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Re: *The Players Curse* by ichommy(m): 3:18pm On Nov 28, 2015
Signing In
Re: *The Players Curse* by Gemc3(f): 3:35pm On Dec 02, 2015
Waiting patiently...
Re: *The Players Curse* by nastyd(m): 11:25am On Dec 03, 2015
Gemc3:
Waiting patiently...
*checks dp*
WOW! but its nt fair...Y shld a Lady b dis beautiful

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Re: *The Players Curse* by Gemc3(f): 12:56am On Dec 04, 2015
nastyd:


*checks dp*

WOW!
but its nt fair...Y shld a Lady b dis beautiful




Hahahahahaha! Thanks for the compliment smiley
Re: *The Players Curse* by BeeBeeOoh(m): 8:10pm On Dec 06, 2015
Please sombari should tell me what 2 tell Davidflo
Re: *The Players Curse* by donkross1(m): 6:54am On Jan 16, 2016
Na today mark one year wey dz story start undecided. Davidflo wetin happen na
Re: *The Players Curse* by Nobody: 9:07am On Jan 16, 2016
davidflo
Re: *The Players Curse* by Mekky05(m): 5:09pm On Jan 17, 2016
Davidflo.. Update something to show that you are alive and well ooh! Make we calm our thoughts and hearts down biko.
Re: *The Players Curse* by YourNo1Fan: 12:52pm On Jan 18, 2016
davidflo:


She pulled her shades, setting it on her cleavage. I couldn’t help but notice the soft swell of her breast.
“Dapo is a bad cook, so I volunteered to make him stew. I don’t like cooking but because of my love for him, I volunteered!”
I sighed internally.
“I made two kinds of stew for him, one was smoother and with a bit of palm oil, while the other was with only groundnut oil. Two kilos of Turkey.”
I was jealous, envious and salivating.
“The big headed boy let me finish before he said he doesn’t feel like eating Turkey, that I should have gotten him pomo”.
Which kind of gist is this, ehn?
“So?”
At that point, somebody bumped into her, forcing her to be pressed against me. My heart started beating again, now it was due to being aroused.
“What do you mean by so? I had to go and get pomo for him.”
“Why are you complaining? You love him, it’s expected you do it for him.”
I wanted her to rebuke me, the ‘were’ girl did not.
“Yes I love him, but love doesn’t mean I will slave for him. My problem is that I see him as a baby…my baby”.
She continued talking but I stopped listening. I just smiled as the wind forced her hair to brush against my face. I could smell her ointments. She kept talking so close to my face, I could taste her breathe.
I started thinking of Bauchi again. I wondered what he would do if he found out that I had screwed Kiki. I wondered if I would ever screw Kiki again. For in as much as I was crazy about Abibia, I would choose to have sex with Kiki over her, though I liked Abibia more. I don’t know if you know what I mean.
Some days ago, I dreamt of Bauchi. In that dream, he was Abibia’s boyfriend. They were in the house while I was at the balcony. I hated most of my dreams.
Staring at Abibia now, with all her love for Dapo and how he was her baby, I wondered if she would have been able to withstand Bauchi as she was effortlessly repelling me. I admitted to myself that Bauchi was the ultimate player, no matter your exposure or status, he brought you to his world. In his world, he was king. I was in Abibia’s world right now, the one she shared with Dapo.
Abibia had stopped talking; she was probably lost in her thoughts too. I decided to act like Bauchi would have.
“Don’t hold the ledge, hold me,” I said.
She was startled. I repeated myself. My heart was beating but for a while, I wanted to be Bauchi.
“Are you sure?” she asked.
“Yes,” I whispered, holding firmly to mine.
I could see she was excited. She liked the dare.
She threw her free hand around my shoulder first, then let go of the second one and threw it also around me. I used my free hand to pull her to myself like it was the most normal thing in the world.
The fellow hangers around us started making utterances. ‘E lo gba yara’…’Orisi risi’…’awon omo oni sha!’…’baby girl, nna meeeeeen’..
I looked at her, her eyes were closed, and her heart was beating next to mine.
“How do you feel now?” I asked her.
She was pressing her body voluntarily to mine.
“Shhhh don’t spoil the moment”.
I wondered if she could feel the hardness between my legs.
Later that day, after seeing her off to her house, as I was about to leave, she said
“I could grow to love you, but I will stop myself.”
“Why?” I asked
“Because I have a boyfriend. I love Dapo”.
I was about to feel bad, but I remembered I was in Bauchi mode.
“You don’t love Dapo, you just think you do.”
She laughed at me like I was silly, I winked like Bauchi would have.
Re: *The Players Curse* by Holamidhe(m): 4:55pm On Jan 18, 2016
Am here

