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dj5naira:
Best of top glads/ you don't agree u can go mad/
I'm too much of everythin', i'm bad/

Funny na understatement/ all these una yeye n jagaJAGA BANter interest me small sha, though dem no de highly entertaining/
Call y'all YCEE cos u bring tiny entertainment/

I've made an impression, where are yours? Those....LMAO and skit/
If I start with u now, you'll quit/ my pressure game is kingly....,you'll bow to it/

No ones' appointin' no new board, those are misguided bullshit/
pure misunderstandin', D is in charge I need to enlighten u men/
anyone talkin' about a new board is just an excited student/

You fail to always shine vs veterans/ what other reference??/
Your conTEST against me? I marked it, you got zero too .....Barcas' win @ The Emirates/

I'm too good with the figures, dem be dodo..ah! Na wa/
minister of Finance sef know say no be fabu or bobo de come from this baba/
I've dropped 16..if I add 6 extra, u Kemi Adeosuns' 'll sum it as 24 ........olodo rapata/

Trouncin' skill/ I whip y'all in ur own surroundin' **grin**/
RKelly's Sound of Victory non-stop, .......verifyin' my resoundin' win/

Una be tospy for here, wackass rapper/
who wanna dare....had better come with what he has n plaster/
the crux of the "MATHer" is... I don't see any of you "as a FACTOR!!"/

No offence bro.. But 80 percent of your drops bore me...

Bars:
Gay bastard!!!!! "Him press you"

David Mark has won his rerun election.. He has been declared winner today 21st of February, 2016 by Inec..

Now that's my reply

Hydrogen frees impressed me... That's the spirit..

Deminem3d:
Kazna69. The wack textcee let's get a judge for dat battle tho

Lolzz.. And i thought i had cured the leper

Hydrogen9R:
I got you didn't i

Correct man..

MuhdG:
paulthor that's some sleek sweet sick stuff man!!

Thanks.. Happy val..

ME, MYSELF AND I
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I am eagle on mountain tops, i stand alone/
My brand well known/
Cos there's a way i skin flesh and grind the bones/
causing desert storms, ruling over sands and stones/
I gat the beats that deliver happy tones/
The hits that delivers haters to crappy zones/
I level 'heels' and had the valleys blown/
You may be the disease, but i am the antidote/
Election results shows your the one with scanty votes/
But im the sound of music with tha classic notes/
Few punches of mine made titanic a tragic boat/
Am blizzard with tha massive cold/
Call me his holiness, like am catholic pope/
A lyrical villian, i put all on panic modes/
My tactics dope/
I Gat fantastic quotes/
I hve nicer ways i put knives on nasty throats/
I cause flooding when i unleash my gastric loads/
I slit throats and stake galls/
I delight in their pains, their great hauls/
I watched, laughed as their state falls/ They make me happier when they hate paul/
But thick flows cant be made from their fake balls/
Now i keep them awake all night like mtn late calls/
I silence vets and break trolls/devoured by vultures, what remained? Staked-skulls/
They say in fear, 'thor's thunder quake halls'/
Too bright a light Only few beholding him/
Those who survived had infections, swollen limbs/
They bow and proclaim, thor is the only king/
He fought a beast and left a big hole in him/
he maims the new and the old he wins/
They proclaim am the classical creature, the golden being/
my medias touch even turn to gold the soul within/
Just praises from those who worship, adore/
am king of vikings, my war ships? hardcore/
i gat the 'wills' to 'f*ck, lift tha law'/
I run with da tightest, its modsiths galore/
I make tha news, with paparazzis, even in gossip palors/
Cos none can spit the multies i pour/
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To be continued joor...

Kazna69:
Like I said, the nigga is just genetically modified to speak unintelligently. I offered advanced learners dictionary, he... She... It refused.

So saying 'am' makes me unintelligent? But if Americans say 'wanna'.. You call it phonetics? Slave of the century.. Am happy everything about me pains you..
It shows i did hurt you real bad..

captainflash:
Before i forget, PaulThor its i am or im , not am , take note!

