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Literature › Re: Sammy Hoe's POEMS by noble4d(m): 5:27pm On Sep 03, 2014 |
Hmmmmm  let dem come 1 Like |
Literature › Re: *****SCENARIO 75***** by noble4d(m): 5:25pm On Sep 03, 2014 |
Mr daveP I hail oooo...well done  1 Like |
Literature › Re: Dammy Sammy TV(DSTV); Breaking News, Entertainment, Music and More. by noble4d(m): 12:06pm On Aug 30, 2014 |
Its Noble on the line...holla to all Nairaland writers and my e family. God bless u all. |
Literature › Re: OMA Collection Of Poems by noble4d(m): 6:44pm On Aug 29, 2014 |
This is for you Bro... Two rhyming couplets (abab) making a quatrain Naira! oh what a joy you me find here Oma4u thee that heads the great deeds Full of poems, ideas and happy cheer Hopefully it will make thy readers gleam Noble cares  |
Literature › Re: OMA Collection Of Poems by noble4d(m): 6:38pm On Aug 29, 2014 |
OMA4U: Thanks I got it! How about others I've posted so far? they are alright... you are good bro...thumbs up Bro. Noble cares |
Literature › Re: OMA Collection Of Poems by noble4d(m): 6:23pm On Aug 29, 2014 |
 OMA4U: I have 10 syllables on each line with a rhyming couplet abab, cdcd, efef, and also it's iambic pentameter.
Thanks...cares received! Hmm! 10 syllables agreed...but u did injustice to flourish sonnet  . In sonnet, we don't only pour out our thoughts or ideas but we also communicate... hope u know what I mean. your writeup is matched up, I think you should re-write...thumbs up Noble cares |
Literature › Re: OMA Collection Of Poems by noble4d(m): 2:35pm On Aug 29, 2014 |
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Literature › Re: OMA Collection Of Poems by noble4d(m): 9:56am On Aug 29, 2014 |
OMA4U: Sonnet one
Shall I say my delight to write you this? If by no means I will burn down the earth Whirl wind has shaken me in my lone days I’ve wandered lonesome in the shade of death Since you bid me a valedictory way Hell fury of the heaven’s eye burns me And my face’s clutter’d tears cast a ray In a mirror before me you I see Sadness has made you wear an olden grey And I shall change your old skin back to youth Even if your love’s strength seem to decay I hope you race back with a cheetah’s foot As this rich words poetry plead for my wrong My love shall in my verse forever live young I have problems with ur sonnet. A sonnet is a poem of an expressive thought or idea made up of 14 lines, each being ten syllables long. there are two patterns in sonnet: 1, English pattern 2, Italian pattern but let me emphasize on English pattern...... The English pattern is written as 3 quatrains followed by a rhyming couplet. e.g ab ab,cdcd,efef, . Note: pay attention on your syllables. Noble cares |
Literature › Re: OMA Collection Of Poems by noble4d(m): 9:36am On Aug 29, 2014 |
OMA4U: A MEMORY OF THE DEATH (Quatrain)
So sad that saddened morning A noise was heard; agony of death The songs of dirge of mourning For your departure from the earth
Grim reaper of men has struck again Natural assassin that can’t be bribed Leaving us to wallow in forever pain No matter how much we proscribe
If death has a price, you would never die You’re worth more than bags of gold Though you never wait to say bye In my heart your memories I behold
Sometimes I feel your warmth around me Like your fragrance is so near and close I’d shut my eyes may be you will I see Or your face when you were here bestows
I know you are not so far from me You live just a little way beyond Paradise of peace and no pain foresee Far past beyond the earth’s bond
When I feel I miss you the most And as years go drifting by so much I delve into my library of memories host Your memories are heaven’s gentle touch
Soothing me, like a soft balm on spines You are the sunlight that sparks on sheets The beaming moon that shines The cool breeze that send off heats
They heal and conquer the pain in my heart The rough and tranquil days we shared Will find abode and life in my poetry art I will lay them underneath the pillow on my bed
Though alive we do speak no more In my head you forever live in me and sings Perhaps you come to me in night dreams I will disclose to you many things
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Literature › Re: OMA Collection Of Poems by noble4d(m): 9:33am On Aug 29, 2014*. Modified: 10:01am On Aug 29, 2014 |
OMA4U: White Sea shore sand Embrace our foot with coolness Relishing the blast cold air Transcending from beneath the ocean
Blissful touch of heaven upon us Awed by the sea sand and nature’s ecstasy Feel the thrill and chill of breeze When we close our eyes to decipher How it feels when lovers kiss And Surrender to nature’s bliss
