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luvmijeje: Whoooooooo!a poster wrote that u reminded him of John Grisham,naaah u reminded me of James Patterson.See twist and turn,suspense,dialogue aaaaah.Larry u are gonna be a great international writer,take it from me infact take it to the bank.....but take notes of the following:
1.Glorification of rape-3 of ur characters raped,in my opinion that is too much and u are one-sided about it in ur writeup.
2.I don't remember d last time I read and am checking my dictionary,it seems to me u re showing off coz toward the last few chapters it kind of reduced.
3.Ur strong point is ur attentin to details but u re overdetailizing and double detailizing while under detailizing some characters pardon my grammar.
4.Art is an imitation of life-but there are some part I ll read and I can't stop wondering Nigeria? eeeeehn? it just seems unreal.

As ur first novel I doff my hat infact am standing to give loud ovation.I never regretted reading this.Thanks

Thanks a lot, Luvmijeje. I feel honoured getting compared with these great writers. But I've read only two Grishams (The Partner and The Summons) and none of Pattersons. I have 14 of Patterson's books...always putting them off to read later). Funny, huh?

About your notifications:

1. Yeah, most of the problems began with molestation. One was done for sheer pleasure (Richard's), another out of love or lust (Rosemary's) and the third was done out of insanity and wickedness (Rita's).

2. Well, maybe I was being childish or so, considering the fact that BOC is my first attempt at writing. The sequel is entirely devoid of unnecessary vocabulry, I think.

3. Some has already said that overdescription dey kill me But I'm trying to work on both over- and under-.

4. LOL! Unreal? Believe me, anything can happen anywhere.

Bless you, ma'am.

U are welcome.

A well written story ,written by a very prolific author,more ink to your pen.

larry i see you again

I just started reading this thread. I am only at chapter 3. I have to stop reading because I can't stop crying. I can see that this story is going to take me on an emotional roller coaster. My heart is broken for this boy/man.

Tovot: A well written story ,written by a very prolific author,more ink to your pen.

Thanks A Lot, Tovot. Your Comments Mean A Lot. Thanks.

texanomaly: I just started reading this thread. I am only at chapter 3. I have to stop reading because I can't stop crying. I can see that this story is going to take me on an emotional roller coaster. My heart is broken for this boy/man.

It Has Made You Cry, It'll Also Make You Laugh And Gasp With Surprise. Trust Me. Thanks For Reading.

teespice

I made it to chapter 7. Left you a message on fb.

Come here, Larry! Why have you abandon this work and the others( The Paradox of Abel and also the Nairaland Collaboration story)? Do you want me to vex ni? Don't you know,or haven't you been told that you are my Nairaland best writer and the person who made me fall in love with crime fiction? Come continue these works o!

Goodwork my dear!!...U are soo good.U will surely go places.May God be wit u.Looking forward to u being a Bestseller!

Wowwww... Seriously mindblowing. Welldone ohh

Great, great story! See links and twists! Oh, my God! Larry, you are simply the best. Thanks for this great story. Thank you.

Impressively Written. Well Done.

Larry this is awesome. I love that part when cain said the strong takes from the weak but the smart takes from the strong. Beautiful write- up.

Where are you, mister Larry?

Mindblowing story!!

Damn,this story is a product of a beautiful mind.. Your brain dey work wella..
Great fantastic work!

Danhumprey: Come here, Larry! Why have you abandon this work and the others( The Paradox of Abel and also the Nairaland Collaboration story)? Do you want me to vex ni? Don't you know,or haven't you been told that you are my Nairaland best writer and the person who made me fall in love with crime fiction? Come continue these works o!

Gone awol as usual.

Here comes another great writter.thanks bro i was entertained aswell as educated.

Enough twists and turns jst finished the 4th page na wow na dis kind tory person no fit predict o because u go lost for road...

i de come make i read am finish make i knw weda na daniel papa be michael uncle jare

@ OP, ds is d best ve eva read on NL, sowie am nt exageratin, u r indeed a grt writer, where on earth ve i been all ds while, i startd jst ds marwin nd am done nau, GOD BLESS U ND I BELIEVE DS IS JST UR STARTIN-POINT BRO, KUDOS!!!!!!

Danhumprey: Come here, Larry! Why have you abandon this work and the others( The Paradox of Abel and also the Nairaland Collaboration story)? Do you want me to vex ni? Don't you know,or haven't you been told that you are my Nairaland best writer and the person who made me fall in love with crime fiction? Come continue these works o!

Hey buddy! I'm sorry about the 'Paradox', I shall continue it soon. But the Collaboration, I suspect, was heading on a mortality course. Maybe I'll somehow bring it back to life, I'm not sure.

PS: I'm working on something new ((Black Maria) which I'll drop soon. You'll love it.

Bless you, sir.

tolufaithO: @ OP, ds is d best ve eva read on NL, sowie am nt exageratin, u r indeed a grt writer, where on earth ve i been all ds while, i startd jst ds marwin nd am done nau, GOD BLESS U ND I BELIEVE DS IS JST UR STARTIN-POINT BRO, KUDOS!!!!!!

Thank you, ma'am.

vislabraye: I think you should publish it.

We're on it!

Please teach me sir, how did you learn to write this great?

Queenxstar: Please teach me sir, how did you learn to write this great?

LOL! Thanks for reading my story. I have an obligation to read yours. Which one of your stories would recommend I read? I believe you're also a great writer.

Cheers!

LarrySun: LOL! Thanks for reading my story. I have an obligation to read yours. Which one of your stories would recommend I read? I believe you're also a great writer.

Cheers!

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Perfecter4real: Here comes another great writter.thanks bro i was entertained aswell as educated.

Thanks a lot, bro.

Nawa o! U no be borrow borrow at all,u be baba 4 this business. I wish most of these writers here will get 2 be as careful as u r.

Mehn.. The story is superb. 5***** for larry. God bless u bros

Essyydiamond:
Nawa o! U no be borrow borrow at all,u be baba 4 this business. I wish most of these writers here will get 2 be as careful as u r.

Thank you, ma'am.

Phew!

Mr. Larry the mysterious one.

Now i understand the sequel after reading this.

I love the twists. Unlike Nollywood movies where i know where it'll end from the begining. You got me using my brain to decipher the next line of action. I like that!

I saw a comment telling u to get published. I think i'm seconding that.

"No one is interested in the process but the product". So Mr. Larry, go out there and get published. It'll add more to your feathers. Remember your character, Ariel, in the sequel. Let the challenges make you.

- Adesege

LarrySun:
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