Thanks flash.. You know am used to writing am am.. I will work on changing it but at least you understand what i mean and pardon it if used...

Hydrogen9R:
PaulThor you see you life I wanted battling Kazna position 69 but you have ended up tormenting him that he forgot we are to battle,real mature bro,real mature

Well, kids need to know the truth.. Truth is what i tell him.. But am patient, leprosy is a chronic disease that need lots of patience to cure..

Kazna69:
Ahaha if anyone's ăsshurting, it you cos you met someone who chose not to accept your point of view. Why so you Mad? What did I say earlier about "bad manners, grammar & mama & grandma?" Exactly, you inherited it from the bítchès in your family, that's why you keep nagging on & on, we'll keep bítchin. The only reason why no one wants to jump in is cos you just made an ăss of yourself over nothing, ruining the purpose & atmosphere of the thread in the first place. Your buddies say you crossed a line, went overboard but you still insist. You expect anyone to take your advice when you won't listen to reason? Why would anyone want to rap like you ffs? All you've been doing is criticizing harmless dudes who use an open thread, that shows you got a flaw in your personality. Well no one asked you for rap tutorials, so deal with it, this is me throwing your shít back in your face. Now swallow it... It's good for you!

Lol.. Only baboons which i know you are one, throw shits around, and am sure you are using your personal trait to qualify others. Baboons do that..... All your talk is asss asss asss.. We know that's how your mum makes a living.. Dettol would say, 'if you don't love it, who will? '..
To me i am succeeding, i am getting your type muted so you don't say irrelevant and adrenaline are rhymes, adventure and determine are rhymes.. (Atrocious indeed).. That cracked me up till now. You are a wasted sperm and am sure you wouldn't be burn if your drunk papi had used his condom..
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Well, Am glad you are no longer bringing your demented philosophy and scream it's your style.. I am gradually guiding you to the real path. If not, One day you would have won pink panties and climb on stage in the name of styles (lolzzzzz) .. Thank me for saving you from such family history. That your dad is a disgrace, doesn't mean you should follow that path. God had sent me to save and all of your kinds.

Kazna69:
I bet you kiss your mother's kitten with that mouth. Shameless, idiot acting all blameless. You can NEVER have leadership skills cos you can't teach anything. I bet you didn't teach at a school during your youth service. If you did, probably bullied those poor kids with your horrific words. They most likely hate your äss for life. You're not influential, nothing tangible to offer, just a taker. Those who judge others, will surely be judged equally. Keep that in mind (if there's still space left). I killed you twice already, now play dead & lay low.

Am happy your pained.. Truth is painful and am enjoying it..
You know what suicide is? Well, if there's any killing done by you, you must have committed suicide.. I lended a rope.. Thank me for that..
Now tell me what's leadership? Leadership is telling the truth.. Your rhymes are lame and jokey.. But if you really put effort, you can do better.. Leaders push and i pushed you, schooled you and turned you to a photographer, and i enjoyed watching your weird family album..
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The funny thing is no one has come to your aid? Why is that? Because truly, they overlooked you.. Lol, who would waste time on a trash like you if not a leader like me? I turn bins into beings no pun intended.. and you getting frustrated is part of the recycling process..
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Do drop more lines.. I gat a leper to cure..

Kazna69:
Dumbàss faggót! FOH with your one dimensional, robotic, routine, rhyme style. Went to rap school just to learn, then come out sounding like a robot with 2 line rhymes. Amateur.

I loved the baldness on your mum.. She's so ignorant, hairs rejected her.. Lol, could you share the family picture again? And about rhymes you need to shut up.. Irrelevant and adrenaline can't rhyme.. If mama told you they rhymed, mama lied as always.. She's bald for crying out loud..
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Am so happy am thormenting you.. Read my frees and see how rhymes are used.. Simple, long or short.. They just sound great..

