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| Re: It Will Come To You by touchmeder(op): 9:20pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Chapter 15 It was a lovely day. The sun was clothed in all its glory as more people made their way towards the newly completed house. A small group of friends and close family members was what Dennis told her but it was a mammoth crowd that gathered around the property. Dennis was beaming from ear to ear while Ulo watched from a corner occasionally whispering to Dorcas. It was the 'house opening ceremony' and she was strongly against this party. Dennis had laughed after she gave him several reasons why it should not take place. He concluded by saying ''I am still not convinced my wife. Everything in this life is compromise. Let us invite just friends and close family members. At least you had your way with the job issue.'' When he made this sentence, he put his thumb and index finger together to emphasize how small this ceremony would be. However, Ulo had since lost count of the people under the huge canopy inside the house, excluding those outside. The members of the live band were singing and jumping around. The lead singer was an elderly man who was swinging around the improvised stage. His back up dancers were sweating profusely and belting out a loud chorus. It seemed like a scene from a street carnival. |
| Re: It Will Come To You by touchmeder(op): 9:22pm On Dec 10, 2014*. Modified: 3:05pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
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| Re: It Will Come To You by touchmeder(op): 9:26pm On Dec 10, 2014*. Modified: 3:06pm On Dec 16, 2014 |
THE END |
| Re: It Will Come To You by touchmeder(op): 9:27pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
This is a work of fiction. I don’t know of a woman who went through all Ulo's travails. However there are certain parts of this story that are true. I have taken a bit of those true experiences and mixed it up with my imagination to produce this work. Thanks for sticking around. I'd be starting a new story in some days time. Watch this space. |
| Re: It Will Come To You by lenmafon: 9:31pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
ehm touchmender story don finish for here? kai, u are good i must say. so dennis just accepted the babies as his na wa o! thanks for the story. as if i was following you for back. may ink to ur pen and creative fuel to ur mind. sweet dreams  cant wait for ur new story still following as usual. Merci. |
| Re: It Will Come To You by gal10(f): 9:56pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
| Re: It Will Come To You by teamplayey: 10:28pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Wonderful, Touchmeder! Thanks very much. I so appreciate. Chop nairalander-kiss; Lol OneLove |
| Re: It Will Come To You by Debbysky(f): 10:44pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Weldone touch, i love dis story.. Thanks so much.. |
| Re: It Will Come To You by Olaitan3784(f): 11:11pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Kudos to u touchmedar,lovely piece.Kudos to u touchmedar,lovely piece.Kudos to u touchmedar,lovely piece. |
| Re: It Will Come To You by Plaitex(f): 12:08am On Dec 11, 2014 |
can't believe this story is finished. Thanks for entertaining us. Patiently waiting for the next story |
| Re: It Will Come To You by touchmeder(op): 8:47am On Dec 11, 2014 |
gal10:LOL m right ere. Thanks 4d support gal10 |
| Re: It Will Come To You by touchmeder(op): 8:56am On Dec 11, 2014 |
Plaitex:I know but what more is there to tell? I'd like to think this story will get people thinking @d end. Ulo like most Nigerian women will not go anywhere. But @d end she secures herself by keeping dennis lab result (in case of incasity) LOL. Dennis knows his wife cheated. He knows the kids are not his biological children; he knows he can't have his own but he will never admit it. They both know what the other knows but they continue with their marriage of convenience. |
| Re: It Will Come To You by Timothy3113(m): 9:00am On Dec 11, 2014 |
It has been long, i comment but my sista, u are a boooo. More cell's to your brain. |
| Re: It Will Come To You by stuff46(m): 4:56pm On Dec 11, 2014 |
at last you are at the end. I never saw it coming I have been a follower for long and love the piece. maybe you should have made it longer for demis to confess about his impotency. and the other guy would know about his children. but all thrsame nice work and I enjoyed every bit of it. though typos were involved, you did great. |
| Re: It Will Come To You by Nimk(f): 7:33pm On Dec 11, 2014 |
nice one |
| Re: It Will Come To You by SusannaJohnson(f): 9:14am On Dec 12, 2014 |
Wow! Touchmeder, I never dreamt of commenting on this thread but I just had to voice out my feelings. D story is great, d twists, d tragedy nd d ironies, all wonderful. U r really on cool dude at writing nd I say a big thank you. I also think ur imagination works on overdrive, LOL. Thumbs up. |
| Re: It Will Come To You by touchmeder(op): 9:55am On Dec 12, 2014 |
SusannaJohnson:thanks |
| Re: It Will Come To You by touchmeder(op): 9:58am On Dec 12, 2014 |
stuff46:Thanks bro. I get where ure going and I appreciate ur suggestion. And yeah I know I still have typos. I need a good editor. Lol |
| Re: It Will Come To You by stuff46(m): 10:51am On Dec 12, 2014 |
touchmeder:hope you get another work going on because this one is short |
| Re: It Will Come To You by zyzxx(m): 3:14pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
touchmeder pls come here u can't stop d story like dis ah, are we nt encouraging u or u are/will busy? i love d way u write and am addicted to it pls love don't do dis. |
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