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micynute94:
Hmm... On Chris sudden change..
>>Ole le evribodi.. Eni ile moba sani barawo

Las Las...
Tinu will go back to Dele echoing the word..
>> Atilo Atide

Oya.. Millieademi.. Jo soapy..

I love ur writing style.. Aswear down.. Fun n filled with suspense.

LOL

Thanks g.

Abeg I don't want to dance soapy again

No, not even close

millieademi:
You guys can do better now. More guesses.

Treasurewamiri, I'm waiting for your guess.


If you guys guess accurately, I promise to drop an update today.

So what do you say?

I said accurately!!

Samola1:
There ain't no need for apologies. All we want is the updates streaming in as often as possible. You should consider putting your stories in a book though cos I believe you are cut out for it. My humble opinion.

Why, thank you!!

Ann2012:
I don't even know where to start guessing from, it's either Chris has been possessed or he discovered a secret

Closest so far. He's discovered something.

fareedah86:
I just knew there was something about Chris......but TINU... I am sad,you are going to make her regret dating Chris

What's love without a little sadness?

[quote author=divinelypruned post=82428796][/quote]Shakara ke. A whole humble me. Lailai.

Samola1:
Why not let us savour the moment rather than putting up guesses. The story is suspense filled in itself than for us to subject ourselves to needless conjectures. Needless to say that I'm keenly following the tread and awaiting your swift update which is rather taking too long. A man's patience is wearing thin.

Ok. I'm sorry. It's just a game I play with all my friends but if you don't like it, I apologise.

You guys can do better now. More guesses.

Treasurewamiri, I'm waiting for your guess.


If you guys guess accurately, I promise to drop an update today.

So what do you say?

Hey guys thanks for all the comments.

Tamara and the Daramolas are not the cause.

Please who has the number of a good deliverance pastor. I've been singing inside life since yesterday. My roommates' mouths are glued to the floor.

So what do you guys think about Chris's new behavior?

What did Tinu do to make him react like that?

Guessing time.

toyhin123:
Wow!
Ma'am this is a nice story u have here. U re going to be such a great writer.
Each update is filled with suspense that i always want to read more till I got to the end. Well done ma. Keep it up.

Thanks b.

Treasurewamiri:
Chris? Tinu? Kilonshele? Someone should please arrange better beating for Chris O, Love don already end? God do answer prayers, Jaiye and Felicia meeting, hnmmm...
@millieademi let me comment my reserve...

Ahh They must not beat Chris o.

Abi, Felicia and Jaiye

decent101:
hell yea! Keep it up OP

Thank you.

Ann2012:
All this twist and turn is giving me headache
Abeg I don't want Tinu to suffer again biko.
Thanks for the update

I'm sorry for the headache.

About Tinu, sorry. I'm in AWON AYE mode right now. Ko si ebo, ko s'etutu.

jayextra:
Lovely updates...I lohhhh you

Awwn, thanks.

I hope we enjoyed the dessert.

prisomic:
Haba Chris again biko ooo!!! Tinu dear so sorry!!its well jare.. well done millieademi, more grace!!

bossy512:
Haaa, what happen to Tinu and Chris? God pls help them. Thanks for the update

Mapelblacq:
who give a damn abt d name, wel f u are a lady i guess u must be as beautiful as ur write up

LOL. I will say you said so o.

Nairaland jo soapy.

I don't know why I'm in a soapy mood o. NTD V has finished me.

Now let's have our creme brulee and black forest cake.

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Délé heeded to Tìmí's advice and wondered if it was the right thing. He wanted Tinú back but Tìmí advised him to grant her the divorce. He had reasoned that Tinú had married him due to his mother's deceit and as such he needed to let her go. He signed the papers and delivered them to her house. His heart broke at her elation. She even thanked him for signing the papers. She allowed him to see the twins for the last time, as they were moving out. He saw at the smug look on Chris' face and couldn't help but feel like a loser. He walked into his children's room and found them asleep. They couldn't even see him for the last time.

He wished for a lot of things. He wished he had done things differently. He looked at them and cried. They had just recently grown attached and he was about to cease to be a part of their lives. He took out his phone and took a picture of them. He'd hold onto that till he sees them again. He smiled weakly at the picture. These were the only good things he had done in his life. They made all his degrees and accomplishments fade away.

He walked out of the room slowly, relishing every glimpse he got of them, trying to capture their sleeping bliss in his mind. He sighed as he got out of the room. He heard Tinú laughing and Chris shushing her. Jealousy flowed alongside the blood in his veins. A voice of reason reminded him of the fact that he was no longer her husband. He walked out of the house jealous and angry at himself.

Tinú squealed as Chris touched her tummy.

"Keep it down! People will think I'm beating you.", he chided.

" It's not my fault I'm ticklish.", she defended.

"I wish you can come with me.", he put in.

" You know I can't. I have to resume on Monday. My new boss is most definitely not going to be as in love with me as my old one. ", she explained.

" He better not. Else, I'll pull his head off his body!", he flared and Tinú burst into laughter. "Why did you have to leave?"
"Chris, I can't have you bending rules for me. The code of conduct and fraternity policy says we can't be together if we intend to get married.", she explained.

" Miss goody two shoes! ", he teased. She stuck out her tongue in response and he tickled her. She rolled around on the bed laughing and squirming.

