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LiteratureRe: Sammy Hoe's POEMS by noble4d(m): 5:27pm On Sep 03, 2014
Hmmmmm smiley let dem come
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LiteratureRe: *****SCENARIO 75***** by noble4d(m): 5:25pm On Sep 03, 2014
Mr daveP I hail oooo...well done smiley
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LiteratureRe: Dammy Sammy TV(DSTV); Breaking News, Entertainment, Music and More. by noble4d(m): 12:06pm On Aug 30, 2014
Its Noble on the line...holla to all Nairaland writers and my e family. God bless u all.
LiteratureRe: OMA Collection Of Poems by noble4d(m): 6:44pm On Aug 29, 2014
This is for you Bro...

Two rhyming couplets (abab) making a quatrain

Naira! oh what a joy you me find here
Oma4u thee that heads the great deeds
Full of poems, ideas and happy cheer
Hopefully it will make thy readers gleam

Noble cares grin
LiteratureRe: OMA Collection Of Poems by noble4d(m): 6:38pm On Aug 29, 2014
OMA4U: Thanks I got it!
How about others I've posted so far?
they are alright... you are good bro...thumbs up Bro.

Noble cares
LiteratureRe: OMA Collection Of Poems by noble4d(m): 6:23pm On Aug 29, 2014
smiley grin
OMA4U: I have 10 syllables on each line with a rhyming couplet abab, cdcd, efef, and also it's iambic pentameter.

Thanks...cares received!
Hmm! 10 syllables agreed...but u did injustice to flourish sonnet grin. In sonnet, we don't only pour out our thoughts or ideas but we also communicate... hope u know what I mean. your writeup is matched up, I think you should re-write...thumbs up

Noble cares
LiteratureRe: OMA Collection Of Poems by noble4d(m): 2:35pm On Aug 29, 2014
missyhorlah: noble4dhuh Are u still alive shocked
Xup swit... I'm still alive oooo...how ave u bin? wink
LiteratureRe: OMA Collection Of Poems by noble4d(m): 9:56am On Aug 29, 2014
OMA4U: Sonnet one

Shall I say my delight to write you this?
If by no means I will burn down the earth
Whirl wind has shaken me in my lone days
I’ve wandered lonesome in the shade of death
Since you bid me a valedictory way
Hell fury of the heaven’s eye burns me
And my face’s clutter’d tears cast a ray
In a mirror before me you I see
Sadness has made you wear an olden grey
And I shall change your old skin back to youth
Even if your love’s strength seem to decay
I hope you race back with a cheetah’s foot
As this rich words poetry plead for my wrong
My love shall in my verse forever live young
I have problems with ur sonnet.

A sonnet is a poem of an expressive thought or idea made up of 14 lines, each being ten syllables long.

there are two patterns in sonnet:

1, English pattern
2, Italian pattern

but let me emphasize on English pattern......


The English pattern is written as 3 quatrains followed by a rhyming couplet. e.g ab ab,cdcd,efef, .

Note: pay attention on your syllables.

Noble cares
LiteratureRe: OMA Collection Of Poems by noble4d(m): 9:36am On Aug 29, 2014
OMA4U: A MEMORY OF THE DEATH (Quatrain)

So sad that saddened morning
A noise was heard; agony of death
The songs of dirge of mourning
For your departure from the earth

Grim reaper of men has struck again
Natural assassin that can’t be bribed
Leaving us to wallow in forever pain
No matter how much we proscribe

If death has a price, you would never die
You’re worth more than bags of gold
Though you never wait to say bye
In my heart your memories I behold

Sometimes I feel your warmth around me
Like your fragrance is so near and close
I’d shut my eyes may be you will I see
Or your face when you were here bestows

I know you are not so far from me
You live just a little way beyond
Paradise of peace and no pain foresee
Far past beyond the earth’s bond

When I feel I miss you the most
And as years go drifting by so much
I delve into my library of memories host
Your memories are heaven’s gentle touch


Soothing me, like a soft balm on spines
You are the sunlight that sparks on sheets
The beaming moon that shines
The cool breeze that send off heats

They heal and conquer the pain in my heart
The rough and tranquil days we shared
Will find abode and life in my poetry art
I will lay them underneath the pillow on my bed

Though alive we do speak no more
In my head you forever live in me and sings
Perhaps you come to me in night dreams
I will disclose to you many things