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Have you asked google voice to pronounce Niagara for you? I know your phonetics will say its 'near gara' Lmao... .. So dumbness, confirm and thank me.. I hve taught a new word pronunciation.. And have brought your claim to phonetics to vain nothingness..
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I await your reply.. Till then happy weekends

Kazna.. Thanks for showing me your family album.. You look just like your bald mum ...

Kazna69:
OMFG it's spelt Niagara, even your keyboard dictionary is stupid! Paul, I'm tryna help you. Get a advanced learner's dictionary for real, watch some online videos while ya still have data to waste cos I feel bad for you. Do you even where Niagara Falls is nigguh? That's why you couldn't spell it. You were just typing in a hurry, fast & furious, fastest finger first in a flurry, in the process lost meaning, nigguh your whole rhyme was blurry. it's like that serius Jones vs Jin battle. Your bars need to get their weight up, try a new recipe with thyme & curry.

Now clown listen.. Niagara is pronounced as Niagra.. Tha 'a' in middle is swallowed.. But you are a product of watered learning.. That's why you seem to get confused when i said pronounced, and you replied saying spelling.. The fool seem not to differentiate the two.. Low brained bodies will leave basic education thinking hip hop will redeem them. Not only stars shine, illiteracy shines too and yours is intimidatingly glaring....

Kazna69:
Karma? Hardly. I wasn't really taking shots at nobody, just rhyming except on the "2 lines to diss" thread cos well it's 2 lines 2 diss. Besides some people were going at it on FFR but nothing major, just banter. But schoolboy headmaster/principal here had to run his yuck mouth. I ignored him the first time, then the second time. He did it again to someone else. Was it warranted, necessary? Why couldn't he just let people be? I don't go around telling people how to rhyme. Somehow I knew it would come to this, someone had to shoot him down.

The only thing shot down is your stupidity.. So i should let you stretch like china walls and force rhymes like we are in a military regime? Bah bah haha.... Clown of the century...
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At least, you learnt a little.. You will still thank me later for teaching you some lyrical ethics. Once your empty pride dies down.. You would see how redeemed i have made out of a fool...

Kazna69:
Notice how Paul used d!ck so many times? Nigguh tryna cover up that hole in his făggøt @$$.
Drag queen/
with a eastern Nigerian accent who got smacked clean./
I thought you's determined?/
So I took you to the dry cleaners & used detergents,/
I put you on blast like terrorist insurgents/
I cut you open, exposed you, tear your wrists like surgeons/
No prophet, pastor, doctor will bring you back from the dead, after I stole your hammer & clapped on your head, you get a MRI scanner for your numbskull over your bed, cos nigguh your rhymes need resurgence/

Please help yourself na.. Detergent? Determined?? And i thought basket mouth is the biggest joker.. I was wrong.. Sam loco just came back to life.. Only that he chose to do hiphop instead of his normal comedy..

No prophet, pastor, doctor will bring you back from the dead, after I stole your hammer & clapped on your head, you get a MRI scanner for your numbskull over your bed, cos nigguh your rhymes need resurgence/[/quote]Is this a sentence or a full novel? Did you visit china wall recently? Cos in stretching, i assume your inspiration came from there.. You are the kind ms word will give red underline and scream long sentence.. Shame on you
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Please crack me up the more.. Try and write something longer na.. I don't reply lullabies..

Kazna69:
How dafuq does "fronting, blunt in & burnt in" rhyme? Only in Paul's little twisted fantasy world. Niagra instead of "Niagara" Falls,then tries to compensate using viagra, nigguh I hate to break it to you but... You can't rhyme. You sound like an ignorant immigrant. Go learn some English & phonetics nigguh.

You are the biggest clown in life.. Guinness book of record need you for that.. Foolish phonetic slave don't even know Niagara is pronounced as niagra?? What can we not witnessed just because of our poor eduction budgeting..

Then the other point you raised is dead on arrival.. Fronting to rhyme with burnt in? It's irrelevant and adrenaline that rhymes.. Lunatic.. Lol..

