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RomanceRe: At What Age Did You Have Your First Kiss? Where? by noble4d(m): 3:19pm On Oct 27, 2014
At 7 in the classroom smiley
Poems For ReviewRe: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 1:05pm On Oct 27, 2014
Tags: OMA4U, Adeola, Philtrum, niftyrules,
okwutency, princesa, timpaker JigsawKillah,
gottoboy, harddon, poeticjazco, dtito, isaiahogodo,
paulaok4, basille, krystalxxx, richommie, Chuksemi,
Texanomaly, divepen, michaelok, giyazz, nickz,
firestar, Bamibor, osiawa, kagari, elvisosho,
maxwellbaba, tjkdzyanju, AmiableJay, lordidol,
mrwhat, davep.
Poems For ReviewRe: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op):
LESSON 2

A Sonnet is a poem of an expressive thought or
idea made up of 14 lines, each being 10 syllables long. Eight lines called an octave consisting of
two quatrains which normally open the poem as
the question are followed by six lines called a
sestet that are the answer, or the more common
English which is three quatrains followed by a
rhyming couplet.


The Structure of a Sonnet Poem

ab ab cdcd efef - English
abba abba cdecde - Italian


Example of a sonnet poem

Poetry! oh what a joy you can find here

Noble is the one that write the great theme

Full of poems, stories and happy cheer

Hopefully it will make my readers gleam

OMA's Grammar is full of homework help

Naira poet revealing secrets galore

While the poetic device will make you yelp

There is no way poetry! will make you snore

Noble will start a tale needing an end

With the help of poet, the good time is here

Tex picks the greatest pictures you all send

Timpaker's effort superb, let's give a cheer

How about finding Basille and jigsaw's up way

It is time we lead poetry! all the way.
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Poems For ReviewRe: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 12:41pm On Oct 27, 2014
OMA4U:
Let me quickly post this before another comes in

to take a slow walk down the aisle (Kyrielle)

We can't keep living in shadow
Enough; this mirage we wallow
It's dead! A promise a long mile
To take a slow walk down the aisle

It's high time old sun went to hell
Let's be our past fearless farewell
The feelings burns slow, no more high
To take a slow walk down the aisle

An end has come to wayward way
A new day booms like buds of may
No more passions unless I lie
To take a slow walk down the aisle

Now it's real; no more lies and fears
O' Ye new bride, shed your sweet tears
I heap fortune to live on isle
To take slow a walk down the aisle



Did I try?
Nice1 bro...just edit the last line of the last stanza
Poems For ReviewRe: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 10:39am On Oct 27, 2014
Good morning my Noble poet, wish you a wonderful week.
Poems For ReviewRe: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by noble4d(m):
Dedicated to the participants and great poet.

Ottava- Rima
abababcc

Suddenly did the poet begin their fast run
Over slippy ground you see them fly and leap
The honey heart blooded under the hot sun
Verily its territory they want to keep
Haters pounces, eager getting the job done
The poet elapses in a really big heap
Haters sleeps as night takes over from the day
Will the poet see its territory become prey?
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Poems For ReviewRe: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by noble4d(m): 1:33pm On Oct 26, 2014
Wow! Its going to be an interesting competition. Thumbs up to you dear poet.

Noble cares smiley
Poems For ReviewRe: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 8:52pm On Oct 24, 2014
timpaker:
IS SHEKAU DYING TONIGHT? (Kyrielle)

Good morning the merchants of wars;
Gallant forces upholding laws
Our brothers maim us at first sight
Is Bin Shekau dying tonight?

I've seen a brother lost his head
Just cuz he would not make life dead.
You're our friend, fight for our ra ped right.

Is Bin Shekau dying tonight?

We're served death like chickens on streets
In chaos's kitchen all for heartbeats...
We're been fettered by terror's might!
Is Bin Shekau dying tonight?