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honestly bro I'm in love with ur works. nice dirge
LiteratureRe: OMA Collection Of Poems by noble4d(m):
OMA4U: White Sea shore sand
Embrace our foot with coolness
Relishing the blast cold air
Transcending from beneath the ocean

Blissful touch of heaven upon us
Awed by the sea sand and nature’s ecstasy
Feel the thrill and chill of breeze
When we close our eyes to decipher
How it feels when lovers kiss
And Surrender to nature’s bliss

Those happy moments are countless
Just like the constellations of stars
That streams of joy is endless
Like a deep mighty ocean

Our well of love is deep and dries less
Water for lovers there reside
Heaven bears me witness
How much I have long for this day
Since I’ve been struck by this goddess
I tingle and she wriggles and goes numb

Stealing my heart with one glance of hers
She’s got fragile eye balls of lust
Her melodious voice like sound of hymns
From David’s harp; ringing in my locked-up brain

copyright 2014.
you write well... two quatrains and two sestets
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Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:34pm On Aug 28, 2014
Hy charijee
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:32pm On Aug 28, 2014
kaboninc: Don't tell me you're one of these 'innocent' guys. Will you be preaching to them? Lol.
I'm innocent oooooooo grin
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:21pm On Aug 28, 2014
kaboninc: I'll advice you to use every opportunity and make sure you get loads of fun. Even if you give those girls a bump, NYSC will support the union!
Hahaha ain't in for that bro grin
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:21pm On Aug 28, 2014
kaboninc: I'll advice you to use every opportunity and make sure you get loads of fun. Even if you give those girls a bump, NYSC will support the union!
Hahaha ain't in for that bro grin
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:19pm On Aug 28, 2014
Cheriepet: beautiful huh?wink
Beautiful! Not all dear grin... Most of dis gals are spoiled. Fitted tops and skirts, painted lips and e.t.c
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:15pm On Aug 28, 2014
Hy laurina dear ave we chat b4?
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:13pm On Aug 28, 2014
daveP: noble's corper story. E go sweet. Im judging by ur description. But make sure u 'preach' to them to repent o.
Hahahaha....I shall do so bro
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:09pm On Aug 28, 2014
Cheriepet: As u left mesad..... u've left camp so where is ur PPA?
A secondary school...u need to see the students specifically, the females.
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:08pm On Aug 28, 2014
daveP: ahem!! U get literature to write o. But only after. How far longest time now. Aha! (shakes him)
Fyn fyn bro how u dey ( shakes him) which literature?
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:01pm On Aug 28, 2014
Cheriepet: Hey Noble mi dear.... how are u doing?smiley missed u plenty
Oooh swit..missed ya plenty 2...how ave u bin?
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 9:58pm On Aug 28, 2014
charijee: I'm chilling. ....come gimme gist na. ....where were you posted to?
Oooh dear...I'm posted to a school, secondary school precisely. Dear its not easy at all, the school is beautiful but most of the female students are locomotives grin. What I saw dis morning chai....painted lips, fitted skirts....oooh dear, I can't write them all.

When I entered the school with other posted corpers, all eyes were on us...I even overheard some girls saying ' na dis otondos go teach us, dem go drink Pammy tire'. grin it wasn't funny at all.
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 5:22pm On Aug 28, 2014
Oooops I'm out
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 5:16pm On Aug 28, 2014
charijee: hello Noble. .....see you. ...how are you doing?
Fine dear and u?
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 5:08pm On Aug 28, 2014
Hallo family smiley
LiteratureRe: One Day, I Decided To Quit! by noble4d(m): 4:22pm On Aug 24, 2014
Wow dis is beautiful, God bless u bro
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:18pm On Aug 23, 2014
seunfavor: noble4d, aint u goin 2 say hi 2 me? angry
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Oooops so sowi dear....how u doing?
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:17pm On Aug 23, 2014
lanicky: Hehehehe.....sha don't enter d wrong place

U know some peeps can be desperate tongue
My eyes r as sharp as the eagle tongue
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:05pm On Aug 23, 2014
lanicky: *smhfu* lol...I pity u tongue
Hahaha notin will happen tongue
Dating And Meet-up ZoneRe: *lanicky £ Family ¢hat Thread•••••CoMe In* by noble4d(m): 10:02pm On Aug 23, 2014
Xup laurina

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