Kazna69:
Pfft Jesus the SOB! Niggèr Your stupidity is off the hook,
That's why none of my messages are getting through.
What type of Education did you have? Like I said, it goes over your head. Depending on the way it's pronounced & accent, the syllables rhyme. Recognize who you're talking to, I don't sound like your high school Nigerian mixtapes. GAWD save this Queen.

You can as well put swahili and indian languages and believe in your dull brain they are english.. Only in that can irrelevant and adrenaline work as rhymes.. You an abuse to education.. A disgrace to hip hop.. Go home and repent...

sosiqdude:
Lol

Abeg make una move to chatroom abeg

Lol.. Where did all of them go? Abeg make una come back oo.. Take it as corrections not casting...

Kazna69:
A dead guy talking but his words are irrelevant/
A dead guy coughing cos I gave him shots of adrenaline/

Nigguh STFU & save the rest of your reputation, you ain't fooling nobody. You got owned, now I'm taking a dump on your lil throne. You're embarrassing yourself.

Lord, what is this one?? the only thing you own is your daftness, and 'on you' rhyme patterns.. Again now he would say irrelevant rhymes with adrenaline..and hip hop wept..
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I will make sure you are delivered from such cacaphony...

Kazna69:
DARK WORLD CYPHER: Death of PaulThor
(just scrap whatever imaginary beats you have, I do mine accapella, underground battle style)

You Mad cuz I'm styling on you/
LoLing, staring at your bloody corpse & I'm smiling on you/
My words don't go over your head when I curse, they're piling on you/
Smack you with a baby grand piano & drop a violin on you/
Emergency call for your head, I'm dialing on you/
Right now I'm dialled in on you/
I kick kung fu to kick on fools/
You think you the only one that kick rhymes? Well I kick some too/
You could get some too,/
Your light bars need to get some weight up, go in the kitchen & get some food/
I'd rather use the real Thor's hammer to smack some sense into PaulThor's manners & grammars/
But I'll use my black hammer to smack PaulThor's mama & grandmas/
I can do this sh!t all day/
You go outside, look at the sky seeing the world with your twisted views cos you refuse to lose, in one colour, your sh!t's all grey/
It's pitiful/
That's why I spit at you/
You're disgusting, arguing & just fussing/
Where were you last night? Me & your b!tch were just Fûckin/
She was busy blowing my top off, she wet cos I was gushing her vagina walls, she was riding my d!ck, squashing my ballz & I was cuum busting/
Now you're back venting like a bad engine cos I did you a favor like I'm your saviour?, you're just combusting/
So give up your need to be right, give it a rest & let it go/
The immortal god will bleed in this fight, may Asgard rest your soul, cos Kazna... said it so/

(cue Asgardian funeral procession theme music)

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still training a kid
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Am glad ur libido is intense/
Am glad you are putting your handjob fantacies in tense/
Bro,your diick addiction is dense/
we all know you cant fu*k a chick in real sense/
Stop using them for masturbating pretence/
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All you care is folding your diick/
Watch puns, beholding raw chicks/
You scream in toilet all day, blowing your prick/
lolz, you daddy said is part of growing up, poor kid/
Even your mama be smolding your zip... She would say.. ''Son, there's nothing wrong if mama is stroking your stick''/
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your ignorance, your disease/
But you cant be lame and claim hot in frees/
So stop it please... You could be gud in feeling yourself but not in this/
keep staying in toilet, fronting diicks/
Keep saying.. ''am blunt in beats''.. While I keep giving you tha burnt in diss/
your worthless though, i gain nothing putting a dog in hiss/
I could stab you, hang you, till da pop is pissed/
Call ur fat mum, so she can watch how i drain this bloodied beast/
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am more angry flows than niagra/
but u keep losing value than niara/
All your earning wasted in vaselines and viagras/
havent concience told you, bro. Your wack in hip hop?/
Your rantings meaningless.. barks in tea cups/
Son of a stamerer, why wouldnt you brag with hiccups?/
only tin erect in u is diick, diick, diick... you always had the meat up/
See,.. am mad in beat ups.. I had u back in hospital, stretched back with deep cuts/
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Son of a lazy mum, wit lazy rhymes/
You are too boring to spar wit my crazy lines/
You blow weak cuums, i blow it heavy mines/
You sag in life, you sag in short, every tin about you displays your gayly signs/
talking my ass, my ass always.. Abeg...am not gay inclined..i chopped his genitals.. Yes i had the gay declined/
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Am not even putting efforts, just showing you the basics/
am yet to campaign and woo the praises/
Wen u passed this stage, i can take you through the phases/
your still below sentence making.., am introducing you into the phrases/
Then after, i can show you the clues, the bases/
But first you gonna serve me, tie my shoes with laces/

