toksbisola:
@Op: I think you need to use a better streaming method as I actually thought a virus was uploaded to my system when I tried to download the music which ended up muddling up my system. Having said that, I’ll move swiftly on to the business at hand.

First of all well-done for your effort. But there is a BUT; and I’ll say your singing style needs more improvement than you actually think. If I were to rate you on a scale of 1 to 10; I’ll not rate you higher than 6.

My critical points for you are below;

1) It seems that there was too much noise than required for the lyrics;

2) The co-ordination between the singers wasn’t too good and that definitely needs improvement;

3) You repeated the lyrics too many times; and

4) At a point, I couldn't make head or tail as to where the lyrics was heading to.

Remember there are so many people who release a music album on a daily basis; but only a very minute few that'll make it big and I would very much like you to be among that minute few and make it big. Overall, the lyrics itself ain’t that bad; it’s just the style of delivery that needs a lot of improvement.

It'll be to your advantage if you don’t take offence when people critique your music/lyrics; rather use their critical analysis to build yourself up and get better for the next track you’ll release. I’m looking forward to hearing your next track and hopefully you would have done some amendments as others have suggested to you.

My suggestions to you would be;

1) Pick a unique singing style for yourself and make it into a niche as against following what already exist.
2) The name Airforce1 is a brand and in my opinion, I think it would be nice for you to capitalise on that and use it as a stage name; you never know, it might be what would sell you faster.

I rest my case

Sorry about what happened to your puter

And thanks for the advice

millyajay:
you welcome mister

thanks....


Please support me and my team biko...

finally,

J

milychocs:
The kind of hate, pessimism and "bad belle" I see on this site a few times give me the shivers...
Then I remember all the laughs, and jokes, and funnies by people, threads like"Humans of Lagos" and my hope is restored

Airforce.....may you "touch your stars"
I do not get pms.....I wish you would post an account number here....for me
.....and hopefully by next weekend I will send you my CD/DVD contribution
Nothing major though....just a token from my heart

May God bless your hustle
And your posts telling us about your downloading album always cracked me up!
So thank you!!!
......and d'emme!!!

Thanks

Smiles*

The phone number on the promo Cd is a personal number

KingTom:
I was alive when this happened

say that when he wins a hhwa award-soon

Airforce1

alphalpha:
Airforce1

Yes

Pure Rubbish..!!!! U need to improve dude.. be creative and more skillful..Do something(beats and all) diff 4rm d nigerian Hiphop norm

skales:
I love the song

Congrats airforce 1

since you have the best post so far, let me quote you and congratulate airforce1 too.
Congratulations!!!
Though you told me june 15, i dont know what kept you up to june 19 before coming out with it, was it a technical hitch?
All the same, nice one!

Seriously, I laughed out loud when I saw this on the front page. I was like 'Airforce one has finally dropped his album o!'.

I wouldn't say I'm impressed by the track, but I'm sure impressed by your tenacity and dedication to making this happen. Most of the posters before me have already pointed out areas you need to work on. Just don't let the critique dull your spirit, rather let it inspire you to become better.

Don't worry, "you'll join those guys soon".

Cheers man.

Airforce1:
http://www.datafilehost.com/d/86488c0d

Today is gonna be great
Rain is falling
See all the signs around
Airforce1 is dropping!

Abeg make I go download quick before the thing finish!

