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Re: The Hole In The Wall by Reuben700: 10:52am On May 19, 2021
Chai bro you are the most impressive writer I’ve ever come across
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Quinyoudee(f): 7:57pm On Jun 20, 2021
Still waiting for the 100 days per day update......lolz
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Bodydiialect57: 10:42pm On Jul 06, 2021
Oroolorun:
A body found instead of two.... Hmmm.... Something is missing.... Why am I having the feeling that the mysterious driver (the one Oga Souloho19 is refusing to tell us who he is) have hands in the turn of event.
The driver! Yes, he's the missing link l have been cracking my head about.
Picked this story couple of days ago, and could only read at night cos of my work schedule. I have been thinking of the possibility of Rex being alive but only met with a thin hope. Your mention of the driver has resuscitated the dying hope.

What did the driver do? How did he help Rex?

Weldone @ Souloho19
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Re: The Hole In The Wall by Iseddy: 10:30am On Feb 16, 2022
so sadly the rex obasi story never came to an end.
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Re: The Hole In The Wall by Advantaged: 12:26pm On Sep 22, 2022
Yes. Too bad
Re: The Hole In The Wall by patoranfire(m): 1:14pm On Oct 04, 2022
So, i dont think souloho is interested in completing this masterpiece;just my thought! Whereever ua man,wishin u wel and pls finish it!!!
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Solly1(m): 8:23am On Nov 02, 2022
It's been four years since you started this story sir...

JUST A QUICK REMINDER!
Re: The Hole In The Wall by phoenixchap: 9:53pm On May 01, 2023
It's been a long way from where we began, but I'll tell you all about it when I see you again, we've come a long to end it just like but I guess it just has to end
Re: The Hole In The Wall by sweetonugbu: 10:32pm On May 01, 2023
Soulho19 is back, pls continue the story.
Re: The Hole In The Wall by do4luv14(m): 9:38am On May 02, 2023
sweetonugbu:
Soulho19 is back, pls continue the story.
here do you see him
Re: The Hole In The Wall by sweetonugbu: 12:41pm On May 02, 2023
do4luv14:
here do you see him
Caught him peeping, cheeck last seen.
Re: The Hole In The Wall by do4luv14(m): 2:03pm On May 02, 2023
sweetonugbu:
Caught him peeping, cheeck last seen.
😁😁😁

Na you make am run nau
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Kimmiebabie(f): 6:28pm On May 05, 2023
God, are you telling me the last update was in 2021, omg sad shocked
Re: The Hole In The Wall by cecoro7095: 7:31pm On May 15, 2023
Good
Re: The Hole In The Wall by cecoro7095: 10:30pm On May 15, 2023
Ok
Re: The Hole In The Wall by youngdabold19: 10:02am On Feb 27, 2024
2024 and we are still waiting.
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Nat15: 10:21pm On Mar 01, 2024
This is captivating, we are waiting patiently hoping you will complete. May God give u the strength and inspiration to complete it
Re: The Hole In The Wall by MrCork: 12:28am On Apr 17, 2024
Assurance1000:
Nice work Souloho. Never imagined I'll finish reading in time but here I am waiting for an update. The story line is amazing and full of suspense. More ink to your pen.
Please do u also have one?
Re: The Hole In The Wall by youngdabold19: 4:46am On Apr 30, 2025
2025, and we are still waiting. Souloho, hope you are good.
Re: The Hole In The Wall by light4life(f): 10:27am On May 24, 2025
Hole in the wall still remains one of my favorites stories right after 'The Devil wears Okrika"

Still hoping we can get to the end. Fingers crossed
Re: The Hole In The Wall by Hero69(m): 11:23am On May 24, 2025
souloho19:
alright FAM, I'm here again...let's create something beautiful.

the journey we're about to embark on is actually the sequel to 'delayed diagnosis' which means Rex Obasi is backcheesy

if you're not current here's the link to catch up: https://www.nairaland.com/3571801/delayed-diagnosis




Lagos Heat:https://selar.com/610k4y






The Hole in the Wall

©souloho19


Chapter 1
Who, What, When......how?


The Lady pushed her cart somewhat mechanically. She stopped at a door prepared to knock, but her hand stopped in mid air as she noticed the sign hanging on the doorknob; do not disturb!
She pushed her cart past the door to another and seeing no sign knocked gently.
She knocked again, and hearing no response she used her key card and opened the door. Before she could even push her cart in a voice shouted harshly. "Come back later, let me sleep for God's sake!"
She withdrew hurriedly and shut the door, and without a word pushed her cart further down the hall. She was used to such petty tantrums from the hotel guest. She didn't give a shit about them, she just wanted to do her job which was to change the towels and the sheets, clean the room and get out of there.
There was also no reply from the next door and she entered the room announcing her presence as she pushed her cart ahead of her.
"I want to change the sheets please, I'm from drycleaning"
She got no response and noticed the room was empty. She sighed out in relief and began to hum as she headed to the bathroom first. The towels were obvously used and on the floor in a bunch. She wrinkled her nose as a pungent ordour irritated her. She couldnt place the source of the ordour but it was strange and foul and irritated her. She smiled wryly at the irony. Considering the fact that she was a cleaning lady. But apart from the dirty towels on the floor, the toilet was still as she had left it the day before it was still so clean it might have never been used.
She reentered the room rolling her sleeves, looking round, whoever had been in this room must have checked out last night, the bed was exactly as she had made it 24 hours earlier. But what was that odour that forced her nose to wrinkle?
She observed the bed and sniffed the air. Suddenly she dropped the new sheets on the bed, and crawled across it without taking of her slippers. (She was the one who would still wash the sheets after all) she peered at the wall above the headboard.
There was a hole in the wall. A circle, carved perfectly into the wall with smooth curves as if it were part of the architectural plans. She looked at it confused but intrigued, it had definitely not been there before.
She peered into next room from the hole, just with one eye. She could see the bed, and part of someone's legs. someone was asleep in the other room and another guest had somehow drilled a hole and spied on the other guest. She frowned as she considered this. She could imagine a pervert peering at a female guest while she was naked in the next room. But the legs she was seeing was hairy, and definitely masculine. Overcome with curiosity she changed her view, shutting her right eye and staring through her left.
She saw....the bed clearly from this view and she pondered what the sticky thing she was looking at was for a split second then the brain finally clicked with the realization that it was in fact looking at one. One that had been blown apart, the pungent odour attacked her along with the realization and the flashes clicked like shutters beneath her eyelids in her mind..engraving itself forever in her memory.....the blood, pasty and sticky, so red and thick ...the whitish pinkish fluid which wasn't a fluid but solid matter....particles of brain matter..the...the... The scream ripped out of her coming from deep within, the mirror shook, so did the chandelier up above. This was a scream too high to have come from the throat. this kind of scream originated from the soul. It had to be.
She ran out of the room, her hands shaking, her eyes blinking, trying to unsee what it could not. All the while, she didn't break or gasp for breath but continued screaming.
And the glasses continued to rattle.
Re: The Hole In The Wall by queenbetsy(f): 8:23am On Mar 15
@souloho19

8 years later, I’m still here, waiting and hoping we can get closure on this story.

I hope you’re fine wherever you are.
Re: The Hole In The Wall by do4luv14(m): 5:56pm On Mar 15
queenbetsy:
@souloho19

8 years later, I’m still here, waiting and hoping we can get closure on this story.

I hope you’re fine wherever you are.
Same here, wia is Oga Solo na
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