We've seen them tout their terror live
On western mirror, "he's alive!"
"No, he's dead but alive in fright..."
Is Bin Shekau dying tonight? angry

Nice.....
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Poems For ReviewRe: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by noble4d(m): 8:43pm On Oct 24, 2014
grin wow
LiteratureRe: Poem: Tears From The Heart by noble4d(m): 8:28pm On Oct 24, 2014
Nice writeup...I like the fact that each stanzas are in quatrain and making use of plain English is superb, easy to understand by a lay reader.
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Poems For ReviewRe: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 11:28am On Oct 24, 2014
I shall proceed with other types of poetry on Monday. I need my fellow poet to show what they've got on kyrielle before Monday.

Noble cares smiley
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Poems For ReviewRe: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by noble4d(m): 11:18am On Oct 24, 2014
Wow! Interesting...I'm glad that this thread is growing.Thumbs up OMA4U.

As for the poems I'm seeing, are they for the competition or you poet are just displaying your talents and dexterity?
Poems For ReviewRe: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op):
basille:
A friend

To paint a picture with words
A task deemed fit for gods
A paper, some courage, a pen
In poetry, i find a friend

As Metaphor and similes
Become part of my family
An honor, to always defend
In poetry, i found a friend

My loyal pen becomes my eyes
On void papers, i live my life
To write forever, i intend
In poetry, i found a friend

When time fades, and people detach
No one left, to be by my side
A humble pal, until the end
In poetry, i found a friend
smiley In poetry, I found a friend...
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Poems For ReviewRe: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 9:38am On Oct 23, 2014
JigsawKillah:
lemme just give it a try



war


wanted to be a simple man
prayed against Satan's evil plan
spent days and nights in church praying
Hoping one of the verse saves me

blood everywhere, lil brother dead
I fought the urge, to shoot my head
my last FAM left, the world hates me
tried to curse God, but words failed me

revenge is a dish best served cold
revenge is a bîtch, but its bold
I was young, not dumb, was 18
a pastor, now got guns spraying

kill for peace of mind, I thought up
same peace I seek, got me locked up
these are my last days, none bailed me
until I beg God, come save me
Good try boss, but each stanza should end in refrain.
LiteratureRe: NL Collaborative Poetry Competition(season 1) by noble4d(m): 9:29am On Oct 23, 2014
LiteratureRe: NL Collaborative Poetry Competition(season 1) by noble4d(m): 9:25am On Oct 23, 2014
charleff512:
What are the modalities,modus and prize if any for the competition.
Is it like an anthology?
This is a competition specifically on poetry, and no prize is involve for now. We are only trying to promote the beauty of poetry...since is been discriminated by many.

Noble cares.
LiteratureRe: NL Collaborative Poetry Competition(season 1) by noble4d(m): 9:10am On Oct 23, 2014
laykorn:
Are you ready to participate?
Anthology is a collection of literary works e.g poems and short stories.
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LiteratureRe: Nairaland Literature Awards Of The Year. by noble4d(m): 6:55pm On Oct 22, 2014
@Divepen......Honestly, poetry and drama should be included...you called it literature awards while you discriminate other genres...do something about it because it'll discourage some nairalanders from voting including me.

Noble cares smiley
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Poems For ReviewRe: Are You A Poet? Why Do You Write? by noble4d(m): 6:46pm On Oct 22, 2014
Hmm! I'm surrounded with natural phenomena which gives me inspiration. I do write depending on my mood e.g when I'm happy, I look around, gazing at beautiful creatures that sweetened my heart. I write because I'm in the mood to write.

Noble cares wink
Poems For ReviewRe: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by noble4d(m): 6:28pm On Oct 22, 2014
Alryt....noble is here....and every participants should endeavor to give analysis to his/her poems.