nike airforce 1s

icedbeatz:
nigga where dafuq are the rap songs?! *cocks gun* I mean some real hip hop shitt not the fukin trend shitt. Content makes jams evergreen.
.
professional advice : pull that audio down from that site or better upload what we call MUSIC to supersede this crap bro. let me start by typing fk ur producer the idiott just took money and pushed record button.
1. too much auto tune on your vocals which is so unprofessional.
2. on the scale of 1-10 your melody is on 3 bro you have a lot of work to do because the pleasing to ear is Melody.
3. you need voice training because your delivery here is so so poor.
4. the beat is wack been long I've come across such, beat selection is like a foundation to a building like a beat is to music, get ur niggs and fk that producer up.
5. lyrics ain't got quality, distinct content you should work on this or hire a song writer but better horn your skills on these things.
6. the final mix is not the best, I wonder the kinda sound card you guys used.
7. there's no SOUL in the song, do you know why we still bang 2pac, r. Kelly, Bob Marley?! they don't put just voices rather they put their SOUL in every word, melody, pitch on the song now that's music.
8. you were not near the zone at all, no charisma or control of your art. no confidence you sound scared or pressurized like someone said "voice this song and get the fk outta here before I shoot you ".
9. you have to know what you want, how you want it to sound and most importantly they producer you work with and the vibe in the studio, you were not feeling the song even as you were singing it.
10. the sequencing of the beat is shitty (fk the producer again), no charger, no gritty gent WTF. I can go on and on but let me stop here. I'm no hater I just want you to learn from this and work on your art, music is hardwork. surround yourself with good you and coming artistes and not some WACKASS artiste wannabes that's one of the reasons you uploaded this audio cos none of them told you the truth. believe me here's the ugly bitter truth but you can do very great cos you have these sonic effect in your voice that you can master and make yourself stand out, your desire, the reason and dedication will determine how good you can be. seems like ur first recording section relax it happens to the best even the great pied piper r. Kelly of today. keep hustling God de.
Change that stage name, don't patronise that producer he's no good at all. Airforce1

This is what i call constructive criticism.welldone bro.

I'd advice you go for quality sonically and artistically, it matters a lot. carve your own niche, don't be a trend follower rather a trail blazer. good work bro. I could be your song writer?

icedbeatz:
nigga where dafuq are the rap songs?! *cocks gun* I mean some real hip hop shitt not the fukin trend shitt. Content makes jams evergreen.
.
professional advice : pull that audio down from that site or better upload what we call MUSIC to supersede this crap bro. let me start by typing fk ur producer the idiott just took money and pushed record button.
1. too much auto tune on your vocals which is so unprofessional.
2. on the scale of 1-10 your melody is on 3 bro you have a lot of work to do because the pleasing to ear is Melody.
3. you need voice training because your delivery here is so so poor.
4. the beat is wack been long I've come across such, beat selection is like a foundation to a building like a beat is to music, get ur niggs and fk that producer up.
5. lyrics ain't got quality, distinct content you should work on this or hire a song writer but better horn your skills on these things.
6. the final mix is not the best, I wonder the kinda sound card you guys used.
7. there's no SOUL in the song, do you know why we still bang 2pac, r. Kelly, Bob Marley?! they don't put just voices rather they put their SOUL in every word, melody, pitch on the song now that's music.
8. you were not near the zone at all, no charisma or control of your art. no confidence you sound scared or pressurized like someone said "voice this song and get the fk outta here before I shoot you ".
9. you have to know what you want, how you want it to sound and most importantly they producer you work with and the vibe in the studio, you were not feeling the song even as you were singing it.
10. the sequencing of the beat is shitty (fk the producer again), no charger, no gritty gent WTF. I can go on and on but let me stop here. I'm no hater I just want you to learn from this and work on your art, music is hardwork. surround yourself with good you and coming artistes and not some WACKASS artiste wannabes that's one of the reasons you uploaded this audio cos none of them told you the truth. believe me here's the ugly bitter truth but you can do very great cos you have these sonic effect in your voice that you can master and make yourself stand out, your desire, the reason and dedication will determine how good you can be. seems like ur first recording section relax it happens to the best even the great pied piper r. Kelly of today. keep hustling God de.
Change that stage name, don't patronise that producer he's no good at all. Airforce1

Even though I'ven't listened I'd draw my conclusion from this review because an epistle this lengthy comes straight from the heart.

So Airforce1, your album is the next detox abi? We're still waiting for a release date.

Wack........wacker.......wackest!!!!!! But truth be told,guy music isnt ur calling!!!!