Kazna69:
DARK WORLD CYPHER: Death of PaulThor
(just scrap whatever imaginary beats you have, I do mine accapella, underground battle style)

You Mad cuz I'm styling on you/
LoLing, staring at your bloody corpse & I'm smiling on you/
My words don't go over your head when I curse, they're piling on you/
Smack you with a baby grand piano & drop a violin on you/
Emergency call for your head, I'm dialing on you/
Right now I'm dialled in on you/
I kick kung fu to kick on fools/
You think you the only one that kick rhymes? Well I kick some too/
You could get some too,/
Your light bars need to get some weight up, go in the kitchen & get some food/
I'd rather use the real Thor's hammer to smack some sense into PaulThor's manners & grammars/
But I'll use my black hammer to smack PaulThor's mama & grandmas/
I can do this sh!t all day/
You go outside, look at the sky seeing the world with your twisted views cos you refuse to lose, in one colour, your sh!t's all grey/
It's pitiful/
That's why I spit at you/
You're disgusting, arguing & just fussing/
Where were you last night? Me & your b!tch were just Fûckin/
She was busy blowing my top off, she wet cos I was gushing her vagina walls, she was riding my d!ck, squashing my ballz & I was cuum busting/
Now you're back venting like a bad engine cos I did you a favor like I'm your saviour?, you're just combusting/
So give up your need to be right, give it a rest & let it go/
The immortal god will bleed in this fight, may Asgard rest your soul, cos Kazna... said it so/

(cue Asgardian funeral procession theme music)

Lol

Imagine having 'on you'.. Over 5 to 6 times.. You need to render an immediate apology to rhymes..
However, i will diligently continue to train you until your leprous legs are made whole...

Kazna69:
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Good things bore daft people.. But i know you are learning....

Kazna69:
(Talks $#!t all day, still hasn't dropped his balls... Woops I mean bars in response) Goodness Paul where are your testicles? Do ya even have any? Nope! B!tch confirmed!

Yo...
D!ckless warrior is what I describe this PaulThor/
A b!tching drag queen, worrying about her heels cos she's scared to fall short/
I'm in your head/
& I'll be there standing over your grave when you're dead/
You started this but I'll take it to the ends of the Earth/
& I won't stop till the day you end up in dirt/
I've seen the future, cos the way you'll end up is worse/
You'll surely suffer from the wrath of an ancient witch's curse/
performing a blood ritual while rhyming incantations, I'll curse you/
You'll be paid back in your own coin, I'll reimburse you/

