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[size=13pt]Jigsawkillah Vs Iceskidd(sokrates) [/size]


Title:I Shouldn't Be Alive.

Description: Its based on an experience or a close encounter with death in which it seemed all hope is lost and you already saw yourself as a goner,but somehow you manage to survive the experience/situation,more like a miracle.
It could be Fiction or real(whatever works best for you).

Instruction: Your verse should be centered on the experience and how you managed to excape, you should give detailed description(I expect to see some real creativity here).
NOTE: Your Verse Shouldn't Lose That Hip-Hop touch.

Criteria

Creativity-- 2 points

Flow- - 1 point

Imagery- - 2 points

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points

Vocabulary-- 2 points

Emotion

Rules (must be strictly adhered to)

- 10bars/20Lines...(It shouldn't be less)

- Deadline is Monday Dec 29th 6pm 2014

- Verses should be posted by both contestants on
or not later than deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or
recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- No dissing of opponent

- No unnecessary comments

Goodluck!

Scripted this shiid like 10mins ago. I almost 4got bout the brawl so don't blame me much. JigsawKillah. Oya na
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Just a few years ago/
me in my niggas car, goin to and fro/
like gottoboy we were blazin, yo/
with enough car speed, to kill jensen button/
biitches in the back seat, this nigga was flirtin/
but that speed could not be controlled/
with a trailer at our front quickly i thought 'if we don't dogde it, omo na death dey come so'/
the driver turned the sterring/
unfortunately i was now facing the trailer staring/
'dang'
my whole life flashed before my eyes, i've lived badly it was glaring/
didn't even get the chace to say my best prayer/
i who claimed a vet slayer/
was i dreaming? No cause for fearing?/
no man, i was in a coma, didn't know how my family was faring/
worse part, the people who was in the car with me was fine/
even from the accident time/
dunno if it was a miracle/
it was almost cynical/
i woke the fück up and continued school.

Guykhena:
Closed;
Iceskidd wins via no show. (Advances to the Semi-Finals)

Thanks, bro!
Please also assist us with creating a thread for Limerick vs Rapacme. Let it be Wednesday. This tourney must not stop midway

Sorry for the no show
Had a problme with my sub