AIRFORCE1,you tried jor.
& Icebeatz alredy pointed out the neccesarry tins.
All of y'all shud download my new single as well
@
www.datafilehost.com/d/903212c7

youmour:



You be hin GF?

with d wicked comments am seeing i dont tink am gonna waste my mb

firstEVA:
I need to hear reviews before I download, my data is important to me.

icedbeatz:
nigga where dafuq are the rap songs?! *cocks gun* I mean some real hip hop shitt not the fukin trend shitt. Content makes jams evergreen.
.
professional advice : pull that audio down from that site or better upload what we call MUSIC to supersede this crap bro. let me start by typing fk ur producer the idiott just took money and pushed record button.
1. too much auto tune on your vocals which is so unprofessional.
2. on the scale of 1-10 your melody is on 3 bro you have a lot of work to do because the pleasing to ear is Melody.
3. you need voice training because your delivery here is so so poor.
4. the beat is wack been long I've come across such, beat selection is like a foundation to a building like a beat is to music, get ur niggs and fk that producer up.
5. lyrics ain't got quality, distinct content you should work on this or hire a song writer but better horn your skills on these things.
6. the final mix is not the best, I wonder the kinda sound card you guys used.
7. there's no SOUL in the song, do you know why we still bang 2pac, r. Kelly, Bob Marley?! they don't put just voices rather they put their SOUL in every word, melody, pitch on the song now that's music.
8. you were not near the zone at all, no charisma or control of your art. no confidence you sound scared or pressurized like someone said "voice this song and get the fk outta here before I shoot you ".
9. you have to know what you want, how you want it to sound and most importantly they producer you work with and the vibe in the studio, you were not feeling the song even as you were singing it.
10. the sequencing of the beat is shitty (fk the producer again), no charger, no gritty gent WTF. I can go on and on but let me stop here. I'm no hater I just want you to learn from this and work on your art, music is hardwork. surround yourself with good you and coming artistes and not some WACKASS artiste wannabes that's one of the reasons you uploaded this audio cos none of them told you the truth. believe me here's the ugly bitter truth but you can do very great cos you have these sonic effect in your voice that you can master and make yourself stand out, your desire, the reason and dedication will determine how good you can be. seems like ur first recording section relax it happens to the best even the great pied piper r. Kelly of today. keep hustling God de.
Change that stage name, don't patronise that producer he's no good at all. Airforce1

Funny enough you dont even know crap. I know your type.

Aminat508:
Kefe why nah, encourage him he can do better...

That's y I said he can do better.

E clear say Airforce1 don turn celebrity even before he release his debut album. God bless your hustle.

starlight101:
u know him Real voice?

I'm sure e go better pass the effect him use

Its not downloading...

Anyway congrat airforce1....

My instincts tells me he is going to get at least a song right and blow up because of nairaland.

I respect people that follow up on their passion no matter how difficult and how long it takes.

Forget all the critics Airforce1, all successful people in the world today took exactly the same route. They were bold enough to follow up on what they were passionate about.

Do not be discourage but be ready to try harder.

You just passed the most critical test for success.


Congratulations!

