,Time to act.
we moved quickly having observed she is in a bush path now.we ran up to her and immediately surrounded her.she was afraid,i was happy she was.
"who are you"she asked with a shaky voice
"You are Chief Ambode daughter right, your cup is filled today"segun said
"Your father is a wicked man. and we are here to treat you the same way he treated us"i added
"please, dont hurt me, I will do anything you want"she said visibly shaking
"Anything we want "chigozie asked biting his lips."Lets rape her then"chigozie added
"Please no, I can't.please am begging.i will give you money.any amount.dont do that please "
"Just keep quiet "I added. "Chizzy, carry her"
Chizzy carried her and we were about to leave when we heard a voice behind us
"If I were you, I will drop her this minute "

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Femi
The plan is working.I quickly find my way behind them and said "if I were you, I will drop her this minute "they turned to face me and centino winked to me."who are you"segun asked
"am her fiance.why not show some respect to my fiancee or I teach you how to "I said with a calm voice"
"and what will you do"centino asked
"I will do it the best way you deserved "I answered removing my shades.
"beat him up"centino commanded.
I smiled. they both rush on me.i dodged a punch from Chizzy and push him backward.segun throw a kick at me and I dodged it also.i tried to punch Segun but he blocked it now opening the the left side of his chest.i slot in an heavy punch there and he staggered backward.Chizzy gave me a kick which I blocked with my left hand.as planned I gave him a kick and he fell on segun and both fell down...
I move closer to centino and keep throwing punches which he keep dodging.He gave me a punch and I fell down.He rushed on me and I manage to pull him on the floor.I sat down on him and started punching him in his face.chizzy,having recovered,hit me from behind and I staggered to stand on my feet.I gave him a Bruce Lee like kick and he was on the floor also. The 3 of them ran away and I took her and I made an attempt to pursue them before standing back.I move closer to Sandra and clean some dust off her gown.
"How are you feeling now" I asked
she look at me with anger in her eyes and slapped me.I was shocked.That means she knew its a game.A plan to win her over.
"I can explain"I said without thinking twice
"Do you think I won't find out?"She asked with some expression I couldn't read
TBC.... please drop your comments

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I'm here man. Blessings. I dey watch as Centino dey transfer hin life to hin blind date. Chai