Noises and voices ambushed his eardrums as he was trying real hard to concentrate. He had a lot of things to resolve before he left for good



















Chapter 11

two years later.

Felicia turned quickly to avoid the man coming ahead.

What on earth is he doing here?

She turned to another aisle and she saw her son looking at some of the toys on the shelf. Her heart melted. She had spent every waking moment thinking of him. She found herself moving closer to him. The boy felt someone enter his personal space and turned to see who it was. His eyes widened and he rubbed them to be sure of what he was seeing. The young boy screamed in joy and ran to hug her. She broke into tears and picked him up. He was heavy but she didn't mind. She inhaled his scent and wept.

" Mummy, where did you go?", the boy asked.

"Felicia?", Jaiyé's voice called and she gasped, giving away her identity. She had forgotten she was supposed to run away.

" Daddy, Mummy is back. God answered our prayer. ", the boy gushed. She put him down and turned to face Jaiyé. She couldn't keep running and hiding. Jaiyé walked to her, so happy he had found her.

" Felicia, we need to talk.", he said coolly.

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Tinu sighed as she entered the room. Somehow, she dreaded coming home these days. She strolled into their walk in closet only to find her personal effects missing. She couldn’t have been more surprised. All her clothes and shoes were missing. Everything was as it was before she moved in with him. She turned around and met Chris standing behind her.

“Chris, what’s the meaning of this?”, she blared in anger.

“it’s a good thing you’re here. I’ve had your things moved to the guest room.”, he replied casually.

“Chris, I’ve been able to take your shit for the past two months but not any longer. If you have something to say, now’s the best time.”

“please leave my room”, he announced.

“I don’t know what I did to deserve such husbands.
Why are you angry? At least I knew why dele hated me.”

“I’m not in the mood for chitchat”

“forget it. I’m done with you.”, she said as she made to leave.

“then it’s best you return to dele. He’d be glad to have you back.”


Sorry about the terrible capitalization and punctuation. Man's tired.

Younghacka:
I Know You Wont Disappoint

But You're Studying An Art Related Course?

Yes

Younghacka:
Are You In ELS Department?

No

Younghacka:
So You Will Leave Us Salivating. . .
No Pee. . .
Take Your Time, But Let It Be Worth The Wait.

I'll do my best

Younghacka:
She Has An Impressive Set Of Vocabulary. . . I Find That Likeable. . . And The Story Has Not Waned A Bit. . . The More One Reads, The More One Wants To Read.
I Don't Know Benson Tho. . . I Don't Really Have Much Interest In Nigerian Entertainment And Literature. . . Except A Few. . . Like The Works Of The Great Achebe.

Thanks b

answerspls:
HONESTLY,you know what,i have come across so many vocabs here that i had to look up for their meanings,worthy of note again is the fact that despite the lengthy nature of it,the suspense had not waned a bit,that is d interesting part of it, infact i see another TECO BENSON in the making. hope you guys know teco benson,...

Thank you. I just checked online for Teco Benson. He seems great. I'm grateful for the comparison.

About the grammar, I have Nora Roberts, Veronica Roth, Suzanne Wright, J.K. Rowling and E.L. James to thank for that. I can only hope to be like them in expression when I grow up.

answerspls:
YEA, i thought as much, i am beginning to like this the more,it is like a complex equation and not a simple algebra,kudos dear

Thanks b.

Younghacka:
UWC. . .
Oya Come Update. . . I Hate Waiting

Lol. Till 7pm

Younghacka:
It Hs Been A Long While Since I Followed A Story On NL. . . Mainly Due To The Myriad Of Uninteresting And Overpredictable Piece Of Literature Works One Finds These Days In The Literature Section, This Is Not To Say There Are No Good Ones Worth The Read, There Are, However Lost In A Plethora Of Nollywood Like Storylines, Devoid Of Creativity And Imagination. Just Saw The Topic On FP Yesternight And Clicked; I Thought It Was A Thread That Tells About The ''Secrets Of Ocean''. . . I Started Reading, Wanted To Stop Severally But The Suspense Kept Me Scrolling Down For More. I Must Say You Are One Good Writer, With Peepz Like You I Believe That NL Literature Section Will Be Great Again, By Extension Nigeria Considering We Still Have A Lot Of Great Minds.
I Implore You To Explore This Uncanny Gift Of Yours, Improve Yourself And I See You Going Places.
Thanks Again.
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BTW I Like You Use Of Grammar In This Piece. . . Elaborate, Yet Classy.

Why, thank you!! God! I'm totally fanning myself right now and I have tears in my eyes. I have totally gbese because of this comment.

Soapy intensifies.

Thanks g

answerspls:
NICE WORK. but my little challenge is connecting all those other extra characters to the the main character,i seem lost on how to connect them to the chief focus of the novel.hope u get me well.for example how does felicia and jaiye come in,what connects bibiana and ose to the story etc. the work is classic,thanks a lot

I totally understand but please be patient. The story is beyond Tinu, Chris and Dele. Felicia and Jaiye's story is important for what is to come. Bibiana and Ose's relationship is the very foundation on which what is to come is built. So let's be patient.

I promise your patience will be worth it. At least I hope

izaray:
Relax i was only joking jor Do have a wonderful weekend!

Phew

Likewise. (Still dancing soapy)

izaray:
This last update too short oh.

Thanks plenty

You're welcome