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Poems For Review / Re: This Boy Is Mad by merit12(f): 4:37am On Jan 05, 2016 |
Qaisar1:don't you sleep?have you close from that meeting? |
Poems For Review / Re: He Is Here. by merit12(f): 11:12pm On Jan 04, 2016 |
Scholarincharge: Thanks I hope you liked it.... |
Poems For Review / Re: Celebrities Or Yeyebrities? by merit12(f): 10:30pm On Jan 04, 2016 |
Proudly and rudely they came! Thinking they are self-made! Ranting and mocking and swearing Demoting and belittling themselves. In this frist line the writer makes us understand they are more than one by use they.they àre supposed to be role model now because they were mocking and swearing it makes them really become little we had rated them big pictures in our heart. Calmly and quietly we are Watching as the scene unfolds: Thinking who these are; Making effort to grasp the show... We are means people watching were more than one like a event because it uses scenes. It as of the people were watching them as a drama and trying to understand. What that is all Some saying they're celebrities: I would call them "yeyebrities" His own opinon they are destroying their image while the rest audience watching says .they are icon .respectful popular rolemodel, celebrities Will this pun of shaming porn ever be pound? Patiently waiting for another round... But if 2016 unfolds like like this, Then watch out for many "yeyebrities" shows! The write expressions is sad what has happened at the event People that supposed to be model for us are giving shameful display of themselves. .. It like a puzzle I think olamide and Don jazzy I think I never said it was them [/quote] 1 Like |
Poems For Review / Re: He Is Here. by merit12(f): 10:09pm On Jan 04, 2016 |
]Here he is Our long expected friend Fist, debut and woe From the frist three lines I understand that the friend that's been expected is here that means the mood of the writer is happy. Logger of our daily trends With his twelve log books He has booked a day extra than yesteryear Carbon of his age dead great father: 1988! Check the dairy. This part is the description of his friend.he is already aware of everything and he keeps record of it with his books.now he added other day to the time he is supposed to stay .twelve log book means twelve months in a year now he add other Extra day .also had leap year He's here to bless all Including sundry Fresh out on Friday A promise of many holidays These lines means the blessing he will bring for them the long expected blessing Another leap year Is here With vision of census Right ahead Hope it will go Sans turmoil 366 days of expectations And enviable varying encounters A stopwatch, A jotter, A monitor, An atlas To the circulars journeys He tells us about the name and features of the friend.leap year. I love all the metaphors It beautiful of describing leap nice poem I hope am right with my explanation |
Poems For Review / Re: Lola's List by merit12(f): 8:43am On Jan 04, 2016 |
E383:must you always call llaykorn every were you go?is he your wife? |
Poems For Review / Re: This Boy Is Mad by merit12(f): 12:28pm On Jan 02, 2016 |
llaykorn: Were do we start from I want to learn poetry from you |
Poems For Review / Re: This Boy Is Mad by merit12(f): 12:26pm On Jan 02, 2016 |
llaykorn: Soon imparlare italiano anche cosi espanol |
Poems For Review / Re: Unfair! by merit12(f): 12:11pm On Jan 02, 2016 |
Uhhhhhh |
Poems For Review / Re: This Boy Is Mad by merit12(f): 12:06pm On Jan 02, 2016 |
Thanks for all the corrections Adesso sono capito tutti Lui non e Nero Lui e Blanco Pero solo amici Lui e pazzo Fidami llaykorn: |
Poems For Review / Re: Yes My Friend Emaculate99 by merit12(f): 11:58am On Jan 02, 2016 |
emaculate99: Grazie Sono felice sei te piace Come stai |
Poems For Review / Re: Were Is Llaykorn? by merit12(f): 11:30am On Jan 02, 2016 |
llaykorn: Bouena Dias como Estes usted? Boungiorno come stai tutto bene? Llaykorn the legend Am fine oooo......Am trying to work on my poetry loving it these day and try to come out clean like you....creativity I need and expression of my self Am still dark as ever check my profile for confirmation. I need some coaching from you .... 1 Like 1 Share |
Poems For Review / Were Is Llaykorn? by merit12(f): 1:46am On Jan 02, 2016 |