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Episode 1

Femi
I pull up in front of Westcare Supermarket.Almost becoming a ritual, I will first of all dress myself before making my way into any public gathering or any firm at all...
Within seconds,a yellow lamboughini avetandor pull up some little metres from me. Two men on suit hurriedly got down from the back seat,one move briskly to the supermarket and take his position beside the door. the other man opened the front seat door.For the first time, I saw who exactly they were worshipping.
I wind down my car glass, or better still, my borrowed car to have a better view.she should be in her early twenties. A fair average height lady elegantly came down,a step at a time.she was putting on a dark shade which marched her black gown and her golden shoes.Her small purse was held with her left hand, and I can bet, its worth millions.
For seconds, all I could think of is this mysterious lady. It seem am in love already, she look too rich for anyone especially me.Fifteen years from observing my father's death, I have grown up to become fearless with the same motive of revenge, but sincerely, it seems am not really inspired to revenge as it is in my early days again.
I have grown up to become a dream of most ladies.Tall,slim with a good body. am dark with a physic as a result of my weekly visit to the gym
I walked into the supermarket having forgotten my main reason of visiting in the first place.i searched for her in a subdue way and found her in a corner picking some few clothes.
I moved hurriedly to meet her having observed that her bodyguards are meters away.
Immediately, I got closer, I was intimidated by her look.this girl is too rich to be real.what really do I want to say.i gathered a little courage and try starting a conversation
"Hello damsel"i said in a rough voice
"hello"she replied without looking up.what should I say next?.it seems am seriously charmed just staring at her.
"I was surprised an angel like you would come shopping on earth rather than in heaven where she belongs"i said trying to sweet talk her.
"I prefer doing it on earth here"she replied with a sarcastic voice."why not keep your hands busy the same way your mouth is busy"she add, this time looking me in the eyes.
Omg!!! I have never seen anyone as beautiful as this girl before.Her smiles were captivating coupled with her dimples. I swear not to give up that moment
"Am femi, but my friends call me prince "I stretched out my hand, and that happened to be my greatest mistake of the day.pretending not to see my hand,she asked "prince of where"
"for now,no kingdom, but I will love to be the king of your heart"
She laughed, and my heart stop beating.moving a little closer she said
"A word of advice to a one day friend, stay away from your early grave"she Walked to the counter after putting on her glasses.
Not ready to give up,I followed her like a sheep about to be slaughtered.realizing she wanted to pay for what she bought, I saw that as a perfect moment to get closer.I immediately pull out my ATM card from my wallet and gave it to the fat lady behind the counter.my new crush stare at me without any word or even expression.
"Oga, you dont have enough cash here. you only have #87,000 here"the fat girl dropped the bomb of the day.
"so, how much is her money?"I asked realizing I already make a fool of myself.
"oga, its #350'000"she replied
I quickly snatched my card from her. shocked and surprised.this girl is seriously rich. I look at what she bought and was more confused when I saw just two tops, one gown and a jean.
she saw my look and smiled."My name is sandra"she said now in laughter. it was as if I won a jackpot.my confusion gave way to smiles.
I shabily asked"can I have your digit? Atleast to thank you for making my day ".she paid her expense and signalled to the only bodyguard in sight
she smiled again "my dear, I love your courage, but dont allow it kill you."
she started walking away and added "Am Chief Ambode daughter"she turned,smile and took her leave. for minutes, I was in a spot.Chief Ambode daughter? what was I thinking?
I cant be in love with that man daughter. he is believed to be wicked and he kills whoever comes his way.I knew am making a huge mistake, but inwardly am sure its a mistake am happy making

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I got home later in the evening and met my friends at home.both glued to their laptops.without any greeting, I opened my bag and bring out mine also.
I stay in a 3 bedroom flat with my friends.and trust me,your guess is just right. we are yahoo boys.we dont do the plus thing, but we are making cash.
"were, where my car"chigozie asked
"baba, which kind question be that now, I won drop your car for road before ni? "I asked faking an angry look
"as if no be you, give me key joor"
"Chizzy, I swear, I go buy my own car also"i said and throw the key toward the door
"oga, buy first Biko before you start to dey rub us mouth"centino said amid laughter. I took a pillow and throw it at centino.both of them just keep laughing.immediately,centino phone rang
"I swear, na Esther"chizzy said while laughing
Esther is centino blind date, all she know best is send me card,send me cash. I do wonder how and why centino loved her that much. as wise as centino is, he could be foolish sometimes.
I faced my laptop and keep working while listening to their conversation

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Centino
Immediately I saw the call, my heart skipped a beat.esther is my blind date, but it seems I love her a lot.i picked it while murmuring some words even I cant hear
"hello sweetheart "I heard from the other end
"my baby"i replied
"baby, am seriously missing you ooooo, and it seem I will just die each seconds without you"
"same here dear. cant wait to see you"i replied
"centi,am coming for a wedding at oshodi next week, am sure we will see. right? "
"sure, yeah" I said trying to subdue my happiness
'Okay dear, we talk later "I added
"wait dear, can you please help me with MTN #1000.i need to subscribe dear. "
this is her 58th time of asking for airtime from me. and am always giving her
"anything for you special baby"i replied
"love you so much "she said.
I ended the call... my friends were not even looking at me as they usually do anytime she call... I took out my phone ready to make transfer to her

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Femi
I explained everything that happened between myself and Sandra to my friends not leaving out any detail. they were really interested and we came up with a plan on how to make her mine.
I wont tell you the plan yet. I need to relax a little, tomorrow is a big day for me.
Sandra must finally be mine