Noble cares wink
Poems For ReviewRe: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 6:22pm On Oct 22, 2014
texanomaly:
Cool. I'll give it a try.
Yah dear....give it a try...
Poems For ReviewRe: One Poem For The Road by noble4d(m): 6:20pm On Oct 22, 2014
timpaker:
Sexy tanka! cheesy
grin
Poems For ReviewRe: One Poem For The Road by noble4d(m): 6:19pm On Oct 22, 2014
princesa:
tanka's like this makes my cheek glow! Weldone and welcome cheesy
grin
Poems For ReviewRe: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op):
Alryt boss

Tags: OMA4U, Adeola, Philtrum, niftyrules, okwutency, princesa, timpaker JigsawKillah, gottoboy, harddon, poeticjazco, dtito, isaiahogodo, paulaok4, basille, krystalxxx, richommie, Chuksemi, Texanomaly, divepen, michaelok, giyazz, nickz, firestar, Bamibor, osiawa, kagari, elvisosho, maxwellbaba, tjkdzyanju, AmiableJay, lordidol, mrwhat, davep.
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Poems For ReviewRe: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 6:08pm On Oct 22, 2014
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LiteratureRe: The Birth Of A Poet by noble4d(m): 9:33am On Oct 22, 2014
AD30LA:
THE TREACHERY OF TIME.
(by Odukoya A. Adeola)
When the sight becomes blurry
When the light becomes history
When darkness engulf the sphere
When the most vivid becomes unclear

Normalcy changes its hides
Nocturnal become prevailing
Even the lousy man hides
Gently under the shield of his ceiling
Darkness at the peak of dominance
Birds enmute their songy vocal chords
In fear of the foggy occupance
A fear strong enough to chase the mighty sun

But despair not the tyranny of darkness
For its reign depends solely on time
Whose loyalty’s modified by clime
It’s perfidy cleanse the air of hoplessness

For once the traitor strikes
The dark tyrant becomes forgotten
Replaced by the sovereign light
The sphere ridden of burden

But how long can this reign hold
For the traitor has not been ridden
How long can this light reign
The treachery of time … behold
what type of poem is this? it appears like Horatian ode...
Poems For ReviewRe: One Poem For The Road by noble4d(m): 9:16am On Oct 22, 2014
wow! noble is feeling here....

oya make una feel my tanka/waka

I love my angel.
She is so sexy and cute.
She has a pink lips,
And lots of radiant hair too.
She glows when I kiss her lips.
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Poems For ReviewRe: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 8:47am On Oct 22, 2014
Try it out, let's see what you got. Remember, this thread can only survive with your presence and support...dear poetry lovers.
Poems For ReviewRe: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op):
LESSON 1

What is a Kyirelle Poem?

A Kyrielle poem is structured so that all the lines
have eight syllables and each stanza of four lines
ends in a refrain. It takes on a rhythmical form
very much like a rhyming couplet .
What is the structure of a Kyirelle Poem?
A Kyrielle poem is made up of 4 lined stanzas of
eight syllables each. The capital being the refrain:

aabB
ccbB
ddbB
eebB

An example of a Kyrielle Poem

Pollution

Pollution rising in the sky,
People wear masks as they walk by,
It's about time to turn the bend,
For all this pollution to end.

Animals are losing their homes,
To make way for buildings with domes,
What message do we have to send,
For all this pollution to end.

We're all guilty we must confess,
Guilty of making such a mess,
It's time for action, find a friend,
For all this pollution to end.

If we don't act the world won't last,
Breathing fresh air will have long passed,
This is the message that I send,
For all this pollution to end.
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Poems For ReviewRe: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op): 12:24am On Oct 21, 2014
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Poems For ReviewRudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(op):
Poetry is a beautiful genre of literature but just few appreciate the beauty. My mission here is to teach you all I know about this pleasing genre of literature.

Dear poets, let's uplift this section together because it worth it.

Noble cares.
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Poems For ReviewRe: Nairaland Collaborative Poetry Competition (season One) by noble4d(m): 11:48pm On Oct 20, 2014
Wow shocked ooh my God...ave bin a nairalander for years and didn't even know that poetry section exist...

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