Were is llaykorn ? I nor see am like m.i music intro called action film Wondering why am searching for him? Wondering why his name is with high and low? Trust me I have no answer for that. Were is llaykorn I ask again the second time Can you throw golds away and pick steel? Can you reject handshake from the president Obama Can you leave your car at home and trekk to your village? So as llaykorn the poet writting in the cave Hiding in the lonely place watching the city of poetry in the night. Saving innocent ones not to loose focus in writting like the poet he is made to be Making haters of poems becoming great writter. Were is llaykorn I ask the third time I can't find him here I seek him Has anyone see him in valley,the cave in the threads? There are invisible gift for him as a little reward As the award of king . Were is llaykorn for the last time Questions for you my noble one I guess I ask here and now my teacher Abeg you fit look my poem and correct me bros? 2 Likes 2 Shares |
Poems For Review / Re: Yes My Friend Emaculate99 by merit12(f): 1:21am On Jan 02, 2016 |
emaculate99:niente prego tranquila |
Poems For Review / It Unfair E383 by merit12(f): 1:19am On Jan 02, 2016 |
It is unfair to enter a home without knocking It's is unfair for you to think it fair When the fair ones still thinks they are unfair. No greetings no knocking No bringing of peace in this house Like a landlord looking for the debtors As the eagles that takes the chicks without warning As the air that fill the room without notice. I still think it unfair to enter without knocking With empty hand you came Is there something fair for me Yes ...No...Maybe I guess your mind maybe. It is unfair for me to treat you this way Without knowing what prompt you in my thread Welcoming you is fair Giving you a sit and water maybe is fair I think is fair me to ask you this How far nah..wetin you bring for me e383 1 Like 1 Share |
Poems For Review / Re: This Boy Is Mad by merit12(f): 1:14am On Jan 02, 2016 |
E383: It is unfair to enter a home without knocking It's is unfair for you to think it fair When the fair ones still thinks they are unfair. No greetings no knocking No bringing of peace in this house Like a landlord looking for the debtors As the eagles that takes the chicks without warning As the air that fill the room without notice. I still think it unfair to enter without knocking With empty hand you came Is there something fair for me Yes ...No...Maybe I guess your mind maybe. It is unfair for me to treat you this way Without knowing what prompt you in my thread Welcoming you is fair Giving you a sit and water maybe is fair I think is fair me to as you this How far nah..wetin you bring for me e383 |
Poems For Review / Yes My Friend Emaculate99 by merit12(f): 1:00am On Jan 02, 2016 |
Yes I answer to you my Lord Your command only I execute Like the supreme legend of my time Like the only eagle that fly high. Yes my Lord only you I can live with Not like the supreme GOD above But like a friend that comes at a time of need Only your language I speak. You only came to my rescue When jaymejate tries to oppress me Only you my friend teach me my correction Only you look through my poem Like the mother hen protect her children from hawk As God hears the oppression of the Israelite and save them.. Yes my friend your smiles as that of a child that sees his favourite candy Your style my friend as the vision of a writer Yes my friend when I remember your name Yes my friend emaculate99 2 Likes 1 Share |
Poems For Review / Re: This Boy Is Mad by merit12(f): 12:58am On Jan 02, 2016 |
emaculate99: Yes I answer to you my Lord Your command only I execute Like the supreme legend of my time Like the only eagle that fly high. Yes my Lord only you I can live with Not like the supreme GOD above But like a friend that comes at a time of need Only your language I speak. You only came to my rescue When jaymejate tries to oppress me Only you my friend teach me my correction Only you look through my poem Like the mother hen protect her children from hawk As God hears the oppression of the Israelite and save them.. Yes my friend your smiles as that of a child that sees his favourite candy Your style my friend as the vision of a writer Yes my friend when I remember your name Yes my friend emaculate99 |
Poems For Review / Re: This Boy Is Mad by merit12(f): 12:48am On Jan 02, 2016 |
