Romance › Re: At What Age Did You Have Your First Kiss? Where? by noble4d(m): 3:19pm On Oct 27, 2014 |
At 7 in the classroom  |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 1:05pm On Oct 27, 2014 |
Tags: OMA4U, Adeola, Philtrum, niftyrules, okwutency, princesa, timpaker JigsawKillah, gottoboy, harddon, poeticjazco, dtito, isaiahogodo, paulaok4, basille, krystalxxx, richommie, Chuksemi, Texanomaly, divepen, michaelok, giyazz, nickz, firestar, Bamibor, osiawa, kagari, elvisosho, maxwellbaba, tjkdzyanju, AmiableJay, lordidol, mrwhat, davep. |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 1:03pm On Oct 27, 2014*. Modified: 12:14pm On Nov 05, 2014 |
LESSON 2
A Sonnet is a poem of an expressive thought or idea made up of 14 lines, each being 10 syllables long. Eight lines called an octave consisting of two quatrains which normally open the poem as the question are followed by six lines called a sestet that are the answer, or the more common English which is three quatrains followed by a rhyming couplet.
The Structure of a Sonnet Poem
ab ab cdcd efef - English abba abba cdecde - Italian
Example of a sonnet poem
Poetry! oh what a joy you can find here
Noble is the one that write the great theme
Full of poems, stories and happy cheer
Hopefully it will make my readers gleam
OMA's Grammar is full of homework help
Naira poet revealing secrets galore
While the poetic device will make you yelp
There is no way poetry! will make you snore
Noble will start a tale needing an end
With the help of poet, the good time is here
Tex picks the greatest pictures you all send
Timpaker's effort superb, let's give a cheer
How about finding Basille and jigsaw's up way
It is time we lead poetry! all the way. 9 Likes |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 12:41pm On Oct 27, 2014 |
OMA4U: Let me quickly post this before another comes in
to take a slow walk down the aisle (Kyrielle)
We can't keep living in shadow Enough; this mirage we wallow It's dead! A promise a long mile To take a slow walk down the aisle
It's high time old sun went to hell Let's be our past fearless farewell The feelings burns slow, no more high To take a slow walk down the aisle
An end has come to wayward way A new day booms like buds of may No more passions unless I lie To take a slow walk down the aisle
Now it's real; no more lies and fears O' Ye new bride, shed your sweet tears I heap fortune to live on isle To take slow a walk down the aisle
Did I try? Nice1 bro...just edit the last line of the last stanza |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 10:39am On Oct 27, 2014 |
Good morning my Noble poet, wish you a wonderful week. |
Poems For Review › Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by noble4d(m): 2:06pm On Oct 26, 2014*. Modified: 2:58pm On Oct 26, 2014 |
Dedicated to the participants and great poet.
Ottava- Rima abababcc
Suddenly did the poet begin their fast run Over slippy ground you see them fly and leap The honey heart blooded under the hot sun Verily its territory they want to keep Haters pounces, eager getting the job done The poet elapses in a really big heap Haters sleeps as night takes over from the day Will the poet see its territory become prey? 1 Like |
Poems For Review › Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by noble4d(m): 1:33pm On Oct 26, 2014 |
Wow! Its going to be an interesting competition. Thumbs up to you dear poet. Noble cares  |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 8:52pm On Oct 24, 2014 |
timpaker: IS SHEKAU DYING TONIGHT? (Kyrielle)
Good morning the merchants of wars; Gallant forces upholding laws Our brothers maim us at first sight Is Bin Shekau dying tonight?
I've seen a brother lost his head Just cuz he would not make life dead. You're our friend, fight for our ra ped right.
Is Bin Shekau dying tonight?
We're served death like chickens on streets In chaos's kitchen all for heartbeats... We're been fettered by terror's might! Is Bin Shekau dying tonight?
We've seen them tout their terror live On western mirror, "he's alive!" "No, he's dead but alive in fright..." Is Bin Shekau dying tonight? 
Nice..... 3 Likes 1 Share |
Poems For Review › Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by noble4d(m): 8:43pm On Oct 24, 2014 |
 wow |
Literature › Re: Poem: Tears From The Heart by noble4d(m): 8:28pm On Oct 24, 2014 |
Nice writeup...I like the fact that each stanzas are in quatrain and making use of plain English is superb, easy to understand by a lay reader. 1 Like |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 11:28am On Oct 24, 2014 |
I shall proceed with other types of poetry on Monday. I need my fellow poet to show what they've got on kyrielle before Monday. Noble cares  1 Like 1 Share |
Poems For Review › Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by noble4d(m): 11:18am On Oct 24, 2014 |
Wow! Interesting...I'm glad that this thread is growing.Thumbs up OMA4U.