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emptied bladder, so i cant come wit peace/
Am just mere fire to burn these gees/
to heal impotency, bring about ah come release/
Wit my sweeter honey, you all gonna be asking what's wrong wit bees?/
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Kazna, there are norms in raps/
You cant say your coc.aine, cos your were born in craps/
Am not here to punch you, i still want your form intact/
But ignorance na disease, i wonder why you form in that?/
its bullet wasting.. When i gun the rats/
But if you arent a rodent, then you hve lassa, that's wat happens wen you run with rats/
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I cry when i see kids and their poor writtens/
Why act a mongose? When you cant survive the viper's raw bittens?/
Am high on choloesterol, i dont want your beef, i want chickens/
You wear wrestling singlets to evening dinner? Dats not style bro, na wrong fittings/
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There's no glory, glorifying weakened rhymes/
Unless an epidemic and i see a queue.. Then you will be sick in line/
Go cure your cough, stop embarrasing us with your thickened slimes/
You na snail in a boxing tourney, you can never hit in time/
No be punch o but
its mere farming when am cutting beef or bleeding swines/
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See, am just a make up, to make you look better/
Am gambit in casinos to make you a good better/
Am ultra violet sunlight, am tryna make you, beta/
Am just some darkened clouds to make meaner your blue weather/
Am tornadoes, hurricanes, floods, till all i see na crude weathers/
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So bro, listen to the voice of the sent/
Out of your blood, i making you one of the saints/
wouldnt you like if i give you wings and end your lame decent?/
So it can be said, kazna now drops something cool, decent/
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so end your family loves and incents... get a lil pounded and stop playing with cents/

Kazna69:
(Talks $#!t all day, still hasn't dropped his balls... Woops I mean bars in response) Goodness Paul where are your testicles? Do ya even have any? Nope! B!tch confirmed!

Yo...
D!ckless warrior is what I describe this PaulThor/
A b!tching drag queen, worrying about her heels cos she's scared to fall short/
I'm in your head/
& I'll be there standing over your grave when you're dead/
You started this but I'll take it to the ends of the Earth/
& I won't stop till the day you end up in dirt/
I've seen the future, cos the way you'll end up is worse/
You'll surely suffer from the wrath of an ancient witch's curse/
performing a blood ritual while rhyming incantations, I'll curse you/
You'll be paid back in your own coin, I'll reimburse you/

Good, you are improving.. Now my criticism is paying off.. You are now more careful and thoughtful in your drops.. And your rhyming had improved... This was all i wanted.. Not being lame and defending your lameness as a style..

Reyginus:
Dude, stop trying to demoralise guys. There's a way you correct a thing it appears ignorant itself. What's the point of criticizing every freestyle and in a condescending way? This is not s chat room.

Better you are demoralized but get better than you remain lame and happy.. Hate me now, thank me later..

sosiqdude:
Guy seriously, you're looking for his trouble

The guy said you should leave him alone , let him be for once na... You can diss him with your bars not throwing words around with him.

Real rappers don't brag or nag too much


#peace

Save me those sermons.. Am looking for his trouble but am helping him improve, rethink.. What do you people do? You ignore them.

I may sound the enemy, but the true enemy is you old heads allowing these kids to grow in their ignorance rather than say the truth and make them free.

Why should there be peace? When textee is threatened? The good ones are not encouraged and the poor ones are not reproved?

Thor is here now, to make sure standards are again followed and i wish you see it as such..

Kazna69:
FYI those words actually rhyme, depends on how you pronounce it,British or American but I guess you rap with a typical Nigerian public school student accent. If you learned a little oral English & phonetics which everyone speaking a foreign language is supposed to do, you'd understand. Keep that in mind when you read my rhymes or turn a deaf ear & go blind, I don't care, I don't do it like other rappers do. Mad cuz I chose not to accept your twisted sense of reality. Sorry for you but I don't bend or conform to the norm. I refuse to be confined to what other people consider acceptable. Read KD's bio - "I'm me. I do me & I chill!". I can't be another Paul or someone else for that matter, I'll be me, ya don't like it? Fûck off & deal with it. You have a long way to go on the path to wisdom. I don't know you get the idea that I'm rapping with an angry tone, ha it's in your head! Like I said, I don't use beats, I'm too laid back to raise my voice, I don't like negativity so I had to get that off my chest & move on to better things but your own stubbornness blinds your reasoning. You want to see the world as only one rainbow colour, one skin colour, one style of rap music or whatever is in your head well good luck bro but someday you'll get old & this "life" on the Internet will pass. I'm too real to be fake, to pretend to be friends. Life is simple, people with leftist minds like yours like to complicate things.