Those happy moments are countless Just like the constellations of stars That streams of joy is endless Like a deep mighty ocean
Our well of love is deep and dries less Water for lovers there reside Heaven bears me witness How much I have long for this day Since I’ve been struck by this goddess I tingle and she wriggles and goes numb
Stealing my heart with one glance of hers She’s got fragile eye balls of lust Her melodious voice like sound of hymns From David’s harp; ringing in my locked-up brain
copyright 2014. you write well... two quatrains and two sestets 1 Like |
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Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:34pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Hy charijee |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:32pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
kaboninc: Don't tell me you're one of these 'innocent' guys. Will you be preaching to them? Lol. I'm innocent oooooooo  |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:21pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
kaboninc: I'll advice you to use every opportunity and make sure you get loads of fun. Even if you give those girls a bump, NYSC will support the union! Hahaha ain't in for that bro  |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:21pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
kaboninc: I'll advice you to use every opportunity and make sure you get loads of fun. Even if you give those girls a bump, NYSC will support the union! Hahaha ain't in for that bro  |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:19pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Cheriepet: beautiful huh? Beautiful! Not all dear  ... Most of dis gals are spoiled. Fitted tops and skirts, painted lips and e.t.c |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:15pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Hy laurina dear ave we chat b4? |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:13pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
daveP: noble's corper story. E go sweet. Im judging by ur description. But make sure u 'preach' to them to repent o. Hahahaha....I shall do so bro |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:09pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Cheriepet: As u left me ..... u've left camp so where is ur PPA? A secondary school...u need to see the students specifically, the females. |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:08pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
daveP: ahem!! U get literature to write o. But only after. How far longest time now. Aha! (shakes him) Fyn fyn bro how u dey ( shakes him) which literature? |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:01pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Cheriepet: Hey Noble mi dear.... how are u doing? missed u plenty Oooh swit..missed ya plenty 2...how ave u bin? |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 9:58pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
charijee: I'm chilling. ....come gimme gist na. ....where were you posted to? Oooh dear...I'm posted to a school, secondary school precisely. Dear its not easy at all, the school is beautiful but most of the female students are locomotives  . What I saw dis morning chai....painted lips, fitted skirts....oooh dear, I can't write them all. When I entered the school with other posted corpers, all eyes were on us...I even overheard some girls saying ' na dis otondos go teach us, dem go drink Pammy tire'.  it wasn't funny at all. |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 5:22pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Oooops I'm out |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 5:16pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
charijee: hello Noble. .....see you. ...how are you doing? Fine dear and u? |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 5:08pm On Aug 28, 2014 |
Hallo family  |
Literature › Re: One Day, I Decided To Quit! by noble4d(m): 4:22pm On Aug 24, 2014 |
Wow dis is beautiful, God bless u bro |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:18pm On Aug 23, 2014 |
seunfavor: noble4d, aint u goin 2 say hi 2 me?  . Oooops so sowi dear....how u doing? |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:17pm On Aug 23, 2014 |
lanicky: Hehehehe.....sha don't enter d wrong place
U know some peeps can be desperate  My eyes r as sharp as the eagle  |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:05pm On Aug 23, 2014 |
lanicky: *smhfu* lol...I pity u  Hahaha notin will happen  |
Dating And Meet-up Zone › Re: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:02pm On Aug 23, 2014 |
Xup laurina |