As for the poems I'm seeing, are they for the competition or you poet are just displaying your talents and dexterity? |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 11:06am On Oct 24, 2014*. Modified: 12:01pm On Jan 23, 2020 |
basille: A friend
To paint a picture with words A task deemed fit for gods A paper, some courage, a pen In poetry, i find a friend
As Metaphor and similes Become part of my family An honor, to always defend In poetry, i found a friend
My loyal pen becomes my eyes On void papers, i live my life To write forever, i intend In poetry, i found a friend
When time fades, and people detach No one left, to be by my side A humble pal, until the end In poetry, i found a friend
 In poetry, I found a friend... 3 Likes 1 Share |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 9:38am On Oct 23, 2014 |
JigsawKillah: lemme just give it a try
war
wanted to be a simple man prayed against Satan's evil plan spent days and nights in church praying Hoping one of the verse saves me
blood everywhere, lil brother dead I fought the urge, to shoot my head my last FAM left, the world hates me tried to curse God, but words failed me
revenge is a dish best served cold revenge is a bîtch, but its bold I was young, not dumb, was 18 a pastor, now got guns spraying
kill for peace of mind, I thought up same peace I seek, got me locked up these are my last days, none bailed me until I beg God, come save me Good try boss, but each stanza should end in refrain. |
Literature › Re: NL Collaborative Poetry Competition(season 1) by noble4d(m): 9:29am On Oct 23, 2014 |
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Literature › Re: NL Collaborative Poetry Competition(season 1) by noble4d(m): 9:25am On Oct 23, 2014 |
charleff512: What are the modalities,modus and prize if any for the competition. Is it like an anthology? This is a competition specifically on poetry, and no prize is involve for now. We are only trying to promote the beauty of poetry...since is been discriminated by many. Noble cares. |
Literature › Re: NL Collaborative Poetry Competition(season 1) by noble4d(m): 9:10am On Oct 23, 2014 |
laykorn: Are you ready to participate? Anthology is a collection of literary works e.g poems and short stories. 1 Like |
Literature › Re: Nairaland Literature Awards Of The Year. by noble4d(m): 6:55pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
@Divepen......Honestly, poetry and drama should be included...you called it literature awards while you discriminate other genres...do something about it because it'll discourage some nairalanders from voting including me. Noble cares  1 Like |
Poems For Review › Re: Are You A Poet? Why Do You Write? by noble4d(m): 6:46pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
Hmm! I'm surrounded with natural phenomena which gives me inspiration. I do write depending on my mood e.g when I'm happy, I look around, gazing at beautiful creatures that sweetened my heart. I write because I'm in the mood to write. Noble cares  |
Poems For Review › Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by noble4d(m): 6:28pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
Alryt....noble is here....and every participants should endeavor to give analysis to his/her poems. Noble cares  |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 6:22pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
texanomaly: Cool. I'll give it a try. Yah dear....give it a try... |
Poems For Review › Re: One Poem For The Road by noble4d(m): 6:20pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
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Poems For Review › Re: One Poem For The Road by noble4d(m): 6:19pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
princesa: tanka's like this makes my cheek glow! Weldone and welcome   |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 6:09pm On Oct 22, 2014*. Modified: 6:27pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
Alryt boss
Tags: OMA4U, Adeola, Philtrum, niftyrules, okwutency, princesa, timpaker JigsawKillah, gottoboy, harddon, poeticjazco, dtito, isaiahogodo, paulaok4, basille, krystalxxx, richommie, Chuksemi, Texanomaly, divepen, michaelok, giyazz, nickz, firestar, Bamibor, osiawa, kagari, elvisosho, maxwellbaba, tjkdzyanju, AmiableJay, lordidol, mrwhat, davep. 1 Like 1 Share |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 6:08pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
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Literature › Re: The Birth Of A Poet by noble4d(m): 9:33am On Oct 22, 2014 |
AD30LA: THE TREACHERY OF TIME. (by Odukoya A. Adeola) When the sight becomes blurry When the light becomes history When darkness engulf the sphere When the most vivid becomes unclear
Normalcy changes its hides Nocturnal become prevailing Even the lousy man hides Gently under the shield of his ceiling Darkness at the peak of dominance Birds enmute their songy vocal chords In fear of the foggy occupance A fear strong enough to chase the mighty sun
But despair not the tyranny of darkness For its reign depends solely on time Whose loyalty’s modified by clime It’s perfidy cleanse the air of hoplessness
For once the traitor strikes The dark tyrant becomes forgotten Replaced by the sovereign light The sphere ridden of burden
But how long can this reign hold For the traitor has not been ridden How long can this light reign The treachery of time … behold what type of poem is this? it appears like Horatian ode... |
Poems For Review › Re: One Poem For The Road by noble4d(m): 9:16am On Oct 22, 2014 |
wow! noble is feeling here....
oya make una feel my tanka/waka
I love my angel. She is so sexy and cute. She has a pink lips, And lots of radiant hair too. She glows when I kiss her lips. 1 Like |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 8:47am On Oct 22, 2014 |
Try it out, let's see what you got. Remember, this thread can only survive with your presence and support...dear poetry lovers. |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 8:39am On Oct 22, 2014*. Modified: 12:13pm On Nov 05, 2014 |
LESSON 1
What is a Kyirelle Poem?
A Kyrielle poem is structured so that all the lines have eight syllables and each stanza of four lines ends in a refrain. It takes on a rhythmical form very much like a rhyming couplet . What is the structure of a Kyirelle Poem? A Kyrielle poem is made up of 4 lined stanzas of eight syllables each. The capital being the refrain:
aabB ccbB ddbB eebB
An example of a Kyrielle Poem
Pollution
Pollution rising in the sky, People wear masks as they walk by, It's about time to turn the bend, For all this pollution to end.
Animals are losing their homes, To make way for buildings with domes, What message do we have to send, For all this pollution to end.
We're all guilty we must confess, Guilty of making such a mess, It's time for action, find a friend, For all this pollution to end.
If we don't act the world won't last, Breathing fresh air will have long passed, This is the message that I send, For all this pollution to end. 15 Likes |
Poems For Review › Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 12:24am On Oct 21, 2014 |
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Poems For Review › Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 12:21am On Oct 21, 2014*. Modified: 11:59am On Jan 23, 2020 |
Poetry is a beautiful genre of literature but just few appreciate the beauty. My mission here is to teach you all I know about this pleasing genre of literature.
Dear poets, let's uplift this section together because it worth it.
Noble cares. 3 Likes 1 Share |
Poems For Review › Re: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by noble4d(m): 11:48pm On Oct 20, 2014 |
Wow  ooh my God...ave bin a nairalander for years and didn't even know that poetry section exist... |