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PROLOGUE
I immediately abandoned the clothes I was washing when I heard an high pitched scream from my compound.without being told, I knew it was my mother's voice.my fear increased when I saw people rushing into our compound.i dropped the bucket I was holding and rushed in
Forgive my manners, My name is oluwafemi.I am 10yrs old.I am the first born of my parent.My father have two wives,though,my stepmother had no child. I have a younger sister called Boluwatife.but I prefer calling her Tife.i am not just intelligent but also stronger than my age dictate.sincerely,i have never love my stepmother for once. Everything about her is odd.she is different.and I felt she is always up to something.I was washing my clothes when I heard the scream
I rushed inside the parlour and to my surprise, everywhere is filled up. I have to make my way to the center of the parlour and what greeted my eyes was a shocker.My father was lying in a pool of his own blood. I screamed in horror.i made to touch him, but it seems impossible, people were holding me, mum was crying, my sister was staring, neighbors were sympathizing with us,but deep down I new I have lost everything.
For the first time, I heard my mum speak"she has escaped.that bastard.Moyin baye mi je "she keep saying....
Did she just mention Moyin?My step mother did this?
That very minute I knew for sure I will revenge, even if I have to die revenging... I must kill her.
I stormed out of the compound determined to kill Everybody

[b]PROLOGUE
I immediately abandoned the clothes I was washing when I heard an high pitched scream from my compound.without being told, I knew it was my mother's voice.my fear increased when I saw people rushing into our compound.i dropped the bucket I was holding and rushed in
Forgive my manners, My name is oluwafemi.I am 10yrs old.I am the first born of my parent.My father have two wives,though,my stepmother had no child. I have a younger sister called Boluwatife.but I prefer calling her Tife.i am not just intelligent but also stronger than my age dictate.sincerely,i have never love my stepmother for once. Everything about her is odd.she is different.and I felt she is always up to something.I was washing my clothes when I heard the scream
I rushed inside the parlour and to my surprise, everywhere is filled up. I have to make my way to the center of the parlour and what greeted my eyes was a shocker.My father was lying in a pool of his own blood. I screamed in horror.i made to touch him, but it seems impossible, people were holding me, mum was crying, my sister was staring, neighbors were sympathizing with us,but deep down I new I have lost everything.
For the first time, I heard my mum speak"she has escaped.that bastard.Moyin baye mi je "she keep saying....
Did she just mention Moyin?My step mother did this?
That very minute I knew for sure I will revenge, even if I have to die revenging... I must kill her.
I stormed out of the compound determined to kill Everybody

[/b]PROLOGUE
I immediately abandoned the clothes I was washing when I heard an high pitched scream from my compound.without being told, I knew it was my mother's voice.my fear increased when I saw people rushing into our compound.i dropped the bucket I was holding and rushed in
Forgive my manners, My name is oluwafemi.I am 10yrs old.I am the first born of my parent.My father have two wives,though,my stepmother had no child. I have a younger sister called Boluwatife.but I prefer calling her Tife.i am not just intelligent but also stronger than my age dictate.sincerely,i have never love my stepmother for once. Everything about her is odd.she is different.and I felt she is always up to something.I was washing my clothes when I heard the scream
I rushed inside the parlour and to my surprise, everywhere is filled up. I have to make my way to the center of the parlour and what greeted my eyes was a shocker.My father was lying in a pool of his own blood. I screamed in horror.i made to touch him, but it seems impossible, people were holding me, mum was crying, my sister was staring, neighbors were sympathizing with us,but deep down I new I have lost everything.
For the first time, I heard my mum speak"she has escaped.that bastard.Moyin baye mi je "she keep saying....
Did she just mention Moyin?My step mother did this?
That very minute I knew for sure I will revenge, even if I have to die revenging... I must kill her.
I stormed out of the compound determined to kill Everybody

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