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Re: *The Players Curse* by pete26(m): 11:13am On Jan 20, 2016
@davidflo, enuff of d suspense bro.
Re: *The Players Curse* by TheFatOne(f): 8:38am On Feb 07, 2016
Ok...
Re: *The Players Curse* by moscyt(m): 10:46pm On Feb 07, 2016
Davidflo, pls let us know if you will still continue with the story or not. The torture is enough, you can't just put your readers in suspense like that without even communicating with them at all, its unfair mehn
Re: *The Players Curse* by Skimpledawg(m): 9:30am On Feb 08, 2016
TheFatOne:
He's probably dead... I'm gone



why evuls? undecided
Re: *The Players Curse* by KUNZEH(m): 11:40am On Feb 08, 2016
davidflo,oya nau....keep it coming
Re: *The Players Curse* by Nobody: 11:47am On Feb 08, 2016
DavidFlo, come and update na cry
Re: *The Players Curse* by owcheychey(f): 3:26pm On Feb 11, 2016
Where are you?
Re: *The Players Curse* by Whizzing(m): 9:10am On Feb 13, 2016
Chaiiiii. davidflo u no try o!!!!
Re: *The Players Curse* by ddddon(m): 2:06am On Feb 15, 2016
Oya who will announce David flo funeral ?
Re: *The Players Curse* by Nobody: 7:32am On Feb 15, 2016
I hope DAVIDFLO is okay
Re: *The Players Curse* by apholaryn: 8:01am On Feb 15, 2016
this bros jes bone this thread
Re: *The Players Curse* by ddddon(m): 12:31pm On Mar 14, 2016
let it be known that on this day, I am still waiting for updates from Mr Flo.
Re: *The Players Curse* by Slimzjoe(m): 10:13pm On Mar 18, 2016
Slimjoe Came here once again to Plead with Davidflo....If he's still Around, should Complete our Story for Us
cry

Just saw his Last seen was not too Long ago shocked

Skimpledawg you Know why Bros no wan Answer us again

Re: *The Players Curse* by Skimpledawg(m): 12:58am On Mar 19, 2016
Slimzjoe:
Slimjoe Came here once again to Plead with Davidflo....If he's still Around, should Complete our Story for Us
cry

Just saw his Last seen was not too Long ago shocked

Skimpledawg you Know why Bros no wan Answer us again
its good news tho, Oga Davidflo is still alive grin!

david may niccur, if u actually av conscience, yu would say sth to ya fans! no Mata wts rily d P man. keeping mum bout issues won't augur well wt ya reputation!
#thinkman
Re: *The Players Curse* by Nobody: 1:44am On Mar 19, 2016
so davidflo still visits nairaland
this is strong
Re: *The Players Curse* by derinanne(f): 10:35pm On Apr 14, 2016
abeg is dis story still gonna continue or is dis d end
Re: *The Players Curse* by Ridwan0100(m): 2:31pm On Apr 15, 2016
Mr davidflo biko come nd finish dis 1daful piece
Re: *The Players Curse* by obasegun88(m): 7:44pm On May 08, 2016
Still on sabbatical? This silence from is deafening... This suspense too much nah.
Rehearsal don dey sweet pass the movie, advertisement don pass promo!
Re: *The Players Curse* by HDoc(m): 11:26pm On May 08, 2016
waiting Patiently.........
Re: *The Players Curse* by Sam95: 1:46am On May 20, 2016
Davidflo, just let the story go. U are forcing the story. And your plots are beginning to get more widely un correlated. Your dialogues are getting even poorer and struggling to create suspense. My conclusion is that you are lost in how to go about this story. Just let it slip rather than mess ur writing reputation up.
Re: *The Players Curse* by davidflo(m): 5:57pm On May 22, 2016
Sam95:
Davidflo, just let the story go. U are forcing the story. And your plots are beginning to get more widely un correlated. Your dialogues are getting even poorer and struggling to create suspense. My conclusion is that you are lost in how to go about this story. Just let it slip rather than mess ur writing reputation up.

You are actually not far from the truth. The characters have stopped speaking to me, left them for too long.

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Re: *The Players Curse* by donkross1(m): 6:15pm On May 22, 2016
davidflo:


You are actually not far from the truth. The characters have stopped speaking to me, left them for too long.


Same thing actually happened to me before, it can happen to any writer.... You still the big boss though smiley

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