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Interesting narrative write up.

ok..waiting for episode 2

Lol... I love the plot and the English-pidgin switch makes it an interesting narrative. Teenage years diary!

Literature

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Wah happened next

I may not be a good story teller but i am better than this Op

I stopped reading when she mentioned Nokia 3310 and NTA. The earliest time she was talking about was 2001 and i am very certain there were other private TV stations then.

So this story is fake and boring

You are too much how old r u now

This post is hilarious..lol
My dear, for you to have watched the rich also cry and Maria De Los angelis or whatever, honestly, you no be today meat....lol

Omotayor123:
Sharing is allowed. Just to make someone's day.*winks*

Itz not sharing, itz called plagiarism and itz a civil offense.

Who else can it be if not naijasinglegirl.....

skentelelady:
I may not be a good story teller but i am better than this Op

I stopped reading when she mentioned Nokia 3310 and NTA. The earliest time she was talking about was 2001 and i am very certain there were other private TV stations then.

So this story is fake and boring

Better ni, better ko! Why do ladies hate each other so much? Instead of you to give the story the credit it deserves you are here saying you are better story teller. Mstcheew!

I stop reading it along the way... its a long post

Lol, this got me!

Hmmn

this is fiction. your secondary school days as you described should be 1992 1993 or 1994 and you said the bankers salaries is around 150k? lie. now jamb yaf jam you and you went to the bank yet their was an ATM? haba. take am easy abeg. nice story but lack continuity. just like nollywood movie flash back to the 60's and you will see an MTN signboard.

heheh

Omotayor123:
Exactly

Who knows, the guy might have followed you out of the bank to have a conversation..... Men are a little more forgiving when it's as trivial as not knowing an acct number.....

Lmao

Joniboi:
Better ni, better ko! Why do ladies hate each other so much? Instead of you to give the story the credit it deserves you are here saying you are better story teller. Mstcheew!

which credit? na unaar type dey encourage substandard entertainment. her story is fake. if you watch and remember the rich also cry, then you should be at least 30years. at that time what da hell is Nokia 3310, what is ATM?

Mission failed

Maximus85:
which credit? na unaar type dey encourage substandard entertainment. her story is fake. if you watch and remember the rich also cry, then you should be at least 30years. at that time what da hell is Nokia 3310, what is ATM?

I thought i was the only person that saw that part as well...

@OP u can lie o.....you dey watch the rich also cry for nta wen mtn sim be N200.......

9c one ooo

Can't stop laughing

Lol. Very funny

Nice one...

the worst thing you can do in life is to trynna be someone else whom your'e not.

nice write up.....i was so engulfed with the story that I had to finish reading it

op, see our criticism as constructive. I'm sure your next fiction story will be better. don't give up.

@op:A good read but when next you write a fictitious story, do some research so your story could have a touch of reality. There are too many holes in the story

1. Maria delis Angeles aired on nta 1998/99 and there was no 3310 in naija then.
2. In this time period.... The time of 3310, you couldn't have bought a SIM card for 200 naira..... The anachronism in the whole story is overpowering. But I enjoyed the humor... You've got a great imagination.

skentelelady:
I may not be a good story teller but i am better than this Op

I stopped reading when she mentioned Nokia 3310 and NTA. The earliest time she was talking about was 2001 and i am very certain there were other private TV stations then.

So this story is fake and boring

SIM cards started selling at N200 around 2006. Besides, not everyone has access to any other channels other than NTA, even as we speak.

Maximus85:
which credit? na unaar type dey encourage substandard entertainment. her story is fake. if you watch and remember the rich also cry, then you should be at least 30years. at that time what da hell is Nokia 3310, what is ATM?

Am not encouraging substandard entertainment, but 90% of stories on Nairaland are fictions.