emaculate99: Yes I answer to you my Lord Your command only I execute Like the supreme legend of my time Like the only eagle that fly high. Yes my Lord only you I can live with Not like the supreme GOD above But like a friend that comes at a time of need Only your language I speak. |
Poems For Review / Re: This Boy Is Mad by merit12(f): 12:42am On Jan 02, 2016 |
Poems For Review / Re: This Boy Is Mad by merit12(f): 12:39am On Jan 02, 2016 |
emaculate99: Grazie mele ....ho capito |
Poems For Review / Re: Dripping Blood And Fleshy Flesh by merit12(f): 12:38am On Jan 02, 2016 |
Quando io finito leggere a me piace molto Bellismo |
Poems For Review / Re: This Boy Is Mad by merit12(f): 12:32am On Jan 02, 2016 |
Poems For Review / Jaymejate Who Do You Think You Are by merit12(f): 12:29am On Jan 02, 2016 |
You are like the witch that flies at night looking for the helpless ones ..... Showing how might and power you are Going in and coming out from people home What the Bleep do you think You are ? The gods ,angels,demons ? Do you think you are a better written? Do you only go into people thread and comment what you like? Are you high on some cheap drug? I need answer to all my questions like a teacher waiting for the students to rise their hands up Who the Bleep do you think you are? Answer me oh answer I knock at your door Like a desperate mother hen looking for the chick Like a hungry lion seeing the existence of a human in the past three days Like weeping parent when they lost their only child they had in thirty years of their life. What the Bleep do you think you are? Like you gave me the strength to write the poem Mind your business as the trader who borrow money from bank Like the child suffering from malnutrition. Mind your business ooo |
Poems For Review / Re: This Boy Is Mad by merit12(f): 12:27am On Jan 02, 2016 |
jaymejate: You are like the witch that flies at night looking for the helpless ones ..... Showing how might and power you are Going in and coming out from people home What the Bleep do you think You are ? The gods ,angels,demons ? Do you think you are a better written? Do you only go into people thread and comment what you like? Are you high on some cheap drug? I need answer to all my questions like a teacher waiting for the students to rise their hands up Who the Bleep do you think you are? Answer me oh answer I knock at your door Like a desperate mother hen looking for the chick Like a hungry lion seeing the existence of a human in the past three days Like weeping parent when they lost their only child they had in thirty years of their life. What the Bleep do you think you are? Like you gave me the strength to write the poem Mind your business as the trader who borrow money from bank Like the child suffering from malnutrition. Mind your business ooo |
Poems For Review / This Boy Is Mad by merit12(f): 12:04am On Jan 02, 2016 |
Are you passionate he ask Are you romantic he fired at me once more smiles filled my face as I remember how crazy he was the first time we chatted.... Marry me he wrote to me Like a mad man woken up from a sweet dream Like a speed of air in raylight Like hottest of the Sun in summer Ahhhhh I said this boy is mad His openness was loud for me to see His careful attention was like eagle searching for prey Ahhh I said this boy is mad I look at him the last time Like a soaked wool in spirit He stood with me like the visible angel guarding me Then I change my mind and say this boy is my Read and review please llaykorn and others |
Poems For Review / Re: The Day I Met My Aduke by merit12(f): 11:24pm On Jan 01, 2016 |
I smell good use of simile ....imagery....comparison |
Celebrities / Re: Actor, Iyke Ogbonna And Wife, Sonia Look Good In New Photo by merit12(f): 2:11pm On Dec 23, 2015 |
Ok |
Romance / Re: 10 Ways To Be The Perfect Girlfriend by merit12(f): 11:57am On Nov 25, 2015 |
All the single ladies..... We hear |
Romance / Re: Ladies Do You Feel Embarrased If He Insists On Using Condom Against Your Wish? by merit12(f): 11:40am On Nov 25, 2015 |
Romance / Re: 10 Types Of Kisses And Their Meanings by merit12(f): 11:34am On Nov 25, 2015 |
Op I do like to try against the wall with you in your dream tonight if you don't mind So we have our frist End time kissing Just thinking Nor reason am go far.... |
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