You defend your lame ignorance more than Nigeria defend her territories.. There's always a norm, a formula, a procedure, a principle.. You can't break all those and won't be broken either. You bring odd rhymes and forcibly rhyme them and shamefully declare that its your style .. Mumu people will follow to copy your vomits and taboos.. What a shame..
Sit and learn..
Don't let your laziness to learn get you thinking your using your own styles. You can only defy gravity by flying...not by kissing the floor..
Continue to kiss the ground and stupidly defend your hopelessness as a lyricist wanna be..

Hydrogen9R:
Kazna69 take am easy o.Imagine when you Don blow became an international rapper will you argue and exchange words with every one negative reviews?

PaulThor I guessed you skipped the first page

Don't dull so you don't get sink in rage

You feel you can do and say irgendwas

Like take a piss while upside down

Life's aren't Drammer is not just by failing to have the balls

Becarefull so you don't hammer your finger nail to the wall

Why don't you press your belly button and see what
happen

For you will want to live in peace with every body

Buried with a fire extinguisher cos they think you will be going to hell.

Lol.. You amaze me.. You look at a fool and an untalanted and your are promising such a low brained adamant blunt an international status in raps?
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The kid is just displaying his lameness, i am gradually treating his leprosy...

Kazna69:
Let me send a message to dumb blacks like a bible pilgrim/
I'm bout to bring the horse whip for black slaves & their idle children/
Digging rap graves after my rifle kill him/
Eliminating targets to me is a small chore/
That's what I'll do when I see a dude named PaulThor/
Something like the son of Ares cos I'm all war/
Guns of the Patriots, bring a M1911 & a four four/
Battousai with a Kunai cos there's no need to draw swords/
I'll cut you down, till you're bleeding out, then when you crawl I'll use your ugly bloody face to mop hall floors/
I lay your b!tch @$$ down when I'm going in all raw/
I'm raping you doggy style with a smile on all fours/
I'll do it again & again, that's an encore/
So STFU & pipe down dafuq are you still going on for?/
Of course, you're a nagging b!tch, you won't stop running your mouth/
Empty vessel, loudest in the room still don't make sense when you shout/
Paul could probably end up a grumpy old Paul bearer/
Making silly customer complaints, we can't hear your call clearer/
You sound like a kid with that name, are you a wannabe Avenger?/
You thirsty for some fame, do you wanna go on an adventure?/
You're more like a Kardashian with a transsexual gender/
I foresee dark days ahead if you keep being sedated by the New World Agenda/

Lol. I see a hungry thug ranting.. His poor rhyming made the mic blow.. Avenger, Adventure Are you kidding me..?

whiz10:

M penning this bars with race against time..."am going" "to weak"(2week) One day at a time.../rap Einstein immortal like Frankenstein...sacrificed ma soul to hip hop a trip to Paki-stan...mad love for you slim' yhu can call me Stan...

I did this for jos! Since two eight for sure...I witnessed the killing!! Brutal fists on jaws... if iron sharpeneth iron! ma heart Is strong enough to blacksmith peace...

wrld on Ma shoulder! Ah took a trip to suplex city ...that bar was complex! sex on rap City ... 'M i worth a milli? Duplex on lasgidi.../

Call me agni, I cremate ya bitch n put the 'ash' on ya skull ...So if ur future is to tie the knot! then yhu 'wed-next-day'...!

Am sick as hell when I school rappers...! I skip class yhu know m clas-sic ...so sick Ma flow murder the last beat...cops in yhu know the nxt thing...puke on bars...hangover during detention...now free yet on probation...bite ma bars I reset ya dentition...

how good or bad am I? #debut


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Alexpissu
Ibime
Reyginus
Airmark
Coogar
Mikuz
Giyazz
Glacierz
Jason21
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Krone
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CaptAwesome
CaptainCids
Captainflash
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Funlord

Most of the lines are weak, the plays are embarrassing.. I will give a 3/10.. Try harder...