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Been MIA for a while now but am back.

Uncertain of what had just happened i ended my experiment,shut down my computer and headed to get some shut eyes.Laying on my bed staring at the ceiling,all of a sudden i felt this sensation like that of a whirling pool stiring inside of me and then i felt ligjt, almost as if i were a piece of paper floating about,then came a sharp slight pain like a tiny needle being pierced into every inch of my body, i screamed in agony and lost consciousness.
By the time i opened my eyes,weeks had gone by. I made my way out of my lab to the living room, i felt strange, i felt different and i couldn't explain or describe exactly how i felt.
"Sire, you have 72missed calls from PrimeTech Industries" said Akic my Artificial Kinetic Intelligence Construct
"Akic, Open my log and make this entry, Experiment C5-6 has proven to be yet again a failure,certain unexplain side effects exist within the subject, Log End"
"Yes sire, Would you like to respond to your calls now sire"
"No, am exhausted tell whosoever to leave a message"
"You have an incoming call, Linda from the sheriff's department"
"ugh...what does she want now,already told them my side of the story, cant i be left to mourn in peace."

Thanks man

Chapter 1........
klamplah! Klamplah! roared the thunder as it ran across the sky, swiftly behind it raced the lightning. Klamplah! the thunder roared and the lightning followed, and on and on the endless dance continued, i could feel the breeze drifting, the sound of my curtains flapping as the wind swept across my room.
Maaaamah!! the sound that awoke me. Immediately i pounced out of my bed and ran towards Kasima's room, my heart racing, Kasima was at it again "she's probably having a nightmare" i thought, i rushed towards her, i could see the fright in her eyes as she starred into mine "i saw him again mama, i saw the angry monster" she said sobbing.
"Don't worry my dear, don't cry now, mama's here"i pulled her close, this wasn't the first time such incident happened, eversince she turned seven, she has been having frequent nightmares of a strange looking man.
That night i slept in her room knowing well that my presence would keep the monster away.
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The year is 2101, the time is exactly 12:45am and i am almost close in replicating my genome defragmentation, a program that would rapidly divide the human cell, splitting them into multiple fragments and with a certain formulae, these cells will become more resistant to external factors, thus strengthen the immune system to a near invulnerability state and completely stopping the the degenerative process thus achieving immortality, but make no mistake, immortality comes at a price. With my body constantly regenerating itself my mind is left to endure the passage of time..

Thanks guys.... Chapter 1 coming ina bit

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"Never be at the mercy of anybody" my father once said to me, looking back through my years(even though i haven't really lived that long) i can see the constant degeneration of humans. One would hope that one day humans would finally be redeemed, but let's just say i see that to be an over exaggerated possibility.
Humans, as far as i know have a tiny bitty chance of redemption. A wise man once said "we make our own monsters but instead of embracing what we'v created, we run from it. Human life no matter how short and unfulfilling is filled with so much experience, starting from the very moment we open our eyes till the time it closes in death, we are constantly surrounded with energy, and we feel those energies, by combining the energy, either positive or negative, we create our own personality, we become a unique individual.
Now, i know i must sound like a self righteous, and over zealous writer but i too do have my own flaws, for i am constantly plagued with my very own insecurities and i see myself dwindling past the edge of my humanity. Some would call me monster, the truth is, i agree. We all are monsters of our own making and in the following pages i will very much explain what led to my predicament, by the way allow me to introduce myself, my name is Ochilu and you might find this hard to believe but i am an Immortal....... Uhm yeah you are probably thinking "this guy is unserious or he is on drugs" well just humor me, let's get back to the story and when we're done you can draw up your conclusion.
As i was saying, my name is Ochilu and i am am Immortal and i can say that i'v had my share of Life, i have lived for over 500 years and have come to experience what most people can only dream of, i have seen pain, love, despair, agony, i have seen death and i have come not to fear it...





(so guys... What do you think... It's my very first story... Comments, suggestions even criticism would be very much appreciated)