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Bibi, your story is so reallllllll. wow!!!! you are blowing my brains with suspense. how can i survive this? I hate to be kept waiting. did u say u type from ur phone? Ur brain must b filled with stories

Hi Bibi, I was captivated by your story. didn't even know how it showed up on my laptop. I have been reading for two hours now even as a busy professional. I can't bring myself to stop reading no matter the grammar. tho at a point, the grammar began to degenerate so badly with a lot of spelling errors. But thanks for taking the correction given earlier, the grammar is much better now. but in truth, there was something alluring about the bad grammar write-up, it broke the rules and was so interesting. My comment: keep the grammar good in the commentaries ( for the credibility of the writer) and give us the ghetto grammar as each actor speaks like you did before. It is thrilling. (sometimes good grammar can make some writers boring, moreover, we don't have good storytellers like you that can give us a good write-up with ghetto grammar).