KingzPen:
Flakky Dearie,

My advice for today are:

1. When describing your characters, don't use physical description but make comparison, that would task your readers to figure out.

E.g He is tall. instead write, Shorter folks tilt theirs necks at an angle of elevation to gaze at him.

2. Create characters one after the other, not two or three at once. Make sure your readers have connected well with the very one you've created before moving to the next...


Am Also Guilty Of The Above So Am Talking To Myself Too...

We Learn Everyday...

Waiting For The Next...


KingzPen...

Awesome. Nice one