icedbeatz:
nigga where dafuq are the rap songs?! *cocks gun* I mean some real hip hop shitt not the fukin trend shitt. Content makes jams evergreen.
.
professional advice : pull that audio down from that site or better upload what we call MUSIC to supersede this crap bro. let me start by typing fk ur producer the idiott just took money and pushed record button.
1. too much auto tune on your vocals which is so unprofessional.
2. on the scale of 1-10 your melody is on 3 bro you have a lot of work to do because the pleasing to ear is Melody.
3. you need voice training because your delivery here is so so poor.
4. the beat is wack been long I've come across such, beat selection is like a foundation to a building like a beat is to music, get ur niggs and fk that producer up.
5. lyrics ain't got quality, distinct content you should work on this or hire a song writer but better horn your skills on these things.
6. the final mix is not the best, I wonder the kinda sound card you guys used.
7. there's no SOUL in the song, do you know why we still bang 2pac, r. Kelly, Bob Marley?! they don't put just voices rather they put their SOUL in every word, melody, pitch on the song now that's music.
8. you were not near the zone at all, no charisma or control of your art. no confidence you sound scared or pressurized like someone said "voice this song and get the fk outta here before I shoot you ".
9. you have to know what you want, how you want it to sound and most importantly they producer you work with and the vibe in the studio, you were not feeling the song even as you were singing it.
10. the sequencing of the beat is shitty (fk the producer again), no charger, no gritty gent WTF. I can go on and on but let me stop here. I'm no hater I just want you to learn from this and work on your art, music is hardwork. surround yourself with good you and coming artistes and not some WACKASS artiste wannabes that's one of the reasons you uploaded this audio cos none of them told you the truth. believe me here's the ugly bitter truth but you can do very great cos you have these sonic effect in your voice that you can master and make yourself stand out, your desire, the reason and dedication will determine how good you can be. seems like ur first recording section relax it happens to the best even the great pied piper r. Kelly of today. keep hustling God de.
Change that stage name, don't patronise that producer he's no good at all. Airforce1

Thank you, I wanted to say some of the things you said, but u have said it all, please go back to the drawing table, as soon as I downloaded it I couldn't finish it, because no content just repeatation. You can do it, this is just the first step

icedbeatz:
nigga where dafuq are the rap songs?! *cocks gun* I mean some real hip hop shitt not the fukin trend shitt. Content makes jams evergreen.
.
professional advice : pull that audio down from that site or better upload what we call MUSIC to supersede this crap bro. let me start by typing fk ur producer the idiott just took money and pushed record button.
1. too much auto tune on your vocals which is so unprofessional.
2. on the scale of 1-10 your melody is on 3 bro you have a lot of work to do because the pleasing to ear is Melody.
3. you need voice training because your delivery here is so so poor.
4. the beat is wack been long I've come across such, beat selection is like a foundation to a building like a beat is to music, get ur niggs and fk that producer up.
5. lyrics ain't got quality, distinct content you should work on this or hire a song writer but better horn your skills on these things.
6. the final mix is not the best, I wonder the kinda sound card you guys used.
7. there's no SOUL in the song, do you know why we still bang 2pac, r. Kelly, Bob Marley?! they don't put just voices rather they put their SOUL in every word, melody, pitch on the song now that's music.
8. you were not near the zone at all, no charisma or control of your art. no confidence you sound scared or pressurized like someone said "voice this song and get the fk outta here before I shoot you ".
9. you have to know what you want, how you want it to sound and most importantly they producer you work with and the vibe in the studio, you were not feeling the song even as you were singing it.
10. the sequencing of the beat is shitty (fk the producer again), no charger, no gritty gent WTF. I can go on and on but let me stop here. I'm no hater I just want you to learn from this and work on your art, music is hardwork. surround yourself with good you and coming artistes and not some WACKASS artiste wannabes that's one of the reasons you uploaded this audio cos none of them told you the truth. believe me here's the ugly bitter truth but you can do very great cos you have these sonic effect in your voice that you can master and make yourself stand out, your desire, the reason and dedication will determine how good you can be. seems like ur first recording section relax it happens to the best even the great pied piper r. Kelly of today. keep hustling God de.
Change that stage name, don't patronise that producer he's no good at all. Airforce1

*spits on your face**

if you think it's that easy, do your song too and let's hear it.

How many people who commented on this thread are creative enough to criticise the song

I'd like to know if there is anyone who has produced/worked on a hit song in their career that has made any positive comment here.

All or most of the peeps passing comments are fans.. FANS MI

@Airforce1 try reach out to the real musical experts to pass comments on your track. They'd tell you the real truth

The fans will always pass comments whether good or bad.

More could be done on the track. Its an okay song but it needs more refining on the tune. Your chorus is

Airforce1:
http://www.datafilehost.com/d/86488c0d

I've downloaded it 5.5/10





You really tried I must say

Popemax:
ur topics dow.....am just looking @ u

You better stop looking.